13 Rules For Using Commas Without Looking Like An Idiot
13 Rules For Using Commas Without Looking Like An Idiot
13 Rules For Using Commas Without Looking Like An Idiot
Sep.17,2013,11:39AM
In fact, precise rules govern when to use this punctuation mark. When followed,
they lay the groundwork for clear written communication.
We've compiled a list of all of the times when you need the mighty comma.
1. Use a comma before any coordinating conjunction (and, but, for, or, nor, so,
yet) that links two independent clauses.
You may need to learn a few grammatical terms to understand this one.
An independent clause is a unit of grammatical organization that includes both a
subject and verb and can stand on its own as a sentence. In the previous example,
"I went running" and "I saw a duck" are both independent clauses, and "and" is
the coordinating conjunction that connects them. Consequently, we insert a
comma.
If we were to eliminate the second "I" from that example, the second clause
would lack a subject, making it not a clause at all. In that case, it would no longer
need a comma: "I went running and saw a duck."
A dependent clause is a grammatical unit that contains both subject and verb but
cannot stand on its own, like "When I went running ..."
If the appositive occurs in the middle of the sentence, both sides of the phrase
need a comma. As in, "A mallard, a kind of duck, attacked me."
Don't let the length of an appositive scare you. As long as the phrase somehow
gives more information about its predecessor, you usually need a comma.
"A mallard, the kind of duck I saw when I went running, attacked me."
There's one exception to this rule. Don't offset a phrase that gives necessary
information to the sentence. Usually, commas surround a non-essential clause or
phrase. For example, "The duck that attacked me scared my friend" doesn't
require any commas. Even though the phrase "that attacked me" describes "the
duck," it provides essential information to the sentence. Otherwise, no one would
know why the duck scared your friend. Clauses that begin with "that" are usually
essential to the sentence and do not require commas.
For example, "I saw a duck, a magician, and a liquor store when I went running."
That last comma, known as the serial comma, Oxford comma, or Harvard
comma, causes serious controversy. Although many consider it unnecessary,
others, including Business Insider, insist on its use to reduce ambiguity.
There's an Internet meme that demonstrates its necessity perfectly. The sentence,
"We invited the strippers, JFK, and Stalin," means the speaker sent three
separate invitations: one to some strippers, one to JFK, and one to Stalin. The
version without the Oxford comma, however, takes on an entirely different
meaning, potentially suggesting that only one invitation was sent — to two
strippers named JFK and Stalin. Witness: "We invited the strippers, JFK and
Stalin."
Many adverbs end in "ly" and answer the question "how?" How did someone do
something? How did something happen? Adverbs that don't end in "ly," such as
"when" or "while," usually introduce a dependent clause, which rule number two
in this post already covered.
Also insert a comma when "however" starts a sentence, too. Phrases like "on the
other hand" and "furthermore" also fall into this category.
The rule for where the comma goes, however, depends on where attribution
comes.
If attribution comes before the quote, place the comma outside the quotations
marks. The runner said, "I saw a duck."
If attribution comes after the quote, put the comma inside the quotation marks.
"I saw a duck," said the runner.
7. Use a comma to separate each element in an address. Also use a comma after a
city-state combination within a sentence.
"I work at 257 Park Ave. South, New York, N.Y. 10010."
"March 15, 2013, was a strange day." Even if you add a weekday, keep the comma
after "2013."
You don't need to add a comma when the sentence mentions only the month and
year. "March 2013 was a strange month."
9. Use a comma when the first word of the sentence is freestanding "yes" or "no."
Another clever meme shows the problem with incorrect placement of this
comma. "Stop clubbing baby seals" reads like an order to desist harming infant
mammals of the seal variety. The version with a comma, however, instructs them
to stop attending hip dance clubs. "Stop clubbing, baby seals."
11. Use a comma between two adjectives that modify the same noun.
For example: "I saw the big, mean duck when I went running."
Only coordinate adjectives require a comma between them. Two adjectives are
coordinate if you can answer yes to both of these questions: 1. Does the sentence
still make sense if you reverse the order of the words? 2. Does the sentence still
make sense if you insert "and" between the words?
Since "I saw the mean, big duck " and "I saw the big and mean duck" both sound
fine, you need the comma.
For example: "I saw a duck, not a baby seal, when I went running."
In this case, you still need the comma if the negation occurs at the end of the
sentence. "I saw a baby seal, not a duck."
