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Apart from the fact that a lot of the writing seems to be really basic, there are too many uses of terms like "interesting" making it seem far from neutral. Also not sure about the sources. |
Apart from the fact that a lot of the writing seems to be really basic, there are too many uses of terms like "interesting" making it seem far from neutral. Also not sure about the sources. |
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[[Special:Contributions/2409:4042:2496:3AEB:4953:EF96:4CAF:C0|2409:4042:2496:3AEB:4953:EF96:4CAF:C0]] ([[User talk:2409:4042:2496:3AEB:4953:EF96:4CAF:C0|talk]]) 21:24, 18 March 2019 (UTC) |
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== Fan page? == |
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This reads like a fan page for an idea of Brandon Sanderson. Page should be cut down and merged to [[Brandon Sanderson]]----[[User:Cailil|<span style="color: #808080;">'''Cailil'''</span>]] <sup>[[User_talk:Cailil|<span style="color: #808080;">''talk''</span>]]</sup> 17:15, 27 July 2019 (UTC) |
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Move
This article's title should move from Hard and Soft Magic Systems to Hard and soft magic systems, since Wikipedia article titles use sentence case.
Also, there seems to be a problem of over-reliance on one source. This seems like a useful conceptual distinction; is nobody using it but Brandon Sanderson? Q·L·1968 ☿ 23:37, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
Editorializing
Apart from the fact that a lot of the writing seems to be really basic, there are too many uses of terms like "interesting" making it seem far from neutral. Also not sure about the sources. 2409:4042:2496:3AEB:4953:EF96:4CAF:C0 (talk) 21:24, 18 March 2019 (UTC)
Fan page?
This reads like a fan page for an idea of Brandon Sanderson. Page should be cut down and merged to Brandon Sanderson----Cailil talk 17:15, 27 July 2019 (UTC)