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Seal of the King
The battle between dark and light rages and the world is on the cusp of a tipping point. Will an age of darkness befall mankind or will the light prevail? David and Aurora have seen visions of each other their entire lives but never met, until now. Aurora a fearsome warrior and David a simple farmer are thrust into the heart of the battle. An ancient prophecy foretells of their final showdown with the Dark One. Will their faith be strong enough for them to prevail? Join them as they embark on their journey to the lair of the beast knowing they may never return.
750 pages, Paperback
First published July 24, 2013
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October 29, 2016
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3 stars
Interesting concept. I liked the idea of creating an epic fantasy novel using christianity, the battle of good and evil, dark and light.....and this would have been a fantastic book but there were far too many problems that kept it from reaching it's highest potential.
The biggest problem I see here is the author seems to have trapped his characters within a set of seriously high moral codes and standards making them saints! Flawless! Perfect! They don't make mistakes, get hurt, hurt others, etc etc... hell even superman had kryptonite!
This is all fine and dandy but it tends to make the story a bit dull. Especially since this thing is 750 pages. I'm all for the nice story of two people on a journey, but there is just so much one can read of it. I mean, things should happen on the journey..big things...things that aren't easily resolved. JMO.
This book is also pristine clean. I don't mind this since there is plenty of sweetness to make up for it, but it does get old pretty fast. I mean how many times can two people cup each others faces or hold hands? Oh and even though they get married at 30% they don't do anything until about 80% and when they do we don't get details. A bit disappointing but expected.
The beginning started out really good, even though the writing and dialog was very stiff and robotic. It eventually got a little better, but not much. It was too proper, and it didn't seem like "real people" were talking sometimes... they spoke too perfect, too polite..too polished.
I did love the romance and the fact both MC's were virgins and were meant for each other since before they were born. I love that. I tell you it makes me wonder if the author is truly a man or a woman writing under a man's name because the romance was so sweet, and not like anything I have seen writen by a man before. Anyway..
About 30% the story hits a lull and doesn't pick up again until 65%. After the Satan showdown, the book gets boring again and stays boring until the end. Seriously this book could have been 300 pages shorter.
The hero was truly perfect in every way his character clearly the most developed and complex. The heroine was flat and underdeveloped. I didn't feel she was a warrior, I didn't beieve she was.. something about her was just off.
I will say I did like it overall.. it was low angst and had sweet romance. (no sex) but some sensual momments. There is tons of bible references, lots of Lord this and Lord that, so if that type of stuff doesn't bother you.. give it a go.
0 saftey issues
3 stars
Interesting concept. I liked the idea of creating an epic fantasy novel using christianity, the battle of good and evil, dark and light.....and this would have been a fantastic book but there were far too many problems that kept it from reaching it's highest potential.
The biggest problem I see here is the author seems to have trapped his characters within a set of seriously high moral codes and standards making them saints! Flawless! Perfect! They don't make mistakes, get hurt, hurt others, etc etc... hell even superman had kryptonite!
This is all fine and dandy but it tends to make the story a bit dull. Especially since this thing is 750 pages. I'm all for the nice story of two people on a journey, but there is just so much one can read of it. I mean, things should happen on the journey..big things...things that aren't easily resolved. JMO.
This book is also pristine clean. I don't mind this since there is plenty of sweetness to make up for it, but it does get old pretty fast. I mean how many times can two people cup each others faces or hold hands? Oh and even though they get married at 30% they don't do anything until about 80% and when they do we don't get details. A bit disappointing but expected.
The beginning started out really good, even though the writing and dialog was very stiff and robotic. It eventually got a little better, but not much. It was too proper, and it didn't seem like "real people" were talking sometimes... they spoke too perfect, too polite..too polished.
I did love the romance and the fact both MC's were virgins and were meant for each other since before they were born. I love that. I tell you it makes me wonder if the author is truly a man or a woman writing under a man's name because the romance was so sweet, and not like anything I have seen writen by a man before. Anyway..
About 30% the story hits a lull and doesn't pick up again until 65%. After the Satan showdown, the book gets boring again and stays boring until the end. Seriously this book could have been 300 pages shorter.
The hero was truly perfect in every way his character clearly the most developed and complex. The heroine was flat and underdeveloped. I didn't feel she was a warrior, I didn't beieve she was.. something about her was just off.
I will say I did like it overall.. it was low angst and had sweet romance. (no sex) but some sensual momments. There is tons of bible references, lots of Lord this and Lord that, so if that type of stuff doesn't bother you.. give it a go.
0 saftey issues
July 26, 2021
Dnf
I'm really surprised at the sexual content in this considering it's not only a Christian book, but it won some kind of award for being "spirit-filled christian fiction" or something like that. Starting out, it seemed promising, but then there was a make-out scene that made me uncomfortable. I decided to skip way ahead closer to the end and there was a bedroom scene that lasted way too long and went into way too much detail. Granted, the characters were married and it wasn't a full-blown sex scene, but I've never read something like that in a Christian book.
I'm really surprised at the sexual content in this considering it's not only a Christian book, but it won some kind of award for being "spirit-filled christian fiction" or something like that. Starting out, it seemed promising, but then there was a make-out scene that made me uncomfortable. I decided to skip way ahead closer to the end and there was a bedroom scene that lasted way too long and went into way too much detail. Granted, the characters were married and it wasn't a full-blown sex scene, but I've never read something like that in a Christian book.
Shelved as 'dnf'
August 9, 2020DNF at 20%
I'm always looking for assertive warrior heroines and I thought this book focused on one, but it doesn't. Although the heroine does indeed carry weapons and know how to fight, the story is definitely more focused on the hero who is just discovering this whole new world. She's the experienced fighter but there is still a very typical (and outdated) man-woman relationship where he feels it's necessary to protect her from any threat and she cries and looks down in shame and embarrassment all the time.
Also the heavily religious plot.
Not a terrible book, just not what I'm looking for.
I'm always looking for assertive warrior heroines and I thought this book focused on one, but it doesn't. Although the heroine does indeed carry weapons and know how to fight, the story is definitely more focused on the hero who is just discovering this whole new world. She's the experienced fighter but there is still a very typical (and outdated) man-woman relationship where he feels it's necessary to protect her from any threat and she cries and looks down in shame and embarrassment all the time.
Also the heavily religious plot.
Not a terrible book, just not what I'm looking for.
May 23, 2014
I "bought" Seal of the King as a free offering from Amazon. The description grabbed me as it falls in the genre of Christian fantasy, a supernatural thriller, spiritual warfare, all genres that I love.
Without any warning or foreknowledge on my part or the author's, I received an email from him on the same day I downloaded this book from Amazon. He had googled, Christian fiction review, and my blog name came up in the search results.
The first thing I noticed is that you hit the ground running. Smith wastes no time setting the stage for what is to come, introducing you to David and his world and Aurora and hers, the latter hundreds of years in the past. What ties these two descriptions together is the account of them having grown up with each others childhood and adolescence as visions of each other. They both grow up knowing, liking and ultimately loving each other even before they met in real life.
You have just gotten used to this when their worlds collide and they meet in David's world. Here the plot really revs up and so does the action. We experience further development of David and Aurora's relationship now they are in the same reality, and the background to the war they are in and what brought them together. Aurora understands more of her side of things while poor David gets the raw end of the stick by being thrown in the deep end and has to catch on fast. And fast he does.
Smith's two protagonists are central to everything and around which every revolves. David very quickly is transformed from a simple farmer to one very strong, chivalrous warrior and this is enhanced by this love for Aurora. Since their meeting in his world, and him learning how their worlds are connected and intertwined, his warrior traits seem to have been awakened as if previously dormant. They are further developed once he has a supernatural encounter with God and is imbued with special abilities that will aid him on his quest.
