Tesol sp5 2016 Assessment 2
Tesol sp5 2016 Assessment 2
Tesol sp5 2016 Assessment 2
Assessment 2
Program Design
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Table of Contents:
Context
Page 2
Learners needs
Page 3
Primary program objectives
Page 3
Program outline
Unit 1: Persuasive
Texts Page 4
Unit 2: Narrative
Texts Page8
Justifications
Design and
organisation Page 12
Content
Page 13
Pedagogy
Page 13
Language, culture
and EALD learning
Page 15
Bibliography
Page 17
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Assessment feedback
The outlines of the program include the information that is required for the assignment
and demonstrate a sound understanding of issues involved in planning this TESOL
program, however, it is not clear whether sufficient activities have been designed for each
week, which is 220 minutes in length, and it is not clear either how the learning objectives
set for the individual activities are related to the adopted curriculum. It is very good that
measures are made to monitor students changing needs throughout the program, but it
is not clear how the findings are reported or fed into classroom teaching.
The section of justification addresses aspects of the designed program as required for the
assignment.
Context
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This program has been designed around the context of the year 10 English as an
2015. For those students to whom it applies, EALD lessons are taught as an
which students are either expected to do the SACE 1 level ESL classes or
and this classroom is equipped with a whiteboard, projector and wireless internet.
All teachers and students in the years eight to twelve are provided with school
laptops for use both at home and school for school-based work.
Teachers expectations of students abilities and work output were consistently low
across multiple subject areas. This was observed through in-class observations,
conversations with mentor teachers and other teachers in the same office as well as
in conversation with other pre-service teachers at the school who all had similar
The observed EALD class had three lessons per week, one 45 minute lesson, one
class it was made clear that students written language levels were on a spectrum
between level 10 and level 12 (DECD 2012; Archdale 2016). These levels are year
eight equivalents.
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Learners needs
The SACE Stage 1 performance standards for English as a Second Language dictate
that students have a much higher literacy standard than level 12. In addition to
appropriate texts and find and select appropriate resources to include in fact-based
texts.
In order for students to be able to reach this level by the time they begin stage 1, it
while still allowing for the differentiation of competency levels within a class.
(Archdale 2016)
appropriate language and text structure and viewing ethical and moral dilemmas
and plot development in an appropriate medium for their narrative and skill in
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multimedia and incorporating an instance of persuasion as a complication of the
plot.
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Program Outline
Unit Objectives:
Objective 1: Students will discuss and analyse the ethics of persuasion and learn
argument.
Objective 2: Students will observe and critically analyse culturally indicative texts
considering the point of view of the protagonist and the antagonist and how this
Students must convincingly argue for either the affirmative or negative position
Table 1.1
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lied to? What happens cultures.
when we are persuaded
to do something we do Students will
not want to do? How do learn to
you feel, before, during, appreciate
after? the point of
Group activity: Ethics view of both
surrounding persuasion antagonist
when is it ok? When is it not and
ok? Analyse a piece of text protagonist
involving persuasive parties.
language and look at it from
another perspective (eg
Pirates of the Caribbean
who are the good guys?
why? What happens when we
look at the situation from the
POV of the antagonists?)
2 Class activity: analysis of a Students will Ethical language
Persuasi text (language features, learn to what makes x
ve emphasis, point of view, recognize person sound fair,
Writing ethical considerations, why persuasive right/wrong,
are WE convinced? Etc.) techniques in moral/just?
Group activity: students their personal Emphatic
find and discuss at least one reading and language,
instance in their personal daily hyperbole and
reading where persuasion interactions. exaggeration.
was used. Voice formal vs
CLASS ACTIVITY AS A RESULT non formal.
OF ABOVE: Tense
Mind map of variations in Nominalisation.
persuasion context,
morality,
severity/persuasiveness,
result (positive/negative, for
whom?)
ARTEFACTS
PRODUCED:
TEACHER AND
STUDENTS: Whole
class analysis of a
text to be compiled
and handed back to
students as a
handout.
STUDENT:
Summative student
assessment: rebuttal
persuasive essay,
200-500 words, 1
per student.
4,5 Class debate public forum. Students will Incorporating all of
Debating Either teams present in front build the language
of class or in front of confidence features learned into
assembly, at staff meeting, and further comprehensive and
etc. (depending on topic) develop their informed debates.
Summative assessment verbal English
group debates presented in to include all ARTEFACTS
front of class/assembly using of the PRODUCED:
researched arguments. language STUDENTS:
features Journal/folio of
analysed research for debate.
within this Summaries of
unit. arguments to be
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explored by each
team. (Allowing both
affirmative and
negative sides to
combat each others
arguments fairly and
with fact-based
arguments)
TEACHER: Video of
debates, proof of
summative
assessments.
