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The Waters of Lethe #1
The Nightward
Nebula and MIFRE award-winning author R.S.A. Garcia’s scifantasy debut novel—the first in a duology—in which Caribbean mythology meets The Witcher, introduces a world where women warrior-magicians rule, and a child princess and her bodyguard must flee an attempted coup and evade the wave of darkness sent to kill her.
For 500 years Gaiea’s Hand has stood as a ward against the Dark. The Age of Chaos is a faded memory. The Goddess has left Gailand and given her Blessing to the Queens to rule in her stead.
Princess Viella of the court of Hamber is the Spirit of Gaiea, presumptive heir to the throne and budding wielder of magic. And yet she’s still a child—not yet ten years old—and a day spent evading her teachers and her dutiful bodyguard, Luka, is much more satisfying than learning about telepathy, illusions, and other spells, or obeying even her mother, the Queen.
There is time enough…until there isn’t.
For the night the Queen hosts the Ceremony to confirm Viella as the next Hand of Gaiea, everything changes for her—in the most horrific way the assassination of Viella’s mother.
Now Viella is Queen.
Luka, despite resenting his position as royal babysitter, does not hesitate. He rushes his charge from the Court and vows to keep her safe. Yet he is unsure how to help a burgeoning Hand of Gaiea, let alone contend with his place as a man in a matriarchal world and the secret that is burning inside him.
Together, they are on the run from darkness in a world where the lines between magic and technology are blurring and it’s up to a child and her protector to bring clarity and light back to the Queendom.
For 500 years Gaiea’s Hand has stood as a ward against the Dark. The Age of Chaos is a faded memory. The Goddess has left Gailand and given her Blessing to the Queens to rule in her stead.
Princess Viella of the court of Hamber is the Spirit of Gaiea, presumptive heir to the throne and budding wielder of magic. And yet she’s still a child—not yet ten years old—and a day spent evading her teachers and her dutiful bodyguard, Luka, is much more satisfying than learning about telepathy, illusions, and other spells, or obeying even her mother, the Queen.
There is time enough…until there isn’t.
For the night the Queen hosts the Ceremony to confirm Viella as the next Hand of Gaiea, everything changes for her—in the most horrific way the assassination of Viella’s mother.
Now Viella is Queen.
Luka, despite resenting his position as royal babysitter, does not hesitate. He rushes his charge from the Court and vows to keep her safe. Yet he is unsure how to help a burgeoning Hand of Gaiea, let alone contend with his place as a man in a matriarchal world and the secret that is burning inside him.
Together, they are on the run from darkness in a world where the lines between magic and technology are blurring and it’s up to a child and her protector to bring clarity and light back to the Queendom.
432 pages, Paperback
First published October 15, 2024
About the author
R.S.A. Garcia
24 books103 followersR.S.A. is a Nebula and Sturgeon Award winning writer of speculative fiction. She is also the winner of the Machine Intelligence Foundation for Rights and Ethics' 2023 Media Award, and a Locus, Ignyte and Eugie Foster Award finalist.
Her Amazon Bestselling science fiction mystery, Lex Talionis, received a starred review from Publishers Weekly and the Silver Medal for Best Scifi/Fantasy/Horror Ebook from the Independent Publishers Awards (2015).
She has published short fiction in venues such as Clarkesworld Magazine, Uncanny Magazine, Escape Pod, Strange Horizons, The Sunday Morning Transport, and Internazionale Magazine. Her stories have been long-listed for the British Science Fiction Awards, translated into several languages, and included in a number of anthologies, including the critically acclaimed The Best of World SF, The Best Science Fiction of the Year, The Year's Best Fantasy, and The Apex Book of World SF. Her scifantasy duology, beginning with The Nightward, is forthcoming from Harper Voyager in October, 2024.
She lives in Trinidad and Tobago with an extended family and too many cats. Learn more at rsagarcia.com.
Her Amazon Bestselling science fiction mystery, Lex Talionis, received a starred review from Publishers Weekly and the Silver Medal for Best Scifi/Fantasy/Horror Ebook from the Independent Publishers Awards (2015).
She has published short fiction in venues such as Clarkesworld Magazine, Uncanny Magazine, Escape Pod, Strange Horizons, The Sunday Morning Transport, and Internazionale Magazine. Her stories have been long-listed for the British Science Fiction Awards, translated into several languages, and included in a number of anthologies, including the critically acclaimed The Best of World SF, The Best Science Fiction of the Year, The Year's Best Fantasy, and The Apex Book of World SF. Her scifantasy duology, beginning with The Nightward, is forthcoming from Harper Voyager in October, 2024.
She lives in Trinidad and Tobago with an extended family and too many cats. Learn more at rsagarcia.com.
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August 31, 2024
Wow - What an incredibly dazzling debut - it’s as stunning in content as its cover.
This is where Caribbean mythology meets high fantasy, with a dash of science fiction. Princess Viella is just a child, but the sudden assassination of her mother throws her headlong into adulthood. The story follows her on a desperate flight to safety, accompanied by Luka, her reluctant but fiercely loyal bodyguard. Luka is torn between his duty to the Princess and to his people in a world where women wield most of the power.
This is such a great and unique story about a young princess who finds her entire life in disarray and her only solace is her young bodyguard. The dynamic between Viella and Luka is one of the highlights —seeing their relationship evolve from a formal protector and charge to something more deeply bonded by shared danger is heartwarming. It absolutely gave me Ciri and Geralt from The Witcher vibes.
What makes this truly stand out is the fascinating world-building. The world feels alive and breathing, and the lore is immersive. This is an ambitious book with a complex, multilayered plot that is as much about personal growth in its ensemble cast as it is about the epic struggle between forces that are somewhat sympathetic in different ways. I love it when no one side is perfect and even the baddies have subtle ways that they're on the right side of things.
Highly recommended for fantasy fans looking for something fresh and unique!
Thanks to Harper Voyager and Storygram Tours for the opportunity to read and review this amazing book. This review is based on a complimentary pre-released copy and it is voluntary. All opinions are my own.
This is where Caribbean mythology meets high fantasy, with a dash of science fiction. Princess Viella is just a child, but the sudden assassination of her mother throws her headlong into adulthood. The story follows her on a desperate flight to safety, accompanied by Luka, her reluctant but fiercely loyal bodyguard. Luka is torn between his duty to the Princess and to his people in a world where women wield most of the power.
This is such a great and unique story about a young princess who finds her entire life in disarray and her only solace is her young bodyguard. The dynamic between Viella and Luka is one of the highlights —seeing their relationship evolve from a formal protector and charge to something more deeply bonded by shared danger is heartwarming. It absolutely gave me Ciri and Geralt from The Witcher vibes.
What makes this truly stand out is the fascinating world-building. The world feels alive and breathing, and the lore is immersive. This is an ambitious book with a complex, multilayered plot that is as much about personal growth in its ensemble cast as it is about the epic struggle between forces that are somewhat sympathetic in different ways. I love it when no one side is perfect and even the baddies have subtle ways that they're on the right side of things.
Highly recommended for fantasy fans looking for something fresh and unique!
Thanks to Harper Voyager and Storygram Tours for the opportunity to read and review this amazing book. This review is based on a complimentary pre-released copy and it is voluntary. All opinions are my own.
July 10, 2024
If you've read Garcia's short fiction, then you know you're in for a richly imagined world and lots of chewy problems for the characters. People are going to be begging for her next book.
October 22, 2024
The Nightward
by R.S.A. Garcia
The Waters of Lethe #1
Fantasy
NetGalley eARC
Pub Date: Oct 15, 2024
Avon/Harper Voyager
Ages: 14+
Princess Viella isn't quite yet ten, but everyone is sure she will become the next queen and the Hand of Gaiea, Gaiea the Goddess who saved them from The Age of Chaos. But on the night of the Ceremony to confirm the girl's destiny, they are attacked, her mother killed, and her father and twin brother taken prisoner.
Viella escapes with her body guard, nineteen-year-old Luka, a warrior gifted with the ability to bond with a warcat. But he is hiding a secret that, as a man in a matriarchal world, could see him killed.
The blurb left a lot to the imagination, and my imagination was a lot more creative than the plot of this story. The idea for the story was great, but the execution was lacking. More info about The Age of Darkness would have helped the chapter openings excerpts of the 'diaries'. The magic system also needs some more building, but the world was good, though by halfway I started to have that sick feeling of what happened in The Age of Darkness, and by the end of the book, I'm pretty sure I know where it's going. I had some Dr. W vibes towards the end. I'm not saying that it's a bad thing, but...
I did like the characters, Viella's character fits perfectly with the idea of a nine-year-old, but being thought of as the next queen, I felt she was more naive than she should have been. Luka's struggles with his role as a 'babysitter' was understandable, though his secret could have been revealed a little better within the magic system, but wasn't. And her brother should have had more character building, as an important character he was treated as filler.
As to the action, there wasn't much. What there was, wasn't that interesting and sadly I found myself skimming it, (along with other sections) and when I made myself read, I was still finding myself skimming.
