User contributions for 71.197.166.72

3 February 2017

• 22:4022:40, 3 February 2017 diff hist 0 Transit (satellite) Not ordinarily capitalized; just a name, not an abbreviation or acronym. See Talk page.
• 22:3622:36, 3 February 2017 diff hist +1,097 Wikipedia:Requested articles/Sports/Motor sports →People: Requesting a page for John von Neumann (racing driver)

1 February 2017

• 09:4009:40, 1 February 2017 diff hist +806 Talk:Transit (satellite) →TRANSIT or just Transit?: new section

30 January 2017

• 10:2210:22, 30 January 2017 diff hist +878 Talk:Lambda →NATO use: new section

29 January 2017

• 20:3020:30, 29 January 2017 diff hist +564 User talk:Doctorindy →Orphan asterisk in an article: new section
• 09:3609:36, 29 January 2017 diff hist +1 Cray-1 →History: Correcting MFLOPS error; see later reference to 160 that cites a source for that figure.

26 January 2017

• 22:0322:03, 26 January 2017 diff hist +21 Copperplate Gothic →Related typefaces: Changing crosslink to the correct target
• 09:5409:54, 26 January 2017 diff hist +315 Talk:Fluorescent lamp →Contradiction in "Losses" section: Commenting.
• 09:4709:47, 26 January 2017 diff hist +680 Talk:Byzantium →Byzantium paternal writing: new section

24 January 2017

• 08:0608:06, 24 January 2017 diff hist +26 Operation Mount Hope III Replacing all incorrect references to Mi-24 with Mi-25 based on the second source, and adding a clause to explain the relationship between the two models.
• 01:2501:25, 24 January 2017 diff hist +293 Talk:Fluorescent lamp →Contradiction in "Losses" section: Commenting
• 01:2001:20, 24 January 2017 diff hist +185 Talk:Permissive action link →Permissive Action Link -- Bruce Blair: Noting the addition of some text to meet this request.
• 01:1901:19, 24 January 2017 diff hist +633 Permissive action link →Development and dissemination: Referring to the USAF denial reported by Foreign Policy.

20 January 2017

• 03:3803:38, 20 January 2017 diff hist +90 Waste Isolation Pilot Plant →2014 incidents: Providing a more easily understood expression of radioactivity based on the definition of the becquerel.

18 January 2017

• 01:0601:06, 18 January 2017 diff hist −495 Petraeus scandal →Scott Broadwell: Removed content duplicated from the Paula Broadwell section, where it was more relevant.

12 January 2017

• 08:1908:19, 12 January 2017 diff hist −58 Patent encumbrance of large automotive NiMH batteries In effect reverting a presumably well-intentioned edit by user Greglocock, which made an incorrect statement. The article makes it clear that some patents bearing on this subject may still be valid.
• 08:1408:14, 12 January 2017 diff hist +190 Talk:Fluorescent lamp →Contradiction in "Losses" section: Thanks.
• 08:0908:09, 12 January 2017 diff hist +453 Presentation slide Mentioned another form of slide presentation, the 35 mm slide. Listed this form first because it ties in better with the title of the article.
• 07:1707:17, 12 January 2017 diff hist +43 Fukushima nuclear accident Improving clarity by rewriting the summary based on the Events section of the article. I didn't change the meaning of the text.

11 January 2017

• 20:4720:47, 11 January 2017 diff hist +615 Talk:Fluorescent lamp →Contradiction in "Losses" section: new section
• 01:1901:19, 11 January 2017 diff hist −1 Patent encumbrance of large automotive NiMH batteries →Timeline of legal status of the Ovonics battery technology: Correcting typo.

9 January 2017

• 23:3723:37, 9 January 2017 diff hist −20 Carl Icahn →Early life: Located the current version of a previous reference that is now 404.
• 20:2020:20, 9 January 2017 diff hist +286 Oligopsony →Publishing: Changed Big Four to the more realistic Big Five based on a reliable source, toned down the language, requested a citation to support an accusation.

