User contributions for Jackftwist

23 July 2022

• 23:0123:01, 23 July 2022 diff hist +584 Talk:BelAmi →Article Needs Updating: new section Tag: New topic

20 August 2016

• 20:2520:25, 20 August 2016 diff hist +22 m Lance Parker →Professional: 1st sentence: spelled out “Major League Soccer” the first time it’s used. (Abbreviation “MLS” hadn’t been previously defined in this article.) 2nd sentence: corrected typo “MSL” to “MLS"

7 August 2016

• 21:3121:31, 7 August 2016 diff hist 0 m Chickenman (radio series) →top: c/e — separated 2 run-together words

18 June 2016

• 22:4622:46, 18 June 2016 diff hist +252 Talk:List of 20th-century women artists →P. Buckley Moss?: new section

23 June 2015

• 22:3222:32, 23 June 2015 diff hist +2,193 Talk:Falcon Entertainment →Performers -- Part 2: new section
• 21:4521:45, 23 June 2015 diff hist +48 Falcon Entertainment →Notable performers: Added pseudonym for Ken Ryker (in previous edit); added Jake Andrews, Steve Hammond, Casey Williams
• 21:3921:39, 23 June 2015 diff hist +255 Falcon Entertainment →Notable performers: Added pseudonyms for Marcus Mojo; added Jeff Hammond, Jim Bentley, Lance, Bill Henson, Lee Ryder, Eric Hanson, Jeremy Penn, Travis Wade, *Paddy O'Brian*, Josh Weston, Tom Brock, Cameron Fox, Derek Cameron, Kevin Williams, Ty Colt

22 November 2013

• 21:3721:37, 22 November 2013 diff hist +93 m Talk:Frank Zane →Possible Plagiarism?: Signed post.
• 21:3621:36, 22 November 2013 diff hist −69 Talk:Frank Zane →Possible Plagiarism?: Clarified wording and added comment re content of other pages on the Website cited.
• 21:3221:32, 22 November 2013 diff hist +527 Talk:Bob Paris →Possible Plagiarism?: Added clarifying text.
• 21:1021:10, 22 November 2013 diff hist +298 Talk:Frank Zane →Possible Plagiarism?: new section
• 21:0721:07, 22 November 2013 diff hist +9 m Talk:Bob Paris →Plagiarism?: Ed. section title to more accurately reflect both its content and my intent in posting the section.
• 21:0221:02, 22 November 2013 diff hist +381 Talk:Bob Paris →Plagiarism?: new section

17 September 2013

• 18:0918:09, 17 September 2013 diff hist +778 Talk:Reichen Lehmkuhl →What about his post-Academy Air Force service?: new section

16 May 2013

• 19:1019:10, 16 May 2013 diff hist −1 m Root beer ce: deleted stray comma at end of 1st sentence of “Ingredients” section

22 February 2013

• 18:1418:14, 22 February 2013 diff hist +95 Talk:Sister Souljah moment →Possible plagiarism?: ce: added signature
• 18:1318:13, 22 February 2013 diff hist +1,073 Talk:Sister Souljah moment →Possible plagiarism?: new section
• 17:5117:51, 22 February 2013 diff hist +420 Sister Souljah moment Possible plagiarism?

3 November 2012

• 20:4820:48, 3 November 2012 diff hist −202 m Talk:Economy of South Korea →Un-cited / plaigarized information: ce: corrected a typo & incorrect reference

2 November 2012

• 23:1623:16, 2 November 2012 diff hist +2,684 Talk:Economy of South Korea →Un-cited / plaigarized information: Added comment.
• 22:0622:06, 2 November 2012 diff hist +38 Economy of South Korea →Recent years: What are the sources for the data and conclusions in these paragraphs? If it’s the same source as for the 1st paragraph, that should be cited again. “Blanket citations” are not accepted scholarly practice.
• 22:0222:02, 2 November 2012 diff hist +38 Economy of South Korea →High-tech industries in the 1990s and 2000s: This section contains no citations for the sources of its raw data and assertions.

1 November 2012

• 17:1317:13, 1 November 2012 diff hist +3 m Neoclassical economics →The Marginal Revolution: ce: changed “Marshalls” to the possessive form, “Marshal’s”, in the sentence that introduces the bulleted list.
• 17:0817:08, 1 November 2012 diff hist +2 Neoclassical economics →Criticisms: ce: changed “in” to “into” in last sentence of next-to-last paragraph

22 October 2012

• 20:0320:03, 22 October 2012 diff hist +1,719 Talk:Comparative advantage →John Stuart Mill’s contributions to the theory?: new section
• 19:2419:24, 22 October 2012 diff hist +2 m Comparative advantage →Effect of trade costs: ce: In 1st sent. of last para., revised "such as on the advent of steam-powered shipping" to read "such as with the advent …” [more appropriate phrasing]
• 19:1519:15, 22 October 2012 diff hist 0 m Comparative advantage →Free mobility of capital in a globalized world: ce: comma belongs after “(anno 1817)” [vs. after] in sentence introducing the 2nd quote

