ksp-151 Syrian Refugees Persuasive Essay
ksp-151 Syrian Refugees Persuasive Essay
ksp-151 Syrian Refugees Persuasive Essay
KSP-151
Dr. Dengler
12/9/16
Sustainable Refugee Camps: A Solution to the Current Syrian Refugee Crisis in Jordan
and Lebanon
One of the great humanitarian crises facing the world today is the question of how to deal
with the mass migration of millions of Syrian refugees to neighboring countries because of the
Syrian civil war. This war, which originated in the repression of rebel groups during the Arab
Spring of 2011, has been raging as a full-fledged war since 2012; during this time, near ceaseless
bombing and fighting has resulted in the decimation of entire towns and cities (Syrian Civil
War). Because of the constant danger posed by the war offensives, many Syrians have tried to
escape their homeland in hope of some safety: To date, it is estimated that 4.8 Syrians are
currently living as refugees in other nations (Quick Facts: What You Need to Know about the
Syria Crisis).
The nations bordering Syria are most greatly affected by this exodus of misplaced
civilians, specifically the small counties of Jordan and Lebanon. The extent to which these two
nations have been willing to host those who come to their borders are astounding. Jordan
currently holds approximately 635,324 Syrian refugees, or one-tenth of the nations population
(Quick Facts). In Lebanon, the numbers are even more dramatic: Lebanon currently holds
approximately 1,033,513 Syrian refugees, which amounts to an entire quarter of the nations
native population. The strain that providing refuge and aid such a huge amount of people puts on
the two nations, however, cannot be denied. According to a report by MercyCorps, one of the
leading aid agencies operating with the UN in these countries, the current refugee situation will
end in tragedy if reform is not enacted: As the smallest and least infrastructurally developed
nations in the region, the economic strain that these millions of refugees put on the countries and
aid agencies will eventually cause economic collapse if a change in the approach to hosting
A potential solution to the current economic strain caused by refugees is in the self-
sustaining refugee camp. The defining feature of this camp design is that the aid provide within
the camp is meant to facilitate refugee-initiated business and skill-building measures so that they
can subsequently earn the money to gradually support themselves, rather than providing aid
meant only to sustain the refugees. One such initiative, called Refugee Cities, provides a good
explanation of how these self-sustaining camps are to operate: Refugee camps should be
rebadged as cities and turned into enterprise zones so inhabitants can set up businesses and build
their own infrastructure By modelling them on special enterprise zones (SEZs) elsewhere in
the world, they could benefit both the refugee and the host populations, as well as giving
inhabitants useful skills for their eventual return to their homelands (Gibson).
The difference between the insufficient current camp strategy and the proposed improved
aid strategy can be illustrated in the modifying of an age old parable: give a man a fish, and he
have food for a day; give him a fishing pole, however, and he will be able to feed not only
himself but others too. Thus, by setting up camps that provide teaching materials to teachers,
tools to blacksmiths and craftsmen, and seeds to farmers, the refugees will be enabled to provide
build up a livelihood for themselves; an act by which the benefactors will also benefit. Through
the gradual independence of the refugees, the amount of aid necessary by the UN and national
governments will also decrease steadily. When national governments and the UN respond to the
current refugee crisis, they should focus on gradually self-sustaining refugee camp design, as it
provides the best solution towards benefitting both the economic needs of the refugees and the
benefactors (the UN and the national governments of Jordan and Lebanon); needs left unmet by
Before addressing the sustainable camp itself, those not in favor of changing how they
currently view refugee aid might challenge, What is wrong with our current refugee camps?
The current refugee camps in Jordan and Lebanon are insufficient in that they do not attract the
people they were meant to aid. Refugee camps are supposed to benefit both the people within the
camp and those outside the camp by providing a given place for aid agencies such as the UN to
keep track of the refugees and to care for their needs. However, the camps do not attract many of
the Syrian refugees flocking to these nations: according to Mercy Corps, The U.N. estimates
that only 1 in 10 Syrian refugees live in camps. The rest are struggling to settle in unfamiliar
urban communities or have been forced into informal rural environments (Quick Facts). Many
of the refugees shun the refugee camps in favor of even cow sheds and abandoned buildings,
simply because the refugee camps do not provide any opportunities of freedom. Because
Jordans camps are run by the government and the U.N. they offer more structure and
support. But many families feel trapped, crowded, and even farther from any sense of home, so
they seek shelter in nearby towns (Quick Facts). Though the refugees seek shelter outside of the
reach of UN aid, they cannot provide for themselves: in both Jordan and Lebanon, it is illegal for
refugees to be employed. As a result, because the refugee camps are unable to attract the people,
the economic burden that should have been shouldered by the UN becomes the burden of local
population in farming villages and towns, who are often little wealthier than the refugees they are
caring for. The current aid camps do not benefit the people within the camps or those living in
the native country, because they do not succeed in attracting the Syrian refugees within their
borders to properly administer aid. Because it is not sufficient in fulfilling its task currently, the
ineffectiveness in keeping refugees and alleviating the burden of the refugees on the
infrastructure of the nation left unresolved by current camp design, making them more desirable
for refugees to live there and therefore more able to fulfill the humanitarian issue which refugee
camps were intended to resolve. The features of current refugee camps fail in are in meeting the
emotional and spiritual needs necessary to have quality of life. This camp seeks to fulfill the
He added that Refugee Cities aimed "to provide a model under which host countries can
benefit from refugees' presence; to deliver a financial return for investors; to make
international assistance more effective and self-sustaining; and to provide refugees with
the material, knowledge, and psychological resources to rebuild their home countries
model enterprise zone-based alternative to the traditional refugee campoutlines the more
wholesome appeal of the self-sustaining camp alternative. Because the alternative camp seeks to
meet the needs of refugees in ways that provide more freedom, they present a more appealing
option to refugees looking for a balance between freedom after escaping such oppression, while
also providing an opportunity to improve themselves while they wait to return to their homeland.
