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The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water
When Kendra Brennan moves into her grandfather's old cabin on Hidden Lake, she has a problem and a plan. The problem? An inflammatory letter from A Very Disappointed Reader that's keeping her from writing her next novel as long as its claims go unanswered. The plan? To confront Tyler, her childhood best friend's brother--and the man who inspired the antagonist in her first book--in order to prove to herself that she told the truth as all good novelists should.
What she discovers as she delves into the murky past is not what she expected. Facing Tyler isn't easy, but facing the truth of her failed friendship with his sister, Cami, may be the hardest thing she's ever had to do.
Award-winning novelist Erin Bartels searches the heart with this lyrical exploration of how a friendship dies, how we can face the unforgiveable, and how even those who have been hurt can learn to love with abandon.
What she discovers as she delves into the murky past is not what she expected. Facing Tyler isn't easy, but facing the truth of her failed friendship with his sister, Cami, may be the hardest thing she's ever had to do.
Award-winning novelist Erin Bartels searches the heart with this lyrical exploration of how a friendship dies, how we can face the unforgiveable, and how even those who have been hurt can learn to love with abandon.
352 pages, Paperback
First published January 4, 2022
About the author
Erin Bartels
21 books870 followersERIN BARTELS writes character-driven fiction for curious people. Her readers know to expect that each of her novels will tell a unique story about fallible characters so tangible that it’s hard to believe they are not real people. Whether urban, rural, or somewhere in between, her settings come alive with carefully crafted details that engage all the senses and transport the reader to a singular time and place. And her themes of reckoning with the past, improving the present, and looking with hope to the future leave her readers with a sense of peace and possibility.
Erin is the award-winning author of We Hope for Better Things, The Words between Us, All That We Carried, The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water, Everything Is Just Beginning, and The Lady with the Dark Hair. A two-time Christy finalist and winner of two WFWA Star Awards and two Michigan Notable Book Awards, Erin has been a publishing professional for more than twenty years. After eighteen years in Michigan’s capital city, she now lives with her family in a charming small town surrounded by farm fields and pasturelands.
You can find her on Facebook @ErinBartelsAuthor and on Instagram @erinbartelswrites.
Erin is the award-winning author of We Hope for Better Things, The Words between Us, All That We Carried, The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water, Everything Is Just Beginning, and The Lady with the Dark Hair. A two-time Christy finalist and winner of two WFWA Star Awards and two Michigan Notable Book Awards, Erin has been a publishing professional for more than twenty years. After eighteen years in Michigan’s capital city, she now lives with her family in a charming small town surrounded by farm fields and pasturelands.
You can find her on Facebook @ErinBartelsAuthor and on Instagram @erinbartelswrites.
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April 13, 2022
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5/5 stars
I heard the audiobook version of the book narrated by Mia Barron. I didn't know Erin Bartels would blow my mind with her writing. This was my first introduction to her work. After finishing with the book, I immediately went and looked up her other books and added two of her most praised books to my tbr list. Because, honestly, I'm not stopping with just one.
The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water by Erin Bartels starts with the protagonist, Kendra, a writer, whose debut novel - That Summer is a big hit. But, she is stressed. The reason behind her stress is one letter she received from one of her readers who begged to differ in his/her opinion about Kendra's first novel, criticizing the things she mentioned in the book, calling her a selfish opportunist. Her disappointed reader was angry with her for telling the story she shouldn't have. She is trying to put the pieces together in finding out who this person is.
She is also coping up with personal grief that has something to do with Cami and Tyler. Cami was her childhood best friend whereas Tyler, (who happened to be the inspiration of the character of Blake in 'That Summer') was Cami's elder brother. Kendra's trouble with Tyler and Cami started when she was twelve and thirteen respectively. So, she has decided to confront Tyler, probably for a closer. There are so many things going on in Kendra's life. She has got a contract for her second book which she is on a deadline for, even though, she hasn't started writing it. Therefore, she goes to her grandfather's old house on The Hidden Lake(where there is no cellphone, no internet, and hence, no distractions), hoping to start with her writing on the second book without any distraction. Now, the question is will she be able to complete her second book?
The story, set in northern Michigan, is written from the first person's point of view. Although the story is a bit slower-paced, I loved every bit of it. It is beautifully well-written. The plot got me hooked from the very beginning. One of the important aspects of the story deals with molestation. So, I understand if this is a difficult and uncomfortable read for some people. BUT BUT BUT. Don't be scared to pick this book because there is so much more you'll find as you delve into the story. This is more of a character-driven novel which to me, is the best part of reading a story. This story just like an onion has so many layers. As the story progresses and the layers start getting peeled off one after the other, I got emotionally attached to the character. I was so invested. Kendra says the story is fictional which is not true. Although the characters were fictional, the story reassembled her story. The relation that Jackie, Kendra's mother, and Beth, Cami's mother was the same relation that Kendra and Cami shared.
What's not to like in this book? There is friendship. There is sacrifice. There is love. There is romance. There is loss. There is trauma. There is a twist. There is a mystery. And, surprises are waiting for you. I loved the side characters too. They were there for a purpose. Although, I wish we had more part of Andreas in the story. I would have loved to know more about him as a character. It is a heartbreaking and unforgettable story by all means. Highly recommended.
Release Date : 04 Jan 2022
Review Posted : 11 Jan 2022
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5/5 stars
I heard the audiobook version of the book narrated by Mia Barron. I didn't know Erin Bartels would blow my mind with her writing. This was my first introduction to her work. After finishing with the book, I immediately went and looked up her other books and added two of her most praised books to my tbr list. Because, honestly, I'm not stopping with just one.
The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water by Erin Bartels starts with the protagonist, Kendra, a writer, whose debut novel - That Summer is a big hit. But, she is stressed. The reason behind her stress is one letter she received from one of her readers who begged to differ in his/her opinion about Kendra's first novel, criticizing the things she mentioned in the book, calling her a selfish opportunist. Her disappointed reader was angry with her for telling the story she shouldn't have. She is trying to put the pieces together in finding out who this person is.
She is also coping up with personal grief that has something to do with Cami and Tyler. Cami was her childhood best friend whereas Tyler, (who happened to be the inspiration of the character of Blake in 'That Summer') was Cami's elder brother. Kendra's trouble with Tyler and Cami started when she was twelve and thirteen respectively. So, she has decided to confront Tyler, probably for a closer. There are so many things going on in Kendra's life. She has got a contract for her second book which she is on a deadline for, even though, she hasn't started writing it. Therefore, she goes to her grandfather's old house on The Hidden Lake(where there is no cellphone, no internet, and hence, no distractions), hoping to start with her writing on the second book without any distraction. Now, the question is will she be able to complete her second book?
The story, set in northern Michigan, is written from the first person's point of view. Although the story is a bit slower-paced, I loved every bit of it. It is beautifully well-written. The plot got me hooked from the very beginning. One of the important aspects of the story deals with molestation. So, I understand if this is a difficult and uncomfortable read for some people. BUT BUT BUT. Don't be scared to pick this book because there is so much more you'll find as you delve into the story. This is more of a character-driven novel which to me, is the best part of reading a story. This story just like an onion has so many layers. As the story progresses and the layers start getting peeled off one after the other, I got emotionally attached to the character. I was so invested. Kendra says the story is fictional which is not true. Although the characters were fictional, the story reassembled her story. The relation that Jackie, Kendra's mother, and Beth, Cami's mother was the same relation that Kendra and Cami shared.
'Truth has a way of working itself into any story whether the writer means to or not.'
What's not to like in this book? There is friendship. There is sacrifice. There is love. There is romance. There is loss. There is trauma. There is a twist. There is a mystery. And, surprises are waiting for you. I loved the side characters too. They were there for a purpose. Although, I wish we had more part of Andreas in the story. I would have loved to know more about him as a character. It is a heartbreaking and unforgettable story by all means. Highly recommended.
Release Date : 04 Jan 2022
Review Posted : 11 Jan 2022
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March 15, 2022
I really only could give this book the full three stars for the writing style. The writing is out of this world beautiful. Bartels definitely knows how to write in a stunning fashion, no doubt about that.
My problem lied in the fact that the book itself was somewhat confusing and also mis-marketed.
