1st 20assignment
1st 20assignment
1st 20assignment
Findatotalof15examples.Youmusthaveatleastfourofeachdevice/element,andthentheotherthreeareofyourchoice.Theymust
comefromallpartsofthememoir,meaningbeginning,middleandend.
Simile:figureofspeechinwhichtwounlikethingsareexplicitlycompared,asinsheislikearose.
Imagery:languagethatevokesoneorallofthefivesenses:seeing,hearing,tasting,smelling,touching.
Dialogue:Thelinesspokenbyacharacterorcharactersinaplay,essay,story,ornovel,especiallyaconversationbetweentwocharacters,
oraliteraryworkthattakestheformofsuchadiscussion.Baddialogueispointless.Gooddialogueeitherprovidescharacterizationor
advancestheplot.Inplays,dialogueoftenincludeswithinithintsakintostagedirections.Forinstance,ifonecharacterasks,"Whyare
youhittingme?"thereadercanassumethatonstageanothercharacterisstrikingthespeaker.Noticingsuchdetailsisparticularly
importantinclassicaldramaandinShakespeare'splayssinceexplicitstagedirectionsareoftenmissing.
LiteraryDevice/Element
LineandPageNumber
Simile
p.13thatmemoryblinkedlikeadistantfoglightina
storyseaanditdrownedinmypanic.
Imagery/Detail
p.5Itwasahugeoldclunker,bluewithwhitetrim,
withbigfattires,hugefenders,andabatterypowered
hornbuiltintothemiddleoftheframewithabutton
youpushedtomakeitblow.
Dialogue
p.86Thefirsttimeithappened,weasked,Ma,howd
youlearntotalklikethat?
Mindyourownbusiness,shesaid.Neverasquestions
oryourmindwillenduplikearock.SomeoftheseJews
cantstandyou.
Howdoesthisdevice/element
enhancethewriting/memoir?
Itshowsthepanickedfeelinghehadwhen
hismotherwasnttheretopickhimupat
thebusstop.Theimportanceofthe
experienceiscleartothereader.
Heisdescribingthebikehismotherrode
aroundafterhisstepfatherdied.Asa
reader,youaregiveneachdetailtopicture
thecontraptionclearlyfromcolortoits
awkwardness.
Oneofthefewtimessheletsherchildren
seeherJewishside.Sheconsidersita
finishedpartofherlifeanddoesnttalkto
herchildrenaboutit.Shehasmovedonand
doesntwantthemaskingquestions.
1. Simile
Dialogue
1.
Dialogue
2.
Imagery
1.
Simile
2.
Imagery
2.
3.
Imagery
Imagery
4.
Simile
3.
Dialogue
3.
p.
86 "The first time it happened...."
This
makes the reader imagine there being a
problem between the two people, as such
happened the first time said action occurred.
This
quote makes the reader imagine what
this character looks like, and is great detail for
the story.
270 "I felt like a Tinkertoy kid building my own self out of
pg.
one of those building sets...."
This
represents a person who is finding
himself by imagining such quote.
This
dialogue represents the duality between
two races, meaning all are the same.
Simile
4.
Dialogue
4.
Dialogue
1.
2.
Imagery
Dialogue
3.
This
dialogue gives detail as to where the
person came from and provides necessary
detail for the story.
pg.
271 "She has always been slightly out of control"
This
quote represents the instability of the girls
mental workings, and once again gives
immense although necessary detail
throughout the book.
This
quote shows the wonder of the person in
this dialogue. And disbelief as well.