Hopefully, the building of this world and its magic system, (which would really help with how the characters fit into the world) will continue in the next book, but I'm not too excited about reading it, because I'm pretty sure I know where it's going, but I will read it if I can get it on the cheap.
Just missed reaching the next star...
2 Stars
by R.S.A. Garcia
The Waters of Lethe #1
Fantasy
NetGalley eARC
Pub Date: Oct 15, 2024
Avon/Harper Voyager
Ages: 14+
Princess Viella isn't quite yet ten, but everyone is sure she will become the next queen and the Hand of Gaiea, Gaiea the Goddess who saved them from The Age of Chaos. But on the night of the Ceremony to confirm the girl's destiny, they are attacked, her mother killed, and her father and twin brother taken prisoner.
Viella escapes with her body guard, nineteen-year-old Luka, a warrior gifted with the ability to bond with a warcat. But he is hiding a secret that, as a man in a matriarchal world, could see him killed.
The blurb left a lot to the imagination, and my imagination was a lot more creative than the plot of this story. The idea for the story was great, but the execution was lacking. More info about The Age of Darkness would have helped the chapter openings excerpts of the 'diaries'. The magic system also needs some more building, but the world was good, though by halfway I started to have that sick feeling of what happened in The Age of Darkness, and by the end of the book, I'm pretty sure I know where it's going. I had some Dr. W vibes towards the end. I'm not saying that it's a bad thing, but...
I did like the characters, Viella's character fits perfectly with the idea of a nine-year-old, but being thought of as the next queen, I felt she was more naive than she should have been. Luka's struggles with his role as a 'babysitter' was understandable, though his secret could have been revealed a little better within the magic system, but wasn't. And her brother should have had more character building, as an important character he was treated as filler.
As to the action, there wasn't much. What there was, wasn't that interesting and sadly I found myself skimming it, (along with other sections) and when I made myself read, I was still finding myself skimming.
Hopefully, the building of this world and its magic system, (which would really help with how the characters fit into the world) will continue in the next book, but I'm not too excited about reading it, because I'm pretty sure I know where it's going, but I will read it if I can get it on the cheap.
Just missed reaching the next star...
2 Stars
July 3, 2024
My official blurb:
No one builds worlds like R.S.A. Garcia—intricate, beautiful, and dangerous. A science fantasy epic with a rich foundation of Caribbean folklore, The Nightward expertly blends both genre and culture. Balancing grief and loss with her signature humor and heart, Garcia continues to prove that she is a master at her craft.
No one builds worlds like R.S.A. Garcia—intricate, beautiful, and dangerous. A science fantasy epic with a rich foundation of Caribbean folklore, The Nightward expertly blends both genre and culture. Balancing grief and loss with her signature humor and heart, Garcia continues to prove that she is a master at her craft.
September 10, 2024
Review: This novel is a two-sided coin. Great movement vs. poorly built characters. Fantastic world building vs. wokey trash opinions. Believable magic vs. high technology. Independent and fierce characterization vs. YA blushing and crushing.
Where does this dichotomy leave the reader? Well this reader had fun up until the pronoun bullshjt was inserted with no cogent alignment to the story line. Good thing it was minor in approach and lasted but a few pages. Fug, when does the shjt end?
I am torn between loving the grande questing nature of the story line and not giving a fuk what happens to the characters. That is one of the toughest things to create in any great novel...loving the characters so much that you are constantly rooting for them. Characters that were born with silver spoons in their mouths lessens the ability for readers to form attachments. I will not carry on with this series as the character development needs to see improvement.
I received this ARC in lieu of a review.
Rating: 2.5/5
Where does this dichotomy leave the reader? Well this reader had fun up until the pronoun bullshjt was inserted with no cogent alignment to the story line. Good thing it was minor in approach and lasted but a few pages. Fug, when does the shjt end?
I am torn between loving the grande questing nature of the story line and not giving a fuk what happens to the characters. That is one of the toughest things to create in any great novel...loving the characters so much that you are constantly rooting for them. Characters that were born with silver spoons in their mouths lessens the ability for readers to form attachments. I will not carry on with this series as the character development needs to see improvement.
I received this ARC in lieu of a review.
Rating: 2.5/5
July 15, 2024
Thank you to NetGalley and Harper Voyager for the arc! Ho boy, if I could sum up this book in one sentence, it would be the following: This is too much and yet not enough. Big ideas, huge ambition, but it does not stick the landing. I’m going to break this down into pros and cons since I’m not feeling eloquent rn
Pros:
-the author has potential
-intriguing world building at the beginning
-intriguing concepts
-war cats and big, bad dragons
-this book does not hold your hand
-definitely unpredictable!!!
Cons:
-this book got lost in the sauce of its ambition and concepts; it was very unwieldy and messy
-the scale of this book was too big for the author’s current talents
-so many things weren’t well explained or weren’t explained at all. This made for a confusing reading experience (I’m saying this as a seasoned epic fantasy reader)
-author should of focused more on certain pieces of lore as opposed to the book’s scale
-characters were unmemorable, and I felt disconnected to them all
-I felt zero emotion save frustration and annoyance
-some plot points made me roll my eyes excessively
-repetitive plot in general
So yeah, this was definitely a lot!!!! Unfortunately, I’m going to have to pass on the sequel. Anyways, -2.75 war cats
Pros:
-the author has potential
-intriguing world building at the beginning
-intriguing concepts
-war cats and big, bad dragons
-this book does not hold your hand
-definitely unpredictable!!!
Cons:
-this book got lost in the sauce of its ambition and concepts; it was very unwieldy and messy
-the scale of this book was too big for the author’s current talents
-so many things weren’t well explained or weren’t explained at all. This made for a confusing reading experience (I’m saying this as a seasoned epic fantasy reader)
-author should of focused more on certain pieces of lore as opposed to the book’s scale
-characters were unmemorable, and I felt disconnected to them all
-I felt zero emotion save frustration and annoyance
-some plot points made me roll my eyes excessively
-repetitive plot in general
So yeah, this was definitely a lot!!!! Unfortunately, I’m going to have to pass on the sequel. Anyways, -2.75 war cats
September 25, 2024
So good! Just got home so I’ll write a review later ☺️
Oh my lord, I literally just wrote this entire long thing and was almost done and then CLICKED OUT OF THE POP UP BOX SO IT DELETED 😭😭😭
*Thank you to Goodreads and Harper Voyager for the giveaway and the ARC copy- this book comes out in October :)
Ok lets try this again🥲
This was such a good book! I did have a bit of a hard time following the first chapter or two, for two main reasons. Firstly, my own problem/fault, is that I had just come from reading a literary fiction book, which completely takes a different type of brain function to read, so it was hard for my brain to switch over to fantasy mode. Lastly, the book just jumps straight into the magically world and its beings with little to no explanations about what everything means. But, saying that, after those first chapters, it was pretty easy to follow along. I usually have such a hard time and am so lost the first 50-100 pages in a fantasy book, but this one was a lot easier. Especially if there is multiple POV’s like in this book. However, I found it very easy to keep track of each storyline and character which was soo nice. Speaking of multi POV’s- I usually don’t love them. I find that I either don’t like one or two of them or I feel it takes me out of the story so much switching between each storyline. Having to completely reorient myself and where we are in the world and what characters we are with. However, this book did it so well. I had no troubles and I was never frustrated or annoyed when switching to a different POV.
Talking about the chapters, they were pretty long. I am a short chapter girly through and through because I like having a lot of options on where to stop. I don’t like to stop reading in the middle of the chapter and think that stoping at the end of one is so much better. I think with how the chapters are set-up with multiple POV’s in one, that they could have been broken up into more. Long chapters usually make me slump a bit with books, but this wasn’t so bad, but wasn’t great. However! Speaking of what can make me slump in a book, this book did details so good. It was so detailed without dragging and slowing down a scene. It was a pretty fast-paced in my opinion which I love. I find a lot of very detailed scenes can really slow down the pacing and make it a tad boring but I never felt that way with this one. Very well done!
I’m not sure how I felt about the societal standards in this book however. I think I get/know why the author did it the way they did, I just don’t know if I like it. I’m a little worried to see where it goes/ evolves(?) in the next book. I have high hopes but I am still a tad bit nervous.
Also, this book has such a cute little found family trope in it, especially with Luka and Viella, but also with Eleanor, just not as much. I loved her character, I just wished we saw her and Viella bond more. I thought it was so cute and I was so shocked to find out that Luka is only 19! He’s just a kid himself!! When I picked up this book I thought he would be in his mid-to-late- 20’s to be honest. Maybe even early 30’s, so I couldn’t believe it when I found out his actual age.
