[Acknowledgments]
Acknowledgments
I am grateful to all those whose advice and encouragement have been invaluable in
this project, especially to Dr Tina Kendall, Senior Lecturer, Anglia Ruskin University;
Kathryn Johnson, British Library Curator of Theatrical Manuscripts; Dr Steve
Nicholson, Director of Drama, University of Sheffield; staff in the Reading Room at
the Harry Ransom Center, especially Elspeth Healey. For access to his father‟s
unpublished memoirs, and for his generosity, I acknowledge the contribution of Chris
Duff, son of Patrick Desmond. I am particularly grateful to Gordon Dickerson of the
Osborne Estate for his enthusiasm and good humour, and to all at Oberon.
These two plays were discovered as part of the Theatre Archive Project
(www.bl.uk/theatrearchive), a collaborative project between the British Library and
the University of Sheffield. I am therefore indebted to my co-curator of The Golden
Generation exhibition, Dr Alec Patton, and to the project leader Professor Dominic
Shellard, Pro-Vice-Chancellor for External Affairs at the University of Sheffield, for
their support and advice.
The publication is dedicated to Ted Freeman and Monday mornings, 17 Woodland
Road.
[General Intro]
„THAT WOULD HAVE MADE QUITE A DIFFERENCE‟: LOOKING BACK
BEFORE LOOK BACK…
John Osborne made theatrical history when Look Back in Anger opened at the Royal
Court theatre on 8 May 1956. Yet as much as he made history, his story has also been
powerfully shaped by the eternal critical and popular concentration on the play –
riding waves of acclamation, contestation, and counter-revisionism - that has tied
Osborne to the legend of „1956 and all that‟. In recalling the events of 1956, it is easy
to slide into the myth of the Young Turk who, overnight, heralded a new beginning at
the Royal Court with his very first play. In fact, Look Back was the twenty-six year
old John Osborne‟s third play to be produced, as indeed it was the third play to open
in the English Stage Company‟s first season at the Court.
While recent years have seen increasing critical engagement with British theatre in the
years before Look Back in Anger, disputing the once common view of a pre-1956
theatrical wasteland, few writers have concentrated on the theatre of Osborne before
this time. Osborne himself made fleeting and disparaging references to his early plays
in his autobiography, A Better Class of Person, but believed the texts themselves to
have vanished, a supposition reiterated in John Heilpern‟s 2006 biography, A Patriot
for Us. However, in 2008, as part of research for the British Library‟s The Golden
Generation exhibition (part of the collaborative Theatre Archive Project with the
University of Sheffield), copies of the two plays included in this volume emerged
from the archives of the Lord Chamberlain. The Lord Chamberlain was the senior
official of the Royal Household, whose arbitrary, unaccountable, and often
antediluvian pronouncements dictated what could be seen on the English stage until
the abolition of theatre censorship in 1968. Although showing some signs of age, and
filed by staff at St James‟s Palace in idiosyncratic fashion (Osborne is listed at one
point as John Caborne), the typewritten texts are complete, and published here for the
very first time.
While Osborne had written at least seven plays before 1956, the two plays that follow
are noteworthy not only for their survival, but also for the fact they were actually
staged. As documentation of a young writer trying to settle upon his own distinct
style, and of two generic (false?) routes he could have followed, both works are
intriguing. Moreover, because the sole extant texts had been submitted for licensing to
the Lord Chamberlain, both retain traces of the censor‟s infamous blue pencil, marks
of hegemonic social and cultural assumptions in early 1950s Britain.
Before Osborne began writing professionally, he was – like so many new playwrights
who emerged during the 1950s - an actor. In January 1948 he was hired as Assistant
Stage Manager and understudy for a regional tour of the West End hit No Room at the
Inn, and it was during this tour, backstage at the Empire, Sunderland, that Osborne
began work on his first play, Resting Deep. During the summer, Osborne began a
relationship with Stella Linden, the new (married) leading lady on the tour, and it was
through Stella‟s encouragement and editing that Osborne‟s early draft would later be
produced under the title The Devil Inside Him. When the tour ended in December,
Osborne and Stella moved to Brighton, where Stella‟s accommodating husband,
theatre producer Patrick Desmond, allowed them to stay in his flat on Arundel
Terrace.
„Terrence Rattigan was around the corner, stars were above and around us‟: Osborne
would always recall his halcyon year in Brighton with Stella with wistful affection,
and it was during this period that the two lovers collaborated on a new play, Happy
Birthday. The text has not survived, but in unpublished drafts of his autobiography
Osborne hints at the direction his writing was taking. Ironically for a writer whose
uncompromising vigour is often seen to have vanquished the previous generation of
post-War verse-dramatists, in 1949 Osborne recalled: „I remember seeing The Lady’s
not for Burning [verse drama by Christopher Fry] with some excitement, thinking at
least here was something different and that perhaps this was a path I might take‟.
