Reading On The Move: Poetry: Form, Syllables, Mood, and Tone

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Reading On The Move

Poetry: Form, Syllables, Mood, and Tone

A poem is a group of words that are written to express or draw out


emotion, paint a picture, or give a sense of beauty. There are certain ways to
identify poetry from prose. Prose is a group of words written in sentences and
paragraphs, like you would read in a novel or essay. Poetry is written with
breaks in the lines of text to create a certain sound. Poetry has a beat, or
rhythm, and sometimes it rhymes. It is often written in stanzas and uses imagery
and figurative language to express emotions or ideas to the reader. This lesson
will explore all of these poetry terms.

There are some basics of poetry that are important to know. These basics
give poetry organization and help it to flow. A stanza is when the lines of a poem
are grouped together, as with a paragraph in prose. Stanzas may have any
number of lines. It is important to note that a line in a stanza is not necessarily
the number of sentences. Some lines are a complete sentence; some lines are
only part of a sentence.

The form of a poem is the way it looks on the page. The form includes
the number of lines in each stanza and the length of each line. Like a paragraph
in prose, each stanza is separated by a blank space. Sometimes a stanza ends
at the end of a complete idea, sometimes it ends in the middle of a sentence.
Poets may do this to give the poem a certain flow.

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Some poems are even written in the shape of the thing they are written
about. For example, if the poem is about an apple, the words in the poem are
arranged in a way that creates the shape of an apple on the page. These poems
are called concrete poems. The poem below is about arrows and the words
create the shape of an arrow.

Example:

Poems that don’t follow set patterns are written in free verse. Free verse
is the trickiest type of poetry to tell apart from prose. Free verse is when poets
write without any rules. He/she just write however he/she feels they can express
themselves best. The example below is the concrete poem you just read written
in free verse.

Example: Arrows
Which way do I go?
Up?

Down?
Left? Right?
How do I find my way in this maze?
Just follow the arrows…

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The syllables in the poem play a major part in the meter. Meter is the
rhythmic structure of verse, so in other words, the beat of the poem. The meter
relies on the placement and pattern of syllables in the verse. Syllables in a poem
can be stressed ( \ ) or unstressed (  ). The stressed syllable is the long
syllable and the unstressed syllable is the short syllable. Remember, words can
have more than one syllable.

\   \
Example: Roses are red,
\   \
Violets are blue.

\   \
Sugar is sweet,

 \  \
And so are you.

You can see in this poem that the pattern of the syllables, or the meter, is
the same for the first three lines and different for the last line.

One type of poetry that is written based on syllables is Haiku. Haiku is a

form of Japanese poetry in which an idea is expressed in just 17 syllables. The

format of these syllables is: line one is five syllables, line two is seven syllables,

and line three is five syllables. Traditional Japanese haiku usually describes

ideas that have to do with nature or the different seasons. As haiku has spread

across the nations, the content of this poetry has broadened, but the format

remains the same: 5-7-5.

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Example:

1 Prickly cactus,
2 Bright green in the desert sun.
3 A vulture swoops by.

-y cac-
kle-
tus,

Pric-  Line 1: 5 syllables

sun.
in the -ert
green
des-

Line 2: 7 syllables  Bright

-ture swoops
vul-
by.

A
 Line 3: 5 syllables

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1. Try writing your own haiku in the space below. Remember:

√ It must be three lines long.


√ Line one has five syllables.
√ Line two has seven syllables.
√ Line three has five syllables.
√ It should be about nature.

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Mood is the feeling created by the poet for the reader. Tone is the feeling
displayed by the author toward the subject of the poem. Mood and tone often
depend on one another to get across what the author is trying to portray.

Example: Some words that can describe the mood of a poem might be:
romantic, realistic, optimistic, pessimistic, gloomy, mournful,
sorrowful, etc.

Some words that can describe the tone of a poem might be:
serious, humorous, amused, angry, playful, cheerful, sad,
gloomy, etc.

