Editing Manager Resume
Editing Manager Resume
Editing Manager Resume
docx
by Haleigh St Paul
Whit e Space
Editing Manager Resume.docx
GRADEMARK REPORT
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Text Comment. T wo Successes: Clear, consistent syntax and overall writing throughout
convinces me of your writing ability. Good organization. T wo Challenges: Emphasize your
editing skills by moving your Education section up and describing the editing you've done in
coursework or elsewhere. T his will require omitting some of the other interesting, but
sometimes irrelevant, details f rom your work experience.
QM White Space
White space is used to set sections apart. Avoid cramming headings and paragraphs together
and f ollow this common rule f or headings:
two white lines bef ore a heading, one white line af ter the heading. When creating columns
(which are vertical), separate them with vertical white space.
RUBRIC: IFIXIT RESUME RUBRIC 2
ABSENT OR BELOW Sections organization is absent, illogical, or inconsistent; Headings may be absent or
BASIC do not describe content ef f ectively
DEVELOPING Sections organization isn't always clear or consistent; Headings may not describe
content ef f ectively
PROFICIENT Sections are usually organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
adequately
ADVANCED Sections are organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
ef f ectively
ABSENT OR BELOW Job description's details may not be addressed; evidence of qualif ications is lacking
BASIC or irrelevant
DEVELOPING Generalizations attempt to address the job's description; evidence of qualif ications
isn't yet adequate
PROFICIENT Some specif ic details address the job's description directly; evidence of qualif ications
is adequate
ADVANCED Specif ic details address the job's description directly and aptly; evidence of
qualif ications is plentif ul and convincing
ABSENT OR BELOW White space, f onts, and design are not used to increase the reader-f riendliness of
BASIC the resume.
DEVELOPING White space, f onts, and design may be distracting or inef f ective.
ADVANCED White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective and attractive
READABILIT Y Advanced
ABSENT OR BELOW Bullet Point clauses/phrases are hard to understand and structured inconsistently;
BASIC errors impede readability throughout.
PROFICIENT Bullet Point clauses/phrases are usually ef f ective and structured consistently; a f ew
errors
ADVANCED Bullet Point clauses/phrases are ef f ective and structured consistently; nearly error
f ree
ABSENT OR BELOW Audience's needs are of ten not recognized: language needs adjustment f or the
BASIC audience. Purpose (to prove one is capable of the named team position) isn't clear or
achieved.
DEVELOPING Shows some attention to audience's needs and sometimes uses audience-
appropriate language. Purpose (to prove one is capable of the named team position)
may be unclear at times, and it may not be achieved convincingly.