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A Story of River
Aelryk’s kingdom is under attack by monsters conjured by a dark sorcerer. His only hope lies far to the west, where a powerful water elemental is rumored to dwell. Along the way, he joins forces with the Wild Elves, who were once his enemy. They alone can lead him through the dangers of the Wildlands. Together, they must journey to a mysterious land of eternal spring and return before the kingdom is overrun by evil.
313 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2013
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Lana Axe
22 books125 followersLana Axe lives in the Missouri countryside surrounded by dogs, cats, birds and reptiles. She spends most of her free time daydreaming about elves, magic, and far-away lands.
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October 25, 2013
Welcome to the fantasy kingdom of Na’zora, where evil wolfmen have begun running amok. They are under the control of a dark sorcerer, who intends to take control of the kingdom. But wait a second. A king, his loyal servant, and a band of elves are ready to step up and prevent that from happening. They will journey together into the wild to find a water elemental who can (hopefully) put an end to the madness.
The reader is taken along on the journey to find the elemental (River) and bring him back to Na’zora. Naturally, there is trouble along the way, and we are given more insight into the characters who have taken up the challenge. We also get a look at the forests, which the author obviously holds very dear. The vivid descriptions allow us readers to feel as if we have entered the forests right alongside the heroes.
After suffering a tragic loss, Mel (an elf) is a strong enough character to pick himself up and move on. He doesn’t have a melodramatic fit. Instead, he focuses his energy into learning magic to benefit his people. He effectively fulfills the wishes of his lost loved one, and his character is very true to life.
The character River is somewhat complicated. He is an elemental, but may also be some sort of god. I suppose that one may be explained in time (at least I hope so). Aelryk is your typical good king, and Ulda is your typical villain. Ulda does a few not typical things though. He likes to suck the life essence out of people and use it to his own device. Watch out for that guy!
This is a good start to what could become a very long series. The world is interesting and has lots of potential for more stories.
The reader is taken along on the journey to find the elemental (River) and bring him back to Na’zora. Naturally, there is trouble along the way, and we are given more insight into the characters who have taken up the challenge. We also get a look at the forests, which the author obviously holds very dear. The vivid descriptions allow us readers to feel as if we have entered the forests right alongside the heroes.
After suffering a tragic loss, Mel (an elf) is a strong enough character to pick himself up and move on. He doesn’t have a melodramatic fit. Instead, he focuses his energy into learning magic to benefit his people. He effectively fulfills the wishes of his lost loved one, and his character is very true to life.
The character River is somewhat complicated. He is an elemental, but may also be some sort of god. I suppose that one may be explained in time (at least I hope so). Aelryk is your typical good king, and Ulda is your typical villain. Ulda does a few not typical things though. He likes to suck the life essence out of people and use it to his own device. Watch out for that guy!
This is a good start to what could become a very long series. The world is interesting and has lots of potential for more stories.
August 14, 2013
I am normally not a fan of fairytales, but this book was absolutely enchanting. The author Lana Axe does a wonderful job with this novel. She takes the reader into a magical and exiting journey to introduce you to a new world Nol'Deron, which is the home to humans and other various living species.
There you meet very intriguing characters. I must say the idea of humans and elves together never entered my mind, so it was a pleasant surprise to find myself really absorbed in this wonderful story.
The characters are very likable, Mel, River, Thinal and Mi'tal. Mel, and Thinal are elves that belong to the Wild clan, while Mi'tal and King Aelryk, are human warriors. Even though normally they are against in each other, here they develop and interesting relationship in order to come together and fight evil.
The story expends into many other made up for the story mysterious parts of the world called Wildlands, Westerling Vale, Al'marr, Na'zora. Very clever on the author's part, and it's really very captivating.
The authors mind is swirling in fantastic ideas and provides this fabulous magic world in her story of a River. There is suspense and wonder through out the plot. To find out that evil elves can capture the souls of everything living to fuel their spells is a bit creepy to me, but then that is what gives the story the wonder of it all.
I thoroughly enjoyed the book and I would recommend it to anyone who loves to read and has unlimited imagination. The author did a great job. It is very well written, It is a pleasurable read and an easy plot to follow.
There you meet very intriguing characters. I must say the idea of humans and elves together never entered my mind, so it was a pleasant surprise to find myself really absorbed in this wonderful story.
The characters are very likable, Mel, River, Thinal and Mi'tal. Mel, and Thinal are elves that belong to the Wild clan, while Mi'tal and King Aelryk, are human warriors. Even though normally they are against in each other, here they develop and interesting relationship in order to come together and fight evil.