Also use commas when any distinct shift occurs in the sentence or thought
process. "The cloud looked like an animal, perhaps a baby seal."
13. Use commas before every sequence of three numbers when writing a number
larger than 999. (Two exceptions are writing years and house numbers.)
Many writers have been told to use a comma anytime they would pause
while reading a piece of writing. While following this suggestion will lead
to correct comma usage in some situations, there are many other times
when following this guideline will lead to unnecessary comma
usage. Instead of using this as a guideline, there are several specific
rules that dictate when commas should be used. Learning and practicing
these rules will help any writer become better at u sing commas.
Examples:
Notice how the above sentences can be separated into two different
sentences. For instance, the first example could be written like this:
Examples:
Correct: I like both English and math (no comma needed). Incorrect: I
like both English, and math (the comma isn’t needed).
Correct: He acted hungry but wasn’t (no comma needed). Incorrect: He
acted hungry, but wasn’t (the comma isn’t needed).
Examples:
I went to the movies with my neighbors, Ron and Sally, and then we
went to dinner.
The students in my morning class, ENG 121, like to participate in the
discussions.
Her best friend, Heather, is planning a surprise party for her birthday.
Examples:
I went to the store and bought milk, eggs, bread, and fruit.
In my American literature class we read The Great Gatsby, All the King’s
Men, As I Lay Dying, and the Grapes of Wrath.
Examples:
Examples:
Examples:
Examples:
Denver is called the mile high city because it is roughly 5,280 feet above
sea level.
My new position will pay me a salary of $40,000 a year.
RULES FOR
COMMA USAGE
Contending that the coordinating conjunction is adequate separation, some writers will
leave out the comma in a sentence with short, balanced independent clauses (such as we
see in the example just given). If there is ever any doubt, however, use the comma, as it is
always correct in this situation.
One of the most frequent errors in comma usage is the placement of a comma after a
coordinating conjunction. We cannot say that the comma will always come before the
conjunction and never after, but it would be a rare event, indeed, that we need to follow a
coordinating conjunction with a comma. When speaking, we do sometimes pause after
the little conjunction, but there is seldom a good reason to put a comma there.
It is permissible to omit the comma after a brief introductory element if the omission does
not result in confusion or hesitancy in reading. If there is ever any doubt, use the comma,
as it is always correct. If you would like some additional guidelines on using a comma
after introductory elements, click HERE.
Sometimes the appositive and the word it identifies are so closely related that the comma
can be omitted, as in "His wife Eleanor suddenly decided to open her own business." We
could argue that the name "Eleanor" is not essential to the meaning of the sentence
(assuming he has only one wife), and that would suggest that we can put commas both
before and after the name (and that would, indeed, be correct). But "his wife" and
"Eleanor" are so close that we can regard the entire phrase as one unit and leave out the
commas. With the phrase turned around, however, we have a more definite parenthetical
element and the commas are necessary: "Eleanor, his wife, suddenly decided to open her
own business." Consider, also, the difference between "College President Ira Rubenzahl
voted to rescind the withdrawal policy" (in which we need the name "Ira Rubenzahl" or
the sentence doesn't make sense) and "Ira Rubenzahl, the college president, voted to
rescind the withdrawal policy" (in which the sentence makes sense without his title, the
appositive, and we treat the appositive as a parenthetical element, with a pair of commas).
As pointed out above (Rule #3), an adverbial clause that begins a sentence
is set off with a comma:
The Okies had to leave their farms in the midwest because the
drought conditions had ruined their farms.
Sometimes, though, the "because clause" must be set off with a comma to
avoid misreading:
Without that comma, the sentence says that Nixon's resignation was the
fault of my sister-in-law. Nixon did not resign because my sister-in-law
worked in the White House, so we set off that clause to make the meaning
clearly parenthetical.
The Red Sox were leading the league at the end of May, but of course, they
always do well in the spring. [no comma after "but"]
The Yankees didn't do so well in the early going, but frankly, everyone
expects them to win the season. [no comma after "but"]
The Tigers spent much of the season at the bottom of the league, and even
though they picked up several promising rookies, they expect to be there
again next year. [no comma after "and"]
(This last piece of advice relies on the authority of William Strunk's Elements of Style. Examples our own.)
When both a city's name and that city's state or country's name are mentioned
together, the state or country's name is treated as a parenthetical element.