However Osborne‟s new-found enthusiasm found little favour with his collaborator –
„I became uneasily aware that Pat and Stella were intent upon producing plays that
would out-Binkie [commercial producer Binkie Beaumont] Binkie in their
Binkieness‟ – and by summer 1949 the relationship with Stella was over, and Happy
Birthday abandoned.
Yet the Patrick Desmond link endured, and after finding Osborne an ASM job in
Leicester, Desmond put on The Devil Inside Him in Huddersfield in May 1950.
Following his first professional production, Osborne met an actor called Anthony
Creighton, joining his shoestring Saga Repertory Company - based first in Ilfracombe
and moving afterwards to Hayling Island, Hampshire – as Company Manager, before
the inevitable disbanding of the company in late 1950. The following year, acting in
Bridgwater, he fell in love with Pamela Lane; they married in June 1951, and the
bitter unravelling of their relationship over the next few years was to be acutely
charted in Look Back in Anger.
But before their marriage was staged with such muscular realism in Look Back,
Osborne chronicled it in an altogether more oblique way in The Great Bear: or
Minette, written in London public libraries between engagements during 1952. Two
notebooks have survived, comprising the first two acts, as well as thirty-nine pages of
the third act (which ends, in medias res, with the unfulfilled promise: „Continued in
Book III‟). Osborne was clearly still under the spell of the verse-dramatists, and what
Jimmy Porter described as „a good slosh of Eliot‟ runs through the play. Of more
interest, however, is the way in which its structure, narrative, characters and rhetorical
tropes so closely mirror his famous follow-up: Look Back in free verse. Intriguingly,
the image of bears and squirrels (the nicknames Osborne and Pamela gave each other)
runs strongly through the play. Minette was originally titled The Animal’s Nest, and
the animal metaphors and language are both a refuge („I played with you first as an
animal, and I was happy‟) and at the same time a paradise constantly menaced: „O
those are traps of steel for you to blunder into…these are men to manacle you
monsters, to make you dance pathetically, fastened to a chain‟. The bear and squirrel
sequence that concluded Look Back was criticised by Kenneth Tynan in his otherwise
legendary encomium, and would cost the play an immediate West End transfer, but
the image was clearly one that Osborne had been engaging with in his writing for
several years, and no whimsical, artificial graft.
For the moment, however, Pamela‟s verdict on his work was unequivocal – „dull and
boring‟ – and peripatetic years as a wandering player continued, sometimes
overlapping with young writers in waiting such as Peter Nichols and Harold Pinter.
Osborne completed a new play, The King is Dead, in early 1953, and when Pamela
found work in Derby in the autumn, he remained in London with Anthony Creighton,
researching and collaborating on a McCarthy play, Personal Enemy. Pamela‟s star
was rising at the Derby Playhouse, and in early 1954 Osborne briefly joined her, an
unhappy period that marked the beginning of the end of their marriage (they divorced
in 1957). In between engagements at the Playhouse, Osborne furiously searched for
an agent to take on Personal Enemy, and in letters to Creighton he tracked the
changing fortunes of Senator McCarthy, speculating on the likely implications of his
fall for their play. At the same time, Osborne looked for a theatre for The King is
Dead, and sent a copy to Kenneth Rose at the Playhouse, Kidderminster (where
Osborne had played the previous summer), enclosing admiring quotes from Richard
Findlater and Dame Sybil Thorndike. Rose was cautiously encouraging, though felt
that Osborne went 'completely off the rails' after the first Act; embarrassingly, he was
unimpressed by the letters of support, and claimed to have seen at least a dozen recent
plays with 'Sybil Thorndike's blessing attached to them'.
