User talk:Megan Osterhaus/sandbox

"prompted many college and universities to discontinue the sport."  I would try and add a citation here since it's a quoteDivrath (talk) 15:44, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

--> There are no citations in your entire article. All information needs to be cited.

"History[edit]" --> Erase the word "edit" in this caption

"The 'Sanity Code'" --> This linked page does not exist. Erase/fix link.

"As a core value, the NCAA believes in and is committed to diversity, inclusion and gender equity among its student-athletes, coaches and administrators. It seeks to establish and maintain an inclusive culture that fosters equitable participation for student-athletes and career opportunities for coaches and administrators from diverse backgrounds. Diversity and inclusion improve the learning environment for all student-athletes and enhance excellence within the Association.

The Office of Inclusion will provide or enable programming and education, which sustains foundations of a diverse and inclusive culture across dimensions of diversity including but not limited to age, race, sex, class, national origin, creed, educational background, religion, gender identity, disability, gender expression, geographical location, income, marital status, parental status, sexual orientation and work experiences." --> Erase the gap between the quote so it is more apparent that it is a cohesive thought. --> Provide more information: Where/who did this quote come from? When did they say this?

"transgender student-athlete participation" --> This page doesn't exist either. Erase/fix link.

Coleman laura (talk) 15:51, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Clarification

Consider adding who’s program it is (NCAA) if this is a new section. If this is apart of the same section as the earlier infor than leave it: The week-long program took place October 1-5, 2018.  Ccharliefk (talk) 16:01, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Clarification

Is this referring to the people who haven’t undergone hormonal changes?: Transgender males are no longer eligible to compete on a women's team, and transgender females are no longer eligible to compete on a men's team without changing it to a mixed team status. Ccharliefk (talk) 16:02, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]