I defiantly agree with the point you are trying to make with this. I think its just a bit confusing to first have the "player" asked if they are comfortable with these themes, and then switch the perspective to their game pov without any indication. So instead it feels like its just another question before said experience gets started.
I think it would help the experience a bit if you somehow conveyed to the player in the pov experience th't that is part of said experience. Like saying that the player got an intake form that they had been asked to fill out, or perhaps there is a consultant you are talking to asking these questions. Maybe when it says we're sorry you're not fully committed, being preceded with "Doctor:". Just something to separate it from the first question is all so it doesn't get misinterpreted as such.