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447 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 4, 2022
“Be safe, my queen,” Daria whispers to my back. My heart sputters. “I’m no one’s queen. I’m just the one who will burn the crown.”
“If you want a god to worship, ma petite menteuse, no need to look so far.”
“You thirst for power?” he rasps, his palm ghosting across my collarbone before wrapping around my throat. “I can fill you with it until you scream.”
“I’ve killed many men,” he whispers against me. “And I remember the face of every single one, soaking their image into my brain as they pray to me for absolution.”
i) Era-themed is not my cup of tea if weren't done right — I think the reason why Hooked was an easy read was that it was set in a contemporary setting.
ii) Scarred is too slow for my liking — put an era-themed book with a deliberate build-up; better watch the paint dry anyway.
iii) The dialogue in this book is so calculated — it feels unnatural, consequently making some of the moments in the book sound just corny. I cannot take anything seriously, I'm sorry.
"I'd like to draw you. Just like this, with your face kissing the stars...I think it's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen."
"Are you calling me beautiful?"
"I'm saying you could drive a man insane. Make him raze the world just to see you smile."
“You could burn down the entire kingdom until it’s nothing but charred rubble, and I would crawl over the embers with glee, so long as I could worship at your feet.”
“I’m your future queen,” I whisper. “Maybe you should show some respect.”
His eyes spark at this, his hand reaching out and touching one of the spiral curls that’s fallen from my hairpin. He winds it around his finger, the corner of his mouth lifting into a mocking grin.
“Well then, I’ll be sure to work on my curtsy.”
“The truth is, I am yours. Wholly. Inexplicably. Painfully. Unconditionally.” He moves my hand until the dagger presses against his throat.
“And if you need to sacrifice my soul so you’re able to live with yours, then do it.”
“Are you calling me beautiful?” she whispers.
“I’m saying you could drive a man insane. Make him raze the world just to see you smile.”
“The truth is, I am yours. Wholly. Inexplicably. Painfully. Unconditionally.” He moves my hand until the dagger presses against his throat. “And if you need to sacrifice my soul so you’re able to live with yours, then do it.”
“But now there’s her.And everything else pales in comparison. There is nothing I wouldn’t do to keep her by my side. She is everything. And if she’s hurting, I will torture the people who caused it until they beg me to let them die.”