I absolutely ADORE this game, it is already my favorite visual novel despite my hunch that it isn't even CLOSE to being finished. I would go into extreme detail about what I love with each character and the scene progression, but this is not the place to write spoilers, so I'll stay general.
First off, the game's concept and plot are amazing thus far. I LOVE your spin of the D&D medieval trope and how fluidly you execute clever comedic points along with serious moments as well. The creativity behind so many of the scenes within this novel is baffling, and a few also got me close to crying a few times.
Every character is unique and developed so that their actions make sense, making emotional moments that much more powerful, it even makes the humorous moments funnier as well. There are also so many adorable moments that I still cannot get enough of.
A little more specific, but the parental influence and relationships are all incredibly executed. You have it down to a T for certain parent-child dynamics and how it affects the child. I recognize your dedication to this part of each character's development very gratefully.
I am so so thrilled about the resuming of this vn's development, I have been eagerly waiting for it since the pausing for Repeat's focus. Shiro, you have an incredible story going here that presses all the right buttons, and I look forward to future updates.