14 October 2012

• 17:5117:51, 14 October 2012 diff hist +4 m Talk:United States Consumer Price Index →Huh?: ce: italicized title of the BLS Handbook to conform with the WP Manual of Style.
• 17:4817:48, 14 October 2012 diff hist +159 m Talk:United States Consumer Price Index →CPI-W: A minor revision of my previous comment.
• 17:4417:44, 14 October 2012 diff hist +1,076 Talk:United States Consumer Price Index →Huh?: Added comment
• 17:2117:21, 14 October 2012 diff hist +1,339 m Talk:United States Consumer Price Index →CPI-W: added comment
• 16:4916:49, 14 October 2012 diff hist +13 m United States Consumer Price Index Added “and services” to “wide array of products” in 2nd sentence. “Products” is often (perhaps even usually) taken to mean only physical goods; adding “services” makes this summary more complete & unambiguous.

2 October 2012

• 18:3818:38, 2 October 2012 diff hist +1,986 Talk:Repurchase agreement →Clarification needed of “single transaction” in Sec. 1: new section
• 17:3917:39, 2 October 2012 diff hist −1 m Repurchase agreement →Structure and terminology: ce: inserted comma ( , ) after “However” in last sentence of 2nd para.
• 17:3617:36, 2 October 2012 diff hist +5 m Repurchase agreement →Types of repo and related products: ce: inserted missing period ( . ) before last sentence of 2nd para.
• 17:2817:28, 2 October 2012 diff hist −17 m Repurchase agreement →United States Federal Reserve use of repos: ce: deleted superfluous '("RP" or "repo”) in 2nd para. — 1st sent. of article intro already introduced/explained these alternative names; no need to keep repeating them
• 17:2317:23, 2 October 2012 diff hist 0 m Repurchase agreement →United States Federal Reserve use of repos: ce: minor revision of wording in 1st sentence to clarify meaning, improve readability & correct subject-verb agreement error
• 17:1317:13, 2 October 2012 diff hist +1 m Repurchase agreement ce: inserted comma between “loan” & “while” in last sentence for strict grammatical correctness & for consistency with use in preceding sentence.

26 August 2012

• 20:4820:48, 26 August 2012 diff hist +16 m J. Edgar Hoover →Sexuality: ce: minor punctuation corrections, esp. at end of quotes; slight wording edits to eliminate original’s repetition of “other” in 3rd para.
• 20:2320:23, 26 August 2012 diff hist +1 m Talk:J. Edgar Hoover →Plagerism in this article.: ce: corrected spelling of “plagiarism” (vs. “plagerism” in the original)

25 July 2012

• 20:3820:38, 25 July 2012 diff hist +1 m Andy Fuller →Professional career: corrected spelling: “waved” → “waived"

13 July 2012

• 20:2920:29, 13 July 2012 diff hist +1,278 Talk:Circular flow of income →“Original Research” notice box is NOT justified: new section

8 June 2012

• 17:0917:09, 8 June 2012 diff hist −22 m Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Mailing List Deleted my user name from mailing list

31 March 2012

• 18:2918:29, 31 March 2012 diff hist +13 m Achilles and Patroclus →Classical tradition: ce: Italicized “Iliad” in 2 places and titles of 2 novels for consistency with rest of article and with Manual of Style’s policy for titles of books, plays, etc.

7 September 2011

• 20:1620:16, 7 September 2011 diff hist +32 Talk:Nicholas Georgescu-Roegen →NGR's AEA Distinguished Fellow Award, faculty Distinguished Professor Award, etc.: Correction to book title in my 25 Aug 11 entry (see strikeout).

3 September 2011

• 21:1821:18, 3 September 2011 diff hist +4,820 User talk:Jackftwist →Your contribution to NGR's page: Reply
• 20:5420:54, 3 September 2011 diff hist +19 Nicholas Georgescu-Roegen Added "production theory" to Fields in box; corrected typo in text

1 September 2011

• 22:3522:35, 1 September 2011 diff hist +206 m Utility Corrected wiki syntax error that caused previous attempt to add Georgescu-Roegen to "Further reading" to render incorrectly
• 22:2122:21, 1 September 2011 diff hist −207 Utility Undid revision 447932264 by Jackftwist (talk)"Further reading" section previewed correctly but didn't render properly when saved (was mixed in with "References")
• 22:0422:04, 1 September 2011 diff hist +207 m Utility →Further reading: Added Georgescu-Roegen's 1936 QJE article to "Further reading"; see Talk