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CHAPTER 4

Writing Business Messages Objectives


Introduction
Professionals in every field have worked hard to hone their communication skills.
After completing this lecture, you will be able to do the following:

Identify the four aspects of being sensitive to audience needs when writing business messages.

Explain how establishing your credibility and projecting your companys image are vital aspects of
building strong relationships with your audience.

Explain how to achieve a tone that is conversational but businesslike, explain the value of using plain
language, and define active and passive voice.

Describe how to select words that are not only correct but also effective.

Define the four types of sentences and explain how sentence style affects emphasis within a message.

Define the three key elements of a paragraph and list five ways to develop coherent paragraphs.

Identify the most common software features that help you craft messages more efficiently.

Learning Objective 1
Adapting to Your Audience: Being Sensitive to Your Audiences Needs
Identify the four aspects of being sensitive to audience needs when writing business messages.
If your target readers or listeners dont think a message applies to them, or if they dont think you are being sensitive
to their needs, they wont pay attention. Readers and listeners are more likely to respond positively when they
believe messages address their concerns.
Adopting the You Attitude
The you attitude means speaking and writing in terms of your audiences wishes, interests, hopes, and
preferences.
You can adopt the you attitude by replacing terms that refer to yourself and your company with terms that refer to
your audience. Use you and your instead of I, me, mine, we, us, and ours. It is a matter of respecting and being
genuinely interested in your recipients.
Avoid using you and your when doing so

Makes you sound dictatorial

Makes someone else feel guilty

Goes against your organizations style

For instance, instead of saying, You failed to deliver the customers order on time, you could avoid the
confrontational tone by saying, The customer didnt receive the order on time.
Maintaining Standards of Etiquette
Good etiquette shows respect for your audience and helps foster a more successful environment for communication
by minimizing negative emotional reaction.
If you know your audience well, a less formal approach might be more appropriate. However, when you are
communicating with people who outrank you or with people outside your organization, an added measure of
courtesy is usually needed.
Written communication and most forms of electronic media generally require more tact than oral communication.
When youre speaking, you can soften your words by your tone of voice and facial expressions. Plus, you can adjust
your approach according to the feedback you get. However, if you inadvertently offend someone in writing or in a
podcast, for example, you usually dont get the immediate feedback you would need in order to resolve the situation.
In fact, you may never know that you offended your audience.
Even if a situation calls for you to be brutally honest, express the facts of the matter in a kind and thoughtful manner.
For instance, instead of Once again, youve managed to bring down the website through your incompetent
programming. you can write Lets review the last website update to explore ways to improve the process.
Emphasizing the Positive
You will encounter situations throughout your career in which you need to convey unwanted news. Never try to hide
the negative news, but look for positive points that will foster a good relationship with your audience.
For instance, instead of It is impossible to repair your laptop today. you can write Your computer can be ready by
Tuesday. Would you like a loaner until then?
If youre trying to persuade audience members to perform a particular action, point out how doing so will benefit
them. For instance, instead of I am tired of seeing so many errors in the customer service blog. you can write
Proofreading your blog postings will help avoid embarrassing mistakes that erode confidence in our brand.
Look for appropriate opportunities to use euphemisms. Euphemisms are milder synonyms that can express an idea
while triggering fewer negative connotations. . For example, when referring to people beyond a certain age, use
senior citizens rather than old people. Senior conveys respect in a way that old doesnt. Senior conveys respect
in a way that old doesnt. However, euphemisms should never be used to obscure the truth
Using Bias-Free Language
Bias-free language avoids words and phrases that unfairly and even unethically categorize or stigmatize people in
ways related to gender, race, ethnicity, age, disability, or other personal characteristics.
To a significant degree, language reflects the way people think and what they believe, and biased language may well
perpetuate the underlying stereotypes and prejudices that it represents.
To establish a good relationship with your audience, you must also appear to be fair. Good communicators make
every effort to change biased language.
Bias can take a variety of forms:

Gender bias. Avoid sexist language by using the same labels for everyone, regardless of gender.