Overall, this was a really good fantasy book involving/based on Caribbean Mythology and was very interesting to read. Would recommend to everyone :)
Oh my lord, I literally just wrote this entire long thing and was almost done and then CLICKED OUT OF THE POP UP BOX SO IT DELETED 😭😭😭
*Thank you to Goodreads and Harper Voyager for the giveaway and the ARC copy- this book comes out in October :)
Ok lets try this again🥲
This was such a good book! I did have a bit of a hard time following the first chapter or two, for two main reasons. Firstly, my own problem/fault, is that I had just come from reading a literary fiction book, which completely takes a different type of brain function to read, so it was hard for my brain to switch over to fantasy mode. Lastly, the book just jumps straight into the magically world and its beings with little to no explanations about what everything means. But, saying that, after those first chapters, it was pretty easy to follow along. I usually have such a hard time and am so lost the first 50-100 pages in a fantasy book, but this one was a lot easier. Especially if there is multiple POV’s like in this book. However, I found it very easy to keep track of each storyline and character which was soo nice. Speaking of multi POV’s- I usually don’t love them. I find that I either don’t like one or two of them or I feel it takes me out of the story so much switching between each storyline. Having to completely reorient myself and where we are in the world and what characters we are with. However, this book did it so well. I had no troubles and I was never frustrated or annoyed when switching to a different POV.
Talking about the chapters, they were pretty long. I am a short chapter girly through and through because I like having a lot of options on where to stop. I don’t like to stop reading in the middle of the chapter and think that stoping at the end of one is so much better. I think with how the chapters are set-up with multiple POV’s in one, that they could have been broken up into more. Long chapters usually make me slump a bit with books, but this wasn’t so bad, but wasn’t great. However! Speaking of what can make me slump in a book, this book did details so good. It was so detailed without dragging and slowing down a scene. It was a pretty fast-paced in my opinion which I love. I find a lot of very detailed scenes can really slow down the pacing and make it a tad boring but I never felt that way with this one. Very well done!
I’m not sure how I felt about the societal standards in this book however. I think I get/know why the author did it the way they did, I just don’t know if I like it. I’m a little worried to see where it goes/ evolves(?) in the next book. I have high hopes but I am still a tad bit nervous.
Also, this book has such a cute little found family trope in it, especially with Luka and Viella, but also with Eleanor, just not as much. I loved her character, I just wished we saw her and Viella bond more. I thought it was so cute and I was so shocked to find out that Luka is only 19! He’s just a kid himself!! When I picked up this book I thought he would be in his mid-to-late- 20’s to be honest. Maybe even early 30’s, so I couldn’t believe it when I found out his actual age.
Overall, this was a really good fantasy book involving/based on Caribbean Mythology and was very interesting to read. Would recommend to everyone :)
October 22, 2024
FINALLY, a perfect big brother-little sister spin on the bodyguard-princess trope. Oh my heart, I love these two.
There were a couple elements that were in your face at times that I didn't agree with, but SUCH a fun ride. CANNOT wait for book two, when's it coming???
There were a couple elements that were in your face at times that I didn't agree with, but SUCH a fun ride. CANNOT wait for book two, when's it coming???
August 1, 2024
I cannot WAIT for the second book in this series! The Nightward takes you on a rollercoaster ride of a fantasy world that is strewn with references to Caribbean/Trinidad and Tobagonian culture. It sucks you in from the beginning and doesn't let you go!!! I predict a rush when it comes out and people will be begging for the next one!
I was given an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
I was given an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
August 29, 2024
I won this Advanced Reader Copy Uncorrected Proof in a Goodreads Giveaway.
I was sleepy when I picked it up to start reading before going to sleep. It captured my attention and I read for two hours before I couldn't keep my eyes open any longer. It was an entertaining read and just the escapist book I needed. I'm looking forward to more in this series.
I was sleepy when I picked it up to start reading before going to sleep. It captured my attention and I read for two hours before I couldn't keep my eyes open any longer. It was an entertaining read and just the escapist book I needed. I'm looking forward to more in this series.
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November 24, 2024This is well written, and I will definitely be looking for more from this author in the future. There's a lot of interesting things happening in the world-building, and sometimes in the plot, but in the end this just wasn't the right book for me. I felt that there were a lot of very predictable beats in the story, which could have been fine, or even great, as a familiar structure to make the creativity in the world-building and the more unexpected moments in the story stand out. But I felt the world was not explored fully enough to take advantage of this, which in turn made it hard to appreciate when the plot went in a new direction.
I think I would have preferred if the story had leaned much harder into the epic fantasy side of things, taking more time to flesh out the world and the large cast of supporting characters. The science fiction elements in the story may work better for other readers, but as a matter of personal preference I tend to enjoy science fiction-feeling worlds with elements of fantasy blended in, rather than the reverse.
I don't plan to continue this series, but the author is on my radar, and I hope to find work from her that is more my speed in the future.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing an ARC.
I think I would have preferred if the story had leaned much harder into the epic fantasy side of things, taking more time to flesh out the world and the large cast of supporting characters. The science fiction elements in the story may work better for other readers, but as a matter of personal preference I tend to enjoy science fiction-feeling worlds with elements of fantasy blended in, rather than the reverse.
I don't plan to continue this series, but the author is on my radar, and I hope to find work from her that is more my speed in the future.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing an ARC.
September 11, 2024
I won a copy of this book in a goodreads giveaway, and in return I'm leaving my honest review on it. Thank you to goodreads and Harper Voyager for sponsoring the giveaway.
The description of this book immediately piqued my interest. "Caribbean mythology meets 'the Witcher?'" Yes please! Sadly, that's not quite what I got.
While there are characters and creatures that bear some resemblance to figures of Caribbean folklore, it doesn't feel like a very prominent part of the story so much as an external influence on the author's work. I was hoping to see more of a focus on Caribbean mythos, but instead it feels like a suggestion in the background of this book, with its strongest presence being in the later subplot of the river maiden seeking out the River Mama.
And to be honest, I really struggled with reading this book. Have you ever been sitting and chatting with your friends, and they start talking to each other about something that happened at an event they both attended and you skipped? And you understand some of what they're saying, but the full purpose of the conversation eludes you? Yeah, that was how I felt reading the first half of this book. The characters interact with each other and their world, referring to specific objects and location and even political situations that exist in their world, but at no point is there ever any attempt to explain or introduce any of these in-world concepts to the reader, or make the reader understand or care about what the characters are doing. It felt like, instead of using language to draw the reader in, the author was instead having a conversation with the story that the reader simply wasn't part of. Which... isn't great when it's the opening of the first book of a set.
In addition to feeling confused and strangely alienated, I also could not bring myself to care about the characters. The protagonists all felt very simple and flat, with very few personality traits. Viella is a scared child. Luka is angry and loyal. Eleanor is mean and work-obsessed. They're so generic. They feel like cardboard cutouts. C'mon! Give me something to care about!
And despite these generic-feeling characters who are constantly referring to unexplained situations, somehow the book still feels *too busy* to me? Between the fantasy world and mythology vibes and the vague sci-fi references that pop up weirdly randomly, it felt like the book was doing *too many things at once,* and without offering any downtime for the reader to catch up with the narrative. (If you like books that are constant action on every page, you'll love this one!)
I think this book would have been better if it was split into 2 or more books, giving the characters room to engage and grow, and giving the reader the time and space to get to understand the world a little better. As it is, there's just so much happening on the page at all times, but if I don't have a clear understanding of who these people are or what this world is, I can't bring myself to care enough about the action.
Overall, I had a disappointing experience with "the Nightward." Which is really sad, because I loved the concept of it and I had super high hopes of having a fun time reading it. Hopefully other people have better experiences with it.
The description of this book immediately piqued my interest. "Caribbean mythology meets 'the Witcher?'" Yes please! Sadly, that's not quite what I got.
While there are characters and creatures that bear some resemblance to figures of Caribbean folklore, it doesn't feel like a very prominent part of the story so much as an external influence on the author's work. I was hoping to see more of a focus on Caribbean mythos, but instead it feels like a suggestion in the background of this book, with its strongest presence being in the later subplot of the river maiden seeking out the River Mama.
And to be honest, I really struggled with reading this book. Have you ever been sitting and chatting with your friends, and they start talking to each other about something that happened at an event they both attended and you skipped? And you understand some of what they're saying, but the full purpose of the conversation eludes you? Yeah, that was how I felt reading the first half of this book. The characters interact with each other and their world, referring to specific objects and location and even political situations that exist in their world, but at no point is there ever any attempt to explain or introduce any of these in-world concepts to the reader, or make the reader understand or care about what the characters are doing. It felt like, instead of using language to draw the reader in, the author was instead having a conversation with the story that the reader simply wasn't part of. Which... isn't great when it's the opening of the first book of a set.
In addition to feeling confused and strangely alienated, I also could not bring myself to care about the characters. The protagonists all felt very simple and flat, with very few personality traits. Viella is a scared child. Luka is angry and loyal. Eleanor is mean and work-obsessed. They're so generic. They feel like cardboard cutouts. C'mon! Give me something to care about!
And despite these generic-feeling characters who are constantly referring to unexplained situations, somehow the book still feels *too busy* to me? Between the fantasy world and mythology vibes and the vague sci-fi references that pop up weirdly randomly, it felt like the book was doing *too many things at once,* and without offering any downtime for the reader to catch up with the narrative. (If you like books that are constant action on every page, you'll love this one!)