The story expends into many other made up for the story mysterious parts of the world called Wildlands, Westerling Vale, Al'marr, Na'zora. Very clever on the author's part, and it's really very captivating.
The authors mind is swirling in fantastic ideas and provides this fabulous magic world in her story of a River. There is suspense and wonder through out the plot. To find out that evil elves can capture the souls of everything living to fuel their spells is a bit creepy to me, but then that is what gives the story the wonder of it all.
I thoroughly enjoyed the book and I would recommend it to anyone who loves to read and has unlimited imagination. The author did a great job. It is very well written, It is a pleasurable read and an easy plot to follow.
July 13, 2013
As a non-reader of fantasy novels, I have to admit that I liked A Story of River a lot. It took me out of the everyday grind and sent me to an exciting and fantastic journey. I won't reveal the plot but I will give you some flavor of the narrative arc. This is a multi-POV story of elves and humans (normally opposed or tolerating each other), cooperating for survival to battle with a rogue and evil sorcerer/overlord named Master Urda and his army of dastardly creatures. Master Urda already captured a small elven township, using its people as slaves for mining gems that would strengthen Urda's sorcery power. But the power-hungry man that he is, Master Urda wants more and so embarks on a mission to capture more human and elven territories, essentially to suck up their essence, and increase his power.
But not so fast. Standing in his way are elven warriors Mel and Thinal of the Wild Elves clan and human warriors Mi'tal and King Aelryk, two species usually opposed to each other but are forced to join up to fight the extreme evil of Urda. But Mel/Mi'tal and company cannot do it alone and will need the help of another powerful but gentle elven sorcerer named River of the Westerling Clan. In fact, they are not even sure if the Westerling Clan is a myth, but the man called River has supposedly been given life and power by the river that runs through the Westerling countryside.
As you can see, the elements of a good adventure story are present and the author, Lana Axe, in fact delivers on the narrative arc with clear and interesting storytelling. What I appreciated about it is that the author allowed me to sit down, open the book, and enjoy the fantastic story unfolding before me. She did the prerequisites of creating an imaginary world, thus allowing the readers to get into the journey. Is the story complex? No. In fact, some can say it is a bit predictable. But then again, A Story of River is not the type of book for deep thoughts and nuances. This is a novel that should be opened when one simply wants to relax, enjoy the day, and lose one's self in the journey. The only negative criticism I can say about it is that the author did not describe Mel and Thinal or Master Urda and General Fru or Mi'tal and King Aerlyk. I don't know what they look like and I think it is essential to a story like this to put an image to the main characters. I don't even know how tall these elves are compared to humans. But these are quibbles and easily corrected with small dribbles of description here and there, at the beginning of the book to ground readers.
I highly recommend this book for all types of readers, no matter the genre one is accustomed to. Loved the book! It is light and the story is universal. Four huge stars for A Story of River.
But not so fast. Standing in his way are elven warriors Mel and Thinal of the Wild Elves clan and human warriors Mi'tal and King Aelryk, two species usually opposed to each other but are forced to join up to fight the extreme evil of Urda. But Mel/Mi'tal and company cannot do it alone and will need the help of another powerful but gentle elven sorcerer named River of the Westerling Clan. In fact, they are not even sure if the Westerling Clan is a myth, but the man called River has supposedly been given life and power by the river that runs through the Westerling countryside.
As you can see, the elements of a good adventure story are present and the author, Lana Axe, in fact delivers on the narrative arc with clear and interesting storytelling. What I appreciated about it is that the author allowed me to sit down, open the book, and enjoy the fantastic story unfolding before me. She did the prerequisites of creating an imaginary world, thus allowing the readers to get into the journey. Is the story complex? No. In fact, some can say it is a bit predictable. But then again, A Story of River is not the type of book for deep thoughts and nuances. This is a novel that should be opened when one simply wants to relax, enjoy the day, and lose one's self in the journey. The only negative criticism I can say about it is that the author did not describe Mel and Thinal or Master Urda and General Fru or Mi'tal and King Aerlyk. I don't know what they look like and I think it is essential to a story like this to put an image to the main characters. I don't even know how tall these elves are compared to humans. But these are quibbles and easily corrected with small dribbles of description here and there, at the beginning of the book to ground readers.
I highly recommend this book for all types of readers, no matter the genre one is accustomed to. Loved the book! It is light and the story is universal. Four huge stars for A Story of River.