Personal Enemy was eventually staged the following year by Osborne's old mentor,
Patrick Desmond, although by the time it opened in Harrogate in March 1955,
Osborne claimed to have lost interest in the work (in fact, he was still sending the
script to theatres, including the Bristol Old Vic, after the Harrogate production). An
autumn tour of Wales in Pygmalion was followed by a cold and impecunious London
winter with Creighton, during which Osborne again collaborated on a new play with
his flat-mate. Creighton had developed a dramatic situation derived from his
experiences working at the telephone exchange, and onto his basic plot Osborne
began to add dialogue, and a title: Epitaph for George Dillon. Epitaph is the only preLook Back play of Osborne‟s to have been performed and published after 1956, and a
substantially revised version was first produced –to no little acclaim- by the Royal
Court in a post-Look Back glow in 1958. In addition to the staging of Personal
Enemy, the early months of 1955 saw Osborne begin a new work, eventually titled
Look Back in Anger. The play was finished on 3 June, and having been turned down
by Patrick Desmond, it was submitted to the usual trial by agents, before eventually
ending up at the newly formed English Stage Company at the Royal Court. By now,
history seeps into legend, and the events that led to George Devine rowing out
towards Osborne and Creighton‟s barge on the Thames, which in turn led to 8 May
1956, are well known.
Ten years later, in November 1966, John Osborne gave evidence to the Joint Select
Committee of the House of Lords and the House of Commons on Censorship of the
Theatre, an investigation that led to the abolition of theatre censorship in 1968. As
part of his testimony, he mentioned his earlier, pre-1956 work, and recalled his brush
with censorship (which he mis-remembers as taking place in 1951). Evidently
interested, the committee speculated that „had it not been for the existence of the Lord
Chamberlain, you might have made your appearance as a dramatist in this country in
1951 instead of 1956‟, concluding „that would have made quite a difference, would it
not?‟ In publishing the two plays of John Osborne to be produced before 1956, we do
not take aim at the radical impact or influence of Look Back in Anger. Rather, in
bringing to light two intriguing works that are of significance to the story of Osborne itself the story of post-War theatre - we hope to gently underscore the fact that a
teleological view of theatre history is never the full story. A legend is an invisible
melding of false starts, dead ends, and the capricious vicissitudes of chance: things
might always have been different.
[Timeline]
Chronology of Osborne‟s early work
1929
JO born on 12 December, son of Thomas Godfrey Osborne and Nellie
Beatrice Grove.
1948
JO ASM and understudy for „number two‟ tour of No Room at the Inn.
JO begins writing Resting Deep in March in Sunderland, completing it
in Leeds the following month.
Stella Linden joins the tour in summer; helps JO re-write Resting Deep
(now re-titled The Devil Inside Him). Stella begins affair with JO.
JO and Stella move to Brighton in December, JO acts in Treasure
Island pantomime over Christmas.
1949
JO and Stella begin work on Happy Birthday.
Short of money, Stella takes job as waitress, JO finds work in hotel.
Stella leaves JO during summer.
1950
Patrick Desmond finds JO job as ASM in Leicester.
The Devil Inside Him opens at the Theatre Royal, Huddersfield, on 29
May; JO reunited briefly with Stella for first night.
JO joins Anthony Creighton‟s Saga Repertory Company.
1951
Acting in Bridgwater, JO meets Pamela Elizabeth Lane, whom he
marries on 23 June. JO gets job in Camberwell, London.
1952
JO writes The Great Bear: or Minette; Pamela on tour. JO begins The
King is Dead later in the year (completed January 1953).
1953
JO acts in See How They Run at Frinton-on-Sea in July and August.
The programme lists Peter Nichols as Lance-Corporal Winton and
John Osborne as The Intruder.
Pamela finds work at Derby Playhouse in autumn; JO and Creighton
begin to collaborate on Personal Enemy.
Fragments of later plays including Look Back in Anger, The
Entertainer, Luther, and A Patriot for Me begin to appear in JO's
notebooks.
1954
JO briefly joins Pamela in Derby, before returning to London to live
with Anthony Creighton. While at Derby, JO sends copies of Personal
Enemy and The King is Dead to several agents and theatre owners.
1955.
Personal Enemy opens at the Opera House, Harrogate, on 1 March.
JO and Creighton collaborate on Epitaph for George Dillon (opened 11
February 1958), completed by 25 March.
Look Back in Anger finished on 3 June.
JO begins Love in a Myth in November, finished 5 December; the play
was reworked as a musical and staged as The World of Paul Slickey
(opened on 14 April 1959).
1956
Look Back in Anger opens on 8 May at the Royal Court theatre, a
month after the nascent English Stage Company‟s opening production
of The Mulberry Bush.
NOTES
The texts of the plays are taken from the Lord Chamberlain's Playscripts collection,
held at the British Library Department of Manuscripts. Both texts were exhibited for
the first time as part of The Golden Generation exhibition, British Library Folio
Society Gallery, 27 August-30 November 2008.
The Devil Inside Him. LCP 1950/1608.
Resubmitted by Patrick Desmond as Cry for Love. LCP 1961/65.
Personal Enemy. LCP/ 7672.
