Academic Style
Academic Style
Academic Style
1) Formality
1. Use more formal words with the same meaning
The graph shows a decrease in smoking
It is not easy to get research funding
Most accidents happen between 8 and 10 pm
Textbooks can be bought online
We cannot reply to this e-mail
The walking school bus idea originated in 1998
The present study was carried out
In two rural and two urban places
Compared with earlier generations
The popularity of camera phones, has made it more and more tricky to prevent people from
taking photos of things they shouldnt record, e.g military equipment.
But now theres a system that can find out any camera phones and send out rays of light to mess
up any pictures they take
3) It-constructions
3. Change the following phrases to passive constructions with it
Most people agree that
Scientists think that volcanic eruptions may have destroyed dinosaurs
Nowadays we know that exercise can reverse many symptoms of ageing
Researchers have found that sun bathing is addictive
In the past people used to think that bed rest was goof for people with weak hearts
Some people might argue that sending young offenders to jail is counterproductive
5) Noun combinations
5. Explain the meaning of the following noun combinations.
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
fossil fuel
sports centre
business correspondent
bottle bank
laser surgery
sign language
7) Hedging
8. Compare sentences a) and b) below. Underline the two additional words which
qualify the statement in sentence b). Which statement are you more likely to
believe? Why?
a) Cancer drugs serve as an unexpected new weapon against deadly antibiotic-resistant
bacteria.
b) Cancer drugs may serve as an unexpected new weapon against some deadly antibioticresistant bacteria.
9. Underline the words which are used to qualify the following statements.
1. The decline in sea ice cover in the Amundsen Sea appears to be linked to the warming of
West Antarctica
2. Logging companies are sometimes asked to protect certain areas of undamaged habitat to
compensate for the damage their operations do.
3. Extra doses of a molecule that helps to protect lung cells from the damage caused by
smoking might one day reduce some of the dangers associated with the habit.
10. Use hedging language from the table below to qualify the following statements
where appropriate.
Example
New evidence shows that early dinosaurs crawled on all fours before learning to stand
upright
New evidence suggests that some early dinosaurs may have crawled on all fours before
learning to stand upright
1. Olive oil has a similar anti-inflammatory effect to the drug ibuprofen, which explains
why the Mediterranean diet protects against cancer and other diseases.
2. The earth beneath our feet contains 100 times as many species of bacteria as we thought.
According to recent research, one gram of soil harbours up to a million microbial species
3. Skeletons recently discovered in Scotland indicate that ancient Britons practised the art of
mummification at the same time as the Egyptians.
4. The floods caused by Hurricane Theo will create the perfect breeding ground for
mosquitoes, which transmit West Nile virus, and it will be at least a month before we
know the scale of the risk to public health. Conversely, the hurricane will also have the
opposite effect and get rid of the disease altogether.
Key hedging language
Effect
Language
Modal auxiliary
Adverb or noun
Verb
Adjective
Time expression
Frequency adverb
Quantifier
Example
will, may, might, can, could
certainly, possibly, perhaps.
There is a possibility that
It shows/indicates that
It seems/appears that
This suggests that
It tends to
It is certain, likely, probable
that .
(very) soon, at some point, one
day
always, sometimes, often,
rarely
all, most, many, some, certain
8) Signposting
11. Underline the main linking expressions in the test below.
There are two fundamental problems of knowledge at the centre of the book. First, we have
the problem of induction that is the fact that although we are only able to observe a limited
number of events, science nevertheless advances unrestricted universal statements. Second is
the problem of demarcation, which demands a separating line between empirical science and
non-science. This book makes a major contribution to the philosophy of science and is
therefore essential reading for anyone interested in the field.
12. Academic English uses all the main types of linking expressions to show the
connections between ideas or facts. Match the following linking expressions to the
correct sections of the table opposite.
Although
As a result
By/in comparison
Consequently
Due to
Eventually
Finally
Furthermore
in addition
including
in other words
in spite of (that)
meanwhile
moreover
on the other hand
in the first place
overall
similarly
such as
then
whereas
while
yet
to sum up
13. Choose the most suitable expression to complete the sentences below.
1. At 500 metres, Earths tallest sand dunes are already huge, in other words/yet they are set
to grow even bigger as the world warms.