August 8, 2013
Kyra's Star Ratings:
Story: * * * *
Characters: * * *
Writing: * * * *
Emotional Engagement: * * *
In A Story of River, a traditional fantasy, elven and human lands are being attacked by an evil sorceror, and an unlikely band of human and elven allies seek the help of River, a powerful water elemental. I found the story enjoyable, and Ms. Axe's traditional fantasy world is charming. The writing is clear and well-crafted, with a minimum of errors (mainly some verb tense issues).
The parts with the antagonist, Ulda, were particularly interesting. He's deliciously nasty and ruthless, with a vivid personality and some really cool magic using gems and living souls. Other than these parts, though, I felt like the novel was just skimming the surface of the story. I would have liked to dig deeper into the minds, hearts, and personalities of the protagonists. There wasn't a lot other than name, position, and race (elf or human) to differentiate them, and the events of the story didn't seem to affect them very deeply. In particular, when one character died, it seemed to have only a brief and minimal impact on the other characters, even the ones who should have been devastated by that character's death. I as a reader was affected by the death of this character, who was one of the more vivid characters, and I was disappointed at the death's lack of impact on the story. In addition, I would have liked more physical description of the characters and their surroundings. A few details are given, but not enough to help me feel grounded in and surrounded by what is really a very charming and interesting fantasy world. I also would have liked to have more description of what the characters are experiencing physically as they go through their adventure, to engage my mind and senses more fully in the story. I wouldn't really consider these things to be faults in the novel; rather, they are ways in which a lot more could have been done with the novel to help it live up to its great potential.
Basically, what I'm getting at with this review is I enjoyed A Story of River and wanted more - not in length (the plot developed and resolved quite nicely and doesn't need to be longer) but in depth.
On the whole, A Story of River is an entertaining, nicely-written read, suitable for young teens through adults. I understand it's Ms. Axe's first novel, and I look forward to more books from her and to watching her development as an author.
Story: * * * *
Characters: * * *
Writing: * * * *
Emotional Engagement: * * *
In A Story of River, a traditional fantasy, elven and human lands are being attacked by an evil sorceror, and an unlikely band of human and elven allies seek the help of River, a powerful water elemental. I found the story enjoyable, and Ms. Axe's traditional fantasy world is charming. The writing is clear and well-crafted, with a minimum of errors (mainly some verb tense issues).
The parts with the antagonist, Ulda, were particularly interesting. He's deliciously nasty and ruthless, with a vivid personality and some really cool magic using gems and living souls. Other than these parts, though, I felt like the novel was just skimming the surface of the story. I would have liked to dig deeper into the minds, hearts, and personalities of the protagonists. There wasn't a lot other than name, position, and race (elf or human) to differentiate them, and the events of the story didn't seem to affect them very deeply. In particular, when one character died, it seemed to have only a brief and minimal impact on the other characters, even the ones who should have been devastated by that character's death. I as a reader was affected by the death of this character, who was one of the more vivid characters, and I was disappointed at the death's lack of impact on the story. In addition, I would have liked more physical description of the characters and their surroundings. A few details are given, but not enough to help me feel grounded in and surrounded by what is really a very charming and interesting fantasy world. I also would have liked to have more description of what the characters are experiencing physically as they go through their adventure, to engage my mind and senses more fully in the story. I wouldn't really consider these things to be faults in the novel; rather, they are ways in which a lot more could have been done with the novel to help it live up to its great potential.
Basically, what I'm getting at with this review is I enjoyed A Story of River and wanted more - not in length (the plot developed and resolved quite nicely and doesn't need to be longer) but in depth.
On the whole, A Story of River is an entertaining, nicely-written read, suitable for young teens through adults. I understand it's Ms. Axe's first novel, and I look forward to more books from her and to watching her development as an author.
September 19, 2013
Targeted to young adult readers, A Story of River is a classic sword and sorcery fantasy adventure. The prologue reminded me immediately of the Tanith Lee books I read as a young adult, which were accessible and engaging for a young audience. It took me back to that place where I learned to love to read.
Despite the obvious influence of Tolkien, Lana Axe brings the fantasy lands of the Wildlands, Na'zora, Al'marr, and the Westerling Vale to life well. I don't intend that to sound like a criticism. Tolkien's influence on modern fantasy is undeniable unless you've spent the past 60 odd years living in a vacuum. I simply mean her world will be familiar to Tolkien fans, but it is very much her own, magical, mysterious and filled with wonderful creatures.