A copy of the script was returned to Osborne and Creighton by the Lord
Chamberlain's office, and is also held in the British Library's John Osborne
Collection. Osborne 158.
Other background material taken from: the archive of John Osborne, and Osborne's
letters to Anthony Creighton, Harry Ransom Center, University of Texas at Austin;
the Lord Chamberlain's Reader Reports, British Library; Osborne's autobiography A
Better Class of Person (1981); John Heilpern's biography John Osborne: A Patriot for
Us (2006).
[intro to first play The Devil Inside Him]
THE DEVIL INSIDE HIM
We few, we happy few…
Henry V
One afternoon she introduced me to the assistant stage manager, a willowy good-looking young
man of eighteen. Stella had already told me about him, that he looked like a Greek god and
wrote marvelous poetry…A few weeks later, Stella brought me a play he had written…It was
very interesting, but useless.
In his unpublished memoirs, Patrick Desmond recalls the moment when his wife,
Stella Linden, introduced him to her fellow actor and soon-to-be lover, John Osborne.
In spring 1948, Osborne had completed the first draft of what he later described as „a
melodrama about a poetic Welsh loon called Resting Deep‟, and had shown it to
Stella. Schooled in the demands of repertory theatre, Stella immediately identified a
lack of structure, and advised a crash-course in the well-made plays of Pinero. Stella‟s
supercilious surprise that Osborne had not read The Second Mrs Tanqueray („that, she
suggested, accounted for my blundering‟) has its comic counterpoint in Epitaph for
George Dillon when the shady producer reacts to George‟s ignorance of I Was a Drug
Fiend: „no wonder you write like you do. I thought everyone had seen that‟. Of equal
concern to Stella was Osborne‟s soaring language, since any „intimation of poetry in
the theatre was pornography to her‟. Nonetheless, Desmond was hoping to take over
the Granville theatre in Waltham Green, and Stella hinted at a production of Resting
Deep for the opening season… if changes could be made. Accordingly, the two lovers
set to work reshaping the play, adding „a few coarse jokes‟, and re-titling it The Devil
Inside Him. Over thirty years later, Osborne recalled one of these jokes – the daffy
daily woman singing a song called „Oh let me play with your snowballs‟ - with glee,
marvelling at how they had sneaked it past the Lord Chamberlain. He was to be less
successful in subsequent encounters with the official censor.
Waltham Green remained a pipe dream however, and after their tour had ended,
Osborne and Stella moved together to Brighton, where they collaborated on a new
play. However, Osborne‟s continued attachment to poetical drama became a source of
tension, and he remembered „Stella berating me for my inexperience and disastrous
tendency to poeticise rather than dramatise‟. As the glorious summer of 1949 drew to
a close, so did their relationship; that The Devil Inside Him survived the liaison was
due entirely to Patrick Desmond. Producer, director, actor; Desmond was above all an
impresario, with an impressive theatrical pedigree dating back to the 1930s. In the
1960s he would set up a touring company with a young Cameron Mackintosh, but he
was the kind of larger-than-life figure fated to disappear from the English stage with
the decline of weekly rep. Osborne admitted to partly modelling the gregarious theatre
producer Barney in Epitaph for George Dillon on Desmond, and it may be no
coincidence that an actor called George Dillon was playing in Desmond productions
at this time.
In early 1950, Desmond secured the Theatre Royal, Huddersfield, for a short
repertory season, to include The Devil Inside Him. Although Osborne had volunteered
to play the leading role in his play, an „exciting young actor‟ was engaged instead
(cynically glossed by Osborne as „someone inexperienced and cheap‟), and „the world
premiere‟ of The Devil began to be breathlessly advertised as a „turbulent drama with
love, hate and murder‟.
On Easter Monday [in fact it opened on Whit Monday] 1950 I sat in the stalls of the Theatre
Royal, Huddersfield, watching the world opening of my play, holding hands with my coauthor…After less than eighteen months in the theatre, I was watching my own play – or a
version of it – being performed in a professional theatre.
Takings on the opening night were good, and the Huddersfield Daily Examiner hailed
the „real dramatic instinct behind the play‟, as well as the performance of Reginald
Barratt as Huw („as brilliant a piece of acting as we have seen…for a long time‟).
However, audiences waned throughout the rest of the week and, in Desmond‟s words,
'it created no stir‟. Although Osborne affectionately remembered the opening night, he
found his „remaining wastegrounds of poetry‟ had begun to pall, and in retrospect
seems not to have dissented from the opinion of the official censor: „A conventionally
gloomy play about the Welsh as I hope they are not?‟ The Devil Inside Him is,
however, far more absorbing than the Lord Chamberlain, or perhaps its author, would
give it credit for.
