User contributions for Sensei48

3 December 2024

• 04:3504:35, 3 December 2024 diff hist +5 m Notre Dame Fighting Irish football →Marcus Freeman era (2021–present): Accuracy and correct English. This will be easy to change when the game occurs. current

2 December 2024

• 19:4219:42, 2 December 2024 diff hist −459 The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face Undid revision 1260808130 by 80.181.137.38 (talk) Repeated revert of abusive, irrelevant, and off-topic edit. current Tag: Undo

29 November 2024

• 23:2723:27, 29 November 2024 diff hist −11 Film score →Writing: Ideas, examples are very good but grammar, usage, and style need serious repair.
• 16:5916:59, 29 November 2024 diff hist −460 The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face Undid revision 1260175885 by 80.181.137.38 As before: no justificatxion for this pointless repetition by the same performer. Tags: Undo Reverted
• 06:0806:08, 29 November 2024 diff hist −81 Bonnie and Clyde Undid revision 1260135987 by 2001:56A:FAF2:A00:5711:EA71:F1A0:3160 A brief allusion and not about Barrow and Parker. Tag: Undo

28 November 2024

• 17:0017:00, 28 November 2024 diff hist +10 The Little Mermaid →Themes and interpretations: 1) The entire paragraph needs to be sourced or removed as POV. 2)"OpenGraves" is a blog and not RS.
• 16:5216:52, 28 November 2024 diff hist −5 List of Heisman Trophy winners Undid revision 1260034509 by 192.183.13.6 (talk) No. current Tag: Undo
• 16:5016:50, 28 November 2024 diff hist +9 m June Lockhart RMV repetitive use of "she". current
• 16:4516:45, 28 November 2024 diff hist +16 m The Little Mermaid →Themes and interpretations: Specific sources needed for this OR Tag: Disambiguation links added
• 16:3616:36, 28 November 2024 diff hist −63 m The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face →External links
• 16:3416:34, 28 November 2024 diff hist −395 m The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face →External links: No justification for multiple versions by the same non-primary performer.
• 04:5904:59, 28 November 2024 diff hist −62 Joe Lefors →Law enforcement career: Clarify and convert to standard USA English. current
• 01:2001:20, 28 November 2024 diff hist −73 m They Died with Their Boots On →Custer's last stand: Necessary fixes. current

27 November 2024

• 21:2221:22, 27 November 2024 diff hist −1 m Shane (novel) Unsplit a split infinitive plus other necessary fixes.. This is an encyclopedia. current
• 19:1319:13, 27 November 2024 diff hist −4 m Navy Midshipmen football →National championships: No italics for a normal quotation.
• 17:3117:31, 27 November 2024 diff hist +22 Father Hesburgh and Father Joyce →Description: Use standard USA English except as specifically noted. current
• 16:2616:26, 27 November 2024 diff hist 0 m 1925 Rose Bowl →Aftermath: Standard format for scores. The sentence already clarifies who lost. current
• 16:1416:14, 27 November 2024 diff hist −16 Ervin Drake →Biography: Revise to standard USA English appropriate for an encyclopedia. current
• 15:3815:38, 27 November 2024 diff hist −2 m Muffet McGraw →Personal life: Basic USA English punctuation: use of commas with an adjective clause means the term following them is non-specific, meaning more than one. McGraw has been married once. current
• 11:1511:15, 27 November 2024 diff hist −2 Gunfight at the O.K. Corral (film) →Historical accuracy: Standard USA English. current
• 11:1311:13, 27 November 2024 diff hist −241 m Gunfight at the O.K. Corral (film) →Historical accuracy: Begin necessary corrections and convert to correct standard USA English.Rmv vague and unsourced material.
• 10:3610:36, 27 November 2024 diff hist −15 m Patsy Kelly →Personal life: Necessary CE for encyclopedia style.
• 10:0910:09, 27 November 2024 diff hist −5 m Marisa Pavan →Personal life and death: Surnames required for encyclopedia style. current
• 09:1209:12, 27 November 2024 diff hist +9 George Armstrong Custer Begin necessary repairs to different errors. current
• 08:5808:58, 27 November 2024 diff hist +4 m Adaptations of A Christmas Carol →Derivative television movie adaptations: Italics for titles of full length works.
• 08:4708:47, 27 November 2024 diff hist 0 Sammy Davis Jr. Undid revision 1259775950 by FlightTime (talk) The cited source LA Times uses "s", not "z" - The New York Times does as well. Tag: Undo