Racial and ethnic bias. Avoid identifying people by race or ethnic origin unless such identification is
relevant to the matter at handand it rarely is.

Age bias. Mention the age of a person only when it is relevant.

Disability bias. Physical, cognitive, sensory, or emotional impairments should never be mentioned in
business messages unless those conditions are directly relevant to the subject.

Learning Objective 2
Adapting to Your Audience: Building Strong Relationships
Explain how establishing your credibility and projecting your companys image are vital aspects of building strong
relationships with your audience.
Successful communication relies on a positive relationship between sender and receiver. Establishing your
credibility and projecting your companys image are two vital steps in building and fostering positive business
relationships.
Establishing Your Credibility
Audience responses to your messages depend heavily on your credibility, which is a measure of your
believability and is based on how reliable you are and how much trust you evoke in others.
Honesty
Demonstrating honesty and integrity will earn you the respect of your audiences, even if they dont always agree
with or welcome your messages.
Credentials, knowledge, and expertise
Audiences need to know that you have whatever it takes to back up your message, whether its education,
professional certification, special training, past successes, or simply the fact that youve done your research.
Awareness of audience needs
Directly or indirectly, let your audience members know that you understand whats important to them.
Endorsements
An endorsement is a statement on your behalf by someone who is accepted by your audience as an expert.
Performance
Demonstrating impressive communication skills is not enough; people need to know they can count on you to get
the job done.
Confidence
Audiences need to know that you believe in yourself and your message. If you are convinced that your message is
sound, you can state your case confidently, without sounding boastful or arrogant.
Sincerity
When you offer praise, dont use hyperbole, such as You are the most fantastic employee I could ever imagine.
Instead, point out specific qualities that warrant praise.
Projecting Your Companys Image
When you communicate with anyone outside your organization, it is more than a conversation between two
individuals. You represent your company and therefore play a vital role in helping the company build and maintain
positive relationships with all of its stakeholders.
Your companys interests and reputation take precedence over your personal views and communication style.
Most successful companies work hard to foster a specific public image, and your external communication efforts
need to project that image. As part of this responsibility, the interests and preferred communication style of your
company must take precedence over your own views and personal communication style.
Many organizations have specific communication guidelines that show everything from the correct use of the
company name to preferred abbreviations and other grammatical details. Specifying a desired style of

communication is more difficult, however. Observe more experienced colleagues to see how they communicate, and
never hesitate to ask for editorial help to make sure youre conveying the appropriate tone.
Learning Objective 3
Adapting to Your Audience: Controlling Your Style and Tone
Explain how to achieve a tone that is conversational but businesslike, explain the value of using plain language, and
define active and passive voice.
Your communication style involves the choices you make to express yourself: the words you select, the manner in
which you use those words in sentences, and the way you build paragraphs from individual sentences. Your style
creates a certain tone, or overall impression, in your messages. The right tone depends on the nature of your
message and your relationship with the reader.
Creating a Conversational Tone
The tone of your business messages can range from informal to conversational to formal. You can achieve a tone
that is conversational but still businesslike following certain guidelines.
A conversational tone is plain language that sounds businesslike without being stuffy at one extreme or too laidback and informal at the other extreme.
Click through the bars below or use the navigation arrows in the upper right corner to learn about the guidelines to
achieve a businesslike conversational tone.

Understand the difference between texting and writing.


The casual, acronym-filled language friends often use in text messaging, IM, and social networks is not considered
professional business writing. If you want to be taken seriously in business, you simply cannot write like this on the
job.
Avoid obsolete and pompous language.
Avoid using obscure words, stale or clichd expressions, and complicated sentences whose only intent is to impress
others.
Avoid preaching and bragging.