The opening scene would have been familiar to rep audiences of the time: a
mysterious lodger - redolent perhaps of The Mousetrap’s Mr Paravicini - creeps down
the stairs of the boarding house, and we don‟t have to wait long for the introduction of
a comically garrulous daily woman, and a precociously seductive servant girl. As the
play advances, however, an exploration of the cost of being true to oneself - of finding
a place in an indifferent world – emerges. These are concerns familiar to Osborne‟s
later heroes, and to the roll-call of Osborne‟s (sometimes) happy few, to the Jimmy
Porters and the Colonel Redls, can be added a new member of the band of brothers:
Huw Prosser.
Huw is established early in the play as an elemental, almost animalistic, foil to the
hypocrisy of so-called civilised village society. Lengthy stage directions detail Huw‟s
way of eating („There is a strange almost primitive delicacy about the way he eats and
drinks. Perhaps it can be best compared to a rabbit‟) in sharp contrast to the socialised
routines of his parents who „continue with their meal stolidly‟. Later, in everincreasing flights of verbal extravagances, the sterility of the house is opposed to the
integrity of the natural world:
I can show you the softness of the mists, wandering like strangers amongst the marshes; where
the sad music of the wild birds runs like mountain water over the strings of the young reeds. I
can show you the smell of dead bark freshly chipped from its tree; the urgent smell of early
morning and the hushed smell of the evening.
Yet the natural world is not idealised, and Huw‟s job at the village butcher allows for
an early intimation that the truth of the natural world barely conceals its primal
violence: „Have you ever seen a pig slaughtered? They hold its head, grip its ears and
sit on it, like sitting on a bicycle. And they cut its throat just as you might cut an
apple. And it screams.‟ While this may not seem obvious table-talk, for Huw it is the
honesty of his description that counts, an honesty that his father is unable to face
(„Such a pity he couldn‟t have worked in the Insurance Office with his cousin David‟,
is all he can muster in response). As the play progresses, it becomes clear that the
village is paralysed by the prospect of such plain speaking, and numbed by fear of an
ill-defined outside world. The icy minister, Mr Gruffuyd, accords himself the power
to define and root out evil in the village‟s midst, and in so doing employs the
language of medieval witch-hunts: „The devil is inside you, Huw. Can you feel him?
Living in the filth inside you?‟ In Gruffuyd‟s determination to expel „the voice of the
devil, the tempter‟, the play dramatises a repressive society not dissimilar to the
hysterical paranoia of McCarthyite America that Osborne would turn to in his next
play to be performed, Personal Enemy (1955). More prosaically, the puritan Welsh
minister is perhaps also a jab at a fellow actor in No Room at the Inn whom Osborne
suspected of spreading gossip about his affair with Stella (his „Welshness and
Puritanism made him a likely double dealer‟).
In the confrontation at the end of Act III, the underlying structure of the Minister‟s
cruelty is subtly dissected by Burn (a medical student and raisonneur of the piece),
when he articulates a charge directed at crusading hypocrites throughout the ages:
„You can‟t stamp out what doesn‟t exist. You create evil. You want it…that‟s your
business, isn‟t it? Denying life and creating your “evil” myth, making beauty into
ugliness.‟ The play is a plea for resistance to this stultifying world-view, an appeal for
a unity of mind and soul, and for „all the good things that life has to offer‟. In light of
this, what then are we to make of the act that defines the play‟s narrative, and the
character of Huw: his murder of the servant girl, Dilys, at the end of Act II. Or rather,
almost at the end of Act II, for a crucial, single page, wordless scene is interpolated
before the Curtain, which suggests how we might read this sudden irruption of
violence.
The murder scene is indicative of the way the play as a whole is positioned
intriguingly between two theatrical eras. On the one hand, a good murder is a staple of
the well-made rep thriller, and a common conceit to accelerate and concentrate
narrative. It can set up a who-dunnit in the best Christie tradition, the characters
assembling in a single room for a classic unmasking scene: the daily woman in the
kitchen, or the shady commercial traveller with the candlestick? However, by
showing the murder on-stage, and by allowing the other characters to quickly
understand the identity of the killer, this approach is effectively denied. Is it then an
act of isolated madness (Osborne later termed Huw „a Welsh loon‟), an acte gratuit?
The detailed stage directions to the wordless scene suggest that by choosing to strike
against the moralising of the village, and by assuming the consequences, the murder is
in fact a truly existential – and thus transformative - act.