Aurora has been a one man band forced to survive on her own, she learnt to suppress her vulnerabilities until she meets David. In one sense, she has had to put her femininity on hold, there is no room for this in the fight to survive, fight against the dark forces that are invading her land and want her dead at all costs. No man has ever been able to get close to her and it is this hardened exterior that most men have not been able to penetrate or as others have stated "tame". Only in David, has she met her match, as described by her friend, Matilda. We also find from Aurora herself that once she realises that David does love her, that she is willing to let go of this hard exterior and be vulnerable and feminine to herself and David. However, she is able at a moments notice put on her warrior exterior when the time requires.
Smith has developed these two as believable and relational people. Both strong personalities, both determined in their different ways, both committed to God, both have vulnerabilities towards each other and strengths that complement each other. In an interview with David Bergsland (author), Smith stated,
I wanted David and Aurora to be regular people with fears and doubts, but because, in spite of their tragedies, they remained faithful they were blessed with gifts.They aren’t seeking glory or authority and don’t really want the responsibility they were given. But because they are faithful and obedient, the Lord blessed them. They are humbled that he has chosen them and recognize that they are servants of the light not lords over it.It is because of their compassion for others, even those who were seduced by the dark, that they succeed.
This is one of many strengths of this novel. This shines through in its entirety and is very refreshing and encouraging. Smith seems to be encouraging us that this is how we should be living our Christian walk, being faithful and obedient to the Lord despite our circumstances and our personal feelings.
While reading this novel, I felt uplifted and encouraged. Smith's style and passion for God are clearly evident and forms a backbone to the world he had deposited you in. Again, in the Bergsland interview he states,
One of the main reasons I wrote the book was to show people who struggle with their faith that a Godly relationship is full of passion. That love that comes from God is pure, loyal and faithful, a small reflection of the love He has for us.
I also wanted to show through the story how trusting in Him, even when we can’t see where He is taking us, means we always have hope. That if we open our hearts to his will and follow it he will always be with us.
I think for many people today reconciling how God works in our lives is difficult. With all the secular information overload today, it is a very confusing time. I felt that using a fantasy story to capture peoples imaginations that through the story and how the characters act, not so much what they say, God willing, I might help some people to see what how and why we do what we do is just as important as what we do.
Just as our characters are in a battle between good and evil so are we. We are battling for the hearts and minds of our youth who are being overwhelmed with information, books, songs, music, tv, movies etc.
We are David in that battle against Goliath and hope to find the rock God has laid there.
Another area that impressed me very much and again was very refreshing concerned the area of sexual integrity and purity. Smith has portrayed the relationship between David and Aurora based on Agape love that is God based and God designed and inspired. This does not ignore their sinful nature or their desire for each other even before they are married. I would say that all physical desire that they exhibit towards one another flows not from the lust that is promoted in the media and societal standards or dictated by their fallen nature, but from their faithfulness and obedience to God. They want to honour God in all they do. They want to experience their sexuality as God intended in the area of marriage where God has placed it. There are so many times where their desire for each, as an expression of their love for one another, became intense and could have led to sexual sin, but they reminded each other of their commitment to God and to each other in regards to this. I asked Smith about this via Skype and this is what he had to say,
I believe that a love that comes from God is more passionate than just a sexual encounter and too often in movies and TV there is an idea promoted that forbidden lust is somehow more exciting.......
Paul tells husbands and wives not to deny each other so the idea of a Godly relationship being passionate is not counter to our faith I don't think..... I have had several readers tell me how the story helped them with their faith and that is the best compliment I could ever hope for....when I wrote it my target audience was young adult to 20 and 30 year olds hoping I could use the fantasy element to give them some insights into how reconcile being a Christian in today's society. Somehow I seem to have achieved a broader appeal based on the feedback.
Smith's account of Aurora and David's wedding night comes close to eroticism, but no lines are crossed, it is tastefully written, no smut and again Smith has done this to show that the sexual relationship between a married couple with a righteous relationship with God is not one based on erotic love, lust or just a sexual act, but on Agape love that comes from God.
All through the novel, Smith shines with his depiction of romance. If he ever branches out and writes in the Christian romance genre, I will follow him. Again, it is refreshing to have a Christian male author show romance from a male point of view. It is very much based on placing the other more important than himself and being a servant to the other, but not servant as we interpret it in today's society. It is very chivalrous, without being condescending and honours the integrity and dignity of the other as a person and their gender as well as honour himself and the male gender and show what a Godly man can be compared to what we see in today's society.
I pray that Ralph's depiction of romance and sexuality will encourage the 20-30 age group and even those older to consider that romance, sexuality and relationships are worth doing it God's way and not man's way.
The supernatural aspects of this novel are very compelling and engaging as well, both from those visitations and interactions between God and His angels and those of the Dark One, his minions and its evil consequences. The account of David and Aurora travelling to Tartaros to deal with the Dark One, their torture, and spiritual mind games in order to have them submit and worship him is very oppressive, dark and creepy. I loved the twist where David double crossed the Dark One. The spiritual warfare aspect of being obedient and faithful to God and letting God fight this battle is very biblical and a further encouragement to live by faith and not by sight or in our strength.
When I spoke to Ralph via Skype he asked me how I found the novel. I replied,
Ralph, it is just a wonderful tale, positive, uplifting, sobering, entertaining, educating, honors God and His word, true spiritual warfare.
I like what David Bergsland said in his review and I totally agree with him,
This one was just fun. I enjoyed it so much I’m still rereading parts because it’s hard to let them go.
This book stays with you after you finish it and it is hard leaving David's and Aurora's world.
I look forward immensely to the next books in the series.
Highly Recommended
Without any warning or foreknowledge on my part or the author's, I received an email from him on the same day I downloaded this book from Amazon. He had googled, Christian fiction review, and my blog name came up in the search results.
The first thing I noticed is that you hit the ground running. Smith wastes no time setting the stage for what is to come, introducing you to David and his world and Aurora and hers, the latter hundreds of years in the past. What ties these two descriptions together is the account of them having grown up with each others childhood and adolescence as visions of each other. They both grow up knowing, liking and ultimately loving each other even before they met in real life.
You have just gotten used to this when their worlds collide and they meet in David's world. Here the plot really revs up and so does the action. We experience further development of David and Aurora's relationship now they are in the same reality, and the background to the war they are in and what brought them together. Aurora understands more of her side of things while poor David gets the raw end of the stick by being thrown in the deep end and has to catch on fast. And fast he does.
Smith's two protagonists are central to everything and around which every revolves. David very quickly is transformed from a simple farmer to one very strong, chivalrous warrior and this is enhanced by this love for Aurora. Since their meeting in his world, and him learning how their worlds are connected and intertwined, his warrior traits seem to have been awakened as if previously dormant. They are further developed once he has a supernatural encounter with God and is imbued with special abilities that will aid him on his quest.
Aurora has been a one man band forced to survive on her own, she learnt to suppress her vulnerabilities until she meets David. In one sense, she has had to put her femininity on hold, there is no room for this in the fight to survive, fight against the dark forces that are invading her land and want her dead at all costs. No man has ever been able to get close to her and it is this hardened exterior that most men have not been able to penetrate or as others have stated "tame". Only in David, has she met her match, as described by her friend, Matilda. We also find from Aurora herself that once she realises that David does love her, that she is willing to let go of this hard exterior and be vulnerable and feminine to herself and David. However, she is able at a moments notice put on her warrior exterior when the time requires.