I think this book would have been better if it was split into 2 or more books, giving the characters room to engage and grow, and giving the reader the time and space to get to understand the world a little better. As it is, there's just so much happening on the page at all times, but if I don't have a clear understanding of who these people are or what this world is, I can't bring myself to care enough about the action.
Overall, I had a disappointing experience with "the Nightward." Which is really sad, because I loved the concept of it and I had super high hopes of having a fun time reading it. Hopefully other people have better experiences with it.
October 19, 2024
Thank you to Harper Voyager and NetGalley for the e-ARC in exchange for an honest review
Another Fall 2024 SFF read by an author of color that I wanted to support, but the execution of which I found lacking.
Though THE NIGHTWARD is marketed as being inspired by Caribbean mythology, I got very little sense of unique place when reading. People and settings were described sporadically and vaguely, and I was left feeling like the words were always slipping out of my mind, unable to take shape into anything.
The narration chooses to give readers long, stilted dialogue within which a ton of world-building information is dumped. As a result, I didn't feel like I got to know any of the characters; rather, they seemed to serve only as a vehicle through which Garcia was attempting to world-build. The characters all coalesced into nothing more than unsubtle archetypes: the crotchety, valiant guard; the young and immature tragic princess; the scheming magic tutor.
It's a great premise, but writing weaknesses meant I could not get into the story, and I was left feeling like I couldn't get a hold of the characters, the world, or what's at stake.
Another Fall 2024 SFF read by an author of color that I wanted to support, but the execution of which I found lacking.
Though THE NIGHTWARD is marketed as being inspired by Caribbean mythology, I got very little sense of unique place when reading. People and settings were described sporadically and vaguely, and I was left feeling like the words were always slipping out of my mind, unable to take shape into anything.
The narration chooses to give readers long, stilted dialogue within which a ton of world-building information is dumped. As a result, I didn't feel like I got to know any of the characters; rather, they seemed to serve only as a vehicle through which Garcia was attempting to world-build. The characters all coalesced into nothing more than unsubtle archetypes: the crotchety, valiant guard; the young and immature tragic princess; the scheming magic tutor.
It's a great premise, but writing weaknesses meant I could not get into the story, and I was left feeling like I couldn't get a hold of the characters, the world, or what's at stake.
October 10, 2024
I won this book, and glad I did!
This was a great first book for the Waters of Lethe. I really enjoyed this story. There is so much information that needs to come across, and too few pages to do it. But I still feel like it was a great start and has a lot of potential. It had good world building through the story, and the events were steady. It held my interest throughout. The world was so unique, and I enjoyed learning the roles everyone played in this queendom. You do jump in from the get go. There is definitely some mystery to the things going on, but I rolled with it assuming things get more clear as events play out.(and they did!) I was also very thankful for the glossary in the back, that came in use!
I am really looking forward to the second book, seeing more of this world, and how the events will unfold. Luka and Farain may be my favorites so far. Just saying...I want my own Dagen-cat now 😆.
The ending...wow! It was intense and fast. I could not have predicted and left me needing to know what happens next. There is a lot to uncover in the next book.
Overall great story!
This was a great first book for the Waters of Lethe. I really enjoyed this story. There is so much information that needs to come across, and too few pages to do it. But I still feel like it was a great start and has a lot of potential. It had good world building through the story, and the events were steady. It held my interest throughout. The world was so unique, and I enjoyed learning the roles everyone played in this queendom. You do jump in from the get go. There is definitely some mystery to the things going on, but I rolled with it assuming things get more clear as events play out.(and they did!) I was also very thankful for the glossary in the back, that came in use!
I am really looking forward to the second book, seeing more of this world, and how the events will unfold. Luka and Farain may be my favorites so far. Just saying...I want my own Dagen-cat now 😆.
The ending...wow! It was intense and fast. I could not have predicted and left me needing to know what happens next. There is a lot to uncover in the next book.
Overall great story!
July 24, 2024
Yeah, The Nightward really does deserve all the awards it has been receiving. If anything I expect it to win even more in the future because I simply couldn’t find anything that didn’t fascinate me. R.S.A. Garcia’s world-building was the highlight for me. It was so unique, intricate, and imaginative that I was simply absorbed into the colorful world she had created. Quite honestly, I am simply obsessed with the mastery of craft behind Garcia’s writing. The world was so vast, its politics so fascinating, and its characters so complex, and yet Garcia was painting on her canvas with such ease that elevated my admiration of her work. I am very much looking forward to R.S.A. Garcia’s future novels but I was delighted to find out that I can read her short stories to bridge the gap.
October 21, 2024
Wow!! What a book! Review to come! 🐯
(FINAL REVIEW:)
This was a fantastic start to a new fantasy duology with a smidge of science fiction elements towards the end. I found the world incredibly well defined, the characters fleshed out well, and the magic system intriguing. The book was pitched as a Caribbean mythology inspired world that feels like a mix of The Witcher and Game of Thrones, and if I had to go off those vibes alone (because I still haven’t really watched either series in depth), I would say it emulated those two very well. ⚔️
The book is plot based and so different POVs at times, but the two main ones are the ten year old, Princess Viella, and her nineteen year old bodyguard, Luka. I honestly love the dynamic between these two. As much as Luka gripes about his position, he truly cares for this charge and literally goes to hell and back for her. It was rather refreshing to see a man like this who has a wonderful sibling love for a girl who isn’t related to him by blood. I also really liked that there wasn’t an underlying romantic vibe between the two as that seems to be a trend. 😬
The world itself was diverse wonderfully reflecting the multicultural Caribbean as well as characters who identify openly as queer. I also really loved concept of what a matriarchal world is like, but still letting the reader know that even that kind of world is flawed. The other element that I really enjoyed was the openness to show that religion can be both comforting as well as destructive depending on how one interprets it. 📜
The only thing that I feel like I couldn’t get a good grasp on is the magic system itself, but that doesn’t detract at all from the overall great time that I had while reading this. ❤️
I would definitely recommend this to people who are looking for a Witcher like story that has a diverse cast and world while still having a wonderful talk about gender and what is expected from each. 🏳️🌈
Huge thank you goes to Harper Voyager and NetGalley for accepting my request to read this in exchange for an honest review, and to Garcia for creating an incredible world that just got weirder and weirder in the best possible way. 🗡️
Publication date: October 15, so get it now!!
Overall: 5/5 ⭐️
(FINAL REVIEW:)
This was a fantastic start to a new fantasy duology with a smidge of science fiction elements towards the end. I found the world incredibly well defined, the characters fleshed out well, and the magic system intriguing. The book was pitched as a Caribbean mythology inspired world that feels like a mix of The Witcher and Game of Thrones, and if I had to go off those vibes alone (because I still haven’t really watched either series in depth), I would say it emulated those two very well. ⚔️
The book is plot based and so different POVs at times, but the two main ones are the ten year old, Princess Viella, and her nineteen year old bodyguard, Luka. I honestly love the dynamic between these two. As much as Luka gripes about his position, he truly cares for this charge and literally goes to hell and back for her. It was rather refreshing to see a man like this who has a wonderful sibling love for a girl who isn’t related to him by blood. I also really liked that there wasn’t an underlying romantic vibe between the two as that seems to be a trend. 😬
The world itself was diverse wonderfully reflecting the multicultural Caribbean as well as characters who identify openly as queer. I also really loved concept of what a matriarchal world is like, but still letting the reader know that even that kind of world is flawed. The other element that I really enjoyed was the openness to show that religion can be both comforting as well as destructive depending on how one interprets it. 📜
The only thing that I feel like I couldn’t get a good grasp on is the magic system itself, but that doesn’t detract at all from the overall great time that I had while reading this. ❤️
I would definitely recommend this to people who are looking for a Witcher like story that has a diverse cast and world while still having a wonderful talk about gender and what is expected from each. 🏳️🌈
Huge thank you goes to Harper Voyager and NetGalley for accepting my request to read this in exchange for an honest review, and to Garcia for creating an incredible world that just got weirder and weirder in the best possible way. 🗡️
Publication date: October 15, so get it now!!
Overall: 5/5 ⭐️
August 6, 2024
Long ago, Chaos resigned in Gailand, until the Goddess Gaiea banished those responsible for the Dark, and entrusted the world to those she knew could trust: Women. Only women can possess strong magic, and train from a young age to be warriors or seers. Queens rule Gailand, with the High Queen of Dun acting as Gaiea’s Hand and her heir as Gaiea’s Spirit.
When young Viella is to be confirmed as the High Queen’s heir, there is a coup, and the Queen is murdered. Acting on pure instinct, Veilla’s bodyguard Luka, saves her and whisks her away to safety. However, the two are unsure of who they can trust, and as a man in a woman’s world, Luka already has secrets he must hide if he wants them to stay alive.
Nightward is a political high fantasy that offers a intriguing look at a society completely opposite of what most of us have ever known: a matriarchy, where men are viewed as “less than” and advised to not travel without a woman for protection.
This book was a wild ride with non-stop action and intrigue from the start. At times it gave me Game of Thrones vibes because of many perspectives you get. On one hand I loved seeing all the moving pieces, like a chess board. On the other, it could get overwhelming trying to remember all the names and locations.
