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Rename Introduction to Background #183

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@fantasai fantasai commented Sep 30, 2024

This section is really about historical and contextual background; the actual “introduction” to the document is the previous section.


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@tantek tantek changed the title [Vision] Rename Introduction to Background Rename Introduction to Background Sep 30, 2024
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cwilso commented Sep 30, 2024

I don't think this should be done unless we rename Purpose "Introduction" and give matching anchor names to the sections.

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@cwilso I'm OK with that direction; was debating whether to do it and went with the minimal change option. Would you like me to update the PR?

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I'd rather keep "Introduction" as section header, similar to the Ethical Web Principles.

I don't think this is an improvement, and I'd rather not open the door for wordsmithing for an updated Note.

I'd prefer to close this PR with no changes, and discourage wordsmithing (would prefer contributors spend time on helping process the remaining outstanding open Vision project issues instead, as well as those expected from upcoming explicit wide review and horizontal reviews.)

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frivoal commented Oct 3, 2024

I would support the combined rename suggested by @fantasai and @cwilso, but I can also live without doing it.

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wareid commented Oct 3, 2024

I agree with Tantek, I would prefer to leave this as is.

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fantasai commented Oct 3, 2024

@tantek I think the Introduction to the Ethical Web Principles is in fact an introduction to the rest of the document; but the current "Introduction" for the Vision explains historical background and context, but doesn't really introduce the rest of the document. That's my issue here, and why I proposed the renaming. You could call it a preamble, but it's not an introduction.

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cwilso commented Oct 4, 2024

After reflecting on this further: I don't think it is right to rename the current "Introduction" as "Background". It is, in fact, an introduction to the document; why the concept exists, why we think it's important (it does put it in an historical context, but so does the EWP's introduction) and what the document does.

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I do think a positive change that helps the issue @fantasai is calling out could be made by taking the current "purpose" section, and

  1. using the first paragraph of current purpose section up in place of the abstract (they say nearly the same thing), and
  2. moving the Goals list from the current purpose to the end of the introduction, which tightens up its utility as an introduction.

I'll toss together a PR if this sounds like it would be an improvement. Other than that, though, I have to agree, I would still weigh in on "no change".

This section is really about historical and contextual background;
the actual “introduction” to the document is the previous section.
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tantek commented Oct 8, 2024

I'm seeing rough consensus here for "no change" so I'm closing accordingly, especially as this PR (and issues mentioned therein) is unnecessary for an updated Note.

In addition, wordsmithing is not essential for publishing an updated Note, please defer any such suggestions, because they will almost certainly be moot in the context of feedback we get from wide review.

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