Smith has developed these two as believable and relational people. Both strong personalities, both determined in their different ways, both committed to God, both have vulnerabilities towards each other and strengths that complement each other. In an interview with David Bergsland (author), Smith stated,
I wanted David and Aurora to be regular people with fears and doubts, but because, in spite of their tragedies, they remained faithful they were blessed with gifts.They aren’t seeking glory or authority and don’t really want the responsibility they were given. But because they are faithful and obedient, the Lord blessed them. They are humbled that he has chosen them and recognize that they are servants of the light not lords over it.It is because of their compassion for others, even those who were seduced by the dark, that they succeed.
This is one of many strengths of this novel. This shines through in its entirety and is very refreshing and encouraging. Smith seems to be encouraging us that this is how we should be living our Christian walk, being faithful and obedient to the Lord despite our circumstances and our personal feelings.
While reading this novel, I felt uplifted and encouraged. Smith's style and passion for God are clearly evident and forms a backbone to the world he had deposited you in. Again, in the Bergsland interview he states,
One of the main reasons I wrote the book was to show people who struggle with their faith that a Godly relationship is full of passion. That love that comes from God is pure, loyal and faithful, a small reflection of the love He has for us.
I also wanted to show through the story how trusting in Him, even when we can’t see where He is taking us, means we always have hope. That if we open our hearts to his will and follow it he will always be with us.
I think for many people today reconciling how God works in our lives is difficult. With all the secular information overload today, it is a very confusing time. I felt that using a fantasy story to capture peoples imaginations that through the story and how the characters act, not so much what they say, God willing, I might help some people to see what how and why we do what we do is just as important as what we do.
Just as our characters are in a battle between good and evil so are we. We are battling for the hearts and minds of our youth who are being overwhelmed with information, books, songs, music, tv, movies etc.
We are David in that battle against Goliath and hope to find the rock God has laid there.
Another area that impressed me very much and again was very refreshing concerned the area of sexual integrity and purity. Smith has portrayed the relationship between David and Aurora based on Agape love that is God based and God designed and inspired. This does not ignore their sinful nature or their desire for each other even before they are married. I would say that all physical desire that they exhibit towards one another flows not from the lust that is promoted in the media and societal standards or dictated by their fallen nature, but from their faithfulness and obedience to God. They want to honour God in all they do. They want to experience their sexuality as God intended in the area of marriage where God has placed it. There are so many times where their desire for each, as an expression of their love for one another, became intense and could have led to sexual sin, but they reminded each other of their commitment to God and to each other in regards to this. I asked Smith about this via Skype and this is what he had to say,
I believe that a love that comes from God is more passionate than just a sexual encounter and too often in movies and TV there is an idea promoted that forbidden lust is somehow more exciting.......
Paul tells husbands and wives not to deny each other so the idea of a Godly relationship being passionate is not counter to our faith I don't think..... I have had several readers tell me how the story helped them with their faith and that is the best compliment I could ever hope for....when I wrote it my target audience was young adult to 20 and 30 year olds hoping I could use the fantasy element to give them some insights into how reconcile being a Christian in today's society. Somehow I seem to have achieved a broader appeal based on the feedback.
Smith's account of Aurora and David's wedding night comes close to eroticism, but no lines are crossed, it is tastefully written, no smut and again Smith has done this to show that the sexual relationship between a married couple with a righteous relationship with God is not one based on erotic love, lust or just a sexual act, but on Agape love that comes from God.
All through the novel, Smith shines with his depiction of romance. If he ever branches out and writes in the Christian romance genre, I will follow him. Again, it is refreshing to have a Christian male author show romance from a male point of view. It is very much based on placing the other more important than himself and being a servant to the other, but not servant as we interpret it in today's society. It is very chivalrous, without being condescending and honours the integrity and dignity of the other as a person and their gender as well as honour himself and the male gender and show what a Godly man can be compared to what we see in today's society.
I pray that Ralph's depiction of romance and sexuality will encourage the 20-30 age group and even those older to consider that romance, sexuality and relationships are worth doing it God's way and not man's way.
The supernatural aspects of this novel are very compelling and engaging as well, both from those visitations and interactions between God and His angels and those of the Dark One, his minions and its evil consequences. The account of David and Aurora travelling to Tartaros to deal with the Dark One, their torture, and spiritual mind games in order to have them submit and worship him is very oppressive, dark and creepy. I loved the twist where David double crossed the Dark One. The spiritual warfare aspect of being obedient and faithful to God and letting God fight this battle is very biblical and a further encouragement to live by faith and not by sight or in our strength.
When I spoke to Ralph via Skype he asked me how I found the novel. I replied,
Ralph, it is just a wonderful tale, positive, uplifting, sobering, entertaining, educating, honors God and His word, true spiritual warfare.
I like what David Bergsland said in his review and I totally agree with him,
This one was just fun. I enjoyed it so much I’m still rereading parts because it’s hard to let them go.
This book stays with you after you finish it and it is hard leaving David's and Aurora's world.
I look forward immensely to the next books in the series.
Highly Recommended
April 25, 2015
He considered it for a moment, and realized that, whatever the reason, things were going to change. He wasn’t sure how, but he knew something was happening.
Book: Seal Of The King by Ralph Smith, Self Published, 2014
Genre: Speculative
Target Audience: Boys and Girls 18+
Subjects: Battle between good and evil, Love, Marriage, Sacrifice
Summary: It’s not just a dream! They’re not going crazy! It’s real! For his entire life David has seen visions of Aurora. Having imaginary friends is common for children, but David really saw her. All of her life, Aurora saw visions of David. And now as she frantically flees from the evil behind her, out of nowhere, David reaches out, and pulls her to safety – out of her world and into his! As they start talking and putting pieces together, they learn that they are part of a prophecy – they are destined to battle together against the evil one and defeat him through sacrifice.
Notes: It’s somewhat a typical fantasy story with the characters going on an adventure to try to defeat the evil being and having special powers to help conquer the evil. It has some unique elements though. The idea of the characters sort of seeing visions of each other all through their entire lives seems a bit different. It adds a lot to the story. Also, rather than an ordinary evil being, they are actually going up against satan himself and defeating him in one world strengths his power in the other world. The spiritual elements are strong and constant as both characters are strong believers in the Lord. The Lord even appears to them a couple of times in visions with special messages for them. The one warning I would give on this book is that the author gets pretty descriptive of the characters’ romance, particularly on their honeymoon. Other than that, I would recommend it, especially to those seeking an enjoyable story rather than suspense.
Spiritual Content Recommendation Scale: 5/5
Reviewer: J:-)mi
Ephesians 6:10-13 – Finally, be strong in the Lord and in his mighty power. Put on the full armor of God so that you can take your stand against the devil's schemes. For our struggle is not against flesh and blood, but against the rulers, against the authorities, against the powers of this dark world and against the spiritual forces of evil in the heavenly realms. Therefore put on the full armor of God, so that when the day of evil comes, you may be able to stand your ground, and after you have done everything, to stand.
Thank you to the author for providing me with a free review copy in exchange for my honest opinion. I enjoyed it.
Book: Seal Of The King by Ralph Smith, Self Published, 2014
Genre: Speculative
Target Audience: Boys and Girls 18+
Subjects: Battle between good and evil, Love, Marriage, Sacrifice
Summary: It’s not just a dream! They’re not going crazy! It’s real! For his entire life David has seen visions of Aurora. Having imaginary friends is common for children, but David really saw her. All of her life, Aurora saw visions of David. And now as she frantically flees from the evil behind her, out of nowhere, David reaches out, and pulls her to safety – out of her world and into his! As they start talking and putting pieces together, they learn that they are part of a prophecy – they are destined to battle together against the evil one and defeat him through sacrifice.
