The Story Structure Countdown
The Story Structure Countdown
The Story Structure Countdown
Some of these structures are obviously and/or explicitly derived from others and some
feature similar story beats with different names, but I find they all have something to offer –
at least conceptually.
I’ve never personally been able to directly apply any one of these to any of my own writing
projects or to any clients’ work. I’ve found that all but the most formulaic writing projects
have their own unique structure which has to be discovered during the creative process.
[Contact Greg about helping you structure your own writing project. Call 323-717-4731
or e-mail Greg to discuss your particulars.]
There’s no magic formula that works for every project every time. You can always find
examples of successful projects that don’t fit a given formula or find ways successful
projects do fit a particular structure if you want to. Also, most of the people who name and
formulated these concepts are not primarily writers per se and in most cases their
structures are based on post-facto analysis of successful work rather than being used to
generate the original work itself. But, even (or especially) if you’re trying to satirize a form or
break a mold, you should know what the mold is.
Naturally, any serious discussion of moldy story structure has to start with…
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8. VILLAINY or LACK: Villain causes harm/injury to family member (by abduction, theft of
magical agent, spoiling crops, plunders in other forms, causes a disappearance, expels
someone, casts spell on someone, substitutes child etc., commits murder,
imprisons/detains someone, threatens forced marriage, provides nightly torments);
Alternatively, a member of family lacks something or desires something (magical
potion etc.). There are two options for this function, either or both of which may
appear in the story. In the first option, the villain causes some kind of harm, for
example carrying away a victim or the desired magical object (which must be then be
retrieved). In the second option, a sense of lack is identified, for example in the hero’s
family or within a community, whereby something is identified as lost or something
becomes desirable for some reason, for example a magical object that will save people
in some way.
9. MEDIATION: Misfortune or lack is made known, (hero is dispatched, hears call for help
etc./ alternative is that victimized hero is sent away, freed from imprisonment). The
hero now discovers the act of villainy or lack, perhaps finding their family or
community devastated or caught up in a state of anguish and woe.
10. BEGINNING COUNTER-ACTION: Seeker agrees to, or decides upon counter-action. The
hero now decides to act in a way that will resolve the lack, for example finding a
needed magical item, rescuing those who are captured or otherwise defeating the
villain. This is a defining moment for the hero as this is the decision that sets the
course of future actions and by which a previously ordinary person takes on the
mantle of heroism.
11. DEPARTURE: Hero leaves home.
12. FIRST FUNCTION OF THE DONOR: Hero is tested, interrogated, attacked etc., preparing
the way for his/her receiving magical agent or helper (donor).
13. HERO’S REACTION: Hero reacts to actions of future donor (withstands/fails the test,
frees captive, reconciles disputants, performs service, uses adversary’s powers against
him).
14. RECEIPT OF A MAGICAL AGENT: Hero acquires use of a magical agent (directly
transferred, located, purchased, prepared, spontaneously appears, eaten/drunk, help
offered by other characters).
15. GUIDANCE: Hero is transferred, delivered or led to whereabouts of an object of the
search.
16. STRUGGLE: Hero and villain join in direct combat.
17. BRANDING: Hero is branded (wounded/marked, receives ring or scarf).
18. VICTORY: Villain is defeated (killed in combat, defeated in contest, killed while asleep,
banished).
19. LIQUIDATION: Initial misfortune or lack is resolved (object of search distributed, spell
broken, slain person revived, captive freed).
20. RETURN: Hero returns.
21. PURSUIT: Hero is pursued (pursuer tries to kill, eat, undermine the hero).
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22. RESCUE: Hero is rescued from pursuit (obstacles delay pursuer, hero hides or is
hidden, hero transforms unrecognisably, hero saved from attempt on his/her life).
23. UNRECOGNIZED ARRIVAL: Hero unrecognized, arrives home or in another country.
24. UNFOUNDED CLAIMS: False hero presents unfounded claims.
25. DIFFICULT TASK: Difficult task proposed to the hero (trial by ordeal, riddles, test of
strength/endurance, other tasks).
