Talk:United States Capitol cornerstone laying/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:09, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
Hi! Will review this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:09, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
Lead
edit- No need to include citations in the lead unless the claims mentioned are really controversial.
- The lead should be expanded by at least a few lines more, it looks too short now.
Background
edit- of the planned capitol building Please mention the name of the building when you begin with the main text
Ceremony
edit- which had been named for him two years earlier We need not mention this, can be cut out.
- Georgetown silver smith Caleb Bentley Should it not be "silversmith"?
- Does "ox" need a link?
I guess that should be all. Well-written and pleasant article. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 12:55, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- Sainsf Sorry for the delay and thanks again for your patience. I believe I've made all these updates now, let me know if I missed something. LavaBaron (talk) 23:00, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks, you have dealt with all the issues. Happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 03:59, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- Sainsf Sorry for the delay and thanks again for your patience. I believe I've made all these updates now, let me know if I missed something. LavaBaron (talk) 23:00, 14 April 2016 (UTC)