(TRIGGER WARNING)
I was heavily disappointed to find out that this book not only contained some heavy handed scenes of child molestation, it also contained an actual sex scene that I was neither prepared for, nor did I expect from a book marketed in a Christian catalog and to a Christian audience. Aside from the fact that I personally choose not to read that type of content, I was rather upset by the fact that there is NO WHERE in the marketing or with what you could expect of the book to know that it contained such content. The synopsis gives you no clue as to what the actual story line is and for that, I was taken very off guard which I felt mad e the whole situation worse.
My other poor experience with the book was in regards to the fact that while marketed to a Christian market, had not semblance of hope, light, or Christianity at all. There was very little to no redemption to the very dark and upsetting story lines that reveal themselves late in the book.
Writing style A+
Vibes: Dark and depressing
Marketing and Plot: Disappointing, traumatic and leaves a lot to be desired.
*This book was given to me free of charge in exchange for my honest review. The thoughts and opinions expressed in this review are my own and in no way influenced by the publisher.
My problem lied in the fact that the book itself was somewhat confusing and also mis-marketed.
(TRIGGER WARNING)
I was heavily disappointed to find out that this book not only contained some heavy handed scenes of child molestation, it also contained an actual sex scene that I was neither prepared for, nor did I expect from a book marketed in a Christian catalog and to a Christian audience. Aside from the fact that I personally choose not to read that type of content, I was rather upset by the fact that there is NO WHERE in the marketing or with what you could expect of the book to know that it contained such content. The synopsis gives you no clue as to what the actual story line is and for that, I was taken very off guard which I felt mad e the whole situation worse.
My other poor experience with the book was in regards to the fact that while marketed to a Christian market, had not semblance of hope, light, or Christianity at all. There was very little to no redemption to the very dark and upsetting story lines that reveal themselves late in the book.
Writing style A+
Vibes: Dark and depressing
Marketing and Plot: Disappointing, traumatic and leaves a lot to be desired.
*This book was given to me free of charge in exchange for my honest review. The thoughts and opinions expressed in this review are my own and in no way influenced by the publisher.
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February 3, 2023This is one of those hard reviews to write. Even though this book was published by a Christian publisher, it was severely lacking in Christian content and contained too much sketchy content.
Characters: Kendra was a well-developed character who had plenty of relatable flaws. I enjoyed that she was a writer, and the parts where she struggled to write were realistic. Andreas, even though he never had a perspective, was a good character as well. I found the insights into his translation work quite interesting.
Language: Clean.
Moral: As mentioned above, there wasn't any Christian content in this novel (except for the author's note and a prayer by one of the side characters). It was just a sad story because Kendra never looked to God.
Plot: The plot centered around a woman returning to a childhood vacation spot in order to make peace with the abuse she suffered there as a child. It was rather disturbing to me that her abuser never suffered any consequences for his actions, and his actions were almost excused in a way because he'd had a terrible childhood.
Random comments: Memories of being abused (some rather detailed). Lots of drinking by side characters. Mentions of explicit scenes in the books written by Kendra's mentor.
Romance: Kendra and Andreas did stay in the same cabin when they first met.
Writing: Erin Bartels has an engaging writing style, and she pulls the reader into the character's mind and story.
Overall: The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water wasn't a book for me. I wouldn't recommend it to teens, but adults who enjoy clean-ish fiction and contemporary stories might enjoy it.
Disclosure: I received this book free from the publisher/author. The opinions I have expressed are my own, and I was not required to write a positive review. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255.
Characters: Kendra was a well-developed character who had plenty of relatable flaws. I enjoyed that she was a writer, and the parts where she struggled to write were realistic. Andreas, even though he never had a perspective, was a good character as well. I found the insights into his translation work quite interesting.
Language: Clean.
Moral: As mentioned above, there wasn't any Christian content in this novel (except for the author's note and a prayer by one of the side characters). It was just a sad story because Kendra never looked to God.
Plot: The plot centered around a woman returning to a childhood vacation spot in order to make peace with the abuse she suffered there as a child. It was rather disturbing to me that her abuser never suffered any consequences for his actions, and his actions were almost excused in a way because he'd had a terrible childhood.
Random comments: Memories of being abused (some rather detailed). Lots of drinking by side characters. Mentions of explicit scenes in the books written by Kendra's mentor.
Romance: Kendra and Andreas did stay in the same cabin when they first met.
Writing: Erin Bartels has an engaging writing style, and she pulls the reader into the character's mind and story.
Overall: The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water wasn't a book for me. I wouldn't recommend it to teens, but adults who enjoy clean-ish fiction and contemporary stories might enjoy it.
Disclosure: I received this book free from the publisher/author. The opinions I have expressed are my own, and I was not required to write a positive review. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255.
December 19, 2022
Oh, how I wish that I could give this book 5 stars. I will start with what I liked about this book. It was beautifully written. I found myself reading certain passages 2-3 times to fully soak in the lyrical tone.
For example: "For a moment the only sound was the swoosh and trickle of the oars dipping in and out of the water, that lovely liquid melody of all my best and worst memories."
The author is extremely talented in language and imagery and the story was definitely unique and heartbreaking all at once.
Now, on to why I couldn't give this a full 5 stars. *sigh*
1. I had to read the first page and a half almost four times to figure out who the MC, Kendra, was speaking to. It is written in first person, which I'm usually a fan of. But, it's written almost like a letter to someone. For example, it would say, "The day you cut your hair off..." instead of saying the person's name (not going to spoil it) That took a bit of getting used to and the reading didn't seem to flow because of it.
2. Although this was supposed to be a Christian book and published by a Christian publisher...there are zero faith elements in the book. I find this incredibly disappointing, especially considering the content of the book. Yes, it was a clean read (although, trigger warning, it does speak of sexual abuse and although it isn't explicit, it does give more detail than other Christian books I've read) and there was no language...but there was also nothing more than a blessing over the food and a casual mention of God.
3. There was a LOT of casual drinking in the book...and even them getting "tipsy".
4. Small spoiler: The MC is an author and is staying at her grandfather's cabin by herself to write her book. Her first book is being translated into German. She walks into her cabin to find a strange man there. He's her German translator. He stays with her for a few weeks to get the translation right...and at some point, it comes out that he paid a German publisher to translate her book and he's doing this for free. I'm sorry, but that is CREEPY. The dude read her book, saw an interview, and then dropped tons of cash to publish her book in German? And now he shows up at her cabin to spend weeks with her? Yea, that's weird.
5. This woman is always in a bikini. I know that may not annoy anyone else, but it just seemed weird how many times she talked about her bikini either in the present day or when she was speaking of her pre-teen and teenage years.
Even with all the issues, the biggest reason I couldn't give it more stars is that there was absolutely no finding redemption through God. No point where the character (or characters) found forgiveness and peace with God. If I would have picked this up randomly, I would never know that it was written by a Christian author or published through a Christian publisher. It's really disappointing that the author and publisher missed a huge opportunity to really showcase God's perfect love through this story.
**Thank you to NetGalley for providing me a copy for my honest feedback.
For example: "For a moment the only sound was the swoosh and trickle of the oars dipping in and out of the water, that lovely liquid melody of all my best and worst memories."
The author is extremely talented in language and imagery and the story was definitely unique and heartbreaking all at once.
Now, on to why I couldn't give this a full 5 stars. *sigh*
1. I had to read the first page and a half almost four times to figure out who the MC, Kendra, was speaking to. It is written in first person, which I'm usually a fan of. But, it's written almost like a letter to someone. For example, it would say, "The day you cut your hair off..." instead of saying the person's name (not going to spoil it) That took a bit of getting used to and the reading didn't seem to flow because of it.
2. Although this was supposed to be a Christian book and published by a Christian publisher...there are zero faith elements in the book. I find this incredibly disappointing, especially considering the content of the book. Yes, it was a clean read (although, trigger warning, it does speak of sexual abuse and although it isn't explicit, it does give more detail than other Christian books I've read) and there was no language...but there was also nothing more than a blessing over the food and a casual mention of God.