Lana Axe also employs ideas that will be familiar to a young audience, such as the magic you might find in gaming, fireballs and lightning bolts, or the soul gems of Skyrim. These elements keep the fantasy familiar and allow Lana Axe to weave more mysterious elements into the story. It is well done, balanced, not too much of one thing or another.
For a short book, A Story of River has an epic quality brought about by the number of characters portrayed. Mel and River jostle for the job of chief protagonist, while we also follow King Aelryk, and the evil Ulda and his henchmen. Personally, I have a lot of respect for authors that are not afraid to kill major characters. Thinal's death was a surprise and kept the danger close and real. I especially liked Tu'vad in the evil corner who has a most enjoyable character progression. If only he had more impact as the golden warrior in the final battle. He is so well drawn and his fate so well set up, that it was a touch deflating to see him dealt with so swiftly.
In style, Lana Axe has an elegant way with words. Her descriptions of simple things, such as the collecting of medicinal herbs are just as engaging as the battle sequences. The book just requires a sprinkle of editorial pixie dust here and there.
I'm glad I had a chance to read and review this book. It's a fine read for a young adult audience. Personally, with the glimpses of what might be, I'd like to see Lana Axe take the brakes off and write a fantasy novel for an older audience. I'll definitely queue up for a copy.
Despite the obvious influence of Tolkien, Lana Axe brings the fantasy lands of the Wildlands, Na'zora, Al'marr, and the Westerling Vale to life well. I don't intend that to sound like a criticism. Tolkien's influence on modern fantasy is undeniable unless you've spent the past 60 odd years living in a vacuum. I simply mean her world will be familiar to Tolkien fans, but it is very much her own, magical, mysterious and filled with wonderful creatures.
Lana Axe also employs ideas that will be familiar to a young audience, such as the magic you might find in gaming, fireballs and lightning bolts, or the soul gems of Skyrim. These elements keep the fantasy familiar and allow Lana Axe to weave more mysterious elements into the story. It is well done, balanced, not too much of one thing or another.
For a short book, A Story of River has an epic quality brought about by the number of characters portrayed. Mel and River jostle for the job of chief protagonist, while we also follow King Aelryk, and the evil Ulda and his henchmen. Personally, I have a lot of respect for authors that are not afraid to kill major characters. Thinal's death was a surprise and kept the danger close and real. I especially liked Tu'vad in the evil corner who has a most enjoyable character progression. If only he had more impact as the golden warrior in the final battle. He is so well drawn and his fate so well set up, that it was a touch deflating to see him dealt with so swiftly.
In style, Lana Axe has an elegant way with words. Her descriptions of simple things, such as the collecting of medicinal herbs are just as engaging as the battle sequences. The book just requires a sprinkle of editorial pixie dust here and there.
I'm glad I had a chance to read and review this book. It's a fine read for a young adult audience. Personally, with the glimpses of what might be, I'd like to see Lana Axe take the brakes off and write a fantasy novel for an older audience. I'll definitely queue up for a copy.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 18, 2013
A Story of River by Lana Axe starts with a birth, a pact, a sacrifice and a River Spirit and sets up the epic scope of the story that follows. Humans and Elves have to work side by side to bring a river from a distant land to the country of Na'zora, a country besieged by supernatural beings and dark creatures.
The story travels at a measured pace, and the writer knows how to grip the reader at the end of the chapters to keep him/ her reading. At times the descriptive writing could be more varied, but you can say that of almost any book. The dialogue is very good - it seldom deviates from its high fantasy voice, which is good and right and proper, and satisfying for the genre. The characters of elvish Mel and Thinal especially shine out in their dialogue with one another. And Mel is particularly likeable.
The villains are true black-hearted fiends and Ulda is as nasty as they come; the concept of the spiderling creations is grim indeed.
The character of a water elemental is central to the story, but I can't say more without giving too much away.
All in all Axe is a writer who knows the mythology of elves and humans well, and plays it out nicely. A Story of River is a book worth a read, especially for lovers of High Fantasy.
A Story of River
The story travels at a measured pace, and the writer knows how to grip the reader at the end of the chapters to keep him/ her reading. At times the descriptive writing could be more varied, but you can say that of almost any book. The dialogue is very good - it seldom deviates from its high fantasy voice, which is good and right and proper, and satisfying for the genre. The characters of elvish Mel and Thinal especially shine out in their dialogue with one another. And Mel is particularly likeable.
The villains are true black-hearted fiends and Ulda is as nasty as they come; the concept of the spiderling creations is grim indeed.
The character of a water elemental is central to the story, but I can't say more without giving too much away.