The world and magic system are complex, unfolding slowly while reading, and you’re never given a complete or in-depth explanation. This is intentional, as piecing together the origin of the world and its magic are a big part of the main plot for the series, but I still found it a little frustrating. It’s honestly the only thing that kept it from being a five star read.
I loved the characters and all the LGBTQ+ representation in this book. I became very emotionally invested in several of them, especially Viella, and I’m really looking forward to continuing the series (and getting answers to all my questions!!!) Overall: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.5
Pub Date: October 14, 2024
Thank you to NetGalley and Harper Collins for my e-reader copy in exchange for an honest review.
When young Viella is to be confirmed as the High Queen’s heir, there is a coup, and the Queen is murdered. Acting on pure instinct, Veilla’s bodyguard Luka, saves her and whisks her away to safety. However, the two are unsure of who they can trust, and as a man in a woman’s world, Luka already has secrets he must hide if he wants them to stay alive.
Nightward is a political high fantasy that offers a intriguing look at a society completely opposite of what most of us have ever known: a matriarchy, where men are viewed as “less than” and advised to not travel without a woman for protection.
This book was a wild ride with non-stop action and intrigue from the start. At times it gave me Game of Thrones vibes because of many perspectives you get. On one hand I loved seeing all the moving pieces, like a chess board. On the other, it could get overwhelming trying to remember all the names and locations.
The world and magic system are complex, unfolding slowly while reading, and you’re never given a complete or in-depth explanation. This is intentional, as piecing together the origin of the world and its magic are a big part of the main plot for the series, but I still found it a little frustrating. It’s honestly the only thing that kept it from being a five star read.
I loved the characters and all the LGBTQ+ representation in this book. I became very emotionally invested in several of them, especially Viella, and I’m really looking forward to continuing the series (and getting answers to all my questions!!!) Overall: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.5
Pub Date: October 14, 2024
Thank you to NetGalley and Harper Collins for my e-reader copy in exchange for an honest review.
September 16, 2024
The Nightward is a richly imagined novel that combines Caribbean mythology, high fantasy, and elements of science fiction inside an expertly crafted world. Each character is brilliantly written with interesting dynamics between them. Spanning through the perspectives of multiple characters, R.S.A. Garcia creates a story that tears at one's heart and excites them all the same.
With action-packed scenes and high-intensity dialogues, this novel has a movie-like feel that leaves you on the edge of your seat. I recommend it to those who are a fan of 'The Witcher' series and high fantasy.
With action-packed scenes and high-intensity dialogues, this novel has a movie-like feel that leaves you on the edge of your seat. I recommend it to those who are a fan of 'The Witcher' series and high fantasy.
October 10, 2024
Thank you so much to Harper Voyager and Netgalley for the opportunity to read The Nightward as an ARC! This is my first time picking something up by R.S.A. Garcia, but the premise of this book intrigued me so much, I knew I had to give it a shot.
I think the concept of women warrior-magicians ruling the world is phenomenal, and I was really drawn to the Caribbean mythology influence. This novel is classified as "scifantasy", which is a term I haven't heard before (but love! I usually just say sci-fi/fantasy, but scifantasy is way more fun). Although I really enjoyed the fantasy elements, I found the sci-fi/technological bits to feel sort of out of place. I felt like there was a lot I didn't understand about the technological element of this book- and I think I would have preferred if it were fantasy only. Sci-fi as an added layer made things feel a bit too complicated and underexplained for this as the first book in a duology; of course, my opinion on this might change as some elements are expanded upon in the second book, but that is my initial thought.
This book relies pretty heavily on the "chosen one" trope with multiple characters, so if that isn't your thing, you may not be a fan of some of these plot points. I'll be interested to see how this story and these characters develop in the second book- R.S.A Garcia did pull out some twists and turns that I really didn't see coming. and I think there is a lot of growth potential for book 2. Overall, I rated this book as 3 out of 5 stars; if you're a fan of matriarchal societies, magic, and warriors who can mind-speak with animals (particularly warrior cats!), then this might be the book for you. The Nightward releases on October 15th!
I think the concept of women warrior-magicians ruling the world is phenomenal, and I was really drawn to the Caribbean mythology influence. This novel is classified as "scifantasy", which is a term I haven't heard before (but love! I usually just say sci-fi/fantasy, but scifantasy is way more fun). Although I really enjoyed the fantasy elements, I found the sci-fi/technological bits to feel sort of out of place. I felt like there was a lot I didn't understand about the technological element of this book- and I think I would have preferred if it were fantasy only. Sci-fi as an added layer made things feel a bit too complicated and underexplained for this as the first book in a duology; of course, my opinion on this might change as some elements are expanded upon in the second book, but that is my initial thought.
This book relies pretty heavily on the "chosen one" trope with multiple characters, so if that isn't your thing, you may not be a fan of some of these plot points. I'll be interested to see how this story and these characters develop in the second book- R.S.A Garcia did pull out some twists and turns that I really didn't see coming. and I think there is a lot of growth potential for book 2. Overall, I rated this book as 3 out of 5 stars; if you're a fan of matriarchal societies, magic, and warriors who can mind-speak with animals (particularly warrior cats!), then this might be the book for you. The Nightward releases on October 15th!
October 31, 2024
3.5 rounding up. I think it’s very possible that I give the next book in this series a 4/5 ⭐️. This one has hints of greatness and some hints that promise to be a great twist in the next book but it didn’t really deliver here. This has a lot going on and reminds me of a series I read in high school called Arcangel which blends fantasy and sci-fi. It is a very busy book with a lot of different ongoing plotlines but the hardest part is that there’s very little explanation of the world. I’m all for throwing readers in at the deep end but I could have really used a little more context. I was drowning in the terminology and nuances and had no history of any of the conflicts.
When her mother is killed in a coup, Viella escapes with her bodyguard, Luka, and has to find a safe place to hide. However they both quickly realize that the people who lead the coup have unleashed an ancient magic that will stop at nothing to find them.
I love a matriarchal world, and I smiled at one of the lines where a character says something to the extent of “I can’t believe you’d let your husband travel unattended!”. There’s a heavy handedness around trans acceptance and terminology and I really don’t enjoy feeling lectured but it didn’t last very long. I wish I understood more about why men were mistreated or their powers stifled or even witnessed any of the discrimination they were fighting by against. Even until the end I didn’t really grasp what the rebel groups were fighting for but I imagine it’ll clear up in the next book
When her mother is killed in a coup, Viella escapes with her bodyguard, Luka, and has to find a safe place to hide. However they both quickly realize that the people who lead the coup have unleashed an ancient magic that will stop at nothing to find them.
I love a matriarchal world, and I smiled at one of the lines where a character says something to the extent of “I can’t believe you’d let your husband travel unattended!”. There’s a heavy handedness around trans acceptance and terminology and I really don’t enjoy feeling lectured but it didn’t last very long. I wish I understood more about why men were mistreated or their powers stifled or even witnessed any of the discrimination they were fighting by against. Even until the end I didn’t really grasp what the rebel groups were fighting for but I imagine it’ll clear up in the next book
October 9, 2024
3/5 ⭐️
This was pretty disappointing and I found myself wishing it was better as I was reading it. I'll start with the good, the world building. I thought the combination of magic systems, Caribbean mythos, and sci-fi high technology was really interesting and unique. Unfortunately, everything else fell a bit flat for me. The characters felt so one-dimensional and I never found myself caring about any of them. There were also a lot of jumps to different POVs and I kept getting confused who was the POV I was reading at times. The confusion also made it hard for me to really care about anything that was going on.
I think this book would have benefited from being maybe longer in order to give us more time to get to know the characters and the world. I don't know if I'll be continuing on with this series but I appreciate this debut by Garcia.
Thank you to NetGalley, R.S.A. Garcia, and Avon and Harper Voyager for my early access to this.
This was pretty disappointing and I found myself wishing it was better as I was reading it. I'll start with the good, the world building. I thought the combination of magic systems, Caribbean mythos, and sci-fi high technology was really interesting and unique. Unfortunately, everything else fell a bit flat for me. The characters felt so one-dimensional and I never found myself caring about any of them. There were also a lot of jumps to different POVs and I kept getting confused who was the POV I was reading at times. The confusion also made it hard for me to really care about anything that was going on.
I think this book would have benefited from being maybe longer in order to give us more time to get to know the characters and the world. I don't know if I'll be continuing on with this series but I appreciate this debut by Garcia.
Thank you to NetGalley, R.S.A. Garcia, and Avon and Harper Voyager for my early access to this.
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December 11, 2024Don’t really have a lt (anything) to say on this. Would be interested in hearing the thoughts of people that are like engaging with the story (content) rather than “reviewing”. IDK it wasn’t that interesting, but the premise itself is not that compelling to me. Lot of potential in the character dynamics. I don’t think I’ve read the authors short stories but I can see that shining through in select scenes that were quite dynamic.
Like it’s uneven, yea, but everyone is saying that and that itself is not that interesting. The world doesn’t stand out to me in the way that I wanted it to. IDK what do you guys think about the story, someone tell me.