Notes: It’s somewhat a typical fantasy story with the characters going on an adventure to try to defeat the evil being and having special powers to help conquer the evil. It has some unique elements though. The idea of the characters sort of seeing visions of each other all through their entire lives seems a bit different. It adds a lot to the story. Also, rather than an ordinary evil being, they are actually going up against satan himself and defeating him in one world strengths his power in the other world. The spiritual elements are strong and constant as both characters are strong believers in the Lord. The Lord even appears to them a couple of times in visions with special messages for them. The one warning I would give on this book is that the author gets pretty descriptive of the characters’ romance, particularly on their honeymoon. Other than that, I would recommend it, especially to those seeking an enjoyable story rather than suspense.
Spiritual Content Recommendation Scale: 5/5
Reviewer: J:-)mi
Ephesians 6:10-13 – Finally, be strong in the Lord and in his mighty power. Put on the full armor of God so that you can take your stand against the devil's schemes. For our struggle is not against flesh and blood, but against the rulers, against the authorities, against the powers of this dark world and against the spiritual forces of evil in the heavenly realms. Therefore put on the full armor of God, so that when the day of evil comes, you may be able to stand your ground, and after you have done everything, to stand.
Thank you to the author for providing me with a free review copy in exchange for my honest opinion. I enjoyed it.
November 2, 2014
4.5 Stars - Spiritual warfare, demon-possession, and romance wrapped up in a sci-fi/Fantasy multiverse that was surprisingly easy to follow. I am a reader who loves good characters and a romance that makes sense. This book makes the reader care instantly for the characters and makes their romance perfectly understandable and intense quickly. Although the book is not billed for romance, and is full of action-packed scenes, the romance dominated at least the first half of the book for me, so female audiences should enjoy that aspect. The author did a great job of keeping things mysterious and slowly unfolding each element of the story so that the reader wasn't bogged down with huge info-dumps. Overall, this is a fun read and I'll be looking for the sequel.
July 6, 2014
I was surprised when I first began reading Seal of the King, because I was instantly hooked. The first chapter is nothing but action, and excitement, and all I wanted to do was continue reading. (I have to be honest, I don’t normally read religiously influenced books, and I was surprised that I had liked this one so much.)
Imaging loving someone your whole life, and never having met them, only catching glimpses of them from afar from time to time over the span of ten years? I’m almost positive that there are numerous people who can relate to this part of the story. “It’s love at first sight.” Some people call it fate, some call it destiny. In this story, it’s a bit of all of that. David and Aurora knew they were meant for one another. They had seen each other from afar, and fell in love, without even knowing who the other was. And after they meet, we get to witness their love for one another grow. We get to see that they truly were destined to be together. From the very beginning.
Both David and Aurora are very strong willed people. They are both independent when on their own, but when they are together, they rely on one another to attain a completely new – and otherwise unreachable - level of courage and strength. They are also incredibly ready to do whatever they must to protect the ones they love.
The plot is like most – an evildoer who must be vanquished. I’m not saying there’s anything wrong with that. In fact, there would be no story without it. The great thing about this book, however, is that more than one world is at stake – David’s, set in the present, where he lives the simple life of a farmer, and Aurora’s where she is a fierce warrior of a world that is still centuries behind. And the best part, is that only a select few are able to pass between the two, as simply as someone walking over a bridge.
The feelings between Aurora and David do become pretty intense at times, and I would probably not give this to someone under the age of sixteen to read. I do have to say though that because this book has a heavy religious influence, I am glad that Smith did not let them give into temptation.
All in all, this was a fun read. I wish, however, that the end would have been a bit more exciting, like the first chapter was, but I am happy to say that it does leave room for a sequel, which I will probably read as well.
Imaging loving someone your whole life, and never having met them, only catching glimpses of them from afar from time to time over the span of ten years? I’m almost positive that there are numerous people who can relate to this part of the story. “It’s love at first sight.” Some people call it fate, some call it destiny. In this story, it’s a bit of all of that. David and Aurora knew they were meant for one another. They had seen each other from afar, and fell in love, without even knowing who the other was. And after they meet, we get to witness their love for one another grow. We get to see that they truly were destined to be together. From the very beginning.
Both David and Aurora are very strong willed people. They are both independent when on their own, but when they are together, they rely on one another to attain a completely new – and otherwise unreachable - level of courage and strength. They are also incredibly ready to do whatever they must to protect the ones they love.
The plot is like most – an evildoer who must be vanquished. I’m not saying there’s anything wrong with that. In fact, there would be no story without it. The great thing about this book, however, is that more than one world is at stake – David’s, set in the present, where he lives the simple life of a farmer, and Aurora’s where she is a fierce warrior of a world that is still centuries behind. And the best part, is that only a select few are able to pass between the two, as simply as someone walking over a bridge.
The feelings between Aurora and David do become pretty intense at times, and I would probably not give this to someone under the age of sixteen to read. I do have to say though that because this book has a heavy religious influence, I am glad that Smith did not let them give into temptation.
All in all, this was a fun read. I wish, however, that the end would have been a bit more exciting, like the first chapter was, but I am happy to say that it does leave room for a sequel, which I will probably read as well.
May 7, 2020
Well, I do like spiritual warfare novels. This is my first novel by Ralph Smith.
This one is the longest one I've ever read in that genre and while there isn't as much on the spiritual side, it was still good.
I liked some of the biblical references but since I'm not a Christian, there were several "Christian" aspects of the book that I did not agree with. It's not a salvation issue, so, I can agree to disagree.
After Aurora & David were married, there were way too many "steamy" scenes to my liking. I understand they are married but too many times, I felt like an intruder on their personal space. It wasn't graphic or detailed or anything untoward, just too sensual for my taste.
No profanity or gore.
Total cliff-hanger. After 700+ pages, I would think there would have been a conclusion. In my opinion, the author spent too much time acclimating Aurora to "our" world. It would have been nice to see less dilly-dallying and more action and adventure. But that's my opinion.
For those who like spiritual warfare novels, I would recommend and just skim the "sensual" parts.
Interesting read.
This one is the longest one I've ever read in that genre and while there isn't as much on the spiritual side, it was still good.
I liked some of the biblical references but since I'm not a Christian, there were several "Christian" aspects of the book that I did not agree with. It's not a salvation issue, so, I can agree to disagree.
After Aurora & David were married, there were way too many "steamy" scenes to my liking. I understand they are married but too many times, I felt like an intruder on their personal space. It wasn't graphic or detailed or anything untoward, just too sensual for my taste.
No profanity or gore.
Total cliff-hanger. After 700+ pages, I would think there would have been a conclusion. In my opinion, the author spent too much time acclimating Aurora to "our" world. It would have been nice to see less dilly-dallying and more action and adventure. But that's my opinion.
For those who like spiritual warfare novels, I would recommend and just skim the "sensual" parts.
Interesting read.
August 23, 2014
In the early 1800s, Samuel Taylor Coleridge defined skilled fantasy as writing to “invoke a willing suspension of disbelief.” The premier installment of the “Seal of the King” Christian fantasy series by Ralph Smith does just that—masterfully weaving human decency and truth into a tale of supernatural deceit and evil.
At the first crackle of air and explosion of light, David finally meets his beautiful Aurora, a young woman who is as appealing as she is a fierce warrior, an expert in archery with deadly aim (and reminiscent of Katniss Everdeen of “The Hunger Games”). David, a handsome young man, a simple farmer left alone after his parents’ mysterious fiery car accident, has dreamed of Aurora as she has dreamed of him. But it is when they share an iron clad bond of determination to find and destroy the Dark One that David’s true physical strength emerges: Simple as slicing butter with a knife, the guy can wield a dagger with decapitating force. Unknown to the other, their worlds have existed side-by-side, David’s world of Good and Light and Aurora’s world of Evil and Darkness. When Aurora first enters David’s physical earthly world, he saves her from pursuit of the Dark One’s army. However, he soon learns that his world does not protect them. Demonic forces have long ago invaded citizens of his own community.