11 December 2016

• 07:1607:16, 11 December 2016 diff hist 0 Mary Poppins (film) →Casting: Somehow the title and URL for a newer and less relevant article replaced the original directly relevant reference, but the old date and accessdate were retained. Restored. I also moved an existing ref to the sentence it supports.

10 December 2016

• 07:2107:21, 10 December 2016 diff hist +4 Johannine Comma →Tertullian: Cross-linking

9 December 2016

• 09:0409:04, 9 December 2016 diff hist −46 Goodwill (accounting) Reverting a pair of edits that may have been well-intentioned but which resulted in text that is not in Wikipedia style and which is redundant with a better presentation of the same concept later in the same paragraph.

4 December 2016

• 12:3212:32, 4 December 2016 diff hist +61 Timothy Stoen →San Francisco Assistant District Attorney: Explaining this timeframe, cross-linking, grammar fixes, and cleaning up a reference.

1 December 2016

• 10:1710:17, 1 December 2016 diff hist +826 Talk:Wabun code →DO or NJ?: new section

27 November 2016

• 02:4602:46, 27 November 2016 diff hist +2 Public-access television →Distinction from PBS: Bold instead of italics for consistency with "the P" and "the G" elsewhere.

25 November 2016

• 22:3422:34, 25 November 2016 diff hist +151 McLaren Group Correcting grammar and facts.
• 22:2522:25, 25 November 2016 diff hist −26 Ron Dennis Grammar.
• 04:5804:58, 25 November 2016 diff hist +14 SAIL (programming language) None of these refs describe BRIGHT as a spreadsheet or imply spreadsheet-like functionality. BRIGHT is described as "a NIH-sponsored clinical database project"; BRIGHT STAT-PACK is described as a "statistical analysis package." Also see Spreadsheet.

24 November 2016

• 02:0002:00, 24 November 2016 diff hist +98 Sister Souljah →Sister Souljah moment: I couldn't find this context from the citations given, though it's evident that Souljah was presenting what she thought someone else might say. So a reference here to the full text of her remarks would be very useful.

19 November 2016

• 20:4820:48, 19 November 2016 diff hist +11 Telebit →PEP and the TrailBlazer: Corrected a model name reference; the Trailblazers had MNP long before the Teleblazer was introduced.

17 November 2016

• 00:4800:48, 17 November 2016 diff hist −22 JLG Industries Removed eleven Registered Trademark symbols per WP:MOSTM

14 November 2016

• 09:5109:51, 14 November 2016 diff hist +552 Talk:Spaced armour →Perforated armour: new section

6 November 2016

• 07:5107:51, 6 November 2016 diff hist 0 Walter Slezak →Autobiograpic: Fixing typo (and poor word choice).
• 07:5007:50, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1 Fear and Trembling →Regine: Fixing typo.
• 07:4907:49, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1 Wyndham Lewis →The 1940s and after: Fixing typo.
• 07:4907:49, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1 Marshall Grant →Later career: Fixing typo.
• 07:4907:49, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1 John Fante Fixing typo.
• 07:4907:49, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1 Jane Edna Hunter →Life: Fixing typo.
• 07:4807:48, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1 Michael →Film, television, music, literature: Fixing typo.
• 07:4807:48, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1 John L. Kelley →External links: Fixing typo.
• 07:4807:48, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1 David Snowdon Fixing typo.
• 07:4707:47, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1 The Unloved Fixing typo.
• 07:4707:47, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1 Fritz Angst Fixing typo.

4 November 2016

• 07:5707:57, 4 November 2016 diff hist −1 Talk:Blaser R93 →External links modified: Checked new links. They're good.
• 07:5407:54, 4 November 2016 diff hist −1 Talk:Aneutronic fusion →External links modified: Yes, these are good changes.

17 October 2016

• 03:2603:26, 17 October 2016 diff hist +355 Talk:Atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki →Casualty ratio on Okinawa: Continuing the discussion