Like it’s uneven, yea, but everyone is saying that and that itself is not that interesting. The world doesn’t stand out to me in the way that I wanted it to. IDK what do you guys think about the story, someone tell me.
October 20, 2024
A Dazzling Debut in the Realm of Scifantasy
In the ever-evolving landscape of speculative fiction, R.S.A. Garcia's "The Nightward" emerges as a brilliant beacon, illuminating the path for a new generation of fantasy enthusiasts. This Nebula and MIFRE award-winning author's debut novel masterfully weaves together elements of Caribbean mythology, high fantasy, and a touch of science fiction, creating a tapestry as rich and vibrant as the world it portrays.
A World of Wonder and Intrigue
Garcia's Gailand is a realm where magic and technology blur, where warrior-magicians rule, and where the echoes of an ancient chaos still reverberate through time. At the heart of this meticulously crafted world is young Princess Viella, the Spirit of Gaiea and heir to the throne. Her journey from a carefree child to a queen on the run forms the pulsing core of this thrilling narrative.
Plot and Pacing: A Relentless Adventure
From Ceremony to Catastrophe
The story kicks off with a bang, quite literally. What should have been a momentous occasion—the Ceremony to confirm Viella as the next Hand of Gaiea—turns into a nightmarish scenario with the assassination of her mother, the Queen. This pivotal event catapults the reader into a breathless adventure, as Viella and her reluctant bodyguard, Luka, flee the court and embark on a perilous journey.
A Race Against Darkness
Garcia's pacing is relentless, with each chapter building upon the last, creating a sense of urgency that keeps the pages turning. The duo's flight from the pursuing darkness is punctuated by encounters with mythical creatures, political intrigue, and personal revelations, ensuring that the story never loses momentum.
Characters: Depth in Diversity
Viella: A Child Queen's Coming of Age
Viella's character arc is a testament to Garcia's skill in crafting believable, multi-dimensional protagonists. We witness her transformation from a somewhat bratty princess to a young queen grappling with newfound responsibilities and latent magical abilities. Her struggles and growth feel authentic, making her an endearing and relatable heroine.
Luka: The Reluctant Protector
Luka's character adds a fascinating layer to the narrative. His internal conflict—torn between resentment for his role and his growing attachment to Viella—provides a mature counterpoint to the young queen's journey. His own secret, hinted at throughout the story, adds an element of mystery that keeps readers intrigued.
A Cast of Colorful Characters
The supporting cast is equally well-developed, from the enigmatic Eleanor to the complex villains whose motivations are slowly revealed. Each character feels distinct and purposeful, contributing to the rich tapestry of the story.
Worldbuilding: A Feast for the Imagination
Caribbean Influences in a Fantasy Realm
One of the standout features of "The Nightward" is its innovative worldbuilding. Garcia draws heavily from Caribbean mythology and culture, infusing the traditional high fantasy setting with a unique flavor. This fresh perspective breathes new life into familiar tropes, creating a world that feels both exotic and familiar.
Magic and Technology: A Delicate Balance
The blending of magic and technology in Gailand is handled with finesse. Garcia introduces concepts like the Nightward and the Portals, seamlessly integrating them into the fabric of her world without overwhelming the reader with exposition.
Themes: Power, Identity, and Destiny
The Nature of Power
At its core, "The Nightward" explores the nature of power—both magical and political. The matriarchal society of Gailand provides a fascinating backdrop for discussions on gender roles, leadership, and the responsibilities that come with authority.
Identity and Belonging
Luka's struggle with his place in a female-dominated world, coupled with Viella's journey to understand her role as the Spirit of Gaiea, delve deep into themes of identity and belonging. These personal conflicts resonate on a universal level, adding emotional depth to the adventure.
Writing Style: Lyrical and Evocative
Garcia's prose is a joy to read. Her descriptions are vivid and evocative, painting a clear picture of Gailand's landscapes and inhabitants without becoming overwrought. The dialogue feels natural and often sparkles with wit, providing welcome moments of levity amidst the tension.
Minor Critiques
Pacing in the Middle
While the overall pacing is strong, there are moments in the middle section where the narrative momentum slightly wavers. However, these lulls are brief and do little to detract from the overall enjoyment of the story.
World Complexity
The richness of Garcia's world occasionally results in information overload, particularly in the early chapters. Some readers might find themselves flipping back to earlier pages to keep track of the various factions and magical concepts.
Final Verdict: A Stellar Debut
"The Nightward" is a triumphant entry into the world of fantasy literature. R.S.A. Garcia has crafted a story that is at once familiar and refreshingly original, populated by characters that leap off the page and a world that begs to be explored further.
In the ever-evolving landscape of speculative fiction, R.S.A. Garcia's "The Nightward" emerges as a brilliant beacon, illuminating the path for a new generation of fantasy enthusiasts. This Nebula and MIFRE award-winning author's debut novel masterfully weaves together elements of Caribbean mythology, high fantasy, and a touch of science fiction, creating a tapestry as rich and vibrant as the world it portrays.
A World of Wonder and Intrigue
Garcia's Gailand is a realm where magic and technology blur, where warrior-magicians rule, and where the echoes of an ancient chaos still reverberate through time. At the heart of this meticulously crafted world is young Princess Viella, the Spirit of Gaiea and heir to the throne. Her journey from a carefree child to a queen on the run forms the pulsing core of this thrilling narrative.
Plot and Pacing: A Relentless Adventure
From Ceremony to Catastrophe
The story kicks off with a bang, quite literally. What should have been a momentous occasion—the Ceremony to confirm Viella as the next Hand of Gaiea—turns into a nightmarish scenario with the assassination of her mother, the Queen. This pivotal event catapults the reader into a breathless adventure, as Viella and her reluctant bodyguard, Luka, flee the court and embark on a perilous journey.
A Race Against Darkness
Garcia's pacing is relentless, with each chapter building upon the last, creating a sense of urgency that keeps the pages turning. The duo's flight from the pursuing darkness is punctuated by encounters with mythical creatures, political intrigue, and personal revelations, ensuring that the story never loses momentum.
Characters: Depth in Diversity
Viella: A Child Queen's Coming of Age
Viella's character arc is a testament to Garcia's skill in crafting believable, multi-dimensional protagonists. We witness her transformation from a somewhat bratty princess to a young queen grappling with newfound responsibilities and latent magical abilities. Her struggles and growth feel authentic, making her an endearing and relatable heroine.
Luka: The Reluctant Protector
Luka's character adds a fascinating layer to the narrative. His internal conflict—torn between resentment for his role and his growing attachment to Viella—provides a mature counterpoint to the young queen's journey. His own secret, hinted at throughout the story, adds an element of mystery that keeps readers intrigued.
A Cast of Colorful Characters
The supporting cast is equally well-developed, from the enigmatic Eleanor to the complex villains whose motivations are slowly revealed. Each character feels distinct and purposeful, contributing to the rich tapestry of the story.
Worldbuilding: A Feast for the Imagination
Caribbean Influences in a Fantasy Realm
One of the standout features of "The Nightward" is its innovative worldbuilding. Garcia draws heavily from Caribbean mythology and culture, infusing the traditional high fantasy setting with a unique flavor. This fresh perspective breathes new life into familiar tropes, creating a world that feels both exotic and familiar.
Magic and Technology: A Delicate Balance
The blending of magic and technology in Gailand is handled with finesse. Garcia introduces concepts like the Nightward and the Portals, seamlessly integrating them into the fabric of her world without overwhelming the reader with exposition.
Themes: Power, Identity, and Destiny
The Nature of Power
At its core, "The Nightward" explores the nature of power—both magical and political. The matriarchal society of Gailand provides a fascinating backdrop for discussions on gender roles, leadership, and the responsibilities that come with authority.
Identity and Belonging
Luka's struggle with his place in a female-dominated world, coupled with Viella's journey to understand her role as the Spirit of Gaiea, delve deep into themes of identity and belonging. These personal conflicts resonate on a universal level, adding emotional depth to the adventure.
Writing Style: Lyrical and Evocative
Garcia's prose is a joy to read. Her descriptions are vivid and evocative, painting a clear picture of Gailand's landscapes and inhabitants without becoming overwrought. The dialogue feels natural and often sparkles with wit, providing welcome moments of levity amidst the tension.
Minor Critiques
Pacing in the Middle
While the overall pacing is strong, there are moments in the middle section where the narrative momentum slightly wavers. However, these lulls are brief and do little to detract from the overall enjoyment of the story.
World Complexity
The richness of Garcia's world occasionally results in information overload, particularly in the early chapters. Some readers might find themselves flipping back to earlier pages to keep track of the various factions and magical concepts.
Final Verdict: A Stellar Debut
"The Nightward" is a triumphant entry into the world of fantasy literature. R.S.A. Garcia has crafted a story that is at once familiar and refreshingly original, populated by characters that leap off the page and a world that begs to be explored further.