3. There was a LOT of casual drinking in the book...and even them getting "tipsy".
4. Small spoiler: The MC is an author and is staying at her grandfather's cabin by herself to write her book. Her first book is being translated into German. She walks into her cabin to find a strange man there. He's her German translator. He stays with her for a few weeks to get the translation right...and at some point, it comes out that he paid a German publisher to translate her book and he's doing this for free. I'm sorry, but that is CREEPY. The dude read her book, saw an interview, and then dropped tons of cash to publish her book in German? And now he shows up at her cabin to spend weeks with her? Yea, that's weird.
5. This woman is always in a bikini. I know that may not annoy anyone else, but it just seemed weird how many times she talked about her bikini either in the present day or when she was speaking of her pre-teen and teenage years.
Even with all the issues, the biggest reason I couldn't give it more stars is that there was absolutely no finding redemption through God. No point where the character (or characters) found forgiveness and peace with God. If I would have picked this up randomly, I would never know that it was written by a Christian author or published through a Christian publisher. It's really disappointing that the author and publisher missed a huge opportunity to really showcase God's perfect love through this story.
**Thank you to NetGalley for providing me a copy for my honest feedback.
November 30, 2021
I started reading Erin Bartels books when I found out that they take place in Michigan - the state that I grew up in. Soon after I started her first book, I realized that she was a fantastic author and now she's on my list of authors that I'll buy before I even know their book is about!
Kendra is an author. Her first book was a huge success and she has a contract for her second book. The only problem is that she hasn't written a word and her deadline is getting close. Her problem is an inflammatory note that she received from someone who only identified themselves as A Very Disappointed reader. She decides to go to her grandfather's old house on Hidden Lake hoping that she'll be able to forget the note and get her second book started. She spent her childhood summers with her grandfather at his cabin. Even though he is deceased, there are memories of him all over the cabin. The memory that her first book was based on is that of being sexually assaulted one summer. Because she spent summers there, she knows most of the people living at the lake. Her best friend growing up lived across the lake and she spent a lot of time with Cami, Taylor and their parents. Now Cami has disappeared and Kendra has decided that she needs to confront Tyler - the person that her first book was based on. Will she be able to face him and will she lose his parents who have been good friends over the years?
This book is about friendship and the loss of friendship, family love and forgiveness, romance, mystery and suspense and it all melds together to create one of the best books that I've read this year. If you haven't read Erin Bartle's books, it's time to start -- she is a fantastic author who creates unforgettable stories
Be sure to read the Author’s Note where Erin tells her readers that this novel was inspired by her own story of molestation as a child.
Thanks to the publisher for a copy of this book to read and review.
Kendra is an author. Her first book was a huge success and she has a contract for her second book. The only problem is that she hasn't written a word and her deadline is getting close. Her problem is an inflammatory note that she received from someone who only identified themselves as A Very Disappointed reader. She decides to go to her grandfather's old house on Hidden Lake hoping that she'll be able to forget the note and get her second book started. She spent her childhood summers with her grandfather at his cabin. Even though he is deceased, there are memories of him all over the cabin. The memory that her first book was based on is that of being sexually assaulted one summer. Because she spent summers there, she knows most of the people living at the lake. Her best friend growing up lived across the lake and she spent a lot of time with Cami, Taylor and their parents. Now Cami has disappeared and Kendra has decided that she needs to confront Tyler - the person that her first book was based on. Will she be able to face him and will she lose his parents who have been good friends over the years?
This book is about friendship and the loss of friendship, family love and forgiveness, romance, mystery and suspense and it all melds together to create one of the best books that I've read this year. If you haven't read Erin Bartle's books, it's time to start -- she is a fantastic author who creates unforgettable stories
Be sure to read the Author’s Note where Erin tells her readers that this novel was inspired by her own story of molestation as a child.
Thanks to the publisher for a copy of this book to read and review.
January 21, 2022
Oh my heavens! I thought this was so good. A beautiful descriptively childhood told with warm sunny days spent at the lake. But under all that was broken, fragile people. A million mistakes and a million blessings.
This reminded me that no matter the pain and the scars, life still goes on. And we have a chance to start doing the right thing.
The author captures the essentials of a human soul. It was raw and I felt emotional. The writing made me care and I just wanted to hug it when I finished! I highly recommend it.
I chose to listen to this book on audio and Mia Barrow narrated this and she was amazing.
Thanks Recorded Books via NetGalley.
This reminded me that no matter the pain and the scars, life still goes on. And we have a chance to start doing the right thing.
The author captures the essentials of a human soul. It was raw and I felt emotional. The writing made me care and I just wanted to hug it when I finished! I highly recommend it.
I chose to listen to this book on audio and Mia Barrow narrated this and she was amazing.
Thanks Recorded Books via NetGalley.
January 29, 2022
I don't often assign star ratings to books, but this one deserves all 5 (and probably more). This book is elegantly written, deeply emotional, and (in my opinion) Bartels' best work so far. I highly recommend it!
February 9, 2022
FTC DISCLOSURE: I received a complimentary copy of this book. These are my honest thoughts.
I was totally looking forward to this book as soon as I saw the stunning cover and found out the story was about a writer on a deadline hiding out at her grandfather’s secluded, lake-front cabin. That sounded like it would be right up my alley.
Sadly, this book ended up not being to my taste.
If the blurb had mentioned it had an overwhelmingly strong theme of sexual abuse of a child, I never would have chosen to read it. I am not the target audience for such a book; that theme is not one I enjoy reading about.
The sexual tension between a child and a teenager was so thick that nearly every scene between the two characters felt slimy and gross. It also made me wonder why the younger character “liked” the older one, as he never proved trustworthy in the least. There was nothing likable about him, so I really struggled to see why the younger character had a crush on him. Because of that sexual tension and the abuse situation (shown in vivid detail), this was a really tough book to read.
Alcohol—beer and hard liquors—were consumed often throughout this story, with zero regret about it in any of the characters. I don’t enjoy reading about alcoholics who don’t realize they have a problem.
A character said, “I’m allergic to peanut butter,” which rightfully made another character freak out about having made a peanut butter sandwich for him—only to have him admit, “I’m kidding. Only kidding. To lighten the mood.” Food allergies are serious and are often life-threatening. Many, many people have died from peanut allergies alone (and there are numerous other serious food allergies in existence). This “humor” was not funny to me, as I understand from personal experience how serious and life-threatening food allergies can be.
The leads stayed in the same cabin for a full summer even though they were unmarried. This tarnished the “romance” for me, as it was awkward and immoral. It also led to some crude sexual innuendo in a few spots, which naturally led to some awkward mental images.
I wish this novel would have been clean and included more than a couple of passing thoughts about God’s existence. It really felt like a general market book for how crude, alcoholic, and sexual it was. This was quite shocking coming from a Christian publisher I’d come to trust to publish clean romances.
The one thing I completely loved about this book was the mechanics of the author’s writing style. I had never before seen an approach that felt like the entire book was a letter written to the lead’s best friend. Nor had I seen a book that so seamlessly slipped from present-day into memories and back again. These aspects of the writing style hooked me in (as well as I could be with the aforementioned content involved). They were fresh, unique, superb, immersive, unexpected, and exquisite. I only wish they were used in a much cleaner story.
The writing style might have been exactly what I was in the mood for, but the content of the story was not. I do hope it is a helpful story for people needing to heal from broken pasts involving sexual abuse. My heart goes out to the author (as per the author’s note) and other victims of sexual abuse, whether child or adult. Those scenarios are never fair or right, and they shatter my heart every time (this novel included).
Content: immodest clothing (bikinis), alcohol (excessive), tobacco, crude sexual innuendo, mythology mentioned, sexual tension between a child and a teenager, child smoking, nude photos, nudity, skinny-dipping (teens), crude sexual terms, rape, replacement expletives, suicide, casino mentioned, sexual perversion mentioned, premarital sex, illegitimate pregnancy, profanity (German), drugs mentioned
I was totally looking forward to this book as soon as I saw the stunning cover and found out the story was about a writer on a deadline hiding out at her grandfather’s secluded, lake-front cabin. That sounded like it would be right up my alley.
Sadly, this book ended up not being to my taste.
If the blurb had mentioned it had an overwhelmingly strong theme of sexual abuse of a child, I never would have chosen to read it. I am not the target audience for such a book; that theme is not one I enjoy reading about.
