User:Sbuckendorf/Ames Monument/Cbrow113 Peer Review

General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Sbuckendorf

Link to draft you're reviewing
User:Sbuckendorf/Ames Monument
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Ames Monument

Evaluate the drafted changes

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Overall well done. My suggestion would be using more processional language on the page. Sources are well provided and the tone/writing is neutral.