26. SOLUTION: Task is resolved.
27. RECOGNITION: Hero is recognized (by mark, brand, or thing given to him/her).
28. EXPOSURE: False hero or villain is exposed.
29. TRANSFIGURATION: Hero is given a new appearance (is made whole, handsome, new
garments etc.).
30. PUNISHMENT: Villain is punished.
31. WEDDING: Hero marries and ascends the throne (is rewarded/promoted).
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Truby and his publisher insist you buy his book or take his class to get his secret formula,
but it’s pretty similar to Campbell’s structure.
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http://docsavage.org/2009/08/lester-dents-secret-master-plot/
1–First line, or as near thereto as possible, introduce the hero and swat him with a fistful of
trouble. Hint at a mystery, a menace or a problem to be solved–something the hero has to
cope with. Include
– A DIFFERENT LOCALE
2–The hero pitches in to cope with his fistful of trouble. (He tries to fathom the mystery,
defeat the menace, or solve the problem.)
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3–Introduce ALL the other characters as soon as possible. Bring them on in action.
4–Hero’s endeavors land him in an actual physical conflict near the end of the first 1500
words.
5–Near the end of first 1500 words, there is a complete surprise twist in the plot
development.
11–Hero makes some headway, and corners the villain or somebody in:
13–A surprising plot twist, in which the hero preferably gets it in the neck bad.
15–Get the hero almost buried in his troubles. (Figuratively, the villain has him prisoner and
has him framed for a murder rap; the girl is presumably dead, everything is lost, and the
DIFFERENT murder method is about to dispose of the suffering protagonist.)
16–The hero extricates himself using HIS OWN SKILL, training or brawn.
17–The mysteries remaining–one big one held over to this point will help grip interest–are
cleared up in course of final conflict as hero takes the situation in hand.
18–Final twist, a big surprise, (This can be the villain turning out to be the unexpected
person, having the “Treasure” be a dud, etc.)
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18 Stages of the Hero’s Journey (from “The Hero With 1000 Faces” by Joseph Campbell)
http://www.mcli.dist.maricopa.edu/smc/journey/ref/summary.html
I. SEPARATION/DEPARTURE
4. Supernatural Aid
II. INITIATION
7. Road of Trials
9. Woman as Temptress
11. Apotheosis
III. RETURN
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1. The Opening Image (page 1) – Every film should open with a powerhouse opening
scene to hook the audience, stop them eating popcorn for a while and settle them in
their seats. For action movies, this is usually a set piece. It sets the tone, genre and
main characters up of the film. It depicts a world of normality which will soon be
disrupted as they begin their journey.
2. Theme stated (page 5) – It tells the audience what the movie is about. It poses an
argument or a conflict, usually by the main character. Life isn’t fair. What if I could be
king for a day? I wish I was big. I want that girl (or guy). Some paradigms call this the
inciting incident.
3. Set-up (pages 1-10) – At this point we need to have an idea of the conflict set up that
will guide us through the film. Many readers won’t proceed after page 10, if there is no
clear protagonist, antagonist, theme and conflict set up.
4. Catalyst (page 12) – This is the wake up call. Something that shakes our hero and
compels him (or her) to take action.
5. Debate (page 12-25) – A period of the reflection, self doubt and reluctance, when the
hero doesn’t know what to do. If he (or she) doesn’t make a decision to act, they are
forced to do so.
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6. Break in Two (page 25) – The hero is moved to act and is beyond the point of return.
The old world is left behind and the journey begins, This is the first turning point and
the end of Act 1.
7. B Story (page 30) – The secondary story begins here. It may rotate around the central
story spine and theme, but it’s often a love story.
8. Fun and Games (page 30-55) – This is the bulk of Act 2, where the conflict and action is
escalated. The hero experiences setbacks along the way.
9. Midpoint (page 55) – A key point since this is where many screenplays sag. The stakes
are raised, the hero is squeezed and it looks like the hero may not make it through. It
divides the script into halves, The first half is the setup, while the second half is the
resolution. The midpoint is the apex, the highest point of the aircraft. From here it
gradually begins it’s descent to the destination airport.
10. Bad Guys Close in (page 55-75) – The hero is in real trouble both internally and
externally.
11. All is Lost (page 75) – The hero is at his (or her) lowest point. It’s a period of
metaphorical death where something must die to make space of rebirth.