The sexual tension between a child and a teenager was so thick that nearly every scene between the two characters felt slimy and gross. It also made me wonder why the younger character “liked” the older one, as he never proved trustworthy in the least. There was nothing likable about him, so I really struggled to see why the younger character had a crush on him. Because of that sexual tension and the abuse situation (shown in vivid detail), this was a really tough book to read.
Alcohol—beer and hard liquors—were consumed often throughout this story, with zero regret about it in any of the characters. I don’t enjoy reading about alcoholics who don’t realize they have a problem.
A character said, “I’m allergic to peanut butter,” which rightfully made another character freak out about having made a peanut butter sandwich for him—only to have him admit, “I’m kidding. Only kidding. To lighten the mood.” Food allergies are serious and are often life-threatening. Many, many people have died from peanut allergies alone (and there are numerous other serious food allergies in existence). This “humor” was not funny to me, as I understand from personal experience how serious and life-threatening food allergies can be.
The leads stayed in the same cabin for a full summer even though they were unmarried. This tarnished the “romance” for me, as it was awkward and immoral. It also led to some crude sexual innuendo in a few spots, which naturally led to some awkward mental images.
I wish this novel would have been clean and included more than a couple of passing thoughts about God’s existence. It really felt like a general market book for how crude, alcoholic, and sexual it was. This was quite shocking coming from a Christian publisher I’d come to trust to publish clean romances.
The one thing I completely loved about this book was the mechanics of the author’s writing style. I had never before seen an approach that felt like the entire book was a letter written to the lead’s best friend. Nor had I seen a book that so seamlessly slipped from present-day into memories and back again. These aspects of the writing style hooked me in (as well as I could be with the aforementioned content involved). They were fresh, unique, superb, immersive, unexpected, and exquisite. I only wish they were used in a much cleaner story.
The writing style might have been exactly what I was in the mood for, but the content of the story was not. I do hope it is a helpful story for people needing to heal from broken pasts involving sexual abuse. My heart goes out to the author (as per the author’s note) and other victims of sexual abuse, whether child or adult. Those scenarios are never fair or right, and they shatter my heart every time (this novel included).
Content: immodest clothing (bikinis), alcohol (excessive), tobacco, crude sexual innuendo, mythology mentioned, sexual tension between a child and a teenager, child smoking, nude photos, nudity, skinny-dipping (teens), crude sexual terms, rape, replacement expletives, suicide, casino mentioned, sexual perversion mentioned, premarital sex, illegitimate pregnancy, profanity (German), drugs mentioned
January 11, 2022
After reading the author notes, I was prepared for some trigger situations. It seemed like I was waiting for the other shoe to drop and I had a lot of trepidation while reading most of the book. This story seems to be a catharsis for the author. Putting that aside, it was very well written with some beautiful descriptive passages: “ As I brushed through the tall grass and wildflowers, a flood of familiar smells- wet sand and crushed mint and something sweet I have never been able to identify- washed over me in gentle lapping waves of memory.”
This was a thought provoking book: “Truth has a way of working itself into any story, whether the writer means it or not.” It also was a great glimpse into the writing process of the main character, Kendra, an author who had a best seller and is trying to write book #2. There was a mysterious aspect in that Kendra was trying to find out who had written her a letter signed A Very Disappointed Reader. Several mysteries unfold as we get to know the characters.
My favorite characters were Ike, an old WWII veteran who told many stories and dispensed wisdom and Andreas, who was translating Kendra’s book into German. Andreas provided a stabilizing influence on Kendra in her search for truth. Kendra had to find answers to many questions in order to re-establish relationships and define who she really was and move forward. In the end it was a tender love story and a tale of healing.
I would consider this to be a moderately clean read with some possible triggers for those who are sensitive to such. It was not written from a clear Christian perspective.
*A complimentary copy of this book was provided by Revell through Interviews and Reviews. I was not required to give a favorable review. All opinions are my own.*
This was a thought provoking book: “Truth has a way of working itself into any story, whether the writer means it or not.” It also was a great glimpse into the writing process of the main character, Kendra, an author who had a best seller and is trying to write book #2. There was a mysterious aspect in that Kendra was trying to find out who had written her a letter signed A Very Disappointed Reader. Several mysteries unfold as we get to know the characters.
My favorite characters were Ike, an old WWII veteran who told many stories and dispensed wisdom and Andreas, who was translating Kendra’s book into German. Andreas provided a stabilizing influence on Kendra in her search for truth. Kendra had to find answers to many questions in order to re-establish relationships and define who she really was and move forward. In the end it was a tender love story and a tale of healing.
I would consider this to be a moderately clean read with some possible triggers for those who are sensitive to such. It was not written from a clear Christian perspective.
*A complimentary copy of this book was provided by Revell through Interviews and Reviews. I was not required to give a favorable review. All opinions are my own.*
February 6, 2022
After reading reviews on this book that piqued my interest, I was intrigued to read it. My attention was immediately captured on page one, and I stayed riveted until I tore through to the final page.
This is the kind of Christian fiction I enjoy--it has smooth writing (but not writing that "puts on airs"--it's easily understood but beautiful), a driving plotline, family relationships, and a sort of mystery to solve. There's no preaching (which I appreciate, because I can recommend it to my non-Christian friends), but the storyline itself reflects a Christian worldview, so the tone is clearly different (hopeful), even in relation to the heavier subject matter of sexual abuse.
As for trigger warnings, I think it's clear in the reviews that this book deals with childhood sexual trauma, but I didn't find it overly graphic. It was a clear-eyed view of the fallout that occurs with this type of abuse, and I appreciated the author's note at the end--that not everyone can/should confront their abuser the way the main character, Kendra, did. It's an important distinction to make, given the often unrepentant and even toxic nature of most abusers.
Each character in this novel was very well-defined and believable. I really found myself drawn to the German translator, Andreas, and the German phrases sprinkled throughout were a pleasant surprise. Kendra was a sympathetic main character as we watched her coming-of-age story unfold. And the Michigan lake culture was so clearly and descriptively drawn, I felt like I'd been there (or I'd like to visit!).
This is some of the finest writing I've come across in this genre. The author doesn't feel like she's trying too hard to write literary prose, yet many of the descriptive paragraphs are definitely poetic, but accessibly so, which, to me, is the best kind of poetry. As an author, I was reminded that we can inject truly beautiful language into our books without distracting from the story, and it challenged me to do more of that.
I was blown away by The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water, and it'll likely be one of my favorite reads of 2022. Highly recommend.
*I received a copy of this book from the publisher. All opinions are my own.*
This is the kind of Christian fiction I enjoy--it has smooth writing (but not writing that "puts on airs"--it's easily understood but beautiful), a driving plotline, family relationships, and a sort of mystery to solve. There's no preaching (which I appreciate, because I can recommend it to my non-Christian friends), but the storyline itself reflects a Christian worldview, so the tone is clearly different (hopeful), even in relation to the heavier subject matter of sexual abuse.
As for trigger warnings, I think it's clear in the reviews that this book deals with childhood sexual trauma, but I didn't find it overly graphic. It was a clear-eyed view of the fallout that occurs with this type of abuse, and I appreciated the author's note at the end--that not everyone can/should confront their abuser the way the main character, Kendra, did. It's an important distinction to make, given the often unrepentant and even toxic nature of most abusers.
Each character in this novel was very well-defined and believable. I really found myself drawn to the German translator, Andreas, and the German phrases sprinkled throughout were a pleasant surprise. Kendra was a sympathetic main character as we watched her coming-of-age story unfold. And the Michigan lake culture was so clearly and descriptively drawn, I felt like I'd been there (or I'd like to visit!).
This is some of the finest writing I've come across in this genre. The author doesn't feel like she's trying too hard to write literary prose, yet many of the descriptive paragraphs are definitely poetic, but accessibly so, which, to me, is the best kind of poetry. As an author, I was reminded that we can inject truly beautiful language into our books without distracting from the story, and it challenged me to do more of that.
I was blown away by The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water, and it'll likely be one of my favorite reads of 2022. Highly recommend.
*I received a copy of this book from the publisher. All opinions are my own.*
January 14, 2022
The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water is the first book I've read by Erin Bartels and it was not at all what I was expecting. The story was such a complex story and had me so confused at times as to what was really going on.