25 November 2024

• 01:2401:24, 25 November 2024 diff hist +47 Phil Villapiano →Career current

24 November 2024

• 23:5523:55, 24 November 2024 diff hist +42 Nick Buoniconti →Professional career: Encyclopedia style: surnames are always the correct way to refer to a person.
• 23:5123:51, 24 November 2024 diff hist −2 m Nick Buoniconti →Early life and family: Incorrect use of commas in non-compound sentences.
• 20:2920:29, 24 November 2024 diff hist −36 m Honey (Bobby Goldsboro song) The overall orchestration is obstrusive, not simply the drums. Shane's voice deserved better. current
• 17:5017:50, 24 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Bonnie and Clyde →Television: Restore chronology.
• 17:4717:47, 24 November 2024 diff hist +24 m Bonnie and Clyde →Television: CE
• 17:3717:37, 24 November 2024 diff hist +11 m It Was a Very Good Year →Notable covers: Edit to standard USA English. current
• 17:2717:27, 24 November 2024 diff hist +29 m Joan Baez →Early and personal life: Edit for clarity and style. current

22 November 2024

• 04:2804:28, 22 November 2024 diff hist −1 m James Earl Jones →Marriages and illness: Correct spelling per cited source; USA spelling does not include the "u".

21 November 2024

• 16:3016:30, 21 November 2024 diff hist +19 Simon & Garfunkel No edit summary
• 16:2316:23, 21 November 2024 diff hist +32 The Little Mermaid →Themes and interpretations: This paragraph needs substantially better sourcing or removal from the article.

19 November 2024

• 09:4309:43, 19 November 2024 diff hist +9 Glory (1989 film) →Retrospective response: Titles of films require italics; rmv unnecessary repetition. ("the film....the film:)
• 09:3409:34, 19 November 2024 diff hist −13 Bonnie and Clyde Undid revision 1258068717 by 2600:100E:B215:C6F6:CCFE:95A9:59A:F82A "Based" means partially. Tag: Undo

14 November 2024

• 00:4300:43, 14 November 2024 diff hist −46 m Bob Shane →The Kingston Trio: The Peak Years, 1957–1967: Gilmore also produced Judy Garland, Dinah Shore among other major figures. current
• 00:3400:34, 14 November 2024 diff hist −1 m Bob Shane →Formation of The Kingston Trio: Correct punctuation error - this is not a compound sentence.
• 00:3300:33, 14 November 2024 diff hist +6 m Bob Shane →Formation of The Kingston Trio: Restore accurate ID

13 November 2024

• 18:0018:00, 13 November 2024 diff hist +70 m Knute Rockne →Early life: Necessary CE for punctuation and encyclopedia style.

4 November 2024

• 05:5605:56, 4 November 2024 diff hist +1 m The Chad Mitchell Trio Correct my own typo.
• 00:5600:56, 4 November 2024 diff hist −7 m The Chad Mitchell Trio Minor CE.
• 00:5100:51, 4 November 2024 diff hist −5 Paul Prestopino →Early life and career
• 00:4400:44, 4 November 2024 diff hist −1 m Roger Sprung →Career: CE current
• 00:4200:42, 4 November 2024 diff hist −1 m Roger Sprung →Beginnings: Encyclopedia style.

3 November 2024

• 20:5720:57, 3 November 2024 diff hist +4 Penn State child sex abuse scandal Undid revision 1255191131 by 74.83.219.151 (talk) Prior edit was correct. Tag: Undo

2 November 2024

• 19:3419:34, 2 November 2024 diff hist −1 m Billboard 200 Conform to standard English and encyclopedia style.