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291 pages, Paperback
First published April 6, 2017
In his studio Geoff Simmons washed his hands at the deep stone sink, the clear water dissolving the clay and running in a milky stream down the plughole and into the trap beneath. The wet pots no the tray were drying off and the kiln was just beginning to warm. In the hedge outside Mr. Wilson’s window a blackbird waited on its grassy bowl of blue-green eggs as the chicks chipped away at the shells. On the television there were pictures of floods across northern Europe; men in waterproofs pulling dinghies through the streets, collapsed bridges, drowned livestock. When the tea rooms opened for the season the footbridge hadn’t yet been rebuilt. The parish council wrote to the Culshaw Hall Estate as a matter of urgency, and the estate said it was the job of the National Park. The National Park disagreed. The river keeper said he could only do what he was asked. The first small tortoiseshells began mating, flying after each other above the nettled beds until the females settled out of sight and waited for the males to follow. The National Park ranger from the visitors centre spent an enjoyable hour watching them and making a record and when he got back to the office he filed it carefully away. At reservoir no.11, the maintenance team went along the crest of the dam, looking for cracks in the surface or sinkholes. There were molehills on the grass bank to deal with. Along the river at dusk, there were bats moving in number, coming down from their roosts to take the insects rising from the water. They moved in deft quietness and were gone by the time they were seen. The Spring Dance ended early when a fight between Liam Hooper and one of the boys from Cardwell spilled back in through the fire doors. It was soon broken up but by then there’d been damage and the Cardwell boys were asked to leave. Outside in the car park Will Jackson was again seen with Miss Carter from the school.
They gathered at the car park in the hour before dawn and waited to be told what to do. It was cold and there was little conversation. There were question that weren't being asked. The missing girl's name was Rebecca Shaw. When last seen she'd been wearing a white hooded top. A mist hung low across the moor and the ground was frozen hard. They were given instructions and then they moved off, their boots crunching on the stiffened ground and their tracks fading behind them as the heather sprang back into shape. […]Opening sentences. A missing teenager, the possibilities on everybody's mind. The dangers of the terrain and weather, rocky hillsides, the reservoirs and swollen river, the disused mines. And human dangers, not articulated as yet. In clean declarative sentences with hardly even a comma, Jon McGregor describes the search, which goes into a second day and then a third:
[…] The divers were going through the river again. A group of journalists waited for the shot, standing behind a cordon by the packhorse bridge, cameras aimed at the empty stretch of water, the breath clouding over their heads. In the lower field two of Jackson's boys were kneeling over a fallen ewe. There was a racket of camera shutters as the first diver appeared, the wetsuited head sleek and slow through the water. A second diver came around the bend, and a third. They took turns ducking through the arch on the bridge and then they were out of sight. The camera crews jerked their cameras from their tripods and began folding everything away. One of the Jackson boys bucked a quad bike across the field and told the journalists to move. The river ran empty and quick. The cement works was shut down to allow for a search. In a week the first snowdrops emerged along the verges past the cricket ground, which it seemed winter had yet a way to go. At the school, in the staff room the teachers kept their coats on and waited. Everything that might be said seemed like the wrong thing to say. […]This comes from the middle of only the second long paragraph, on the fourth page of text, but two things have changed already: it mentions names, and it includes happenings that have nothing to do with the girl's disappearance. That nature note about the snowdrops made me sit up; it seemed irrelevant, even callous. But that is McGregor's point; the life of the village must go on; the sheep must be tended on a daily basis, even when something as terrible as a missing girl disrupts the routine. And nature too has its cycles, totally unaware of human tragedies. John Wood's review of McGregor's novel in the New Yorker compared it to an almanac, and that's in part what it is: a meticulous account of the natural history of a small English village, the cycle of seasons repeated over the course of thirteen years, one chapter for each, one paragraph for each month. McGregor's writing is extraordinary, his sensitivity to sight, scent, and sound, the breadth and detail of his vision:
[…] There was talk. In the meadows Thompson's men worked the baler along the lines of cut grass, the thick sward gathered up and spun into dense bales. Every few hundred yards the tractor paused and there was a tumbling inside the machine and a neatly wrapped bale rolled softly from the hatch onto the field. The wood pigeons laid eggs in their nests in the beech wood and in the horse chestnut by the cricket ground. They took turns sitting on the eggs, but there were still plenty stolen by magpies and crows. On the bank above the abandoned lead pits the badgers started coming out of their sett before dark. The sows with cubs were looking for food and the boars were looking for mates. There were conflicts. […]I put ellipses before and after these passages to show that they are all part of much longer paragraphs. I had a hard time finding an extended passage of nature writing, because most often McGregor interleaves a line or two about the natural world with passing remarks about the people that live in it; the following passage is more typical:
[…] White campion thronged the verges along the road towards town, their neat flowers wrinkling as the seed-heads began to swell. In the beech wood the young foxes were ready to move on. It was Martin's turn to put together the Harvest Festival display at the church, and despite regular promises not to let anyone down he disappeared at the last moment. Irene and Winnie stepped in. The river turned over beneath the packhorse bridge and ran steady to the millpond weir. Lynsey Smith came home from Leeds and moved back in with her parents. […]Such brief references to people do make the novel a challenge to read. On page 7 alone, 13 new names are introduced, mainly children and teachers in the village school. The cast will continue to build over the next dozen pages, to a total of around 60, all in brief references of seldom more than a sentence or two at a time. Again, I have to demonstrate:
[…] Lynsey Smith said it was a safe bet Ms. Bowman would ask if they needed to chat. She made finger-quotes around the word chat. Deepak said at least it would be a way of getting out of French. Sophie looked away, and saw Andrew waiting at the other bus stop with Irene, his mother. He was the same age as they were but he went to a special school. Their bus pulled up and James warned Liam not to make up any bullshit about Beck Shaw. It snowed and the snow settled thickly. […]Copying this out now, it seems very different from when I first read it. I now feel I know Lynsey, Sophie, Andrew, Irene, and James at least, because I have followed what became of them. But at the time, they were just so many names. McGregor doesn't introduce them, but refers to them as casually as though you already know them, which of course you don't. I wondered if I should be keeping notes. Fortunately, having seen McGregor use a very similar technique (though in a an urban context) in his first novel, If Nobody Speaks of Remarkable Things, I knew to trust him. But it is hard to put your normal character-based expectations on hold. Indeed, it is wrong to speak of "characters" at all. McGregor does not focus on one or two figures to propel his plot. Instead, he takes us into the midst of an ecosystem, in which no one person is more important than any other, and the lives of human beings is merely one of many cycles, along with the plants, and the animals, and the weather. His combination of human and natural stories reminded me of Jim Crace's Being Dead, one of the most extraordinary novels I have ever read, and that put me at ease.
“Those bland details of everyday life fill McGregor’s mammoth paragraphs like foam insulation being sprayed into walls.”That made me laugh. She was the one to point out that the girl was thirteen when she went missing, and the time recorded in this novel is thirteen years. I would have thought it was much longer. It felt longer. I started noticing the time I spent reading, and treated myself to an occasional skim, just to see if I could uncover his mystery before I succumbed to numbing despair.