October 28, 2024
The Nightward by R.S.A. Garcia is a fascinating blend of fantasy and sci-fi, weaving together Caribbean mythology, political intrigue, and powerful magic in a story that kept me eagerly turning the pages. This debut novel is the start of an exciting duology, and it doesn’t shy away from tackling big themes with depth and complexity. Garcia’s unique world, where warrior-magicians rule and a young princess must face her destiny, pulls you in and leaves you wanting more.
One of the most refreshing aspects of this story is the relationship between our protagonists, Princess Viella and her bodyguard Luka. Viella, though just a child, is burdened with a destiny and the weight of being heir to the throne, while Luka, initially resentful of his assignment, grows into a fiercely protective figure in her life. Their bond is touching and layered, entirely platonic but deeply meaningful—a welcome departure from the usual tropes in fantasy. Watching their relationship develop against a backdrop of betrayal and danger added so much emotional depth to the story.
The political intrigue and the villains in The Nightward are also wonderfully executed. Garcia throws in twists and turns that kept me guessing and added layers of tension as Viella and Luka navigate the treacherous Queendom. The sci-fi elements start emerging later in the book, blurring the lines between magic and technology, and I can’t wait to see how this plays out in the second book. The combination of fantasy with these futuristic elements gives The Nightward a unique flavor that sets it apart.
However, my main critique is the world-building, which felt a bit lacking in terms of clarity. As someone who reads a lot of fantasy, I would have loved a map or more detailed explanations of the regions and locations referenced throughout the story. The magic system, while intriguing, also left me wanting more—there were mentions of various magics, but I found myself wishing for a deeper understanding of how it all works and affects this world.
The Nightward is a beautifully written, gripping start to a new series. Garcia delivers strong characters, well-crafted intrigue, and a world brimming with potential. I’m eagerly awaiting the second book to see how Viella and Luka’s journey unfolds, especially with the promises of more sci-fi elements and world revelations.
Thank you to Storygram Tours, Harper Voyager, and the author for providing me with an ARC of this book. All opinions are my own.
One of the most refreshing aspects of this story is the relationship between our protagonists, Princess Viella and her bodyguard Luka. Viella, though just a child, is burdened with a destiny and the weight of being heir to the throne, while Luka, initially resentful of his assignment, grows into a fiercely protective figure in her life. Their bond is touching and layered, entirely platonic but deeply meaningful—a welcome departure from the usual tropes in fantasy. Watching their relationship develop against a backdrop of betrayal and danger added so much emotional depth to the story.
The political intrigue and the villains in The Nightward are also wonderfully executed. Garcia throws in twists and turns that kept me guessing and added layers of tension as Viella and Luka navigate the treacherous Queendom. The sci-fi elements start emerging later in the book, blurring the lines between magic and technology, and I can’t wait to see how this plays out in the second book. The combination of fantasy with these futuristic elements gives The Nightward a unique flavor that sets it apart.
However, my main critique is the world-building, which felt a bit lacking in terms of clarity. As someone who reads a lot of fantasy, I would have loved a map or more detailed explanations of the regions and locations referenced throughout the story. The magic system, while intriguing, also left me wanting more—there were mentions of various magics, but I found myself wishing for a deeper understanding of how it all works and affects this world.
The Nightward is a beautifully written, gripping start to a new series. Garcia delivers strong characters, well-crafted intrigue, and a world brimming with potential. I’m eagerly awaiting the second book to see how Viella and Luka’s journey unfolds, especially with the promises of more sci-fi elements and world revelations.
Thank you to Storygram Tours, Harper Voyager, and the author for providing me with an ARC of this book. All opinions are my own.
October 17, 2024
Thank you to Netgalley and Harper Voyager for the e-ARC!
Viella, the heir presumptive to the high Queen of Gailand, is forced to go on the run with her bodyguard Luka after a violent coup results in the overthrow of her mother's court. She is forced to contend with the agents of Chaos while awaiting the awakening of her own magic called 'the Boon'. And her bodyguard may have some secrets of his own....
It took me a while to get into the story but, by the end I did really enjoy 'The Nightward'. Garcia's writing reminds me of Dune in the best ways possible (and that is high praise!). There is a nice blending of epic fantasy and science fiction that makes you wonder about the mechanics of the world. I enjoyed the cast of characters and teasing out their various motivations. I will say at times some of the characters felt more like archetypes rather than actual people. However, I think that is fitting for how Garcia is constructing this story. The ending was excellent with a cliffhanger that definitely has me intrigued to see what happens next. Oh and the trans rep was A+!
My only complaints are that the pacing of the plot was rather slow and repetitive at times. I feel certain parts could have been cut without sacrificing anything from the overall story. I still highly recommend this book, and I am grateful we only have to wait a year for the sequel.
Viella, the heir presumptive to the high Queen of Gailand, is forced to go on the run with her bodyguard Luka after a violent coup results in the overthrow of her mother's court. She is forced to contend with the agents of Chaos while awaiting the awakening of her own magic called 'the Boon'. And her bodyguard may have some secrets of his own....
It took me a while to get into the story but, by the end I did really enjoy 'The Nightward'. Garcia's writing reminds me of Dune in the best ways possible (and that is high praise!). There is a nice blending of epic fantasy and science fiction that makes you wonder about the mechanics of the world. I enjoyed the cast of characters and teasing out their various motivations. I will say at times some of the characters felt more like archetypes rather than actual people. However, I think that is fitting for how Garcia is constructing this story. The ending was excellent with a cliffhanger that definitely has me intrigued to see what happens next. Oh and the trans rep was A+!
My only complaints are that the pacing of the plot was rather slow and repetitive at times. I feel certain parts could have been cut without sacrificing anything from the overall story. I still highly recommend this book, and I am grateful we only have to wait a year for the sequel.
October 9, 2024
I won an uncorrected proof copy in a giveaway on this site. I have read this book all the way through.
First of all, I am really frustrated that the sequel doesn't come out for another year (Fall 2025).
My main thoughts after finishing: I loved this. It was engaging from the first chapter, pretty fast paced. The magic and court system is unique. Though I have a lot of questions about the universe, but I'm assuming those are things that the sequel will address.
The Nightward has a matriarchal society, which is something I haven't seen a lot of in books. What is really unique, though I'm hoping we see more of in the sequel, is non-binary/trans/genderfluid/etc. folks ('the Unbound') have more magic than others. (As someone who falls into that category, I'm intrigued.) I don't really like summarizing books a lot in reviews, but there are epic journeys, ancient magic re-awakening, royal coups, magic users of various types, cats people ride into battle...what more do you need to hear?
R.S.A. Garcia has made a new fan out of me.
(The publication page of my uncorrected proof copy contains a map credit; I'm really hoping the final copy contains that map.)
First of all, I am really frustrated that the sequel doesn't come out for another year (Fall 2025).
My main thoughts after finishing: I loved this. It was engaging from the first chapter, pretty fast paced. The magic and court system is unique. Though I have a lot of questions about the universe, but I'm assuming those are things that the sequel will address.
The Nightward has a matriarchal society, which is something I haven't seen a lot of in books. What is really unique, though I'm hoping we see more of in the sequel, is non-binary/trans/genderfluid/etc. folks ('the Unbound') have more magic than others. (As someone who falls into that category, I'm intrigued.) I don't really like summarizing books a lot in reviews, but there are epic journeys, ancient magic re-awakening, royal coups, magic users of various types, cats people ride into battle...what more do you need to hear?
R.S.A. Garcia has made a new fan out of me.
(The publication page of my uncorrected proof copy contains a map credit; I'm really hoping the final copy contains that map.)
September 26, 2024
Incredibly inventive and fun, this book seamlessly melds fantasy with science fiction in the most intriguing of ways. It starts off as what seems like a purely secondary=world fantasy, but then along come some hints and clues--and I'm eagerly awaiting the next book to find out how these things are linked, because I'm hooked!
"Nightward" starts with a bang, too. From the start, you're thrown into a full-blown world, with new terms and categories and such, which I love! And while you may wait a while for some of those terms to be described, never fear--they are. And those descriptions only made the plot more twisty and inventive. The author's mastery of plot and voice carried me through any discomfort from my "unknowing."Tthe varying points of view are well-chosen and clear, with each definitely a real person.
But that ending! It's a fast race as so many things come to a head, and more secrets are revealed...and yet there's another whole book to come! More secrets, more turn-abouts, more character revelations. I can't wait!
You'll love this book if you like distinctive secondary world fantasies, political intrigue, unique magic systems, and inclusive world=building.
"Nightward" starts with a bang, too. From the start, you're thrown into a full-blown world, with new terms and categories and such, which I love! And while you may wait a while for some of those terms to be described, never fear--they are. And those descriptions only made the plot more twisty and inventive. The author's mastery of plot and voice carried me through any discomfort from my "unknowing."Tthe varying points of view are well-chosen and clear, with each definitely a real person.
But that ending! It's a fast race as so many things come to a head, and more secrets are revealed...and yet there's another whole book to come! More secrets, more turn-abouts, more character revelations. I can't wait!
You'll love this book if you like distinctive secondary world fantasies, political intrigue, unique magic systems, and inclusive world=building.