When the state becomes a possessive form, this rule is no longer followed:
Also, when the state or country's name becomes part of a compound structure, the second
comma is dropped:
And what does a comma do, a comma does nothing but make easy a thing that if
you like it enough is easy enough without the comma. A long complicated
sentence should force itself upon you, make you know yourself knowing it and
the comma, well at the most a comma is a poor period that lets you stop and
take a breath but if you want to take a breath you ought to know yourself that you
want to take a breath. It is not like stopping altogether has something to do with
going on, but taking a breath well you are always taking a breath and why
emphasize one breath rather than another breath. Anyway that is the way I felt
about it and I felt that about it very very strongly. And so I almost never used a
comma. The longer, the more complicated the sentence the greater the number
of the same kinds of words I had following one after another, the more the very
more I had of them the more I felt the passionate need of their taking care of
themselves by themselves and not helping them, and thereby enfeebling them
by putting in a comma.
So that is the way I felt about punctuation in prose, in poetry it is a little different
but more so …
— Gertrude Stein
from Lectures in America
Use a comma to set off quoted elements. Because we don't use quoted material
all the time, even when writing, this is probably the most difficult rule to
remember in comma usage. It is a good idea to find a page from an article that uses
several quotations, photocopy that page, and keep it in front of you as a model when
you're writing. Generally, use a comma to separate quoted material from the rest of the
sentence that explains or introduces the quotation:
"The question is," said Alice, "whether you can make words mean so many
things."
"I should like to buy an egg, please," she said timidly. "How do you sell
them?"
Be careful not to use commas to set off quoted elements introduced by the word that or
quoted elements that are embedded in a larger structure:
And, instead of a comma, use a colon to set off explanatory or introductory language
from a quoted element that is either very formal or long (especially if it's longer than one
sentence):
Peter Coveney had this to say about the nineteenth-century's use of children
in fiction: "The purpose and strength of . . . . "
(Some writers will leave out the comma that sets off a contrasting phrase beginning
with but.)
Note that we use a comma or a set of commas to make the year parenthetical when the
date of the month is included:
July 1776 was one of the most eventful months in our history.
Concentrating on the proper use of commas is not mere form for form's sake.
Indeed, it causes writers to review their understanding of structure and to consider
carefully how their sentences are crafted.
Comma Before And
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Whether or not you put a comma before and depends on how you’re using and.
There’s no single rule that applies to all situations. You usually put a comma
before and when it’s connecting two independent clauses. It’s almost always
optional to put a comma before and in a list.
A lot of people have strong feelings about putting a comma before and in a list.
Exactly why this particular quirk of comma usage stirs such passions is hard to
say; it’s just one of those things. If you’ve ever heard someone arguing
about serial commas or Oxford commas, this is what they were talking about.
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Let’s say your dog has so many great qualities that you just have to tell the
world. When you list your dog’s qualities, you have to use a comma after each
quality you list except the one that comes immediately before and. That comma
is optional.
The sentence is correct with or without the comma before and. (There are a few
exceptions that require you to use the Oxford comma in a list, but they are pretty
rare.) Just be consistent. Don’t switch back and forth in the same document
between using the Oxford comma and not using it.
By the way, this rule only applies to lists of three or more items. You should
not use a comma before and if you’re only mentioning two qualities.
This is true for proper names, ordinary nouns, verbs, or anything else.
The word and is a conjunction, and when a conjunction joins two independent
clauses, you should use a comma with it. The proper place for the comma is
before the conjunction.
On Monday we’ll see the Eiffel Tower , and on Tuesday we’ll visit the Louvre .
Once again, we have two independent clauses: It’s cold outside plus I can’t find
my coat. Therefore, we need a comma before and.
Don’t use a comma before and when one of the clauses it’s connecting is
a dependent clause.
The first clause, Sam tossed the ball could stand on its own as a complete
sentence, which means it’s an independent clause. But the second
clause, watched the dog chase it, can’t stand by itself as a complete sentence.
That means it’s a dependent clause, so we should not use a comma before and.
Sam tossed the ball and watched the dog chase it.
Exceptions
But wait! There’s an exception. (Isn’t there always?) When you have two
independent clauses joined together by and, most style guides say that it’s OK
to leave the comma out as long as the two independent clauses are very short
and closely connected. Here’s an example:
Want to learn about other ways to use a comma? Check out our general guide to
comma usage.