This is another Huw…He seems to stand up straight mentally and physically for the first
time…None of his movements are hurried, neither are they unsure.
It is an act that visibly re-defines Huw and his ethical configuration within a new
freedom. We might compare this total transformation in Huw to the new-found selfawareness and decisiveness of Sartre's existential hero, Orestes, after the murder of
Clytemnestra and Aegisthus in the play Les Mouches, Sartre's existential gloss on the
Oresteia (produced in London as The Flies in 1947). For all Osborne‟s later
fulminating against the pretensions of the prevailing French drama, he was reflecting
deeply on the Existentialists‟ emphasis on the vertiginous imperative of choice and
freedom. In one of his early notebooks, among notes for Sartre‟s classic existentialist
novel L’âge de raison (Age of Reason), Osborne grudgingly admitted: „I can't help
feeling that those existentialists for all their raffishness have got something…We
really do seem to be dominated by choice.‟
However, there is failure at the heart of the play‟s narrative and extra-digetic spaces,
and it is a failure of language. Huw‟s action is a step towards selfhood, but (like
Orestes) it is an alienating act that he is unable to share, except, briefly and
tentatively, with Burn. „Every loveliness I have known has been a secret one‟, Huw
admits, and his early reading of Sonnet CVI - „Have eyes to wonder but lack tongues
to praise‟ - points at his inability to engage fully with his fellow human beings
through language. Despite the clarity of the manner in which he assumes his act,
communication – defined by Burn as „the way from our loneliness‟ – is beyond Huw.
Similarly, Osborne‟s dramatic language cannot quite convince in its attempts to
enclose his tilt at conventional morality, and his bold appeal to the strength of the
individual. The „flashes of poetry‟ ultimately distract from his keenly felt convictions,
and it would take a few more years before the violence of Osborne‟s passion would
find a more apposite means of expression through the demotic furies of Jimmy Porter
in his third play to be produced: Look Back in Anger.
[The Devil play text]
The Devil Inside Him was first performed at the Theatre Royal, Huddersfield, on 29
May 1950, with the following cast:
MRS EVANS
MR STEPHENS
MRS PROSSER
DILYS
HUW
MR PROSSER
BURN
MR GRUFFYD
June Ellis
L. J. Meddick
Hilda Stanley
Stella Linden
Reginald Barratt
Alan Bromly
Tim Turner
Maurice Durant
Directed by Stella Linden, scenery designed and painted by A. S. Saunders.
The Devil Inside Him was revived under the title Cry for Love (attributed to „Robert
Owen‟) by Patrick Desmond at the Pembroke Theatre, Croydon, on 8 January 1962.
[intro to second play Personal Enemy]
PERSONAL ENEMY
It was a queer, sultry summer, the summer they electrocuted the Rosenbergs.
Sylvia Plath The Bell Jar.
John Osborne‟s second play to be produced, Personal Enemy, is set in small-town
America in August 1953, in the middle of Plath‟s „queer, sultry summer.‟ Amid an
atmosphere as feverish as the close summer heat (referenced with conspicuous
frequency by the characters), Cold War tensions within the United States were
intensifying; on 19 June 1953, Julius and Ethel Rosenberg were electrocuted in SingSing for conspiracy to commit espionage, while the unsatisfactory ceasefire agreed in
Korea a month later did little to calm anxieties about waning American military and
moral supremacy.
Personal Enemy addresses these Cold War tensions through the microcosm of the
Constant family, who live unremarkable, „apple-pie‟ lives in an imaginary allAmerican town. Even in the suburbs, the Cold War is never far away: early on, we
learn that the family‟s elder son, Don, has been reported killed in Korea, while back
home, his sister describes the all-pervasive atmosphere of fear:
Things are brewing up all around us now. You can feel it everywhere, Mom. People are
frightened.
While the Rosenbergs are never specifically mentioned, an atmosphere of domestic
paranoia is thus clearly established, and references to blacklisting, testifying before
Committees, or a character‟s dismissal from the State Department make this play a
rare example in 1950s England of „committed‟, social-realistic Cold War theatre.
In drafts of his autobiography, Osborne describes the genesis of Personal Enemy,
when he was living in London with Anthony Creighton, leaving Pamela in Derby:
The McCarthy trials were at their height and I became interested in them. They seemed like
the material for a play and something for me to absorb myself in until perhaps such time as
Pamela came back.
Osborne spent several weeks reading transcripts of the House Un-American Activities
Committee (HUAC) in the American Library in Grosvenor Square, and developed the
text from his own editing of the transcripts, combined with Creighton‟s „rather
ludicrous melodramatic plot‟.