The story was intriguing at first, but I struggled with the way it was written (it seemed to fluctuate between first person [Kendra] and then times where Kendra is mentally telling stories/explaining things to Cami [who isn't there, this is all in Kendra's mind]). I hope I explained that well enough.
I had a difficult time finishing this book - partly because of the POV struggles and partly because I felt like some of the content went too far. I understand that the storyline needed to include certain things, but it wasn't something that I wanted to read. I also felt like there needed to be more about God's grace and redemption. I don't remember that being a part of the story.
So while I don't have many positive things to say about this book, I did think it was intriguing at times and it did keep me wondering what was going on. I don't recommend the book, but that is mainly because of a lot of content issues I had and just personal preference. Mature readers only.
*Disclosure of Material Connection: I received one or more of the products or services mentioned above for free in the hope that I would mention/review it on my blog. I was not required to give a positive review, only my honest opinion - which I've done. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own and I only recommend products or services I use personally and believe will be good for my readers. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255: "Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.*
[1.5 stars]
The story was intriguing at first, but I struggled with the way it was written (it seemed to fluctuate between first person [Kendra] and then times where Kendra is mentally telling stories/explaining things to Cami [who isn't there, this is all in Kendra's mind]). I hope I explained that well enough.
I had a difficult time finishing this book - partly because of the POV struggles and partly because I felt like some of the content went too far. I understand that the storyline needed to include certain things, but it wasn't something that I wanted to read. I also felt like there needed to be more about God's grace and redemption. I don't remember that being a part of the story.
So while I don't have many positive things to say about this book, I did think it was intriguing at times and it did keep me wondering what was going on. I don't recommend the book, but that is mainly because of a lot of content issues I had and just personal preference. Mature readers only.
*Disclosure of Material Connection: I received one or more of the products or services mentioned above for free in the hope that I would mention/review it on my blog. I was not required to give a positive review, only my honest opinion - which I've done. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own and I only recommend products or services I use personally and believe will be good for my readers. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255: "Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.*
[1.5 stars]
February 8, 2022
“Nothing was resolved and everyone was unhappy” Main character Kendra said it about another book…..but that’s pretty much what I feel about this book.
Honestly, I couldn’t finish the book. I made it 60% and that felt generous. It was just that boring and depressing.
Depressing on its own isn’t too much for me. I’ve made it through a lot of interesting, depressing books.
Boring on its own isn’t too much for me. I have finished a lot of boring books that drew me in one way or another.
But to have both hopelessness and nothing even happening—like literally no plot but a girl talking to a couple guys and then flashing back to either uninteresting scenes in her life or graphic moments of abuse—that just wasn’t enough for me to keep pressing.
Although I had NO idea this was from a Christian author or Christian publisher…but the book gave ZERO indication of that. There was less hope and light in this “Christian” book than in most secular books I read. And of course, I understand that sexual abuse is devastation, dark, horrible travesty that no one should have to endure—this no one should have to endure reading about it in detail either—but the hope of Gospel in Christ is to be able to find a pathway out of the pain of abuse and to find hope and healing in Jesus. And this book gave none of that. (Of course I didn’t finish it, but based on other reviews from readers that did, I gather that it never change course or gave any redemption.)
**I received this book for free from the publisher. My opinions are my own.
Honestly, I couldn’t finish the book. I made it 60% and that felt generous. It was just that boring and depressing.
Depressing on its own isn’t too much for me. I’ve made it through a lot of interesting, depressing books.
Boring on its own isn’t too much for me. I have finished a lot of boring books that drew me in one way or another.
But to have both hopelessness and nothing even happening—like literally no plot but a girl talking to a couple guys and then flashing back to either uninteresting scenes in her life or graphic moments of abuse—that just wasn’t enough for me to keep pressing.
Although I had NO idea this was from a Christian author or Christian publisher…but the book gave ZERO indication of that. There was less hope and light in this “Christian” book than in most secular books I read. And of course, I understand that sexual abuse is devastation, dark, horrible travesty that no one should have to endure—this no one should have to endure reading about it in detail either—but the hope of Gospel in Christ is to be able to find a pathway out of the pain of abuse and to find hope and healing in Jesus. And this book gave none of that. (Of course I didn’t finish it, but based on other reviews from readers that did, I gather that it never change course or gave any redemption.)
**I received this book for free from the publisher. My opinions are my own.
January 4, 2022
The Girl Who Could Breathe Underwater is an emotional and riveting story that I felt deep down. There are so many layers to this novel, and as each layer was peeled back I became more involved in the lives of these characters. All of the characters are flawed, broken, and entrenched in a past that keeps them moving forward and finding a way to heal. The style of writing in this book is quite unique; the main character of the book is often speaking to her childhood best friend, someone she hadn’t heard from in many years, and from whom she seeks understanding and forgiveness. This isn’t a fast-paced book, but that should not detract anyone from reading it. There are many sides to be heard from, too many stories to unfold, too much pain to be revealed, to get to the end of this story. The author’s notes are important to read; they are insightful and meaningful.
February 6, 2022
Unique and engaging!
After releasing a successful debut, a novelist returns to her childhood summer haven in hopes that confronting pain from the past will cure her writer's block.
There are a number of twists in the pages. I found The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water to be heartfelt and it kept my interest from beginning to end.
Loved this verse from the author's note which ties into the novel: "We know that in all things God works for the good of those who love Him, who have been called according to his purpose." Romans 8:28
My gratitude to publisher Revell for a complimentary NetGalley copy of the novel. I was not required to post a review and all opinions expressed are my own.
After releasing a successful debut, a novelist returns to her childhood summer haven in hopes that confronting pain from the past will cure her writer's block.
There are a number of twists in the pages. I found The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water to be heartfelt and it kept my interest from beginning to end.
Loved this verse from the author's note which ties into the novel: "We know that in all things God works for the good of those who love Him, who have been called according to his purpose." Romans 8:28
My gratitude to publisher Revell for a complimentary NetGalley copy of the novel. I was not required to post a review and all opinions expressed are my own.
January 20, 2022
My Thoughts:
There are SO many things to say about this gripping novel.
First of all, Bartels is a remarkable storyteller. If you haven’t given one of her novels a try, you really don’t know what you’re missing. I love the rich setting and complex characters. There’s a hint of Jaime Jo Wright’s Gothic style, and yet it’s a vastly different genre. More women’s fiction than suspense. But there are similarities between the two authors, and I do adore both.
This particular story touches on some rather tough subjects. I think she does an excellent job staying tasteful and giving you just enough to understand without going into too much detail. That being said, those who are triggered by any form of sexual abuse should be warned. Again, I want to stress that I found it tasteful and I can see where some victims will find healing or courage through this story. But others may want to pass.
While I absolutely loved the story, I have to do my audience justice and point out a couple areas that didn’t sit quite right with me. As a dry Baptist, I always find it off-putting when characters drink alcohol in a Christian novel. While these characters were never seen drunk, they did drink some form of alcohol as we Southerners drink our sweet tea: casually and all day long.
And sadly, as a Christian novel, I expected a stronger Christian witness throughout the story, but there really isn’t one at all. It was basically a clean novel but not a Christian novel. The author openly pointed to Christ in her letter to the readers at the end, but I couldn’t figure out why those same sentiments weren’t woven into the fabric of the story itself.
At the end of the day, this story is memorable and flat-out stunning. I applaud Bartels’s honest, openness in writing about a difficult subject and giving a voice and dose of courage to others still looking for their chance to heal.
Oh, and did I mention the sweet little romance tucked away inside? ;) This guy’s a keeper!
Rating and Recommendations: I’m giving The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water 5 stars.
~ I received a copy from Revell. All thoughts are my own. I was not compensated for this review or required to give a favorable one.
There are SO many things to say about this gripping novel.
First of all, Bartels is a remarkable storyteller. If you haven’t given one of her novels a try, you really don’t know what you’re missing. I love the rich setting and complex characters. There’s a hint of Jaime Jo Wright’s Gothic style, and yet it’s a vastly different genre. More women’s fiction than suspense. But there are similarities between the two authors, and I do adore both.
This particular story touches on some rather tough subjects. I think she does an excellent job staying tasteful and giving you just enough to understand without going into too much detail. That being said, those who are triggered by any form of sexual abuse should be warned. Again, I want to stress that I found it tasteful and I can see where some victims will find healing or courage through this story. But others may want to pass.