All in all Axe is a writer who knows the mythology of elves and humans well, and plays it out nicely. A Story of River is a book worth a read, especially for lovers of High Fantasy.
A Story of River
September 2, 2013
A stimulating adventure
A Story of River by Lana Axe
I was given a copy from the author in exchange for an honest review.
A Story of River- What a wonderfully enchanting fairytale by Lana Axe!
It is a magical journey that will take you to new realms of fantasy in Nol'Deron. A traditional but long-lived and tested formula 'good verses evil' plot is nicely in place and works very well. Souls are taken, elves and humans with an evil sorcerer are involved in this stimulating adventure.
The book has super characters which will pull you into the the story for this great and entertaining quick read. It should appeal to all ages that need to get out of the 'norm'. Morals and adventure will draw the reader into the conflict, magic and fast-pace of this work. Will evil be conquered or good prevail?
Even though, a light read, there are dark and inspiring dark elements- pick it up, you'll love it!
A mystical 5*****
A Story of River by Lana Axe
I was given a copy from the author in exchange for an honest review.
A Story of River- What a wonderfully enchanting fairytale by Lana Axe!
It is a magical journey that will take you to new realms of fantasy in Nol'Deron. A traditional but long-lived and tested formula 'good verses evil' plot is nicely in place and works very well. Souls are taken, elves and humans with an evil sorcerer are involved in this stimulating adventure.
The book has super characters which will pull you into the the story for this great and entertaining quick read. It should appeal to all ages that need to get out of the 'norm'. Morals and adventure will draw the reader into the conflict, magic and fast-pace of this work. Will evil be conquered or good prevail?
Even though, a light read, there are dark and inspiring dark elements- pick it up, you'll love it!
A mystical 5*****
March 2, 2014
I am one of the few people that finds Lord of the Rings to be the most boring, male chauvinist books around. So I have to say, that if you like LotR you might like this. I found myself wanting to read other books. I had a hard time liking any of the characters. The one I did like? Well, I think the author didn't know what to do with that character. Too bad. She was the only female that wasn't arm candy.
The last few chapters of the book were engaging but had I not felt I needed to read this, I wouldn't have gotten that far. I hate to give such a mediocre review. It was free for an honest review so I felt I should. But like I said above, there are a lot of male nerds and geeks that would love this and want it to be a video game they could play in their mother's basement. Bad Dar, snark much?
Oh, I did like the dryads and River, too bad the story didn't surround those instead of evil and war. Meh.
The last few chapters of the book were engaging but had I not felt I needed to read this, I wouldn't have gotten that far. I hate to give such a mediocre review. It was free for an honest review so I felt I should. But like I said above, there are a lot of male nerds and geeks that would love this and want it to be a video game they could play in their mother's basement. Bad Dar, snark much?
Oh, I did like the dryads and River, too bad the story didn't surround those instead of evil and war. Meh.
September 8, 2013
A Bitter Sweet Gem!
I was hooked by this from the beginning. It gets straight into the action with a really powerful and emotive scene, which also serves to immediately give the book its sense of place. This magical journey treats the reader to lush descriptions that take you into the heart of the book. The characters are three dimensional and quickly draw you deeply into their struggles and fears. The nasties are suitably nasty and there is plenty of conflict, suspense and action as good battles evil and amazing creatures make their stand. Lana has built a fabulous world but there is much here that the reader can take on board concerning our own world and the destructive path humanity is on. A great read! Can't wait for the next one in the series.
August 4, 2015
I loved A Story Of River so much!
I loved that it was about elves because I'm used to reading books about fairies. And this was also such a different story than I'm used to, what makes me love it more.
Oh and the names! They're so likeable! Some of them are hard to pronounce and I've never seen such kind of names, which makes it funny to read!
What I aslo liked was that the point of view is from different characters.
But what I disliked was Thinal's death. Poor Mel!
His heart was far too heavy to think about much else. Thinal was gone, and his world would never be the same.
-I want to thank Lana Axe for the ARC!
I loved that it was about elves because I'm used to reading books about fairies. And this was also such a different story than I'm used to, what makes me love it more.
Oh and the names! They're so likeable! Some of them are hard to pronounce and I've never seen such kind of names, which makes it funny to read!
What I aslo liked was that the point of view is from different characters.
But what I disliked was Thinal's death. Poor Mel!
His heart was far too heavy to think about much else. Thinal was gone, and his world would never be the same.
-I want to thank Lana Axe for the ARC!