September 30, 2024
Calling this now, this is going to be a stealth hit of the fall. I was already a sucker for the kind of palace intrigue the summary describes, and then with the full scale of the reveal of what the magic is in this world and what they are about to unleash, I was all the way in. The cliffhanger this book ends on is particularly cruel, but that just means it gets to go buck wild next book. Pick this up and enjoy the ride.
September 15, 2024
I think this is the first time I’ve been sad about getting an ARC. (Thank you to the publisher for my copy!) The first book doesn’t even release until next month so who knows how long I’ll have to wait for the second! The anticipation is going to kill me! I was a little hesitant at the start but I am FASCINATED with the turn this book has taken! Such cool world building!
August 19, 2024
*I received this book for free from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.*
You know what? I just don’t want to read this any more. I’m a bit sad about it, because this was one of my most-anticipated books – I was RABID to read it! But. I’m bored, and I don’t care, and there are some objectively cool things going on that are just not grabbing me, for some reason. I made it to 38%; that’s a lot more than my usual cut-off point, at 20%. But the extra pages didn’t make a difference for me.
The writing is fine: very readable, very easy, but nothing special, and lacking the lushness I’m always hoping for. The magic is so simplistic. As is the matriarchy I was so excited about; women are warriors, men are oppressed (and also warriors), Oh No. (Not that we see said oppression? There’s some semi-nasty comments about men from literally one person, and it’s implied that men aren’t taught as much magic, but 38% of the way through this book I still didn’t know how men are oppressed – I was just told, not shown, that they were. Can they not inherit property? Are they banned from certain professions? Are they objectified, does the law not recognise that men can be raped by women, are they considered less intelligent, what???)(For that matter, I don’t get how this is a matriarchy; we have queens, and women warriors, but men are warriors too, and if you made all the women into men you’d never spot the difference from a generic Fantasy patriarchy, this is boring and also stupid.) Of course it’s an Evil Man who murders the queen and steals the throne (albeit not for himself); of course his partner is a woman who feels she was passed over as queen. And where is the Caribbean influence? So much of this set-up seems ripped directly from the (historically INaccurate) collective hallucination that is SFF’s idea of Medieval Europe. (Dressing characters in saris and having warrior women named after the Dahomey Amazons is just set-dressing, not fundamental worldbuilding.) And why do you even HAVE princesses/princes when the monarchy isn’t hereditary? Why is the Queen Mother a position of influence when she wasn’t chosen as queen, her daughter was? This whole set-up should be wildly different; the worldbuilding is so inconsistent, it doesn’t fit together, ARGH.
(And why Gaiea? Why? That’s such a cliche. I disapprove of cringe culture immensely, but folx, anyone using Gaia/Gaiea as an All-Goddess figure in a secondary world setting makes me cringe so hard.)(I got excited for this book before there was a blurb, okay, I didn’t know.)
Bonus, stupid contradictory details, like someone moving ‘soundlessly’ despite being decked in anklets and bracelets. OKAY. Or – again, in a secondary world setting, where names I recognise SHOULD NOT EXIST – names like Sophia and Frances and Elise existing right alongside Viella and Valan. Or, supposedly experienced warriors thinking it’s better to remove an arrow still in the wound, when that is the thing you must absolutely not do until you’re with a doctor who can deal with it; and seriously suggesting that TWO PEOPLE are enough to get the queen where she needs to go while her queendom’s under threat
THAT BEING SAID.
It’s clear that there is a huge, world-changing mystery lying beneath Gailand’s history; the magical portals are actually teleportation technology, and the oraculars are something like mobile phones + holograms. ‘Property of Genetech’ is a gigantic clue that Something Is Up. Gailand’s legends have Gaiea overthrowing ‘the Masters’ – perhaps some corporation or other entity that set up Gailand as an experiment, or some kind of wildlife reserve, or something even stranger. And yet, the Dark is objectively real, so this IS a matter of demons and magic too. This should be SO INCREDIBLY INTERESTING, and for the right reader, it absolutely will be.
But not for me. The story moves quickly, but not in a direction I cared about; the clues for What Is Up were coming far too slowly to hold my interest. The worldbuilding does not hold up in my eyes, so I don’t really care about it for its own sake. And the characters are nice, sure, but bland. Nothing about them stands out: honourable warrior, honourable warrior, 9 year old whose maturity spikes and dips from moment to moment (although to be fair, she’s been through a lot recently, which would mess up most 9yos). I suspect Luka might not be cis, but it’s already clear that Gailand has no room for nonbinary people and I’m not interested in seeing Luka have to fight for acceptance on that front as well (he’s already lesser because, you know, man in a matriarchy).
It just…all fell so flat. Maybe Nightward becomes EPIC in the second half, maybe we would learn more about Genetech and the reveal will be SO COOL…but that’s just not enough of an incentive when the first half is so meh, when I don’t care about the cast, when the worldbuilding bores and annoys me.
Some readers will love this, undoubtedly. I’m sad I’m not one of them.
You know what? I just don’t want to read this any more. I’m a bit sad about it, because this was one of my most-anticipated books – I was RABID to read it! But. I’m bored, and I don’t care, and there are some objectively cool things going on that are just not grabbing me, for some reason. I made it to 38%; that’s a lot more than my usual cut-off point, at 20%. But the extra pages didn’t make a difference for me.
The writing is fine: very readable, very easy, but nothing special, and lacking the lushness I’m always hoping for. The magic is so simplistic. As is the matriarchy I was so excited about; women are warriors, men are oppressed (and also warriors), Oh No. (Not that we see said oppression? There’s some semi-nasty comments about men from literally one person, and it’s implied that men aren’t taught as much magic, but 38% of the way through this book I still didn’t know how men are oppressed – I was just told, not shown, that they were. Can they not inherit property? Are they banned from certain professions? Are they objectified, does the law not recognise that men can be raped by women, are they considered less intelligent, what???)(For that matter, I don’t get how this is a matriarchy; we have queens, and women warriors, but men are warriors too, and if you made all the women into men you’d never spot the difference from a generic Fantasy patriarchy, this is boring and also stupid.) Of course it’s an Evil Man who murders the queen and steals the throne (albeit not for himself); of course his partner is a woman who feels she was passed over as queen. And where is the Caribbean influence? So much of this set-up seems ripped directly from the (historically INaccurate) collective hallucination that is SFF’s idea of Medieval Europe. (Dressing characters in saris and having warrior women named after the Dahomey Amazons is just set-dressing, not fundamental worldbuilding.) And why do you even HAVE princesses/princes when the monarchy isn’t hereditary? Why is the Queen Mother a position of influence when she wasn’t chosen as queen, her daughter was? This whole set-up should be wildly different; the worldbuilding is so inconsistent, it doesn’t fit together, ARGH.
(And why Gaiea? Why? That’s such a cliche. I disapprove of cringe culture immensely, but folx, anyone using Gaia/Gaiea as an All-Goddess figure in a secondary world setting makes me cringe so hard.)(I got excited for this book before there was a blurb, okay, I didn’t know.)
Bonus, stupid contradictory details, like someone moving ‘soundlessly’ despite being decked in anklets and bracelets. OKAY. Or – again, in a secondary world setting, where names I recognise SHOULD NOT EXIST – names like Sophia and Frances and Elise existing right alongside Viella and Valan. Or, supposedly experienced warriors thinking it’s better to remove an arrow still in the wound, when that is the thing you must absolutely not do until you’re with a doctor who can deal with it; and seriously suggesting that TWO PEOPLE are enough to get the queen where she needs to go while her queendom’s under threat
THAT BEING SAID.
It’s clear that there is a huge, world-changing mystery lying beneath Gailand’s history; the magical portals are actually teleportation technology, and the oraculars are something like mobile phones + holograms. ‘Property of Genetech’ is a gigantic clue that Something Is Up. Gailand’s legends have Gaiea overthrowing ‘the Masters’ – perhaps some corporation or other entity that set up Gailand as an experiment, or some kind of wildlife reserve, or something even stranger. And yet, the Dark is objectively real, so this IS a matter of demons and magic too. This should be SO INCREDIBLY INTERESTING, and for the right reader, it absolutely will be.
But not for me. The story moves quickly, but not in a direction I cared about; the clues for What Is Up were coming far too slowly to hold my interest. The worldbuilding does not hold up in my eyes, so I don’t really care about it for its own sake. And the characters are nice, sure, but bland. Nothing about them stands out: honourable warrior, honourable warrior, 9 year old whose maturity spikes and dips from moment to moment (although to be fair, she’s been through a lot recently, which would mess up most 9yos). I suspect Luka might not be cis, but it’s already clear that Gailand has no room for nonbinary people and I’m not interested in seeing Luka have to fight for acceptance on that front as well (he’s already lesser because, you know, man in a matriarchy).
It just…all fell so flat. Maybe Nightward becomes EPIC in the second half, maybe we would learn more about Genetech and the reveal will be SO COOL…but that’s just not enough of an incentive when the first half is so meh, when I don’t care about the cast, when the worldbuilding bores and annoys me.
Some readers will love this, undoubtedly. I’m sad I’m not one of them.
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