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GRAMMAR TIPS
Ah, the comma. Of all the punctuation marks in English, this one is perhaps the
most abused and misused. And it’s no wonder. There are lots of rules about
comma usage, and often the factors that determine whether you should use one
are quite subtle. But fear not! Below, you’ll find guidance for the trickiest
comma questions.
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With few exceptions, a comma should not separate a subject from its verb.
Navigating through snow, sleet, wind, and darkness, is a miserable way to travel.
Navigating through snow, sleet, wind, and darkness is a miserable way to travel.
Comma Between Two Nouns in a Compound
Subject or Object
Cleo, and her band will be playing at Dockside Diner next Friday.
Cleo and her band will be playing at Dockside Diner next Friday.
When a subject or object is made up of two items and the second item is
parenthetical, you can set off the second item with commas—one before it and
one after it. But you don’t need a comma when you’re simply listing two items.
You get a compound predicate when the subject of a sentence is doing more
than one thing. In a compound predicate that contains two verbs, don’t separate
them with a comma.
This mistake is most common when the predicate is made up of long verb
phrases.
I meant to buy tickets for Cleo’s show, but ran out of time.
I meant to buy tickets for Cleo’s show but ran out of time.
Cleo spotted the man who entered the diner, and waved.
In the sentence above, you need the comma to make clear that it was Cleo who
waved, not the man.
Comma Splices
When you want to join two independent clauses, you need a conjunction or
a semicolon. A comma alone isn’t strong enough to join them. This kind of
mistake is called a comma splice.
You can fix a comma splice by adding a conjunction or changing the comma to
a semicolon.
Or, you can simply write the two independent clauses as separate sentences.
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Comma After Introductory Phrase
Grabbing her umbrella, Kate raced out of the house. Confused by her sister’s sudden change in
mood, Jill stayed quiet.
After the show, Cleo will be signing autographs. Behind the building there is enough space to
park two limousines. Without knowing why, I crossed the room and looked out the window. In
1816 life was very different. Suddenly, an angry black cat sprang from the shadows.
Interrupters are little thoughts that pop up in the middle of a sentence to show
emotion, tone, or emphasis. A parenthetical element is a phrase that adds extra
information to the sentence but could be removed without changing the
meaning of the sentence. Both interrupters and parenthetical elements should
be set off with commas.
Geoff’s cooking skills if you can call them skills left something to be desired.
Geoff’s cooking skills, if you can call them skills, left something to be desired.
A question tag is a short phrase or even a single word that is added to the end of
a statement to turn it into a question. Writers often use question tags to
encourage readers to agree with them. A question tag should be preceded by a
comma.
These willow trees are beautiful, aren’t they? You didn’t actually write a 600-page vampire
romance novel, did you? I know, right?
When addressing another person by name, set off the name with commas.
Mom, I can’t find my shoes! Cleo, there’s someone on the phone for you. Hello, Chester.
An appositive is a word or phrase that refers to the same thing as another noun
in the same sentence. Often, the appositive provides additional information
about the noun or helps to distinguish it in some way. If you could remove the
appositive without changing the meaning of the sentence, it is said to
be nonessential and should be set off with commas. If the appositive is
necessary, it’s said to be essential and it should not be set off with commas.
Nonessential appositives:
My mother, Angela, is a wonderful cook. The painter, one of the city’s most promising young
artists, began showing his work in galleries before he was sixteen. Chocolate, my favorite treat,
always makes me feel better after a bad day.
Essential appositives:
Edgar Allan Poe’s poem The Raven is a classic. Alec Baldwin’s brother Stephen is the most
underrated Baldwin. The detective Sherlock Holmes is one of literature’s greatest sleuths.
Commas in Dates
When writing a date in month-day-year format, set off the year with commas.
July 4, 1776, was an important day in American history. I was born on Sunday, May 12, 1968.
If you are using the day-month-year format, however, commas are unnecessary.
If you are referencing a day of the week and a date, use a comma:
On Tuesday, April 13, at three o’clock, there will be a meeting for all staff. Please join us on
Saturday, June 14, 2010, for the marriage of Annie and Michael.
When you are referencing only a month and year, you don’t need a comma.
When multiple adjectives modify a noun to an equal degree, they are said to be
coordinate and should be separated by commas. One way to tell whether the
adjectives are coordinate is to try switching the order of them. If the sentence
still sounds natural, the adjectives are coordinate.