August 26, 2013
Lana Axe has brought a page turning story into another world to life. A land of majestic beauty, ever-enduring love and enchantment, but evil abides there as well. The magical creatures must do battle with greed and evil to survive. Will enemies join forces to defeat evil or will magic forever be lost, kingdoms destroyed by and for greed? The reader is drawn into the conflict, hoping evil will be conquered, but having to turn the next page to discover if enemies found a way to forgive and forget, to restore and redress past wrongs or has evil won this time round?
June 14, 2020
Sorry, have to swim against the tide here - I did not really like this book. I found it to be a cookie cutter fantasy with an unlikable main character - Mel. The character I liked amd who bought some life to the story dies about half way through.
Ho hum - read on the bus if you must
Ho hum - read on the bus if you must
August 10, 2013
There are many other things I liked about A Story of River. The characters Mel and River were two of my favorites. However, the relationship I identified with the most was the one between Mel and Thinal. I love that they complement the opposite traits of each other and seem to blend together to make one whole, hysterical elf.
The story has a very fairytale feel to it, and is told on a grand scale. Allow me to explain – the world of Nōl’Deron is a vast home to humans, elves, elementals, dryads, and evil creatures (like wolfman monsters and giant armored spiders). The elves, for example are split into Wild, Enlightened, and Westerling. Taking it even further, the Wild elves have different clans, such as Silver Birch and Oak Leaf. In addition to reading about the living beings in Nōl’Deron, the reader is also introduced to the Wildlands, the Westerling Vale, Al’marr, Na’zora and many other parts of the world. So, yeah, like I said, grand scale!
If you’ve read my other reviews, then you know I’m a big fan of magic systems. So, I felt the description of the magic used in A Story of River could have been more developed and cultivated. That being said, the magic of the evil elves in capturing the souls of people and other living beings to fuel their spells was interesting…and a bit disturbing.
Overall, A Story of River was a very fast, straightforward read; however, I thought the tale was told too quickly and felt rushed at time. Sometimes the POVs shifted so swiftly that it left me a little confused and I had to double-back. And the dialogue was a bit rudimentary. There is a really good plot for this story, but I would have liked it more if there was a little more development in the dialogue and scenes (***SPOILER ALERT*** especially the action scenes when Thinal was killed, and when the Na’zorians defeated the golden soldier that Ulda created ***END SPOILER***). With a little more elaboration, complexity and finesse woven in, the story might have contained more mystery and tantalizing morsels that would keep readers turning the pages long into the night.
Overall rating: 3 out of 5 stars.
Appropriate for ages 13 & up.
***I received a free copy of A Story of River from the author in exchange for an honest review.***
The story has a very fairytale feel to it, and is told on a grand scale. Allow me to explain – the world of Nōl’Deron is a vast home to humans, elves, elementals, dryads, and evil creatures (like wolfman monsters and giant armored spiders). The elves, for example are split into Wild, Enlightened, and Westerling. Taking it even further, the Wild elves have different clans, such as Silver Birch and Oak Leaf. In addition to reading about the living beings in Nōl’Deron, the reader is also introduced to the Wildlands, the Westerling Vale, Al’marr, Na’zora and many other parts of the world. So, yeah, like I said, grand scale!
If you’ve read my other reviews, then you know I’m a big fan of magic systems. So, I felt the description of the magic used in A Story of River could have been more developed and cultivated. That being said, the magic of the evil elves in capturing the souls of people and other living beings to fuel their spells was interesting…and a bit disturbing.
Overall, A Story of River was a very fast, straightforward read; however, I thought the tale was told too quickly and felt rushed at time. Sometimes the POVs shifted so swiftly that it left me a little confused and I had to double-back. And the dialogue was a bit rudimentary. There is a really good plot for this story, but I would have liked it more if there was a little more development in the dialogue and scenes (***SPOILER ALERT*** especially the action scenes when Thinal was killed, and when the Na’zorians defeated the golden soldier that Ulda created ***END SPOILER***). With a little more elaboration, complexity and finesse woven in, the story might have contained more mystery and tantalizing morsels that would keep readers turning the pages long into the night.
Overall rating: 3 out of 5 stars.
Appropriate for ages 13 & up.
***I received a free copy of A Story of River from the author in exchange for an honest review.***
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 30, 2013
I won this book through the Goodreads First Reads program in exchange for an unbiased review.
This was a wonderful tale of magic and elves, elementals and sorcerers. We follow Wild Elf Mel and human King Aelryk as they see the answer of how to bring a river to defend their homes from the dark creatures at the command of the evil elven wizard Ulda.