With Aurora by his side, her true identify somehow masked in the aura of David, he is lead to free his father from a nursing home run by demons of the Dark One hiding in the bodies of healthcare attendants. David understands his own role in defeating the advances of evil when he learns the meaning of the strange markings in the family home. As the father’s condition improves and when David learns that Aurora has seen a female slave hiding during a battle that may be his lost mother, he has hope of regaining family. Seeing David with Aurora, his aunt and other relatives realize the fulfillment of the prophecy and decide to tell David the truth. As a descendent of the House of David, our David must lead the world’s battle against evil as the Dark One pillages his world and invades ours. The biblical parody that a chosen one is to defeat evil (sin) is not lost on the Christian.
The “Seal of the King” by Ralph Smith is a relevant story of the battle of good versus evil, purity versus destruction. David and Aurora return to the countryside, the place where Aurora first appeared to him in the flesh, and they re-enter her world. Traveling by carriage, wagon, or horseback from village to village, they rescue individuals and families from plunder by followers of the Dark One. Seeking the towns of Tartaros and Roktab, they work toward the Dark One’s liar, David soon understanding that the Dark One lies in wait for him, relishing the battle, his servants misguided in their attempts to halt David and Aurora’s advance. And when David first encounters the Dark One, the enemy is camouflaged.
David and Aurora are cast as star-crossed lovers of sorts, whose love is so pure that it is not immediately consummated even after an informal marriage—not that they had time to do so since someone soon tries to kill them. Who can argue with David that a place of purity (or a more relaxing trip) would make for a nicer honeymoon? At almost every turn of their journey, the whiz and sting of Aurora’s arrow distracts the enemy forces as David wields a deadly punch to those who will not turn away from the demonic hold of evil. The union of David and Aurora is for a much greater purpose than merely physical love or worldly pleasure. Each makes the other stronger.
Smith’s exceptional dialogue and detailed action scenes deliver danger for David and Aurora at every turn. Yet there is gentle humor in this Christian fantasy thriller. Practical warriors, ready for one war after the other, the two pack lightly for their perilous journey, having only an apple at one point to eat. Aurora presents the fresh apple to David, offering it as a meal cooked just for him from an old family recipe—doubt an Adam and Eve analogy here.
The Christian analogy of our David’s prophecy is clear: to risk and possibly sacrifice his own life to save the soul of mankind. Even the other characters admit this similarity. But unlike Jesus’ miracles to heal the sick and feed the masses, David must at a moment’s notice draw upon almost superhuman physical strength and skill to kill or defeat the emissaries of the Dark One, and this strike of power often startles the reader.
I found myself jotting down several jewels found in the dialogue of Smith’s characters: “We don’t become what we are fighting against.”—“Fear is a soulless demon.”—“Don’t borrow trouble from tomorrow.” However, it is Mr. Smith’s use of the English language, his descriptive phrase and sentence structure, that is the story’s growing appeal. The action moves swiftly and forcibly with an economy of words—without laborious or lengthy, descriptive passages. A scene where bones crack, blood spurts, or heads roll does the trick. Though crafting a fantasy, Smith makes it plausible that the star-crossed lovers would trot up unseen to nab rowdy barbarians in the act of threatening innocent children and their parents. The noisy distraction works well for David and Aurora, the star-crossed lovers, and remember, her arrows do not miss.
----- Darden North is the IPPY award-winning author in Southern Fiction of four novels, most recently “Wiggle Room.” www.dardennorth.com
At the first crackle of air and explosion of light, David finally meets his beautiful Aurora, a young woman who is as appealing as she is a fierce warrior, an expert in archery with deadly aim (and reminiscent of Katniss Everdeen of “The Hunger Games”). David, a handsome young man, a simple farmer left alone after his parents’ mysterious fiery car accident, has dreamed of Aurora as she has dreamed of him. But it is when they share an iron clad bond of determination to find and destroy the Dark One that David’s true physical strength emerges: Simple as slicing butter with a knife, the guy can wield a dagger with decapitating force. Unknown to the other, their worlds have existed side-by-side, David’s world of Good and Light and Aurora’s world of Evil and Darkness. When Aurora first enters David’s physical earthly world, he saves her from pursuit of the Dark One’s army. However, he soon learns that his world does not protect them. Demonic forces have long ago invaded citizens of his own community.
With Aurora by his side, her true identify somehow masked in the aura of David, he is lead to free his father from a nursing home run by demons of the Dark One hiding in the bodies of healthcare attendants. David understands his own role in defeating the advances of evil when he learns the meaning of the strange markings in the family home. As the father’s condition improves and when David learns that Aurora has seen a female slave hiding during a battle that may be his lost mother, he has hope of regaining family. Seeing David with Aurora, his aunt and other relatives realize the fulfillment of the prophecy and decide to tell David the truth. As a descendent of the House of David, our David must lead the world’s battle against evil as the Dark One pillages his world and invades ours. The biblical parody that a chosen one is to defeat evil (sin) is not lost on the Christian.
The “Seal of the King” by Ralph Smith is a relevant story of the battle of good versus evil, purity versus destruction. David and Aurora return to the countryside, the place where Aurora first appeared to him in the flesh, and they re-enter her world. Traveling by carriage, wagon, or horseback from village to village, they rescue individuals and families from plunder by followers of the Dark One. Seeking the towns of Tartaros and Roktab, they work toward the Dark One’s liar, David soon understanding that the Dark One lies in wait for him, relishing the battle, his servants misguided in their attempts to halt David and Aurora’s advance. And when David first encounters the Dark One, the enemy is camouflaged.
David and Aurora are cast as star-crossed lovers of sorts, whose love is so pure that it is not immediately consummated even after an informal marriage—not that they had time to do so since someone soon tries to kill them. Who can argue with David that a place of purity (or a more relaxing trip) would make for a nicer honeymoon? At almost every turn of their journey, the whiz and sting of Aurora’s arrow distracts the enemy forces as David wields a deadly punch to those who will not turn away from the demonic hold of evil. The union of David and Aurora is for a much greater purpose than merely physical love or worldly pleasure. Each makes the other stronger.
Smith’s exceptional dialogue and detailed action scenes deliver danger for David and Aurora at every turn. Yet there is gentle humor in this Christian fantasy thriller. Practical warriors, ready for one war after the other, the two pack lightly for their perilous journey, having only an apple at one point to eat. Aurora presents the fresh apple to David, offering it as a meal cooked just for him from an old family recipe—doubt an Adam and Eve analogy here.
The Christian analogy of our David’s prophecy is clear: to risk and possibly sacrifice his own life to save the soul of mankind. Even the other characters admit this similarity. But unlike Jesus’ miracles to heal the sick and feed the masses, David must at a moment’s notice draw upon almost superhuman physical strength and skill to kill or defeat the emissaries of the Dark One, and this strike of power often startles the reader.
I found myself jotting down several jewels found in the dialogue of Smith’s characters: “We don’t become what we are fighting against.”—“Fear is a soulless demon.”—“Don’t borrow trouble from tomorrow.” However, it is Mr. Smith’s use of the English language, his descriptive phrase and sentence structure, that is the story’s growing appeal. The action moves swiftly and forcibly with an economy of words—without laborious or lengthy, descriptive passages. A scene where bones crack, blood spurts, or heads roll does the trick. Though crafting a fantasy, Smith makes it plausible that the star-crossed lovers would trot up unseen to nab rowdy barbarians in the act of threatening innocent children and their parents. The noisy distraction works well for David and Aurora, the star-crossed lovers, and remember, her arrows do not miss.