That man is a pompous, self-righteous, annoying idiot. That man is a self-righteous, annoying,
pompous idiot. The sweet, scintillating aroma of cinnamon buns filled the kitchen. The
scintillating, sweet aroma of cinnamon buns filled the kitchen.
If the adjectives are not coordinate, don’t separate them with a comma.
Use a comma before the word but if it is joining two independent clauses:
If but is not joining two independent clauses, leave the comma out.
When you have a list that contains only two items, don’t use a comma before
the and.
Cleo’s favorite activities are singing on stage, and relaxing in the sunshine.
Cleo’s favorite activities are singing on stage and relaxing in the sunshine.
When correcting a comma splice, that is when joining two independent clauses
with a coordinating conjunction, put the comma before and.
Commas with Lists
When you have a list that contains more than two elements, use commas to
separate them.
(The comma before the and in a list of three or more items is optional. See
below under Serial Comma for more information.)
Your list might be made up of nouns, as in the example above, but it could also
be made up of verbs, adjectives, or clauses. Imagine, for a moment, that you
have just finished doing three chores. The chores were:
If you were to list these three chores in a sentence, you would write:
I cleaned the house and garage, raked the lawn, and took out the garbage.
or
I cleaned the house and garage, raked the lawn and took out the garbage.
Serial Comma (Oxford Comma)
As mentioned above, when you are listing three or more items, commas should
separate each element of the list. However, the final comma—the one that
comes before the and—is optional. This comma is called the serial comma or the
Oxford comma.
Mary needs bread, milk, and butter at the grocery store. (With serial comma)
Mary needs bread, milk and butter at the grocery store. (Without serial comma)
I still have to buy a gift, pack the suitcases, and arrange for someone to water the plants while
we’re at the wedding. (With serial comma)
I still have to buy a gift, pack the suitcases and arrange for someone to water the plants while
we’re at the wedding. (Without serial comma)
Whether or not you use the serial comma is a style choice. Many newspapers
do not use it. Many trade books do use it. In your own writing, you can decide
for yourself whether to use it or not—just be consistent.
Keep in mind, though, that occasionally the serial comma is necessary for
clarity.
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Don’t separate a transitive verb from its direct object with a comma.
neither/nor, and not only/but also) and connect words or phrases in a sentence
to form a complete thought. Typically, commas are unnecessary with
correlative conjunctions.
Either the blue shirt, or the red sweater will look good with your jeans.
Either the blue shirt or the red sweater will look good with your jeans.
You can wear a pashmina not only for warmth, but also for fashion.
You can wear a pashmina not only for warmth but also for fashion.
An attributive tag is a phrase like “he said” or “she claimed” that identifies the
speaker of a quote or piece of dialogue. Attributive tags can come before, after,
or even in the middle of a quote. Use commas to separate attributive tags from
quotations.
The professor remarked, “How attentive you have been today!” “Once you know the solution,”
Tiffany said, “the whole problem seems very simple.” “You have ice cream on your nose,” my
friend snickered. “When you leave the house,” my mother yelled, “don’t slam the door!”
“Pass me that thesaurus,” said Matthew. “If you knew what was good for you, you’d sit down and
finish that essay right now,” my roommate said. “We’re going down to the soup kitchen to help
serve dinner,” her mother called.
In British English, however, the convention is the opposite. If you are writing
for a British audience, put the comma after the closing quotation mark.
After opening the new cookie tin, Chester had a hard time replacing the lid. After opening the
new cookie tin (and eating several of the cookies), Chester had a hard time replacing the lid.
After opening the new cookie tin, (and eating several of the cookies), Chester had a hard time
replacing the lid. After opening the new cookie tin (and eating several of the cookies,) Chester
had a hard time replacing the lid.
The company managers accidentally scheduled the, weekly meeting for Saturday. A, bouquet of
flowers may be created using more than one type of flower. I’ll have an, apple.
The company managers accidentally scheduled the weekly meeting for Saturday. A bouquet of
flowers may be created using more than one type of flower. I’ll have an apple.
When speaking, we often pause while we think of the next word we want to
say. In writing, though, there’s usually no reason to add this pause. If you’re
writing dialogue and you specifically want to convey a pause here while
someone is thinking, use an an ellipsis: I’ll have an… apple.
The phrase “as well as” usually doesn’t require commas unless it’s part of a
nonrestrictive clause.
Coniferous trees, such as pine and spruce, do not drop their needles in the winter.
Trees such as pine and spruce do not drop their needles in the winter.