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    The document provides a summary of an online peer review for an essay written by Erica Cline. The reviewer provides feedback on the organization, introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion of Erica's essay. According to the reviewer, Erica's essay is well organized and introduces her thesis clearly. Each body paragraph logically supports the thesis by telling about Erica's evolution as a writer in chronological order. The conclusion effectively summarizes the major points without repetition. Overall, the reviewer believes Erica's draft is near completion with only minor changes needed.

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    The document provides a summary of an online peer review for an essay written by Erica Cline. The reviewer provides feedback on the organization, introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion of Erica's essay. According to the reviewer, Erica's essay is well organized and introduces her thesis clearly. Each body paragraph logically supports the thesis by telling about Erica's evolution as a writer in chronological order. The conclusion effectively summarizes the major points without repetition. Overall, the reviewer believes Erica's draft is near completion with only minor changes needed.

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    The document provides a summary of an online peer review for an essay written by Erica Cline. The reviewer provides feedback on the organization, introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion of Erica's essay. According to the reviewer, Erica's essay is well organized and introduces her thesis clearly. Each body paragraph logically supports the thesis by telling about Erica's evolution as a writer in chronological order. The conclusion effectively summarizes the major points without repetition. Overall, the reviewer believes Erica's draft is near completion with only minor changes needed.

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    The author of this essay is _____Erica Cline_______________________.

    Online Peer Review of Essay #1


    Directions: First, read the paper silently to yourself once. Then, answer the questions below.
    When answering the following questions, be thoughtful, clear, and helpful. Use complete sentences and
    specific examples. On the writers document, turn on the Track Changes feature (ReviewTrack
    Changes): In this way, the author can see what changes you think should be made. Feel free to make
    comments directly on the writers draft (New CommentClickType your constructive feedback).

    Organization and Introduction


    1.

    Organization
    a. Is this draft organized in a standard pattern: an introduction, a body with supporting points
    presented in a logical order, and a concluding section that summarizes and analyzes the
    overall significance of the topic? Note on the paper where the organization seems to be
    ineffective. Yes, Erica organizes her thoughts quite well.

    2.

    Introduction: The first paragraph(s) should prepare the reader for the topic presented in the paper.
    a. Does the introduction begin broadly and narrow to the main idea of the essay? Yes, she
    begins by expressing her love for English, then breaks down her experiences with each
    area.
    b.

    c.
    d.

    Look specifically at the authors Thesis Statement:


    1. Is the thesis towards the end of the introduction? Yes, I believe her thesis is the last
    sentence of the first paragraph.
    2. Is the thesis narrow and well-defined? Yes, she breaks it down in a simple, but
    relatable experience.
    3. Is the thesis explicit or implicit? If its explicit, is the thesis too direct? Explicit, but not
    overly direct.
    At any point in the essay, do you feel lost or confused? No
    After reading the whole paper, explain whether you think the introduction effectively prepares
    the reader for the discussion or not. Yes, I believe she makes her position very clear from
    the beginning.

    Body Paragraphs
    1.

    Do the body paragraphs support the thesis? Yes, each paragraph continually tells about the
    evolution of her writing.

    2.

    Is there information that does not seem relevant to the stated thesis/purpose? No

    3.

    Does one point/section logically lead to the next point? Are transitions used effectively? Yes, she
    keeps her experiences in a chronological order, and includes great transitions for the next
    paragraph.

    4.

    Are there any paragraphs that should be either deleted or moved to another section of the paper? No,
    they are all relevant to her story.

    Conclusion
    1.
    2.

    Does the concluding section sum upwithout being repetitivethe major points/conclusions of the
    paper? Yes, I feel that during her conclusion, she was able to make the reader think of each
    experience without being repetitive.
    After reading the entire essay, are the following required elements included?
    Clear thesis
    Engaging Introduction
    Does the conclusion refer to the introduction?

    Use of Vivid Details and a Significant Point


    1.

    Are there any unnecessary explanations that would be better told through showing rather
    than telling? No

    2. What does the theme, lesson, or insight seem to be? Erica is telling us that with the right
    teachers, anyone can excel in English.

    3. Does the insight seem too obvious or too general? Some might find it obvious, but I think
    that makes her story very relatable.

    Style, Mechanics, and MLA Guidelines


    1.

    Are there any words that are clich, used too often, or meaningless? No

    2.

    Does the writer use the second person pronoun you? If so, circle it. I only found this error once.

    3.

    Does the author use phrases such as I think and/or I believe? If so, draw a line through the phrase
    to determine if it is necessary. No

    4.

    MLA Guidelines
    Heading
    1 margins

    Double-spaced throughout
    Page numbers in upper righthand corner

    5. How near to completion is this draft? With a few minor changes, I think this draft is near
    completion.

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