12. Dark Night of The Soul (page 75-85) – The pilot has lost control of the aircraft as it
finally hits the bottom of the air pocket. The hero has lost all hope and is crushed. This
sequence ends with the second turning point.
13. Break into Three (page 85) – The hero has a new plan thanks to his buddy, confidante
or love interest.
14. Finale (page 85 – 110) – The hero emerges into the new world with new knowledge, a
new attitude or something more tangible. More importantly, a transformation has
occurred in the hero.
15. Final Image (page 110) – A scene that juxtaposes the difference between new and old
worlds. Often it’s the same scene flipped by 180 degrees.
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http://www.writersstore.com/the-virgins-promise-a-new-archetypal-structure/
1. Dependent World
2. Price of Conformity
3. Opportunity to Shine
4. Dress the Part
5. Secret World
6. No Longer Fits Her World
7. Caught Shining
8. Gives Up What Kept Her Stuck
9. Kingdom in Chaos
10. Wanders in the Wilderness
11. Chooses Her Light
12. The Re-ordering
13. The Kingdom is Brighter
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Kim Hudson says: The Virgin begins by conforming to the wishes of others and eventually
learns to hear her inner voice and bring it to life. It is the journey to creative, spiritual and
sexual awakening. Movies such as Bend It Like Beckham, Ever After, The Other Boleyn Girl,
Brokeback Mountain, Billy Elliot, Tootsie, Better than Chocolate, Virgin Suicides and Wedding
Crashers, to name just a few, all follow this archetypal journey. And when you think about it,
none of these protagonists are selflessly saving the community because none of them are
Heroes. They are self-fulfilling Virgins.
Set the story among the people she is emotionally attached to;
Show how the community needs to change;
Give her a secret world in which to grow and have her afraid her two worlds are going
to collide as she moves back and forth between them;
Give her friends rather than allies;
Include the shadow side and masculine counterpart
Focus on the Virgin’s creative, sexual or spiritual awakening rather than a drive to find
love or save someone.
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12 Stages of the Modified Hero’s Journey (from “The Writer’s Journey: Mythic Structure for
Writers” by Christopher Vogler)
1. Ordinary World
2. Call to Adventure
3. Refusal of the Call
4. Meeting the Mentor
5. Crossing the Threshold
6. Tests, Allies, Enemies
7. Approaching the Inmost Cave
8. The Crisis/Supreme Ordeal
9. Seizing the Reward
10. The Road Back
11. The Climax/Ressurection
12. Return with the Elixir
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11
Elements
of the
Inner
Movie
Method
(from Viki
King)
http://vikiking.com
1. FIRST MINUTE: (FIRST PAGE!) – In the first minute, you will know everything you need
to know about a movie: you will see a place, a time, and a mood. The size and scope of
the story are revealed right away. In the first minute, we also see the POINT OF VIEW.
E.g. in the Dirty Harry movies; “This is a dirty world and someone’s gotta clean it up” –
If possible, start with a visual metaphor for your whole story. Also, put a `page-turner’
at the bottom of the page to get the reader hooked. We have to know who it’s about,
too. Start with your main character if you can.
2. Page 3 – Find a line of dialog that expresses the central theme (eg Jake Gittes in
Chinatown “You have to be rich to get away with murder.”)
3. Pages 3 to 10 – What’s it about? Whose story is it? What does he/she want? What’s
stopping him from getting it? Do we like him/her? Or care what happens to him? Why?
(show vulnerability, engender audience empathy) Do we care if he/she gets what he
wants? Are we wondering what happens next? Make sure all the main characters are
introduced in the first 10 pages.
4. Page 15 – The `Inciting Incident’ – the event that triggers the story, and propels the
hero into action.
5. Page 25 or 30 – The First Turning Point. The story takes a sharp left turn. First Act
ends. The Second Act begins…
6. Page 45 – The `Act 2 metaphor’ (a symbolic scene or action that gives a clue to the
story’s resolution).