Readers tend to get irritated by know-it-alls who like to preach or brag. However, if you need to remind your
audience of something that should be obvious, try to work in the information casually, perhaps in the middle of a
paragraph, where it will sound like a secondary comment rather than a major revelation.
Be careful with intimacy.
Business messages should generally avoid intimacy, such as sharing personal details or adopting a casual,
unprofessional tone. However, when you have a close relationship with audience members, such as among the
members of a close-knit team, a more intimate tone is sometimes appropriate and even expected.
Be careful with humor.
Humor can easily backfire and divert attention from your message. If you dont know your audience well or youre
not skilled at using humor in a business setting, dont use it at all. Avoid humor in formal messages and when youre
communicating across cultural boundaries.
Using Plain Language
An important aspect of creating a conversational tone is using plain language. Plain language presents information
in a simple, unadorned style that allows your audience to easily grasp your meaninglanguage that recipients can
read, understand and act upon the first time they read it.
In addition, plain language can make companies more productive and more profitable because people spend less
time trying to figure out messages that are confusing or arent written to meet their needs.
Selecting Active or Passive Voice
The choice of active or passive voice also affects the tone of your message.
In a sentence written in the active voice, the subject performs the action and the object receives the action: Jodi
sent the email message. Using the active voice often makes your writing more direct, livelier, and easier to read as
shown in the figure below.
In a sentence written in the passive voice, the subject receives the action: The email message was sent by Jodi.
Passive voice is not wrong grammatically, but it can be cumbersome, lengthy, and vague. Nevertheless, using the
passive voice can help you demonstrate the you attitude in some situations:

When you want to be diplomatic about pointing out a problem or an error

When you want to point out whats being done without taking or attributing either the credit or the blame

When you want to avoid personal pronouns (I and we) in order to create an objective tone

Learning Objective 4
Composing Your Message: Choosing Powerful Words
Describe how to select words that are not only correct but also effective.
Successful writers pay close attention to the correct use of words. If you make errors of grammar or usage, you lose
credibility with your audienceeven if your message is otherwise correct. Moreover, poor grammar may imply that
you dont respect your audience enough to get things right. With practice, youll become more skilled in making
correct choices over time.
In addition to using words correctly, successful writers and speakers take care to use the most effective words and
phrases. Selecting and using words effectively is often more challenging than using words correctly because doing
so is a matter of judgment and experience.
Balancing Abstract and Concrete Words
The nouns in your business messages can vary dramatically in their degree of abstraction or concreteness. An
abstract word expresses a concept, quality, or characteristic. Abstractions are usually broad, encompassing a
category of ideas, and are often intellectual, academic, or philosophical.
In contrast, a concrete word stands for something you can touch, see, or visualize. Most concrete terms are
anchored in the tangible, material world.
Abstractions tend to be fuzzy and can be interpreted differently, depending on the audience and the circumstances.
To minimize problems when using abstractions, try to balance abstract terms with concrete ones, the general with
the specific.
State the concept and then pin it down with details expressed in more concrete terms. Instead of referring to a sizable
loss, give an exact number.
Finding Words That Communicate Well
When you compose business messages, look for the most powerful words for each situation.

Choose strong, precise words.


Choose words that express your thoughts clearly, specifically, and strongly. If you find yourself using many
adjectives and adverbs, chances are youre trying to compensate for weak nouns and verbs.
Choose familiar words.
Youll communicate best with words that are familiar to both you and your readers. Moreover, trying to use
unfamiliar words can lead to embarrassing mistakes.
Avoid clichs and use buzzwords carefully.
Although familiar words are generally the best choice, avoid clichsterms and phrases so common that they have
lost some of their power to communicate. Buzzwords, newly coined terms often associated with technology,
business, or cultural changes, are more difficult to handle than clichs because in small doses and in the right
situations, they can be useful.
Use jargon carefully.