----- Darden North is the IPPY award-winning author in Southern Fiction of four novels, most recently “Wiggle Room.” www.dardennorth.com
May 19, 2014
As a child I enjoyed a few tales of historical fiction and that has prepared me for this work of Ralph Smith. Not that its exactly historical fiction. Smith has created a genre unique to itself, with 2 characters from different worlds, based on the mindset of the Judeo-Christian Bible. It is "Biblical Fiction."
SEAL OF THE KING is the story of David, a farmer in the prime of life in Kentucky and Aurora, a young adult warrior who fights an evil army in what seems to be a medieval world of fields and forests.
We first meet David on his family property that he is taking care of on his own. We are told his parents had suffered a car wreck which made his father vanish and his father an invalid.
Meanwhile Aurora is fighting a near 10 year old war in a parallel world and is on the run from men who want to capture her.
The 2 characters have been aware of one another since childhood. They each grew up with visions of the other that brought them comfort in their times of trial but also the torment of wondering if they would ever meet.
David is a descendant of King David of the Bible and after he has a few supernatural experiences, he stumbles into Aurora's world where he rescues her from men trying to kill her.
He brings her out of her world and into his home where she is mesmerized by this strange land of running water and modern appliances.
David takes Aurora to the nursing home or assisted living center,to visit his father. While there David notes the bizarre behavior of some of the staff and correctly concludes they are demonic beings which he kills. He takes his father and escapes from the nursing home
then returns to his home that is protected by some force that repels evil beings.
David's Aunt Molly comes to the home to assist them. She explains that David is to be an anointed leader and Aurora is from the house of ROKTAH,as noted in a prophecy that predicts they would be apart at birth then be together at the appropriate time to oppose the EVIL ONE.
They are later joined by the character Michael, who heads a COUNCIL OF SERVANTS, about 20 people who help David and Aurora prepare for their fight against this evil character.
When they return to Aurora's world we get a glimpse of the violent world she grew up in and the environment where her parents were killed. They visit Jasmine and Miles, friends of Aurora from whom we learn more about the divide that separates her world from David's world. The 2 worlds maintain the balance between dark and light and good and evil. One of its narrow points leads to a portal on David's family property.
In this world, David weds Aurora in an informal ceremony but they do not consider consummating the marriage an immediate priority. It is important to David to establish their sexual relationship in a godly way.
Together they rally Aurora's people to battle the evil armies and have a showdown with a despotic character called the DARK ONE. In the process they discover David's mother Ruth is still alive. They rescue her and return her to David's world where she is reunited with her husband Gabe, who remains functional in spite of his stay at the nursing home.
David's family and their friends in the Council celebrate with a big wedding ceremony where we see lively interaction and friendly teasing from the characters showing us they have real human qualities and they are true to life.
Upon their honeymoon Aurora and David discover the evil from Aurora's world will soon spill over to David's and the couple must return to fight it. And the reader is left on edge wondering how this final battle will turn out.
For this reason I anticipate Smith's sequel SEAL OF THE KING INTO THE HEART OF DARKNESS should be an exciting read. I really enjoyed this one.
SEAL OF THE KING is the story of David, a farmer in the prime of life in Kentucky and Aurora, a young adult warrior who fights an evil army in what seems to be a medieval world of fields and forests.
We first meet David on his family property that he is taking care of on his own. We are told his parents had suffered a car wreck which made his father vanish and his father an invalid.
Meanwhile Aurora is fighting a near 10 year old war in a parallel world and is on the run from men who want to capture her.
The 2 characters have been aware of one another since childhood. They each grew up with visions of the other that brought them comfort in their times of trial but also the torment of wondering if they would ever meet.
David is a descendant of King David of the Bible and after he has a few supernatural experiences, he stumbles into Aurora's world where he rescues her from men trying to kill her.
He brings her out of her world and into his home where she is mesmerized by this strange land of running water and modern appliances.
David takes Aurora to the nursing home or assisted living center,to visit his father. While there David notes the bizarre behavior of some of the staff and correctly concludes they are demonic beings which he kills. He takes his father and escapes from the nursing home
then returns to his home that is protected by some force that repels evil beings.
David's Aunt Molly comes to the home to assist them. She explains that David is to be an anointed leader and Aurora is from the house of ROKTAH,as noted in a prophecy that predicts they would be apart at birth then be together at the appropriate time to oppose the EVIL ONE.
They are later joined by the character Michael, who heads a COUNCIL OF SERVANTS, about 20 people who help David and Aurora prepare for their fight against this evil character.
When they return to Aurora's world we get a glimpse of the violent world she grew up in and the environment where her parents were killed. They visit Jasmine and Miles, friends of Aurora from whom we learn more about the divide that separates her world from David's world. The 2 worlds maintain the balance between dark and light and good and evil. One of its narrow points leads to a portal on David's family property.
In this world, David weds Aurora in an informal ceremony but they do not consider consummating the marriage an immediate priority. It is important to David to establish their sexual relationship in a godly way.
Together they rally Aurora's people to battle the evil armies and have a showdown with a despotic character called the DARK ONE. In the process they discover David's mother Ruth is still alive. They rescue her and return her to David's world where she is reunited with her husband Gabe, who remains functional in spite of his stay at the nursing home.
David's family and their friends in the Council celebrate with a big wedding ceremony where we see lively interaction and friendly teasing from the characters showing us they have real human qualities and they are true to life.
Upon their honeymoon Aurora and David discover the evil from Aurora's world will soon spill over to David's and the couple must return to fight it. And the reader is left on edge wondering how this final battle will turn out.
For this reason I anticipate Smith's sequel SEAL OF THE KING INTO THE HEART OF DARKNESS should be an exciting read. I really enjoyed this one.
June 21, 2014
"Seal of the King" is one of those books that gets better as you go along. To be honest, the beginning was a little rough, and I almost gave up on it, but I kept going, and was rewarded. The story is of David, a young man in what appears to be Colorado (just guessing here) and a young woman that he has seen in dreams and visions for his entire life. Aurora, the woman from his dreams, lives on an alternate Earth that is caught in a long war against The Dark One. Aurora is being chased by Bad Guys when David miraculously steps in and rescues her. He then takes her back to our Earth. Apparently, he is the only one who was unaware of this other world, and a council of believers soon discovers that he is a Chosen One, and that with Aurora's help, they are to confront the Evil One and rescue her world.
The story takes a bit to set up, but when it does happen, it is fun and inspiring. This is a strong Christian story, and makes no apologies about its message. The best part of the story is the characterization of David and Aurora, and the way their love is portrayed. For even though this is a Christian story, these two aren't prudish, and the sexual tension is obvious. I was curious how the author would deal with the wedding night, which was a long time coming, but it was tastefully and realistically handled.
The biggest problem I found with the book was its apparent and desperate need for an editor. But my understanding is that it was going through the editing process as I read it, so that is an encouraging thing to hear.
This is the beginning of a series, and the author set it up well. Part of the challenge of writing a series (which I know well) is to come to some conclusion with the first book, and yet leave enough unresolved to give you fodder for the rest of the books. And I found myself looking forward to those books.
If you like Christian fantasy, or Christian romance, or both, pick this book up. You'll like it.
The story takes a bit to set up, but when it does happen, it is fun and inspiring. This is a strong Christian story, and makes no apologies about its message. The best part of the story is the characterization of David and Aurora, and the way their love is portrayed. For even though this is a Christian story, these two aren't prudish, and the sexual tension is obvious. I was curious how the author would deal with the wedding night, which was a long time coming, but it was tastefully and realistically handled.
The biggest problem I found with the book was its apparent and desperate need for an editor. But my understanding is that it was going through the editing process as I read it, so that is an encouraging thing to hear.