This story had a lot of promise but I would have liked to see more dimension in the characters and more details in the world building. Axe has created a fascinating world, but there were times when something would be mentioned in an offhand way about the way the magic there worked and the reader is left wanting more. For example the brief, but nearly pointless, meeting with the fire elemental.
Also, and this is not a fault I've found only in Axe's story but I've seen even in professionally published books, if you are going to write about a purely evil villain, don't write from his point of view. I ended up picturing Ulda rubbing his hands together, cackling evily, as he devised more and horrible ways to torture children. One really doesn't want to be inside their head when they have no thoughts other than how to do bad things and to gain more power. At this point you are not given an opportunity to find any redeeming feature about them, something I find necessary in a villain so that they avoid becoming a caricature.
On the other hand I'm very fond of River. The scenes where he would communicate with the river spirit were beautiful, and the relationships of both him and Mel with their lifemates was very sweet and touching.
The story itself moved at a swift pace, sometimes perhaps a bit too swift as it sounded like they traversed the world and back in a matter of paragraphs, but the reader never gets bored. And on the whole there is a feeling of high fantasy, enchantment, and of the gentle, but powerfule magics that come along with tales of elven-kin. Where the trees and the rivers are alive. I am glad I had the opportunity to read this book.
This was a wonderful tale of magic and elves, elementals and sorcerers. We follow Wild Elf Mel and human King Aelryk as they see the answer of how to bring a river to defend their homes from the dark creatures at the command of the evil elven wizard Ulda.
This story had a lot of promise but I would have liked to see more dimension in the characters and more details in the world building. Axe has created a fascinating world, but there were times when something would be mentioned in an offhand way about the way the magic there worked and the reader is left wanting more. For example the brief, but nearly pointless, meeting with the fire elemental.
Also, and this is not a fault I've found only in Axe's story but I've seen even in professionally published books, if you are going to write about a purely evil villain, don't write from his point of view. I ended up picturing Ulda rubbing his hands together, cackling evily, as he devised more and horrible ways to torture children. One really doesn't want to be inside their head when they have no thoughts other than how to do bad things and to gain more power. At this point you are not given an opportunity to find any redeeming feature about them, something I find necessary in a villain so that they avoid becoming a caricature.
On the other hand I'm very fond of River. The scenes where he would communicate with the river spirit were beautiful, and the relationships of both him and Mel with their lifemates was very sweet and touching.
The story itself moved at a swift pace, sometimes perhaps a bit too swift as it sounded like they traversed the world and back in a matter of paragraphs, but the reader never gets bored. And on the whole there is a feeling of high fantasy, enchantment, and of the gentle, but powerfule magics that come along with tales of elven-kin. Where the trees and the rivers are alive. I am glad I had the opportunity to read this book.
September 3, 2013
3.5 stars
I enjoyed this book. However, there were a few things that bothered me, that kept it from being a 5 – star rating.
There were some parts of the story that could have been omitted as they didn’t seem to reflect the character or progress the story. They came across as filler passages.
Second, it seemed as if the characters were not allowed to feel for longer than a sentence or two. Several times in the story, a character would be mad or upset, and then a second later be fine. Or worse, jump back and forth between being upset, then resigned, then angry (example the bad guy in the last few pages). It would have fit better to have him remain angry/upset throughout the passage and his actions when leaving his tower wouldn’t have to be explained, it would be evident to the reader why he acted and did what he did.
What I did like about this story was the history and world building. The variety of the characters from different types of Elves, Dyrads, etc.
I also enjoyed the story arc and plot. This is an author to checkout and I would be happy to read/review any of her future work.
I enjoyed this book. However, there were a few things that bothered me, that kept it from being a 5 – star rating.
There were some parts of the story that could have been omitted as they didn’t seem to reflect the character or progress the story. They came across as filler passages.
Second, it seemed as if the characters were not allowed to feel for longer than a sentence or two. Several times in the story, a character would be mad or upset, and then a second later be fine. Or worse, jump back and forth between being upset, then resigned, then angry (example the bad guy in the last few pages). It would have fit better to have him remain angry/upset throughout the passage and his actions when leaving his tower wouldn’t have to be explained, it would be evident to the reader why he acted and did what he did.
What I did like about this story was the history and world building. The variety of the characters from different types of Elves, Dyrads, etc.
I also enjoyed the story arc and plot. This is an author to checkout and I would be happy to read/review any of her future work.