Resources required
Week 3: Individual task: Rebuttal convince me of the opposite of what the sheet
Table 1.2
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authors design and craft spoken texts, and use this
texts (ACELA1569) knowledge to create
purposeful texts that
inform, persuade and
engage (ACELY1750)
Evaluate the impact on Analyse and evaluate
audiences of different text structures and
choices in the language features of
representation of still and literary texts and make
moving images relevant thematic and
(ACELA1572) intertextual connections
with other texts
(ACELT1774)
Understand that peoples Reflect on, extend,
evaluations of texts are endorse or refute others
influenced by their value interpretations of and
systems, the context and responses to literature
the purpose and mode of (ACELT1640)
communication
(ACELA1565)
Refine vocabulary Create imaginative texts
choices to discriminate that make relevant
between shades of thematic and intertextual
meaning, with deliberate connections with other
attention to the effect on texts (ACELT1644)
audiences (ACELA1571)
Compare the purposes, Identify, explain and
text structures and discuss how narrative
language features of viewpoint, structure,
traditional and characterisation and
contemporary texts in devices including analogy
different media and satire shape different
(ACELA1566) interpretations and
responses to a text
(ACELT1642)
Understand how
language use can have
inclusive and exclusive
social effects, and can
empower or disempower
people (ACELA1564)
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Unit Objectives:
Objective 1: Students will discuss and analyse the similarities and differences
between narratives presented in various mediums and choose the narrative style
Objective 3: Students will plan and draft their own narrative using a medium
suited to their story and skill set outside of the EALD classroom. Their narrative
Table 2.1
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6 Comparative activity based Students will learn Dialogue
Introducti on what we know. how the structure of versus
on to Teacher: will already have persuasive texts and narration.
Narrative the language features of narrative texts differ Point of
persuasive texts on display. as well as the key view first
Students: will work in small language features person,
groups to differentiate used within second
narrative from persuasive narrative texts. person, third
texts. (This will be a short person,
activity to determine what is multiple
known, unknown and perspectives
uncertain.) .
Teacher: Briefly explain Tense
basic language features
involved in narrative
including the varying formats
available for narrative -
novel, novel series, short
story, poem, comic, movie,
TV series, etc.
Students: will individually
read a page/chapter of a
book/poem and identify the
tense and perspective.
They will then write a scene
from another perspective
(formative
assessment/Assessment for
learning project) to create a
segue into week sevens
topic on character
development.
7 Using episodes from the web Students will learn Show dont
Character comic Check Please! to distinguish tell versus
developm Episodes Parse Part 1,2 and 3 between good and tell dont
ent (Ukazu 2016) (explicit bad character show
language modified) to development and techniques.
demonstrate effective start to build up
character development in few their own
words. characters.
Class activity: Analyse what
makes this good character
development and as a class
construct a set of guidelines
to building a good character.
(Teacher will compile this into
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a worksheet for students to
use)
Individual activity:
(Formative Assessment)
Students will begin character
development to aid them in
their narrative writing in
weeks nine and ten.
As a class, discuss how this
development might be
utilised in longer written
stories, short stories, TV
series, movies, etc.
8 Teacher: Explain the Students will learn Pacing
Plot structure of a narrative and how to structure and action
Analysis the language features that plan a narrative versus
assist in telling the story. through the slower scene
Student group activity: identification and sentence
Identifying analysis of narrative structure:
introduction/orientation, texts in multiple simple
complication, resolution/s formats. (and
within multiple texts and succinct)
formats that are often sentence
commonly read or known by structure
students eg.* plot of Harry provide
Potter while students may action
not have been able to read scenes with
the books, often they will drama and
have watched the movies, suspense.
current popular superhero Complex
movie, short story, comic, sentence
previous class novel, etc. structures
*This activity will require add detail
knowledge of the students and serve to
interests which will be move the
addressed within week 6. plot forward.
Class Activity: students and
teacher will create a set of
guidelines for students to
plan their own narrative.
(Teacher will compile this into
a worksheet for students to
use )
Student individual
activity: (Formative
Assessment) Students will
begin to develop the plot of
their narrative using the
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worksheet developed in class.
fiction book they read in class. This will be no more than 200 words. This will inform
the depth character development will be explored in week 7 as well as the level of
Students will begin character development to aid them in their narrative writing in
Students will begin to develop the plot of their narrative using the worksheet
developed in class.
Week 8 and 9 formative assessments will be used to assess the level of detail and
ability to both plan and implement the details outlined within the worksheets.
the medium their narrative is presented in- written short story, short comic, short
film, etc. If students choose to use a medium that is not purely written they must
hand up their supporting materials in addition to their final project i.e., script, draft
panels, annotations for visual aids, etc. 500-1000 word limit or equivalent.