After finishing the draft, Osborne sent a copy to Sam Wanamaker (himself, a highprofile victim of McCarthyism), and was surprised when the actor replied, offering to
discuss the play. If Osborne later dismissed the significance of Personal Enemy,
claiming he only began to collaborate with Creighton „out of laziness or want of
companionship‟, a letter sent by Pamela from Derby suggests the prospect of the
Wanamaker meeting had given him hope for the work:
Bully for Bears [Osborne] going to see Wanamaker. I can just imagine the interview!… I shall
kick myself if you come up here or go to any rep job just as things start happening to Personal
Enemy.
In fact, little came of the meeting in January 1954. „Knowing nothing about America‟,
Osborne had expected Wanamaker „to fault the technical details‟. Instead, Osborne
records that the older actor expressed admiration for the play, but worried that it was
too critical of America for British audiences to accept. Seeing in this „tepid
endorsement‟ the kind of self-imposed fear that Personal Enemy denounces, Osborne
later wrote: „for casuistry or timidity, I thought his verdict took the Binkie Beaumont
biscuit‟.
With immediate hopes for a production dashed, Osborne was on more familiar ground
in sending the text to producer Patrick Desmond (indeed, he originally conceived the
melodrama as „a superior kind of Patrick Desmond package‟), who agreed to produce
the play at the Opera House, Harrogate, in March 1955. In preparation, Desmond
submitted the text to the Lord Chamberlain‟s office for licensing, and soon ran into
difficulties caused by the censors‟ identification of „dubious lines‟. Not, as we might
suppose, concerning the explicit criticism of Britain‟s war-time ally and references to
the Communist Party, but because of the equivocal sexuality of the two Constant
sons, and the carefully codifed suggestion of homosexuality.
The mid 1950s saw the Lord Chamberlain embark on ever more furious attempts to
uphold the ban on the representation of homosexuality in the theatre; after all, as Lord
Clarendon mused in 1951, the subject was „very distasteful and embarrassing in
mixed company‟ and „might start an unfortunate train of thought in the previously
innocent‟. Although the ban was relaxed post-Wolfenden Report, the censors‟ radar
was particularly attuned in 1955, and even references codified in reaction to the
existence of censorship were in their turn disallowed; in vain did Osborne and
Creighton imagine the younger Constant son, Arnie, would be allowed to read Walt
Whitman‟s Leaves of Grass, and a reference to the title is crossed through in blue
pencil, and stamped: „DELETED BY THE LORD CHAMBERLAIN‟.
In fact, even within the narrative, the depiction of the sons‟ sexuality is necessarily
ambiguous. The play overloads early references to Arnie‟s long, soft hair, his
„refined‟ nature, his „long and delicate‟ hands, even his gardening style („I‟ve never
seen a man handle flowers the way he does‟), while Don is not entirely „clean and
decent‟ and - even worse – is „a poet‟. When the FBI Investigator combines these
early intimations with accusations of deviant political sympathies (a historically astute
and accurate observation by the authors), it all becomes too much for the Lord
Chamberlain‟s examiner, who strikes through the lines:
Mr Constant: Just what are you implying?
Investigator: (with deliberation) You know just what I mean, Mr. Constant – they go together:
Communists and -
However, by the third act, a well-timed pregnancy seemingly re-establishes an
acceptable hetero-sexual status quo („Never fails. Get someone in the family way in
the Third Act- you‟re half way there‟, Barney counsels the young writer in Epitaph
for George Dillon). This is to the relief of the mother in the play‟s diegetic space, but
to the consternation of the baffled censor, who by now was struggling with the
complex interplay of signifiers. At one point, the assistant examiner noted in the
margins that „this could be political not sexual‟, the implication being that the latter
represented a far graver danger to audiences than the former. To test his suspicions,
the examiner, St Vincent Troubridge, passed the play up the chain. At this point, the
senior examiner intervened, concluding that „the perverted element seems to be a
gratuitous addition to an anti-Communist theme‟, and that „all traces‟ should be
removed, a suggestion endorsed by the Lord Chamberlain, the Earl of Scarborough.
So fazed by the suggestions of homosexuality was the senior examiner, that he seems
to have mis-diagnosed a play that –while hardly toeing a CP line- is openly critical of
HUAC.