While I absolutely loved the story, I have to do my audience justice and point out a couple areas that didn’t sit quite right with me. As a dry Baptist, I always find it off-putting when characters drink alcohol in a Christian novel. While these characters were never seen drunk, they did drink some form of alcohol as we Southerners drink our sweet tea: casually and all day long.
And sadly, as a Christian novel, I expected a stronger Christian witness throughout the story, but there really isn’t one at all. It was basically a clean novel but not a Christian novel. The author openly pointed to Christ in her letter to the readers at the end, but I couldn’t figure out why those same sentiments weren’t woven into the fabric of the story itself.
At the end of the day, this story is memorable and flat-out stunning. I applaud Bartels’s honest, openness in writing about a difficult subject and giving a voice and dose of courage to others still looking for their chance to heal.
Oh, and did I mention the sweet little romance tucked away inside? ;) This guy’s a keeper!
Rating and Recommendations: I’m giving The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water 5 stars.
~ I received a copy from Revell. All thoughts are my own. I was not compensated for this review or required to give a favorable one.
December 25, 2021
This is a slow moving book and I had a hard time connecting with any of the characters. There's no doubt other readers will love this book - I did not. DNF at 40% so I gave it plenty of time to pick up speed. I received a complimentary copy of this book. Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for this early release. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
January 14, 2022
This book. Wow. It's not for the faint of heart, but for those who have suffered and come out stronger? Oh, man. Bartels very artfully weaves struggles, healing, the inability to move forward until healing occurs, and the mystery of losing who you once were and realizing what you've gained, in this book. She approaches topics of harassment/abuse and healing realistically, tastefully, and in a way that's both gentle and stark. Her prose is excellent, and I'm not sure whether to say the book is heartrending or captivating. Maybe both. If you're a fan of contemporary fiction that almost approaches a literary nature, you'll likely enjoy this book. The storyline itself is deeply compelling, and there are a few twists and turns that are very masterfully woven as well, making for an enjoyable read with a heavy impact.
I read the author's note first and almost put the book down because I wasn't sure if I could handle the content. I'm glad I kept reading. It's easy to see the cathartic quality of this book as well, and I applaud her bravery in doing so.
Disclaimer: The publisher provided a review copy of the book in order that I could review the book. The views above are my own.
I read the author's note first and almost put the book down because I wasn't sure if I could handle the content. I'm glad I kept reading. It's easy to see the cathartic quality of this book as well, and I applaud her bravery in doing so.
Disclaimer: The publisher provided a review copy of the book in order that I could review the book. The views above are my own.
January 21, 2022
"Once there was a girl who could breathe under water . . . "
The words to an unfinished story. Much like the life of the one who wrote them.
Novelist Kendra Brennan's first and only manuscript to date was a best seller, so naturally her fans (and publisher, and editor) were clamoring for more. At least most of her fans; one person's anonymous letter sends Kendra scrambling back to where it all began, her grandfather's cabin on the shores of Hidden Lake . . . hoping for respite, for inspiration, and quite possibly for closure.
"Your book . . . is the work of a selfish opportunist who was all too ready to monetize the suffering of others. Did you ever consider . . . . "
Maybe she hadn't considered, for you see, the book characterized truth for the ones who knew . . . perhaps Kendra had been just a bit too realistic, one of her fictional counterparts had recognized their role and wasn't happy about it. . . . nor should they be . . . right? Her memories surrounding summers on the lake with her grandfather and friends got a little fuzzy when she overthought them. Those experiences were the best and the worst of her life, which is why she stopped going in the first place. Now she's back. Her grandfather is no longer living and Kendra is . . . living with a deadline looming for her second novel and writer's block sitting squarely in her brain. Would confrontation erase those ugly words from her head?
What an interesting story . . . .about life, about friendships, about convoluted relationships, about brokenness, about forgiveness, about love. . . . the right kind, the honest kind, the forever kind. Everyone suffers when there are secrets. And every secret holder needs someone who will believe their story.
I received a copy of this book from the author and publisher. The opinions stated above are entirely my own.
The words to an unfinished story. Much like the life of the one who wrote them.
Novelist Kendra Brennan's first and only manuscript to date was a best seller, so naturally her fans (and publisher, and editor) were clamoring for more. At least most of her fans; one person's anonymous letter sends Kendra scrambling back to where it all began, her grandfather's cabin on the shores of Hidden Lake . . . hoping for respite, for inspiration, and quite possibly for closure.
"Your book . . . is the work of a selfish opportunist who was all too ready to monetize the suffering of others. Did you ever consider . . . . "
Maybe she hadn't considered, for you see, the book characterized truth for the ones who knew . . . perhaps Kendra had been just a bit too realistic, one of her fictional counterparts had recognized their role and wasn't happy about it. . . . nor should they be . . . right? Her memories surrounding summers on the lake with her grandfather and friends got a little fuzzy when she overthought them. Those experiences were the best and the worst of her life, which is why she stopped going in the first place. Now she's back. Her grandfather is no longer living and Kendra is . . . living with a deadline looming for her second novel and writer's block sitting squarely in her brain. Would confrontation erase those ugly words from her head?
What an interesting story . . . .about life, about friendships, about convoluted relationships, about brokenness, about forgiveness, about love. . . . the right kind, the honest kind, the forever kind. Everyone suffers when there are secrets. And every secret holder needs someone who will believe their story.
I received a copy of this book from the author and publisher. The opinions stated above are entirely my own.
January 29, 2022
I am partial to fictional stories about writers and writing regardless of the genre. The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water just happened to combine (successfully) elements of some of my favorite genres - mystery, drama & romance. I am glad I picked this as my first read of 2022 because it seems my new reading year is off to a great start.
Kendra Brennan's first book was a success but her attempts at starting her second one haven't amounted to much. With a deadline for her second book looming she decides to move into her grandfather's lake cottage at Hidden Lake for the summer. Summers of her formative years were spent there. That is where she met her childhood best friend Cami. That is also the place where the events she based her first book on took the place. Now so many years later Cami is missing and returning to the lake means Kendra will have to face the ghosts of her pasts, as well as reassess her identity as a writer.
Hidden Lake came alive for me from the pages of this book. I couldn't really identify with Kendra but I found that it did not matter in the least in terms of my enjoyment of the book. I have to say my absolute favorite character was the German translator for reasons that will be obvious once you read the book.
My gratitude goes to NetGalley & Revell for providing me with an advanced copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Kendra Brennan's first book was a success but her attempts at starting her second one haven't amounted to much. With a deadline for her second book looming she decides to move into her grandfather's lake cottage at Hidden Lake for the summer. Summers of her formative years were spent there. That is where she met her childhood best friend Cami. That is also the place where the events she based her first book on took the place. Now so many years later Cami is missing and returning to the lake means Kendra will have to face the ghosts of her pasts, as well as reassess her identity as a writer.
Hidden Lake came alive for me from the pages of this book. I couldn't really identify with Kendra but I found that it did not matter in the least in terms of my enjoyment of the book. I have to say my absolute favorite character was the German translator for reasons that will be obvious once you read the book.
My gratitude goes to NetGalley & Revell for providing me with an advanced copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
December 27, 2021
DNF at 35%
I found it too slow for my taste. The story was interesting at the very beginning because the POV was in 2nd person which I haven’t read before. I liked the secondary character, Andreas, but didn’t care for the rest, including Kendra, the main character.
The flashbacks were starting to get interesting, but by then I didn’t care to keep reading. The present day scenes were boring and awkward.
I received this free from Net Galley.
This is my honest review.
I found it too slow for my taste. The story was interesting at the very beginning because the POV was in 2nd person which I haven’t read before. I liked the secondary character, Andreas, but didn’t care for the rest, including Kendra, the main character.
The flashbacks were starting to get interesting, but by then I didn’t care to keep reading. The present day scenes were boring and awkward.
I received this free from Net Galley.
This is my honest review.
June 13, 2022
I agree with the opinion of a number of other reviewers. There are a number of potentially triggering scenes, bunches of drinking, no hint of God being able to heal wounds or playing a part in anyone's life. Did not read at all like Christian fiction, and for a book with this topic that was a big missed opportunity.