Because the self-sustaining camp is more capable of attracting Syrian refugees to voluntarily live
within its borders than the conventional camp design, it better fulfills purpose of camps to benefit
Upon acknowledging that the current refugee camp system is in need of reform and that
refugee camp design, which is currently just a theory, would be possible. Just as Communism,
though theoretically possible, is almost impossible to see brought about in reality because its
theoretical grounds are not based on true assumptions about human nature; so this theory of
sustainable refugee camps would be of no practical value if its operating grounds did not lie in
sound assumptions about the humans that should live in these communities.
endeavor: do the Syrian refugees actually want to work, rather than waiting for outside aid?
Consider this: it is a known fact that when people are fall from relatively comfortable livelihoods
into life-threatening situations, they desire to labor actively towards improving their situation, as
motivated by natural self-interest and the desire to feel valuable. Many Syrians seeking refuge in
Jordan and Lebanon currently live in extremely dire circumstances. A simple glance at the
statistics on the income of these refugees with confirm the reality of this point: Funding
shortages mean that the most vulnerable Syrian refugees in Lebanon receive just $21.60 per
person a month or around US$0.70 cent a day for food assistance, well below the UNs poverty
line of US$1.90 while 86% of Syrian refugees in urban areas in Jordan are living below the
local poverty line (Syria's Refugee Crisis in Numbers). Living at such a low income means that
the majority of families living in these countries cannot acquire many of even the most basic
necessities for living and require the help of others to even scape by. It follows that while living
as refugees, these Syrians desire nothing more than to be able to work, in order to improve their
This conclusion can be supported by the words and actions of refugees themselves. In a
photo documentary of Syrian refugees throughout Jordan, one Syrian refugee who had lost his
home, family, and respected employment had only this comment upon learning he was being
relocated to Michigan: I just hope that its safe and that its a place where they respect science. I
just want to get back to work. I want to be a person again. I dont want the world to think Im
over. Im still here (Syrian Americans). These people want nothing more than to be able to
improve their current situation of helplessness and earn their place in the world. Therefore,
because these Syrian refugees do actually want to workthus, meeting the prerequisite
necessary for the operation of a self-sustaining refugee campit should be entirely possible to
implement of this revised camp design principle in real-life camp situations in Jordan and
Lebanon.
However, critic and supporter alike realize that even if self-sustaining camps are possible
in that they contain refugees willing to do the work necessary, the reformed self-sustaining camp
generating a healthy and profitable economy. It is necessary that the refugee camps be able to
use the aid agency-funded investments of entrepreneurial materials to grow into businesses and
workshops that are profitable economically, otherwise the refugees will be just as reliant on the
support of the UN for daily provisions as they are in the current camp system. To see the
economic worth these refugees are easily capable of generated when supplied with resources, we
need to look no further than the Zaatari Refugee Camp in Jordan--the largest refugee camp in
Jazeera, it was revealed that even in a camp unconducive to business startup or development, the
refugees have managed to generate an incredible economy. Zaatari is home to about 2,500
unauthorized shops, and according to the UNHCR, the camp's economy generates about 10
million Jordanian dinars ($14.2m) a month (Syrians at Zaatari Camp: 'We Can't Live Here
Forever'). Because many of the people coming into the camps are educated middle-class people
who had marketable skills, they are easily able to adapt to new circumstances and build up
businesses, even when unauthorized and unencouraged. Gavin White, the UNHCR Jordan
External Relations Officer, says of the value of the resourceful people in Zaatari: Its too
dangerous to return to Syria, and there are very limited ways to be productive inside the camp.
But the adaptations have been amazing. This is unlike any other refugee camp in the world. The
Syrians are coming from a middle-class economy, so they are a very skilled population they
arent subsistence farmers. Theyve managed to build an economy inside the camp (Zaatari
Refugee Camp). These are the people that currently fill the countries of Jordan and Lebanon:
highly skilled people willing not only to do work, but work that has value in local and
international markets. If the UN and national governments would work together in allowing
these skilled refugees to put to good use their skills by encouraging enterprise within the camps,
rather than repressing the abilities and talents of these people, how much more productive and
While the benefits of could be expounded upon at much greater lengths, the given proofs
that self-sustaining camps would better fulfill the calling of a refugee camp, because they more
successfully attract the refugees to live in the camps; that the self-sustaining camp would be
realistically possible, because the working will of the refugees within the camp meets the
prerequisite necessary for being sustainable; and that the self-sustaining camp would be
economically expedient to both the refugee and the benefactor, as the current profits being made
in even conventional camps illustrate the ability of the refugees to build up an economy
successfully. The UN and the National governments of Jordan and Lebanon should unite their
efforts to respond to the Syrian refugee crisis by developing and instituting these havens of
enterprise, or self-sustaining camps, in order to gradually relieve the economic burden the
refugee crisis currently presents to both the national governments and the UN by allowing the
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