2. Water will be scare, and therefore/similarly food production will need to be far more
efficient.
3. Large parts of the earths biodiversity will vanish including/because species wont be able
to adapt quickly enough to higher temperatures.
4. Marks left by a criminals tools can reveal important evidence. The use of a screwdriver
to prise open a window, for example/in addition leaves scratches unique to the tool.
5. Music has been created by every known society although/and it is consistently rated
as the most popular art form in surveys. However/Consequently the origins pf music
mystify sciences.
14. Choose suitable expressions from the box to complete the text below
But However such as for example Furthermore
that is to say
9) Attributive Adjectives
Classifying adjectives
These adjectives classify a noun according to type , e.g. a digital camera, a natural material.
15. Many very classifying adjectives in academic English fall into contrasting pairs. It is
essential to know and be able to use these confidently. Fill in the opposities in the list
below.
Same/different
Full/a).
General/b..
c)/secondary
d)/final
Major/e)
f)(=earlier)/following
Simple/g)..
h) /negative
public/i)..
17. Topical adjectives, which classify a noun according to subject area, are common in
academic English, e.g political theory. Think of adjectives which have a meaning
connected with the following:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
science:.research
religion:beliefs
countryside (as opposed to the town: the..economy
town (as opposed to countryside).areas
farming:..land
history: a place ofinterest
relating to people (as opposed to animals or machines):nature
industry:..countries
Evaluative adjectives
These adjectives express a judgment of some kind, e.g. interesting news, good advice
18. Some evaluative adjectives occur very frequently with certain common headwords
(main nouns) in academic English, so these word partners are useful to know.
Choose the appropriate adjective to complete the noun places.
good important special right
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
found in rock formations dating back 60 m years, give scientists an unprecedented insight
into the giant animals that ruled the tropics after the sudden disappearance of the dinosaurs
65 m years ago.
Determiner
b)
d)
Adverb/adjective
Several very large prehestoric
c)
sudden
Headword
a)
insight
e)
22. There are also several ways of conveying information after the headword. Complete
the examples in the table below using words from the text in ex. 3.
Type
1 prepositional phrase (in,
of, with, etc.) Says where,
when, what for
2 past participle clause (-ed,
etc.)= Short relative clause
(passive meaning)
3 present participle clause
(ing)= Short relative clause
(active meaning)
4 relative clause (that, who,
etc.)
Headword
excavations
Example
a) in
snakes
b) thought
rock formations
c) dating
animals
d) that
23. Match each underlined section a)-d) in the text below to one of the four
constructions in exercise 4.
Gold bullion a) said to be worth $ 1bn has been located among the wreckage of the worship
HMS Victory. According to the company b) that led the search, the ship was also carrying
important naval artillery when it sank in 1744. A huge bronze cannon c) weighing four tons
has already been recovered, and this is the only gun d) of the size and type still in existence.
24. Academic English often prefers to use shorter noun phrases rather than longer
relative clauses. Rewrite the underlined parts of these sentences as noun phrases.
1. Six companies that supply energy have announced that they are reducing prices.
2. Scientists who are involved in the study say that the process produces some by-products
that are not desirable.
3. It is an electronic thermometer which reacts fast and has a three digit LED screen.
4. The company has paid millions of dollars in fines for activities that were against the law.
25. Rewrite the extract from a students essay to make more impersonal and academic,
using all the formal types of language you have studied.
I think that energy is very important in our life. I came from a country with very cheap
electricity but in the UK it is very expensive. We should try to save as much as we can. We
must turn on the light only in the room that we are using and try to use the washing machine
as little as we can to save electricity.
Language facts:
1. There are typically three to four times as many nouns as verbs in academic writing. By
contrast, nouns and verbs are equally frequent in conversation.
2. Of is the second most common word in English after the. This reflects the
importance of of in noun phrases
3. The most common use of modal verbs in academic writing is to express possibility
4. Attributive adjectives are more frequent in academic writing than in any other type of
English.
5. In an electronic corpus, containing over I million words of University Management
Studies texts, the phrase In my opinion occurred only once.