In one of the play's reviews, The Harrogate Advertiser predicted that „if ever we have
un-English activities inquisitors on this pattern, our sense of humour will see us
through.‟ While the reviewer may have found the zealous Investigator to „verge on the
farcical‟, I want to suggest that McCarthyite inquisitions carried a contemporary
English resonance for the play's authors. Post-war persecution of homosexuals was
not confined to the Lord Chamberlain, and the conviction of Lord Monatgu, Michael
Pitt-Rivers, and Peter Wildeblood on indecency charges in March 1954 – during the
composition of Personal Enemy - was one of a number of high-profile prosecutions in
this period. The Montagu case is described in Dominic Shellard's biography of
Kenneth Tynan as England‟s „closest experience to McCarthyism‟, and Osborne was
deeply affected by the police actions: 'so pointless, stupid and vindictive…how can
sex between two consenting adults be CRIMINAL?' In letters sent to Anthony
Creighton from Derby, it is evident that Osborne was following the trial attentively,
and on one occasion he relates 'inside information' from a friend that 'there's no doubt
the police are out for blood now…it's going to be quite a witch hunt.' Some of this
concern clearly seeps into the play's depiction of the persecution of the Constant
family; for all the charges of homophobia that would later be levelled against
Osborne, in 1954 he was adamant that the three defendants in the Montagu trial were
'martyrs in a new battle', and it was 'up to the undoubtedly strong enlightened
minority to exert pressure in high places'.
To the censors‟ fury, Personal Enemy had been sent for licensing just a few days
before the intended opening, Patrick Desmond rather bizarrely claiming he had not
realised it needed to be licensed as „it is an American play‟ (in fact, the canny
Desmond was to play on the vogue for American theatre by promoting the work as
„the European premiere of the sensational American drama‟, a disingenuous line
apparently swallowed by reviewers). The late submission led to chaotic scenes in
rehearsals as cast and author attempted to incorporate the Lord Chamberlain‟s
swingeing cuts, and make sense of the narrative without the disallowed vital plot
device. The consequent incoherence of the censored play was remarked on by
reviewers (The Stage noted „some confusion in the story‟, while the Harrogate
Advertiser wondered if the narrative obscurity was „perhaps because of the censor‟s
hand‟), and in such unpropitious circumstances, it is hardly surprising that the play
was quickly forgotten.
Yet, for all the awkwardness of the early exposition, and despite the reliance on the
hoary conventions of the rep thriller (shadowy figures appear at the door, revelations
fall conveniently at curtain lines), the play is an acute, and occasionally subtle,
dramatisation of the dangers of betraying one‟s personal integrity by conforming to
external pressures. For a dramatist whose early acclaim rests on his acute staging of
the ennui of post-War English youth, we may find Osborne‟s early interest in
American society surprising. Yet, beyond the socio-political actuality, what 1950s
Cold War America offered the neophyte writer was a powerful dramatic situation: the
characters must choose, for themselves and for others, and in taking a stand, we feel
something that transcends their everyday lives is at stake. If Look Back in Anger’s
Jimmy Porter bemoaned the lack of „good, brave causes‟ in post-War England, at the
conclusion of Personal Enemy, Mr Constant comes to the realisation that „it‟s time
somebody made a stand against all this being kicked around‟, and seems to have
rediscovered his self-respect through his resolve: „You know- I‟m quite looking
forward to it.‟ Moreover, in contrast to the alienation felt by Huw in The Devil Inside
Him, Mr Constant feels a communion with others through his contestation of power
structures, and his final words to his wife before he goes to testify are both personally
and politically affirming: „You know another thing? We haven‟t been so close
together in years, as we are now.‟
Personal Enemy is no masterpiece, but in its interweaving of personal and national
destinies, its examination of the need to confront feelings of fear and shame with an
often lonely courage, even in its references to „the devil‟s work‟ and the suggestion of
„so many witches‟ lurking beneath the surface of the American Dream, the play is not
beyond recalling a contemporary classic that would precede Look Back in Anger in
the Royal Court‟s opening season. I am talking, of course, about Arthur Miller‟s The
Crucible. In presenting, for the first time, the uncensored text of Personal Enemy, we
hope to reclaim it from the destructive intentions of the Lord Chamberlain‟s censors,
as well as presenting a play not, perhaps, without resonance for our own times.
[Personal Enemy play text]
Personal Enemy was first performed at the Opera House, Harrogate, on 1 March
1955, with the following cast:
CARYL KESSLER
SAM KESSLER
MRS CONSTANT
MR CONSTANT
ARNIE CONSTANT
MRS SLIFER
THE REV. MERRICK
AN INVESTIGATOR
WARD PERRY
Mary Kean
David Lawton
Ursula Granville
Douglas Malcolm
Barry England
Maud Long
C. Lethbridge Baker
Alan Foss
Tom Conway
Directed by Patrick Desmond, settings by Oliver Richardson.