Cambridge English Proficiency: Writing Part 1

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Description
This activity familiarises students with the requirements of Part 1. It also helps students
understand how to plan before they start writing. They complete a writing plan in table format
in preparation for a Writing paper, Part 1 question.

Time required: 30 minutes
Materials
required:
Students worksheet (one copy per student)
Sample task (one copy per student)
Sample answer (one copy per student)
Aims:
to familiarise students with the requirements of Part 1
to help students plan for Part 1 writing questions

Procedure
1. Give out Students worksheet and make sure everyone can see a copy of the
Sample task. Ask students, in pairs, to complete the key facts using the information
in the box for question 1. Check the answers with the whole class. Make sure these
points are covered:
The questions in Part 1 always have a summarizing and evaluating focus.
The input, which explains and defines the task, will always present two texts
to be addressed, and candidates are required to cover the points in these
texts in their answers and to add their own views and opinions. Candidates
must write an essay.
Ask if there are any other questions about Part 1.
2. Refer students to question 2 on the Students worksheet, and the Sample task.
Ask students to read the Sample task question very carefully, and with a partner to
discuss what they have to do to answer the question by completing the writing plan.
3. Check the answers with the whole class (see Key). Point out that, in order to get a
good grade, students:
must address all content points in the two texts
should organise their writing in a logical way using appropriate paragraphs
should write in an appropriate format and register
should use a good range of vocabulary and grammar
should have a positive effect on the target reader
should keep to the word limit.
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4. Give out the Sample answer. Allow a few minutes for students to read it. Elicit their
initial reactions to the answer (Do you think its a good answer? Why/Why not?)
In pairs, students work through the questions below the Sample answer.
Suggested follow-up idea
1 Ask pairs or groups of students to start writing their first draft of their answers to
the sample task. Depending on time, this can be finished as homework.
2 Ask students to review another pair/groups first draft.
3 Students write final version, incorporating comments from their peer review.

Additional information
This part of the paper tests the candidates ability to summarise and evaluate the points in a
two texts and add their own views.
Task type and focus
There will be two input texts on the same topic, of about 100 words each. Each text will have
two clear main points. The texts may present opposing or complementary views. Candidates
must integrate a summary of these four points and their own views on the topic in a coherent
essay. The word range is a guide; the task can be accomplished well within this range but
candidates will not be penalised for exceeding the upper limit.
Task format
Candidates are required to base their answers on input material which will take the form of
two short texts. The texts will come from a variety of sources such as extracts from
newspaper articles, magazines or books.
You could look through the FAQs for Writing on the Proficiency website to see if there are
any points there you would like to raise with your class.
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Answer keys
Students Worksheet 1 Exercise 1
Key facts:
Part 1 is compulsory
The type of writing is an essay
The focus is on summarising and evaluation
The input material is approximately 200 words.
Candidates must write 240 - 280 words.

Students Worksheet 1 Exercise 2
Who is going to read this? The examiner
What am I going to write, a report, a
review an essay?
An essay
What style / format is it going to be in? neutral to formal.
How many content points are there?
What are the content points?
Four points + your own opinions on them
Outdoor advertising is being transformed by
digital screen media
Digital screen media is entirely positive
Traditional advertising was harmless and could
be ignored
Digital screen advertising is unnecessary and
has a negative impact
What sort of language do I need to use? A summary and evaluation of the main points,
adding your own views.

Sample task
1a) all points are covered in paragraphs 1, 2 and 3
1b) e.g., contrast the pros and cons, from the point of view of, has to be offset against,
is seen as.
1c) Adequate, e.g.: hence manipulate, renders the term, boiling down, creepingly
commercialising
1d) Adequate, e.g.: in which, is seen as, can be just as unwanted, that will be followed
1e) four paragraphs are used clearly to deal with each of the main points and the
writers opinions are clearly stated
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1f) Linkers are used well and appropriately, e.g. In particular, In this respect, ,
However
2. Yes, the writer balances the main points and concludes with his own point of view.
It is the correct format for a short essay
3. Yes, the reader can understand the writers key points.

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Students Worksheet 1

Exercise 1
Working in pairs, complete the key facts below by choosing correct information from
the box.





Key facts:
Part 1 is compulsory.
The type of writing is a(n)
The focus is on .. and ...
The input material is approximately . words.
Candidates must write .. words.

Exercise 2
Read Sample Task 1 and complete the writing plan.
Who is going to read this?


What am I going to write, a report, a review
or an essay?

What style / format is it going to be in?


How many content points are there? What
are the content points?

What sort of language do I need to use?



a. article essay proposal report
b. describing evaluating summarising explaining making
recommendations
c. 100 150 200
d. 250300 300350 240280

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Sample Task

You must answer this question.
Read the two texts below.
Write an essay summarizing and evaluating the key points from both texts. Use your own
words throughout as far as possible, and include your own ideas in your answers.
Write your answer in 240 280 words.

1 The Excitement of Advertising
Outdoor advertising has to attract, engage and persuade potential customers; it is the
most important way of grabbing customers attention and outdoor media continue to
undergo a transformation. At the core of this transformation is the digital screen
media, which encompass everything from giant screens to digital billboards. The
technology is cheap and advertising agencies rave about the creative possibil ities for
advertisements which entertain, amuse, inform, inform, make the environment
brighter and enliven the world we live in.

Advertising: an undesirable business
Once upon a time outdoor advertising was straightforward. Posters were stuck
up on anything from a bus shelter to a motorway hoarding. Many people
considered this kind of advertising to be fairly dull, a harmless blot on the
landscape and chose to ignore it. These people now regard digital advertising
as a form of unwanted, creeping commercialization: it attracts a buzz simply
because it is new. They feel that any advertising which targets children or
vulnerable adults is a dubious practice at the best of times, and digital
advertising is, moreover, wasteful, damaging to the environment and
completely unnecessary.

Write your essay.


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Sample answer

The two texts contrast the pros and cons of outdoor advertising, in particular in its latest
digital form. Text 1 claims that outdoor advertising, like any advertising, is designed to appeal to
potential customers, even creating in them a need for which it promises immediate satisfaction.
In this respect, outdoor advertising is the most effective type and digitalisation considerably
broadens the ways in which advertising professionals can reach and hence manipulate customers.
While outdoor advertising undoubtedly has an alluring power for customers, I seriously doubt its
importance and overall impact. At least from the point of view of a European citizen, everyday
exposure to outdoor advertising, digital or not, appears to be minimal. And the cheapness of
digital media has to be offset against the continuous need for power to run these media, a fact
that renders the term cheap short-sighted and unconvincing.
Text 2 argues that traditional, paper based outdoor advertising was unobtrusive and overall,
unimportant. Digital advertising, however, is seen as intrusive, its attractiveness simply boiling
down to it being a novelty. People sharing these opinions regard advertising practices,
particularly those focusing on the young and those in need of help, as deplorable, especially when
it damages the environment at the same time.
I agree with the statements in text 2 as far as the environmental damage and advertising
practices in general are concerned. However, those practices are not solely dependent on the
medium they use. Paper based outdoor advertising can be just as unwanted and creepingly
commercialising as the digital counterpart. The fundamental question is: Do we want to be
seduced and manipulated in such a way at all? If people answer yes, I assume that digital
outdoor advertising is just another step that will be followed by yet more intrusive ones.

1. Look at the sample answer to Sample Task 1 and find:
a) the 4 content points from the two input texts
b) evidence of appropriate register
c) evidence of good vocabulary
d) evidence of a good range of grammar
e) clear paragraphs and organisation
f) a variety of linking words
2. Is it in the right format?
3. Would the reader understand the writers point of view?