This is the beginning of a series, and the author set it up well. Part of the challenge of writing a series (which I know well) is to come to some conclusion with the first book, and yet leave enough unresolved to give you fodder for the rest of the books. And I found myself looking forward to those books.
If you like Christian fantasy, or Christian romance, or both, pick this book up. You'll like it.
December 22, 2013
I, like most people, find it arduous to come across a good read nowadays. From the moment that I laid eyes on this book I just knew that it was going to be difficult to set down. I was completely engulfed in this captivating love story between two star-crossed lovers who are bonded by the Lord. This novel is that of a valorous farmer, David, and a bodacious warrior, Aurora, who have seen each other their entire lives through visions, uncertain if they would ever meet. They shortly discover they are part of an ancient prophecy that beckons them to depart on an imperative mission that very well could guide them to their cessation. “When the hour of darkness is at hand, a son of David will be anointed to lead his people, and he will find favor with the Lord. A child of equal measure from the house of Roktah will rise-up to awaken the Lion, and together they will face the Evil One. They will be bound at birth by our Father, separated until the time of fulfillment when they will unite in his cause.” David and Aurora, bequeathed with celestial powers, embark on their journey fraught with peril to fulfill the prophecy in hopes of surmounting the Dark One. I promise this heroic saga will enrapture your body, mind, and soul with every word. It truly is one of the best books I have read my entire life.
August 7, 2014
Seal of the King is as much of a romance as it is a fantasy story. The main characters, Aurora and David, saw visions of each other since they were children. They finally meet, crossing the boundaries of worlds, to discover a relationship and a destiny.
The story line is tightly woven and the plotting strong. This book will keep your attention. I thought some of the emotional connection was a little too strong, but then I prefer epic fantasy to romance so that is just me. There are a few typos, but nothing too distracting. The story is very interesting and well worth the read.
Based on the description, I didn't expect such a strong Christian element or the story to have roots in this world. I usually choose fantasy to escape and so kept stumbling out of the story. I wish the description had mentioned the Christianity, though if I had read more of the reviews, I would have certainly noticed before I started reading. If you pick up Seal of the King, you'll certainly get a tale with a strong female character, a man with great morals, and a big dose of Christian religion. If that sounds good to you, give this book a read!
The story line is tightly woven and the plotting strong. This book will keep your attention. I thought some of the emotional connection was a little too strong, but then I prefer epic fantasy to romance so that is just me. There are a few typos, but nothing too distracting. The story is very interesting and well worth the read.
Based on the description, I didn't expect such a strong Christian element or the story to have roots in this world. I usually choose fantasy to escape and so kept stumbling out of the story. I wish the description had mentioned the Christianity, though if I had read more of the reviews, I would have certainly noticed before I started reading. If you pick up Seal of the King, you'll certainly get a tale with a strong female character, a man with great morals, and a big dose of Christian religion. If that sounds good to you, give this book a read!
December 15, 2013
An engaging story that had me glued to the pages from the start, not even the burden of needing the toilet could tear me from this book! Heartwarming, old-fashioned, innocent romance with all the action, mystery and intrigue your imagination can muster. This epic tale is that of a brave young farmer named David, who throughout his life saw a girl that no one else could see. Then on one fateful day he saves the life of Aurora, a fearless young woman who also had an 'imaginary friend' that no one could see, it doesn't take them long to realize that they have been seeing each other their whole lives from different worlds. They soon become aware they are part of a prophecy that will urge them to embark on adventure that could lead to them to their demise. With the divine powers bestowed upon these two heroic young lovers they set out to defeat 'the dark one’ in hopes of fulfilling the prophecy. A fantastic read with all the action, adventure and passion of a fantasy based love story and an absolute pleasure to read. I will be eagerly awaiting the sequel!
March 14, 2014
Stayed up super late reading this one! Anyway, I just thought this book was so romantic! David and Aurora are amazing, awesome characters who have always been in love. Even though they haven't always known one another. In my eyes, this book was a perfect blend of time travel, adventure, romance and fantasy.
There are pinches of spirituality thrown in — in just the right places — and this is what I loved so much about this novel. The author is not insisting that the reader adopt a certain frame of mind; he's just presenting these wonderful characters who have so much to give to one another ... and to the world! I loved that they were so inspiring in their devotion to one another, and to their ideal of perfect, pure love.
Really looking forward to see what happens in the next book. I can't even imagine what sort of scenarios David and Aurora will find themselves in, and how the plot will develop with the prophecy.
There are pinches of spirituality thrown in — in just the right places — and this is what I loved so much about this novel. The author is not insisting that the reader adopt a certain frame of mind; he's just presenting these wonderful characters who have so much to give to one another ... and to the world! I loved that they were so inspiring in their devotion to one another, and to their ideal of perfect, pure love.
Really looking forward to see what happens in the next book. I can't even imagine what sort of scenarios David and Aurora will find themselves in, and how the plot will develop with the prophecy.
December 17, 2013
I loved this story!
I got caught up in the premise right away. I loved reading the story of David and Aurora, and I felt like I was a part of watching their love develop.
I read a lot of books, and I have to say that most self published ebooks that I find are just rehashing the same thing over and over, with different characters and dialog. The Seal of the King was different. The characters are well developed, the plot moves along at an appropriate pace, and the dialog doesn’t feel forced.
While I was reading this book, I was involved in a messy and difficult emergency home repair. I needed a story that would get me out of my head for short periods of time while I made this repair, and having this story to come back to at the end of the day was something to look forward to in an otherwise overwhelming time in my life.
I got caught up in the premise right away. I loved reading the story of David and Aurora, and I felt like I was a part of watching their love develop.
I read a lot of books, and I have to say that most self published ebooks that I find are just rehashing the same thing over and over, with different characters and dialog. The Seal of the King was different. The characters are well developed, the plot moves along at an appropriate pace, and the dialog doesn’t feel forced.
While I was reading this book, I was involved in a messy and difficult emergency home repair. I needed a story that would get me out of my head for short periods of time while I made this repair, and having this story to come back to at the end of the day was something to look forward to in an otherwise overwhelming time in my life.
June 24, 2014
I have to say, as a strong woman, I found this book a thrill to read. Written by a man, I'm impressed that he has been able to capture the essence of woman like, Aurora, who is strong, determined and committed to her purpose without leaving out her vulnerability and genteel side. And David, is a superstar character who is willing to let her shine and still come across as an Alpha Male. As my Mom says "it takes a strong man to be with a strong woman." David definitely fits that description. Well, done Ralph Smith!
I normally have a favorite character within the first couple chapters that I really feel connected to... this time, I have to say, I love the book as a whole :D
Having read this book, I'd definitely recommend it to anyone who is looking for an adventure and desire to see a woman shine without the usual negative connotations.
I normally have a favorite character within the first couple chapters that I really feel connected to... this time, I have to say, I love the book as a whole :D
Having read this book, I'd definitely recommend it to anyone who is looking for an adventure and desire to see a woman shine without the usual negative connotations.
February 21, 2015
I did enjoy this book, I always like a crossover between worlds and I do like a strong female character, There is a lot of religious overtones, I guess I am used to reading about other Gods, this one is one of our own and it takes a bit of time to adjust. I did find the use of language a little bit what I call juvenile, but I found the same thing with Terry Goodkind's first few books and that is one of my favorite series so no doubt Ralph Smith's writing will mature also. I look forward to the next installment.
August 6, 2014
I'm not sure where all these high ratings are coming from. This is probably the worst book I've ever read. I just wanted something I could read on my phone to put me to sleep - this was already in my cloud. Must have been free at some point. I had to make myself finish it. Anyway, there were a couple of good points. I liked the integrity of the characters and the sci-fi multiverse aspect. A decent first effort for someone learning to write, but I would have kept it to myself and started again. The best description I can give of this book is Derek Prince meets The Outlander.