January 7, 2022
A wonderful book for a cold day! Kendra wrote a best selling novel and due to write her new book but the problem is she gets a negative letter from a Very Disappointed Reader and it has her blocked. Who would write such a thing and how is she to get over it. So she goes to her deceased Grandfather cabin where she grew up and faces the demons that had her write her first book. With secrets and hurts that she must face so she can heal and write that second book everyone is waiting for. When she is blocked a German author comes with his help so she learns how to feel again. Can she get over her pass and can she ever fall in love? This was an amazing book. Now if you expect fireworks you won't get this from this book. You are walking with Kendra with all of her hurts and terrible pass that she is finally learning to live a life that God wants from her. If you think this is a Christian book I say it really isn't. God is mention a few times but the book deals with sexual abuse both from Kendra and the boy who hurt her. I thought it was amazing and a life changer. Highly recommend this wonderful book for all!
January 10, 2022
“Did you ever consider that antagonists have stories of their own? Or that in someone else’s story you’re the antagonist?”
This is the first book by this author that I have read. While this book addresses some pretty gritty subject matter, it is written in such a manner that I had a hard time putting it down. I found myself waking up in the middle of the night, thinking about the story, compelled to read more until I was bleary eyed.
The style the book is written in is quite interesting. I did not find it to be a fast read in spite of the fact I did not want to put it down. It is more slow and steady, taking the reader into past and present, showing the development of friendships, betrayal, abuse, and so much more.
The author did a good job of heightening the tension in the story between Kendra and Tyler, and Kendra and Andreas. There are a couple of extremely well-done twists too! I cannot say that I have ever read a book quite like this one. I was impressed with the writing and fully engaged with the storyline and characters from beginning to end.
If you are looking for an engrossing read that is not your typical cookie cutter story, this is the book. It is not wrapped up in a neat little bow but then most times life is not that way either. I would classify The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water as more Women’s fiction than Christian fiction. There could definitely be triggers in this story for someone who is a victim of sexual assault or physical abuse but there is also hope for healing. I highly recommend reading the authors note at the end!
I was provided a digital copy of the book from the publisher through Netgalley for review purposes. This is my honest opinion of the story. No compensation received.
This is the first book by this author that I have read. While this book addresses some pretty gritty subject matter, it is written in such a manner that I had a hard time putting it down. I found myself waking up in the middle of the night, thinking about the story, compelled to read more until I was bleary eyed.
The style the book is written in is quite interesting. I did not find it to be a fast read in spite of the fact I did not want to put it down. It is more slow and steady, taking the reader into past and present, showing the development of friendships, betrayal, abuse, and so much more.
The author did a good job of heightening the tension in the story between Kendra and Tyler, and Kendra and Andreas. There are a couple of extremely well-done twists too! I cannot say that I have ever read a book quite like this one. I was impressed with the writing and fully engaged with the storyline and characters from beginning to end.
If you are looking for an engrossing read that is not your typical cookie cutter story, this is the book. It is not wrapped up in a neat little bow but then most times life is not that way either. I would classify The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water as more Women’s fiction than Christian fiction. There could definitely be triggers in this story for someone who is a victim of sexual assault or physical abuse but there is also hope for healing. I highly recommend reading the authors note at the end!
I was provided a digital copy of the book from the publisher through Netgalley for review purposes. This is my honest opinion of the story. No compensation received.
Shelved as 'dnf'
April 30, 2022DNFd in the first few minutes because it is written in an odd tense-second person maybe? I couldn’t follow it.
January 21, 2022
I adored this!
Every once in a while, a book comes along that tears at the walls around your heart, rips it out and hands it to you in such a delicious and polite mannor. A book that makes you question all the rules of life you thought you know. There was so much here to process and digest.
This is a story you have to get inside of and follow along with the characters, to be inside their heads to understand their complexity and intention.
The characters were well thought out and all earned their place in the book . Kendra is such a lost soul , but honest to her core.
I loved the fact this ticked so many boxes, yet no one plot took away from the other. Several issues running parallel with the same characters binding them together. I would love a sequel to this.
I'm not a fan of comparing books to other authors, but I have to say I loved the "where the crawdads sing " vibe this had going on.
This was a brilliant book that I will certainly be gifting to bookish friends.
Every once in a while, a book comes along that tears at the walls around your heart, rips it out and hands it to you in such a delicious and polite mannor. A book that makes you question all the rules of life you thought you know. There was so much here to process and digest.
This is a story you have to get inside of and follow along with the characters, to be inside their heads to understand their complexity and intention.
The characters were well thought out and all earned their place in the book . Kendra is such a lost soul , but honest to her core.
I loved the fact this ticked so many boxes, yet no one plot took away from the other. Several issues running parallel with the same characters binding them together. I would love a sequel to this.
I'm not a fan of comparing books to other authors, but I have to say I loved the "where the crawdads sing " vibe this had going on.
This was a brilliant book that I will certainly be gifting to bookish friends.
January 6, 2022
The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water by Erin Bartles and audiobook Narrated by Mia Barron is a unique and complex contemporary fiction that takes us into the process of remembering, accepting, and overcoming life’s challenges.
I am reviewing the audiobook version.
This was a different genre and experience for me. What first drew me in was the mystery concept, but this book turned out to be so much more. It is definitely a character-driven novel where we explore Kendra’s current author dilemma and an anonymous letter that she has received that is affecting her ability to write and move on. Because of this, she is forced to return to Hidden Lake in upper Michigan, a childhood summer retreat of her Grandfather’s.
Here we get to see the multiple layers of a past filled with trauma, love, loss, coming of age, identity searching, and the resolution to the original mystery as well as several surprises and twists along the way.
The pacing was more on the slower end as we are exposed to each layer being pealed back and are able to find out the truth of what happened to Kendra that was so traumatic, what happened to cause a rift with her bff Cammie, who wrote the letter, and how she finally moves on from here.
I would have to give the book itself a 3.5/5 and the audiobook a 5/5 stars as the narrator has a great voice and lends a nice pacing and different octaves/inflections to her character cast. The book itself was entertaining, but it just wasn’t “riveting” and didn’t draw me in as much as I thought it would.
Overall, 4/5 stars.
Thank you NG and Recorded Books/RB Media for this complimentary copy and in return I am submitting my unbiased and voluntary review and opinion.
I am posting this review to my GR, Bookbub, Amazon, and B&N accounts immediately. Date of publication: 1/4/22.
I am reviewing the audiobook version.
This was a different genre and experience for me. What first drew me in was the mystery concept, but this book turned out to be so much more. It is definitely a character-driven novel where we explore Kendra’s current author dilemma and an anonymous letter that she has received that is affecting her ability to write and move on. Because of this, she is forced to return to Hidden Lake in upper Michigan, a childhood summer retreat of her Grandfather’s.
Here we get to see the multiple layers of a past filled with trauma, love, loss, coming of age, identity searching, and the resolution to the original mystery as well as several surprises and twists along the way.
The pacing was more on the slower end as we are exposed to each layer being pealed back and are able to find out the truth of what happened to Kendra that was so traumatic, what happened to cause a rift with her bff Cammie, who wrote the letter, and how she finally moves on from here.
I would have to give the book itself a 3.5/5 and the audiobook a 5/5 stars as the narrator has a great voice and lends a nice pacing and different octaves/inflections to her character cast. The book itself was entertaining, but it just wasn’t “riveting” and didn’t draw me in as much as I thought it would.
Overall, 4/5 stars.
Thank you NG and Recorded Books/RB Media for this complimentary copy and in return I am submitting my unbiased and voluntary review and opinion.
I am posting this review to my GR, Bookbub, Amazon, and B&N accounts immediately. Date of publication: 1/4/22.
December 31, 2021
Kendra Brennan inherits her grandfather's old cabin on Hidden Lake and moves in with the intention to fix her life. She plans to confront Tyler, the man who inspired the antagonist in her first book, and write her second novel. Along the way, she realizes that her memory and reality were not always truth, and she's faced with the choice to forgive and receive forgiveness.
From page one, I was confused. I didn't understand who Kendra was talking to or what was happening. It took a few pages to get into the groove that she was speaking to her childhood best friend Cami.