Jargon, the specialized language of a particular profession or industry, has a bad reputation, but its not always bad.
Using jargon is usually an efficient way to communicate within the specific groups that understand these terms.
Composing Your Message: Creating Effective Sentences
Define the four types of sentences, and explain how sentence style affects emphasis within a message.
Arranging your carefully chosen words in effective sentences is the next step in creating successful messages. There
are four basic varieties of sentences. To make your writing as effective as possible, strive for variety and balance
using all four sentence types.
Choosing from the Four Types of Sentences
Sentences come in four basic varieties: simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex.
Simple sentence
It has one main clause (a single subject and a single predicate), although it may be expanded by nouns and pronouns
serving as objects of the action and by modifying phrases.
Compound sentence
It has two main clauses that express two or more independent but related thoughts of equal importance, usually
joined by and, but, or or. In effect, a compound sentence is a merger of two or more simple sentences (independent
clauses) that are related.
Complex sentence
It expresses one main thought (the independent clause) and one or more subordinate thoughts (dependent clauses)
related to it, often separated by a comma.
Compound-complex sentence
It has two main clauses, at least one of which contains a subordinate clause.
Summary
Maintain some variety among the four sentence types to keep your writing from getting choppy (too many short,
simple sentences) or exhausting (too many long sentences).
Using Sentence Style to Emphasize Key Thoughts
In every message, some ideas are more important than others. You can emphasize key ideas through your sentence
style. One obvious technique is to give important points the most space. Emphasize specific parts of sentences by

Devoting more words to them

Putting them at the beginning or at the end of the sentence

Making them the subject of the sentence

The best placement of the dependent clause depends on the relationship between the ideas in the sentence.
Learning Objective 6
Composing Your Message: Crafting Coherent Paragraphs
Define the three key elements of a paragraph, and list five ways to develop coherent paragraphs.

Paragraphs organize sentences related to the same general topic. Readers expect every paragraph to be unified
focusing on a single topicand coherent presenting ideas in a logically connected way.
Creating the Elements of a Paragraph
Paragraphs vary widely in length and form, but most contain three basic elements: a topic sentence, support
sentences that develop the topic, and transitional words and phrases.
Click through the bars below or use the navigation arrows in the upper right corner to learn about the three key
elements of a paragraph.
Topic sentence
Most effective paragraphs deal with a single topic, and the sentence that introduces that topic is called the topic
sentence. This sentence, usually the first one in the paragraph, gives readers a summary of the general idea that will
be covered in the rest of the paragraph.
Support sentences
In most paragraphs, the topic sentence needs to be explained, justified, or extended with one or more support
sentences. These sentences must be related to the topic and provide examples, evidence, and clarification.
A paragraph is well developed when it contains enough information to make the topic sentence convincing and
interesting and doesnt contain any unneeded or unrelated sentences.
Transitions
Transitions connect ideas by showing how one thought is related to another. They also help alert the reader to what
lies ahead so that shifts and changes dont cause confusion.
Depending on the specific need within a document, transitional elements can range in length from a single word to
an entire paragraph or more.
You can establish transitions in a variety of ways:

Use connecting words.

Echo a word or phrase from a previous paragraph or sentence.

Use a pronoun that refers to a noun used previously.

Use words that are frequently paired.

Here is a list of common transitions:

Additional detail: moreover, furthermore, in addition, besides, first, second, third, finally

Cause-and-effect relationship: therefore, because, accordingly, thus, consequently, hence, as a result, so

Comparison: similarly, here again, likewise, in comparison, still

Contrast: yet, conversely, whereas, nevertheless, on the other hand, however, but, nonetheless

Condition: although, if

Illustration: for example, in particular, in this case, for instance

Time sequence: formerly, after, when, meanwhile, sometimes.