Example:

Deadly Winter
This poem’s mood could be described as
Barren branches pierce the sky, gloomy because the poem is about death.
Chattering in the shivering breeze.
The clouds hold captive The tone might be described as serious.
Rays of the gloomy sunshine. The words used in the poem give clues as to
Blades of grass brown and tattered how the author feels about winter. Words
From frost’s sharp fingernails. like: barren, chattering, shivering, gloomy,
Winter squeezes the last breath tattered, sharp fingernails, squeezes the last
Out of all that once thrived. breath...all show that the author does not
look at winter in a good way.

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Now, see how the mood and tone change when it is written a little differently:

Wondrous Winter
This poem’s mood could be described as
Long sleek branches optimistic because the poem is about the
Sway to the music of the wind. beauty of winter.
A game of hide and seek
The clouds and sun do play. The tone might be described as cheerful.
Blades of grass sleep This poem uses words like: sleek, sway to
Under a sparkly blanket of frost. the music and hide and seek (which have a
Winter’s beauty transforms playful tone to them), sparkly, beauty,
Landscapes into wonderlands. wonderland. These words suggest the
author looks forward to winter.

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Read each mood below. Decide whether the mood is positive or negative. Write
a P on the line if it is positive and an N if it is negative. Use your dictionary skills
if you come across a word you are unsure of. The first one is done for you.

____
N 2. angry ____ 14. disappointed
____ 3. anxious ____ 15. offended
____ 4. bored ____ 16. optimistic
____ 5. joyful ____ 17. passionate
____ 6. embarrassed ____ 18. reassured
____ 7. excited ____ 19. relaxed
____ 8. frustrated ____ 20. relieved
____ 9. guilty ____ 21. restless
____ 10. happy ____ 22. sad
____ 11. heartbroken ____ 23. scared
____ 12. irritated ____ 24. flattered
____ 13. mournful ____ 25. threatened

Read this poem and answer the questions on the following page.

Loneliness
Katherine Mansfield

Now it is Loneliness who comes at night


Instead of Sleep, to sit beside my bed.
Like a tired child I lie and wait her tread,
I watch her softly blowing out the light.
Motionless sitting, neither left or right
She turns, and weary, weary droops her head.
She, too, is old; she, too, has fought the fight.
So, with the laurel she is garlanded.

Through the sad dark the slowly ebbing tide


Breaks on a barren shore, unsatisfied.
A strange wind flows... then silence. I am fain
To turn to Loneliness, to take her hand,
Cling to her, waiting, till the barren land
Fills with the dreadful monotone of rain.

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26. Which word best describes the tone of this poem?


a. inspired
b. somber
c. optimistic
d. frustrated

27. Which word best describes the mood of this poem?


a. excited
b. playful
c. angry
d. gloomy

28. How many stanzas does this poem have?


a. 1
b. 14
c. 2
d. 12

29. How many syllables does each line have?


a. 5
b. 7
c. 10
d. 14

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Now, read the poem and answer the questions that follow.

I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud


William Wordsworth Vocabulary to know…

I wandered lonely as a cloud


o’er – over
That floats on high o'er* vales and hills,
sprightly – lively
When all at once I saw a crowd,
glee – joy
A host, of golden daffodils;
gay – happy
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
jocund – joyful
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
oft – often
vacant – empty
Continuous as the stars that shine
pensive – thinking
And twinkle on the milky way,
solitude – alone
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly* dance.

The waves beside them danced, but they


Out-did the sparkling leaves in glee*;
A poet could not be but gay*,
In such a jocund* company!
I gazed—and gazed—but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:

For oft*, when on my couch I lie


In vacant* or in pensive* mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude*;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.

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30. What is the mood of this poem?


e. playful
f. sorrowful
g. excited
h. cautious

31. What is the tone of this poem?


i. gloomy
j. angry
k. cheerful
l. agitated

32. This poem is made up of four...


m. sentences
n. stanzas
o. lines
p. paragraphs

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Answer Key
1. You should write a haiku. It should be about nature. The first line should be
5 syllables, the second line should be 7 syllables, and the third line should be
5 syllables.

2. N
3. N
4. N
5. P
6. N
7. P
8. N
9. N
10. P
11. N
12. N
13. N
14. N
15. N
16. P
17. P
18. P
19. P
20. P
21. N
22. N
23. N
24. P
25. N

26. b
27. d
28. c
29. c
30. a
31. c
32. b

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