7. Page 60 – The `Point of no return’ – our Hero commits totally to his/her goal
8. After this, a lighter moment; breathing space. Show the hero changing.
9. Page 75 – A New Development – the hero’s just about to give up…
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10. Page 90 – The Second Turning Point, end of Act 2 – an event that “educates” the hero
about how to achieve their goal. They have an epiphany. Act 3 begins…
11. The Climax – 95-110. The hero can see their goal, but faces the final obstacle – the
final moment of truth – all or nothing. They find their inner strength, and devotion to
something bigger than themselves.
12. The End – i.e. last 3-5 pages – The Resolution. Remember – the goal is to touch the
audience deeply, and affect them profoundly.
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1. Setup
2. Opportunity
3. New Situation
4. Change of Plans
5. Progress
6. Point of No Return
7. Complications & Higher Stakes
8. Major Setback
9. Final Push
10. Climax
11. Aftermath
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The 10 Acts of the StoryAlity Syntagm (in a 90 page script) from J. T. Velikovsky
http://storyality.wordpress.com/2012/12/23/storyality-50-the-storyality-screenplay-syntagm/
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10 Stages of The Heroine’s Journey adapted by Chrisopher Vogler from Maureen Murdock
http://changingminds.org/disciplines/storytelling/characters/vogler_archetypes.htm
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http://www.thewritersjourney.com/hero%27s_journey.htm
http://www.maureenmurdock.com/heroine.html
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1. Back story – Set up the plot elements in which the main character will become
involved
2. Start with an image – These are the opening descriptions that set the tone and
illustrate the setting
3. Something bad happens – The main antagonist sets the plot in motion
4. Meet the hero (and the opposition) – This also includes objectives
5. Commitment – The point-of-no-return after which, the character can no longer avoid
being part of the story to the end
6. Go for the wrong goal – The protagonist goes for the obvious objective
7. The reversal – The protagonist finally puts together the clues and realizes there’s
something else that needs to be done
8. Go for the new goal – The hero now goes after the correct solution, which is very
difficult and doesn’t go as planned
9. Wrap it up – The effects of the resolution are played out
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http://paulgorman.org/writing/dramatic_structure.php
http://thescriptlab.com/screenwriting/45-the-eight-sequences?catid=23%3Athe-sequence
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7. New Tension & Twist
8. Resolution
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http://quickbase.intuit.com/articles/an-online-resource-guide-to-freytags-pyramid
1. Exposition
2. Inciting Incident
3. Rising Action
4. Climax
5. Falling Action
6. Resolution
7. Denouement
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http://sydfield.com/writers-
tools/the-paradigm-worksheet/
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7 Basic
Romantic
Comedy
Story
Beats
(from
“Writing
the
Romantic
Comedy” by Billy Mernit)
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http://scribemeetsworld.com/2011/plot-points/screenwriting-structure-notting-hill/
1. The Setup/Hook – A scene or sequence identifying the exterior and/or interior conflict
(i.e., unfulfilled desire), the “what’s wrong with this picture” implied in the protagonist’s
(and/or antagonist’s) current status quo.
2. The Meet/Inciting Incident – The inciting incident brings man and woman together and
into conflict; an inventive but credible contrivance, often amusing, which in some way
sets the tone for the action to come.
3. The Turning Point – Traditionally occurring at the end of Act 1, a new development
that raises story stakes and clearly defines the protagonist’s goal; most successful
when it sets man and woman at cross-purposes and/or their inner emotions at odds
with the goal.
4. The Midpoint/Raising the Stakes – A situation that irrevocably binds the protagonist
with the antagonist (often while tweaking sexual tensions) and has further
implications for the outcome of the relationship.
5. Swivel: Second Turning Point – Traditionally occurring at the end of Act 2, stakes reach
their highest point as the romantic relationship’s importance jeopardizes the
protagonist’s chance to succeed at his/her state goal—or vice versa—and his/her goal
shifts.
6. The Dark Moment/Crisis – Wherein the consequences of the swivel decision yield
disaster; generally, the humaliating scene where private motivations are revealed, and
either the relationship and/or the protagonist’s goal is seemingly lost forever.
7. Joyful Defeat/Resolution – A reconciliation that reaffirms the primal importance of the
relationship; usually a happy ending that implies marriage or a serious commitment,
often at the cost of some personal sacrifice to the protagonist.