Intensification: indeed, in fact, in any event

Summary: in brief, in short, to sum up

Repetition: that is, in other words, as I mentioned earlier

Developing Paragraphs
You have a variety of options for developing paragraphs, each of which can convey a specific type of idea. There are
five most common approaches for developing paragraphs.
Illustration
Giving examples that demonstrate the general idea
Comparison orcontrast
Using similarities or differences to develop the topic
Cause and effect
Focusing on the reasons for something
Classification
Showing how a general idea is broken into specific categories
Problem and solution
Presenting a problem and then discussing the solution
Learning Objective 7
Using Technology to Compose and Shape Your Messages
Identify the most common software features that help you craft messages more efficiently.
Take full advantage of your softwares formatting and automation capabilities to help produce effective, professional
documents in a short time. The features, functions, and names vary from system to system and version to version,
but generally the combination of the certain capabilities exists..
Style Sheets, Style Sets, Templates, and Themes
In word processing software, blogging systems, and other tools, style sheets, style sets, templates, and themes are
various ways of ensuring consistency throughout a document and from document to document. These tools ensure
consistency throughout a document and from document to document. They also make it easy to redesign an entire
document or screen simply by redefining the various styles or selecting a different design theme. Style sheets or sets
are collections of formatting choices for words, paragraphs, and other elements. Also, templates can be particularly
handy if you create a variety of document types, such as letters, calendars, and agendas.
Boilerplate And Document Components
Boilerplate refers to a standard block of text that is reused in multiple documents. Two common examples are
company descriptions and executive biographies. Moving beyond simple text blocks, some systems can store fully
formatted document components such as cover pages, sidebars, and pull quotes.

Autocorrection or Autocompletion
Some programs can automate text entry and correction using a feature called autocompletion, autocorrection, or
something similar. Use these features carefully, though. They can make changes you might not want in every
instance. Also, you may grow to rely on them to clean up your typing, but they wont be there to help when youre
using other systems.
File Merge And Mail Merge
Most word processing software makes it easy to combine files. Mail merge lets you personalize form letters by
automatically inserting names and addresses from a database.
Endnotes, Footnotes, Indexes, And Tables Of Contents
Your computer can help you track footnotes and endnotes, renumbering them every time you add or delete
references. For a reports indexes and table of contents, you can simply flag the items you want to include, and the
software assembles the lists for you.
Summary
This lecture has discussed key concepts related to the following learning objectives:

Identify the four aspects of being sensitive to audience needs when writing business messages. (Textbook
reference: see pages 79-83)

Explain how establishing your credibility and projecting your companys image are vital aspects of
building strong relationships with your audience. (Textbook reference: see pages 83-84)

Explain how to achieve a tone that is conversational but businesslike, explain the value of using plain
language, and define active and passive voice. (Textbook reference: see pages 84-87)

Describe how to select words that are not only correct but also effective. (Textbook reference: see pages 8789)

Define the four types of sentences and explain how sentence style affects emphasis within a message.
(Textbook reference: see pages 89-92)

Define the three key elements of a paragraph and list five ways to develop coherent paragraphs. (Textbook
reference: see pages 92-94)

Identify the most common software features that help you craft messages more efficiently. (Textbook
reference: see pages 94-96)
FLASHCARDS

"You" attitude: speaking and writing in terms of your audience's


wishes, interests, hopes, and preferences.

Abstract words: a word that expresses a concept, quality, or


characteristic.

Active voice: when the subject performs the action and the object
receives the action: "Jodi sent the e-mail message."

Bias-free language: language which avoids words and phrases that


unfairly and even unethically categorize or stigmatize people in ways
related to gender, race, ethnicity, age, or disability.

Complex sentence: sentence that expresses one main thought (the


independent clause) and one or more subordinate thoughts
(dependent clauses) related to it, often separated by a comma.

Compound sentence: sentence that has two main clauses that express
two or more independent but related thoughts of equal importance,
usually joined by and, but, or or.

Compound-complex sentence: sentence that has two main clauses, at


least one of which contains a subordinate clause.

Concrete words: a word that stands for something you can touch, see,
or visualize.

Conversational Tone: plain language that sounds business-like without


being stuffy at one extreme or too laid-back and informal at the other
extreme.

Credibility: a measure of your believability, based on how reliable you


are and how much trust you evoke in others.

Euphemism: milder synonyms that convey your meaning without


carrying negative connotations.

Passive Voice: when the subject receives the action: "The e-mail
message was sent by Jodi."

Simple sentence: sentence that has one main clause (a single subject
and a single predicate), although it may be expanded by nouns and
pronouns serving as objects of the action and by modifying phrases.

Style: the choices you make to express yourself: the words you select,
the manner in which you use those words in sentences, and the way
you build paragraphs from individual sentences.

Tone: overall impression created by one's style.

Topic Sentence: the sentence that introduces the topic.

Transition: connect ideas by showing how one thought is related to


another.

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