Some characters like Jackie and Beth were poorly developed, too, and remained villains.
Overall, this book was okay for me. I definitely wanted to read to the end but didn't stay up late to read. And I never connected fully with any of the characters. While I could see myself in some of them and experienced empathy at times, they all were privileged, flawed and just out of my grasp of caring what happened to them.
Trigger warnings: suicide, abandonment, rape, abuse, alcohol and drug abuse
From page one, I was confused. I didn't understand who Kendra was talking to or what was happening. It took a few pages to get into the groove that she was speaking to her childhood best friend Cami.
Some characters like Jackie and Beth were poorly developed, too, and remained villains.
Overall, this book was okay for me. I definitely wanted to read to the end but didn't stay up late to read. And I never connected fully with any of the characters. While I could see myself in some of them and experienced empathy at times, they all were privileged, flawed and just out of my grasp of caring what happened to them.
Trigger warnings: suicide, abandonment, rape, abuse, alcohol and drug abuse
February 9, 2022
Kendra Brennan’s debut novel is a great success. Subsequently, she decides to spend time at her grandfather’s secluded, quiet cabin in Hidden Lake, Michigan to complete her second book. She’s got writer’s block stemming from a Disappointed Reader who disapproved of Kendra’s first book, so she’s returned to her childhood summer home at the cabin to retrace events involving her best friend Cami’s brother that happened many years ago, and that she chronicled in her novel. Kendra hasn’t spoken to Cami since they had a falling out years ago, so she’s surprised when Cami’s mother, Beth, who’s always been rather cool towards Kendra, writes to her asking if she’s heard from her. Although Kendra has never been close to Beth, she regards Cami’s father, an accomplished author, as a mentor. While they all spend time at Hidden Lake for the summer, secrets will be revealed. And while searching for answers about others, Kendra will also discover many things she didn’t know about herself.
I enjoyed The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water. It took me a moment to realize that the narrator, Kendra, was telling the story to her missing friend. Once I figured that out I began to really take in the many elements that kept me engaged. This book possesses an atmospheric tone with its lake, cabins and fishing boats. Each time I picked it up the general outdoor theme immersed my imagination in the stimulating setting.
The characters came to life and I could easily envision each one. I particularly liked how the author portrayed Kendra’s German translator, Andreas. He brought an element of calm, reasonableness and trustworthiness to a cast of characters that had secrets and questionable motives. Ike Fenton, the WW2 vet, was a creative character that I found entertaining. Even the antagonist’s story was told in such a way that I vacillated between revulsion and pity.
The story itself was one that could be a trigger for some. In the Author’s Note at the conclusion of the book, Erin Bartels discloses her personal experience which is reflected in this novel. The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water was a way for her to tell her own story.
Overall, I thought this book was well written. I wanted a little more detail in the end, but aside from that I really enjoyed it.
Thank you, Revell Reads, for a complimentary copy of The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water. In exchange I have provided my honest review.
I enjoyed The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water. It took me a moment to realize that the narrator, Kendra, was telling the story to her missing friend. Once I figured that out I began to really take in the many elements that kept me engaged. This book possesses an atmospheric tone with its lake, cabins and fishing boats. Each time I picked it up the general outdoor theme immersed my imagination in the stimulating setting.
The characters came to life and I could easily envision each one. I particularly liked how the author portrayed Kendra’s German translator, Andreas. He brought an element of calm, reasonableness and trustworthiness to a cast of characters that had secrets and questionable motives. Ike Fenton, the WW2 vet, was a creative character that I found entertaining. Even the antagonist’s story was told in such a way that I vacillated between revulsion and pity.
The story itself was one that could be a trigger for some. In the Author’s Note at the conclusion of the book, Erin Bartels discloses her personal experience which is reflected in this novel. The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water was a way for her to tell her own story.
Overall, I thought this book was well written. I wanted a little more detail in the end, but aside from that I really enjoyed it.
Thank you, Revell Reads, for a complimentary copy of The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water. In exchange I have provided my honest review.
January 13, 2022
THE GIRL WHO COULD BREATHE UNDER WATER reminded me why Erin Bartels is one of my favorite authors. If I could, I would give it more than five stars.
Kendra Brennan is crippled by self-doubt and writer’s block. Her debut novel, which fictionalized the teen trauma that haunts her, has become a smash hit. But a letter from A Very Disappointed Reader has raised disturbing accusations that lead Kendra to question accepted truths about her own past.
Are her memories of events accurate, or has time distorted them? Can she discover the identity of her critic, who clearly knows something Kendra doesn’t? Kendra believes the answers lie in the place she’s avoided for years: Hidden Lake.
Running from her editor, her agent, her fast-approaching deadline, she returns to her grandfather’s abandoned cabin / childhood summer home determined to confront Tyler, the antagonist in her debut. Maybe then she can finally move forward and start her second manuscript.
But coming back to the lake unearths more questions, not answers. Is Tyler dangerous? Where’s his sister, Cami, Kendra’s estranged best friend? And what really happened between them when they were girls? Is the death of their friendship the real demon Kendra has to face?
The beautiful writing encouraged me to read slowly, savoring every sentence, but the intricately-woven plot pushed me to flip pages, desperate to know the truth about long-dead secrets. The unique structure immersed me further in those layers, since Kendra constantly steps out of the story to address Cami in a one-sided conversation.
This is a powerful novel about forgiving the unforgivable and releasing the past to embrace the future. But above all else, it’s a thumping good read full of healing, heart, and hope. Buy it, and don’t skip the author’s note at the end.
Kendra Brennan is crippled by self-doubt and writer’s block. Her debut novel, which fictionalized the teen trauma that haunts her, has become a smash hit. But a letter from A Very Disappointed Reader has raised disturbing accusations that lead Kendra to question accepted truths about her own past.
Are her memories of events accurate, or has time distorted them? Can she discover the identity of her critic, who clearly knows something Kendra doesn’t? Kendra believes the answers lie in the place she’s avoided for years: Hidden Lake.
Running from her editor, her agent, her fast-approaching deadline, she returns to her grandfather’s abandoned cabin / childhood summer home determined to confront Tyler, the antagonist in her debut. Maybe then she can finally move forward and start her second manuscript.
But coming back to the lake unearths more questions, not answers. Is Tyler dangerous? Where’s his sister, Cami, Kendra’s estranged best friend? And what really happened between them when they were girls? Is the death of their friendship the real demon Kendra has to face?
The beautiful writing encouraged me to read slowly, savoring every sentence, but the intricately-woven plot pushed me to flip pages, desperate to know the truth about long-dead secrets. The unique structure immersed me further in those layers, since Kendra constantly steps out of the story to address Cami in a one-sided conversation.
This is a powerful novel about forgiving the unforgivable and releasing the past to embrace the future. But above all else, it’s a thumping good read full of healing, heart, and hope. Buy it, and don’t skip the author’s note at the end.
March 31, 2022
Thank you to Kelly @lovebookstours, @erinbartelswrites and @revellbooks for giving me the opportunity to review this book as part of the book tour.
I read this book very quickly and it was an easy read. It was well written, with a engaging storyline and well developed characters. I was truly gripped, HOWEVER, I was not prepared for how brutally heart wrenching this book would be. It is full of trauma and secrets which made for hard reading at times but was worth it in the end. There are some triggering incidents within the book but I thought they were handled sensitively.
I really liked the way the author had developed the characters and I found myself invested in them and when a romance came into play I was right here for it and it did provide some light heartedness too the story even if Andrea's has red flag written all over him.
Overall this was an enjoyable read that was way more emotive than I though it it would be. ⭐⭐⭐⭐/5
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I read this book very quickly and it was an easy read. It was well written, with a engaging storyline and well developed characters. I was truly gripped, HOWEVER, I was not prepared for how brutally heart wrenching this book would be. It is full of trauma and secrets which made for hard reading at times but was worth it in the end. There are some triggering incidents within the book but I thought they were handled sensitively.
I really liked the way the author had developed the characters and I found myself invested in them and when a romance came into play I was right here for it and it did provide some light heartedness too the story even if Andrea's has red flag written all over him.
Overall this was an enjoyable read that was way more emotive than I though it it would be. ⭐⭐⭐⭐/5
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