Table 2.2
Justification
Design and organisation
It is my belief that the content taught should reflect the current sociocultural
climate. For example, persuasion is used by the worlds politicians every day, asking
each member of society to vote for them above their opposition. Many students in
year 10 will be only a few years away from being able to vote and it will become
speeches and know how to rebut the promises and statements in their community
(and perhaps within organisations they are involved in). It is also critically
important- particularly with the current world climate- that students can recognise
the ethical issues embedded within the policies of some politicians and see the
opposing views to make an informed choice. It is my belief that it has never been
more important to educate the nations youth in the recognition and ethics of
persuasion. This is the reason persuasive texts are the central focus of the first unit
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The second unit, narrative texts (Table 2.1), both changes direction and implements
some of the techniques discussed and taught in unit 1. It changes direction in that it
removes the focus from the non-fiction aspects of our society and places it on that
finding literary texts that are both age and literacy level appropriate that also meet
the needs of the analysis study areas within the unit. Multimedia texts will also be
used as it must be accepted that we are currently living in a digital age where
almost all books are released in eBook mode as well as (or instead of) hard copy
books and many narratives are being told through other forms of media including
comics (hard copy and web comics), television series and movies, podcasts and
they choose text based, video, comic, audio file provided it meets the criteria for
Content
An observation from Paralowie School across multiple subjects was that the topics
being discussed and taught within class was often irrelevant to current culture
attending this school are in the top quarter of socioeconomic status, and over half
of the students attending are in the bottom quarter (MySchool 2015). Teaching
students about topics that are irrelevant or uninteresting to them is not going to
plays a vital role in our society at every level of interaction. While the material used
within the unit will change depending on current events and interests, the necessity
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for the unit will not, and it should not be avoided because of the socioeconomic
Following the persuasive text unit with a narrative texts unit is both a change of
pace and an opportunity for the teacher to expand on some aspects of persuasive
texts without the complication of fact such as perspective and use in context. By
preceding narrative texts with persuasive texts, students have a wider view of the
many contexts in which persuasion can be employed, therefore making it easier for
Pedagogy
Constructivism revolves around the central theory that the learner is active in the
activity within the program has been designed so students have a say in the
material analysed and used and handing the responsibility for their learning over to
them. In this respect the program has been directly influenced by the approach to
classroom management that will be employed. Woolfolk-Hoy et al. (2006) found that
students were more willing to engage with a class if they felt that the teacher cared,
both about them as people and them as students. They also found that a caring
relationship with their teachers was a precondition for caring about school.
question I asked while I was at school and was asked while on placement Why are
we learning this? with an answer that is more satisfactory than many of the
answers I have been given which all equated to it is part of the required
curriculum, and is not a particularly enticing reason to apply oneself to the topic.
Another reason for handing the responsibility for their own learning back to students
includes the behaviour and perceived attitudes of the people around you. By raising
the expectations for the content taught and then delivered by students, it is likely
that students will be influenced by these expectations and strive to meet them.
Each week of the program follows a fluency first pedagogy (Brumfit 1979, as cited
in Richards 2006) using an activity progression which follows the P-P-P Cycle
(Presentation, Practice, Production) (Richards 2006). The original P-P-P Cycle was
Presentation of the information in whole class activity format then evolves into
practice in the format of small group activities discussions and analysis. The final
summative assessments. Students build upon their individual knowledge with the
support, guidance and feedback of their peers and teacher/s in whole class
students will have the opportunity to discuss the strengths in their knowledge and
discuss how each student can move forward towards SACE level performance
the teacher.
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Each of the three summative assessments within this program represents a focus
Listening. As part of the research and formative assessment stages for each
students who learn best in different areas of literacy all have an equal opportunity
to learn the same content. As demonstrated within Table 1.2 and Table 2.2, there is
Freire et al(1983) said The actual act of reading literary texts is seen as part of a
ones own experience and the social world. - P.5 This quote neatly summarises both
reason why reading criteria are so thoroughly addressed within this program. The
aspect of understanding both ones own experience and the social world, Is a
with social contexts with which they can compare and identify with their own
There are just as many opportunities to practice speaking and listening within this
program. The obvious is the debating assessment, in which students must learn to
pronounce phonemes correctly, use appropriate stress and intonation patterns and
requirements appear throughout the program in group and class activities and
verbal discussions with the teacher. The combination of more intensive formal and
activity within the program. The formative assessment tasks will provide the
teacher with opportunities for Assessment for Learning (AfL)(Black and William
1998). Black and Williams research is based around the concept of using the
informal observations) to modify the content taught or the way the content is being
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taught to maximise student learning. Each writing activity undertaken by students
over the ten week program will provide the teacher guidelines for what needs to be
reiterated, taught more or less of and which students need extra support. There are
within the outlined ten week program that call for students to write and more that
will inevitably occur within the class as it is being taught; there are also three
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