June 26, 2014
Please, don't let the label "Christian Fiction" deter you from enjoying this exquisitely plotted novel filled with fully developed characters and and a roller coaster ride of action and adventure. Yes, the story does have a strong religious theme in which the characters have to rely not only on their wits and skills to survive but on their strong personal faith as well. The story revs out of the gate at full throttle and never lets up until it's thrilling conclusion. Excellent work!
December 18, 2013
I loved this book, from the start I was captured into the history of the two main characters, and the bitter-sweet romance connection between David and Aurora. I am very picky when it comes to something to read but I was glad that I was given the chance to read this book and I cant wait for the next one to come out. I highly suggest this book to anyone who loves to read at all.
February 10, 2015
Let me just put it simply - sometimes we all need stories to put our mind at ease that hope, loyalty, honesty, integrity and love will outlast all the vileness in the world. It's a fairy tale for adults...and a well-told at that..
Many thanks to the author for bringing a glimpse of light into the written world.
Many thanks to the author for bringing a glimpse of light into the written world.
October 27, 2014
Great fantasy fiction
Good story line, well written and executed. This adventure carried the balance well between adventure, romance, and spiritual truths in fighting the battle. Needs just a tiny bit of editing for typos and grammar, but nothing major. I enjoyed the characters and how Ralph wove in the concept of two worlds. Nice job!
Good story line, well written and executed. This adventure carried the balance well between adventure, romance, and spiritual truths in fighting the battle. Needs just a tiny bit of editing for typos and grammar, but nothing major. I enjoyed the characters and how Ralph wove in the concept of two worlds. Nice job!
April 29, 2014
This is a superb Christian fantasy. I posted a review of it.
November 7, 2016
I loved the book. The author did a good job combining Fantasy with Christianity and I believe we need more of. Christian Fiction is more than just Amish romances - blah!
The only critique I have is the author didn't spend enough time on the actual battle of the Dark One and spent too much time on telling us every single detail of what happened on the date/proposal.
To me, it should've been reversed. The battle needed more detail, more twists, turns, just...more. I was left feeling underwhelmed that the Dark One could be bested so easily and quickly. Granted, I understand we see him again in the next book but it still doesn't satisfy me. All this lead up to the end battle and I was left wanting.
The date/proposal needed shortened. I don't need to know every single thing that was said or done. Just give me the gist of it and I'll be happy.
I do hope the next book will focus more on the battle and less on the sappy romance side. I do like some romance but not dripping in it.
The only critique I have is the author didn't spend enough time on the actual battle of the Dark One and spent too much time on telling us every single detail of what happened on the date/proposal.
To me, it should've been reversed. The battle needed more detail, more twists, turns, just...more. I was left feeling underwhelmed that the Dark One could be bested so easily and quickly. Granted, I understand we see him again in the next book but it still doesn't satisfy me. All this lead up to the end battle and I was left wanting.
The date/proposal needed shortened. I don't need to know every single thing that was said or done. Just give me the gist of it and I'll be happy.
I do hope the next book will focus more on the battle and less on the sappy romance side. I do like some romance but not dripping in it.
April 1, 2020
Having a problem with this review. Thought the book was an adventure fantasy, which in a way it is. Loved the action and the purpose, but I am not a fan of all the biblical quotes and a very strong Christian theme.
If the description of the book had even slightly mentioned the overall theme of the story and that, in my opinion, was mostly Newborn Christianity, I most likely would not have purchased it.
If the description of the book had even slightly mentioned the overall theme of the story and that, in my opinion, was mostly Newborn Christianity, I most likely would not have purchased it.
March 17, 2017
The power of Faith can do anything thru God/Jehovah
I love the adventures and choices David and Aurora made when they faced evil ones and him. Love is so wonderful when expressed between David and Aurora. I can't wait to read the next book in the series!!!!
I love the adventures and choices David and Aurora made when they faced evil ones and him. Love is so wonderful when expressed between David and Aurora. I can't wait to read the next book in the series!!!!
March 23, 2023
Overall, a well written book, but one major observation. The author spends an inordinate amount of time with the relationship between the two protagonists, David and Aurora. This approach greatly slows down the forward movement of the story and is largely responsible for why this book has 365 pages. JMHO, but this backstory could be far more succinct which would make for a much more fast paced book, and potentially reduce the page count by at least 1/4, making the story more hard hitting.
May 16, 2016
In a sentence, this book is like the song that never ends.
The main conflict ends and we spend almost the next half of the book waiting for a twist that never comes. Then, finally, in the last chapter another dilemma pops up. I don't know about any one else, but I thought it would have been better if this book was made into two books instead. It almost felt like they were trying to copy the outline of Breaking Dawn but with a religious twist and no baby.
The story was cheesy and corny.
The female character, Aurora, is set up as this hard as nails, tough warrior, then suddenly becomes this timid, touchy-feely girl when she finally meets David. It felt like a character betrayal. Yes, I understand she is supposed to be compassionate, but this just felt wrong.
And David, for a farmer he must have something on the side to have so much money to invest into the charity he started. He's a farmer, and then suddenly, boom! He has all this money, and can disappear for a while and the farm is fine? That doesn't make sense. A farm is a 24 hour a day-7 day a week job. You can't just disappear. No, sorry. Not a plausible situation.
Grammar needs a decent clean up. A lot of missing/added words, mispellings, and missing punctuation.
For my clean readers:
If you're looking for a nice, religious story, this is on the fence.
There is violence. Rapes are implied, but not fully described. Description of gore is kept to a minimum.
However, I certainly did not enjoy the detail in the romance. Far too much explanation and description of the bedroom scenes for me to recommend.
Sorry, but I just don't feel this one has what it takes.
The main conflict ends and we spend almost the next half of the book waiting for a twist that never comes. Then, finally, in the last chapter another dilemma pops up. I don't know about any one else, but I thought it would have been better if this book was made into two books instead. It almost felt like they were trying to copy the outline of Breaking Dawn but with a religious twist and no baby.
The story was cheesy and corny.
The female character, Aurora, is set up as this hard as nails, tough warrior, then suddenly becomes this timid, touchy-feely girl when she finally meets David. It felt like a character betrayal. Yes, I understand she is supposed to be compassionate, but this just felt wrong.
And David, for a farmer he must have something on the side to have so much money to invest into the charity he started. He's a farmer, and then suddenly, boom! He has all this money, and can disappear for a while and the farm is fine? That doesn't make sense. A farm is a 24 hour a day-7 day a week job. You can't just disappear. No, sorry. Not a plausible situation.
Grammar needs a decent clean up. A lot of missing/added words, mispellings, and missing punctuation.
For my clean readers:
If you're looking for a nice, religious story, this is on the fence.
There is violence. Rapes are implied, but not fully described. Description of gore is kept to a minimum.
However, I certainly did not enjoy the detail in the romance. Far too much explanation and description of the bedroom scenes for me to recommend.
Sorry, but I just don't feel this one has what it takes.
February 10, 2017
No depth, poorly written
I read about 60% of this book before I gave up. The characters are very two dimensional. The reading level is that of a fifth grader. I thought the language was very awkward at times, as if the author lacked the ability to really create a fantasy world that the reader could delve into. This had great potential, but I think the author lacks real talent.
I read about 60% of this book before I gave up. The characters are very two dimensional. The reading level is that of a fifth grader. I thought the language was very awkward at times, as if the author lacked the ability to really create a fantasy world that the reader could delve into. This had great potential, but I think the author lacks real talent.
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