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1. Overcoming the Monster (& the Thrilling Escape from Death) Examples: Perseus, Theseus,
Beowulf, Dracula, War of the Worlds, Nicholas Nickleby, The Guns of Navarone, Seven
Samurai/The Magnificent Seven, James Bond, Star Wars.
c. Frustration Stage (Confrontation) – Hero confronts the enemy. Things start to go wrong.
d. Nightmare Stage (Final Ordeal) – Disaster erupts and all hope seems lost
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e. Miraculous Escape (Death of the Monster) – The hero/ine is eventually victorious, and may
also be united or reunited with their ‘other half’ (a romantic partner).
2. Rags to Riches Examples: Cinderella, Aladdin, Jane Eyre, Great Expectations, David
Copperfield Dark Version: Le Rouge et Le Noir (1831), What Makes Sammy Run? (1940)
3. The Quest Examples: The Odyssey, Pilgrim’s Progress, King Solomon’s Mines, Watership
Down
b. The Journey (Ordeals of the Hero/Heroine & Companions) May include some or all of the
following:
c. Monsters
d. Temptations
4. Voyage & Return Examples: Alice in Wonderland, Goldilocks and the Three Bears, Orpheus,
The Time Machine, Peter Rabbit, Brideshead Revisited, The Rime of the Ancient Mariner,
Gone with the Wind, The Third Man (1948)
c. Frustration Stage
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d. Nightmare Stage
5. Comedy Comedy is dealt with by a less rigid structure. In essence, the comedy meta-plot
is about building an absurdly complex set of problems which then miraculously resolve at
the climax.
[Editors note: Booker apparently knows absolutely nothing about comedy – which is usually
highly structured. A glaring omission.]
6. Tragedy Examples: Macbeth, The Picture of Dorian Gray, Carmen, Bonnie & Clyde, Jules et
Jim, Anna Karenina, Madame Bovary, Julius Caesar
b. Dream Stage
c. Frustration Stage
d. Nightmare Stage
7. Rebirth Examples: Sleeping Beauty, The Frog Prince, Beauty and the Beast, The Snow
Queen, A Christmas Carol, The Secret Garden, Peer Gynt
a. Under the Shadow – A young hero or heroine falls under the shadow of a dark power
b. The Threat Recedes – Everything seems to go well for a while – the threat appears to have
receded.
c. The Threat Returns – Eventually the threat approaches again in full force, until the hero or
heroine is seen imprisoned in a state of living death.
e. The state of living death continues for a long time when it seems the dark power has
completely triumphed.
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http://www.storymastery.com/
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6 Steps to
Creating
Story
Structure
(from “The
TV Writers
http://www.sandlerink.com/
1. “Oh” + “Mah Nish Tah Nah” (Why is this night different from all others?)
2. “The Little Uh-Oh!”
3. “Ouch!”
4. “The Big Uh-Ohhh!”
5. “Oh no!” + “The Twist-a-Roo!”
6. “Ah.”
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http://changingminds.org/
1. Initial harmony
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2. Harmony disturbed
3. Hero is found
4. The quest
5. The trials
6. Harmony re-established
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1. Prologue
2. Parados (parade)
3. 1 st Episode
4. Stassimon (Chorus commentary) – repeat episode/chorus in pairs as necessary
5. Exodus
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5 Beats of the “Story Spine” (from “How to Make a Good Script Great” by Linda Seger)
http://www.lindaseger.com/
1. Set-Up
2. First Turning Point
3. Second Turning Point
4. Climax
5. Resolution
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5 Beats to the “Central Plot” (from Robert McKee)
http://mckeestory.com/
1. Inciting Incident
2. Progressive Complications
3. Crisis
4. Climax
5. Resolution
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1. Home
2. Woodland, Day
3. The Forest
4. The Road Back, Night
5. Home Again, Changed
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1. Yearn
2. Turn
3. Burn
4. Learn
5. Earn
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1. SEPARATION
2. TRANSITION
3. REINTEGRATION
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In Act III you let him down (or, in a tragedy, you kill them—or they fall to their deaths—but
Cohan didn’t say that part).
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http://classics.mit.edu/Aristotle/poetics.html
1. Beginning
2. Middle
3. End
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