December 27, 2013
This tale takes the reader into a realm where elves and humans still reside as neighbors. The tumultuous relationship between mankind and the many races of elves must be set aside when an evil sorcerer finds a new way to rise to power. Ulda has found a way to bind the souls of men in order to glean their power to bend the wills of the animals and men around him. His opportunistic sorcery is unlimited by his inability to gain empathy or look beyond his own self-centered need for power and domination. Meanwhile, King Aelryk from the realm of men has realized his kingdom is in danger. A prophesy sets a quest in motion. He must travel to a “mythical” land to seek the help of an elemental spirit who is incarnate in the form of an elf from a race of ancient elves. The king seeks the assistance of Mel and his mate, Thinal to ensure the mission’s success. This elfish pair attempts to guide the royal party through the wilderness to ask for help before Ulda’s evil grip can extend further into the kingdom where it is already harming both men and elves. This edge-of-your-seat adventure lends an air of believability to an era and realm of magic and forgotten races. It is a must read!
January 6, 2014
A Story of River is a remarkable tale the flows easily from the pages with well crafted characters. I would enjoy spending time with most of these folks, especially River an Elf with an astounding connection to the river that flows through his land. When war breaks out in the neighboring kingdom of men, King Aelryk must overcome age old differences and prejudices to align himself with clans of Elves to meet and request help from the only one that can defeat the evil that is threatening to overcome his kingdom. I hope to read more from this author about this land and the people that populate it. Well written tales deserve time in readers hands and minds and work their way into their hearts. This is one of those.
November 3, 2013
I loved, loved, loved this fantasy tale of elves, kings, sorcerers, humans and elementals. What I liked best is Lana Axe's writing style and pacing. This novel was fast paced and breezed by. It never dulled or got boring - something was always happening. I also enjoyed the world she created of elves, humans and elementals working together to combat black magic and evil forces. The characters were likable and the story contained elements of humor, romance, and the need to work together despite the clans having a difficult, warring history. It reminded me of the world created by JRT in Lord of the Rings. I really look forward to reading her next book in this world!
October 3, 2013
Book given to me by the author for an honest review.
Stories with elves have always been a favorite of mine. I am an avid reader of Terry Brooks, and this one did not disappoint me at all. I enjoyed the character River, who is both an elf and elemental. I love the connection between all the characters and how the humans join together with these wild elves to save their kingdom from being destroyed by a nasty sorcerer.
I do hope the author chooses to continue, at some point, with this story. I would like to see what happens to River as there is a hint that his travels are not quite over. I really appreciate Lana giving me the chance to read her delightful story.
Stories with elves have always been a favorite of mine. I am an avid reader of Terry Brooks, and this one did not disappoint me at all. I enjoyed the character River, who is both an elf and elemental. I love the connection between all the characters and how the humans join together with these wild elves to save their kingdom from being destroyed by a nasty sorcerer.
I do hope the author chooses to continue, at some point, with this story. I would like to see what happens to River as there is a hint that his travels are not quite over. I really appreciate Lana giving me the chance to read her delightful story.
September 14, 2013
I enjoyed the traditional fantasy of the story, though personally I felt that the world and culture could be filled out more. There were many cool aspects and scenes in the story which I enjoyed. I typically like really in-depth reading, so this was different in that aspect, but it was simple and amusing. My favorite scene was at the end, and now that I've finished the book, I wonder if the author plans on continuing on building this world.
July 28, 2014
I was sent this book for review and found it a well written fantasy with realistic characters set to battle.
Born of sacrifice, River is a likeable hero plunged into the fight of good versus evil - always a good ingredient for this kind of winning tale.
I don't give spoilers but will say that this story is an enjoyable read for lovers of fantasy.
Born of sacrifice, River is a likeable hero plunged into the fight of good versus evil - always a good ingredient for this kind of winning tale.
I don't give spoilers but will say that this story is an enjoyable read for lovers of fantasy.
July 28, 2013
i dont normally read fantasy - but i did enjoy this book - the storyline moves right along - i did find the main character, river, was a bit to perfect - much prefered the character of mel! i would recommend it to friends that like this type of book! nice first book Lana!
June 24, 2013
This is a fast-paced story of magic and adventure. It is very imaginative and easy to follow. The characters are well developed and interesting. I look forward to reading more from this author in the future.
June 1, 2013
This was a great story. I really enjoyed reading it.
June 24, 2013
It's a fairytale setting, but Mel keeps it real. He's cool. Good job. :)
September 26, 2013
Review coming soon
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