User contributions for Jbower47

8 June 2017

• 20:4520:45, 8 June 2017 diff hist +1,226 Talk:Functional medicine →Replace Gobbldygook quote?: new section

29 June 2016

• 15:5115:51, 29 June 2016 diff hist +364 Talk:2016 United Kingdom European Union membership referendum →UNDUE info (?)

27 June 2016

• 19:5219:52, 27 June 2016 diff hist +128 Talk:Texas secession movements →{POV} removed

23 June 2016

• 14:3214:32, 23 June 2016 diff hist +622 Talk:Texas secession movements →TNM section sounds like a mouthpiece
• 14:2914:29, 23 June 2016 diff hist −1,176 Texas secession movements →Other discussions of secession starting in 2012: removed extraneous information about TNM response. This section is about other efforts, enough space already given to TNM
• 14:2714:27, 23 June 2016 diff hist +232 Texas secession movements →Other discussions of secession starting in 2012: added reference to clarify Perry quote
• 14:1714:17, 23 June 2016 diff hist −4,584 Texas secession movements →Texas Nationalist Movement: Edited the section down, per previous talk page entry. The section was essentially a mouthpiece for Miller's claims. Clarified it down to a simple description of the group and their beliefs. Brought to Talk as well.~~~~

4 May 2016

• 15:0415:04, 4 May 2016 diff hist −649 Alexander Hamilton →In popular culture: removed superfluous quote about musical (belongs on musical page) see explanation in talk.~~~~

24 February 2016

• 00:1600:16, 24 February 2016 diff hist +20 Kesha →2014–15: Personal struggles and lawsuit: another minor grammar change...this section still needs a lot of work, grammar/writing style-wise. ~~~~
• 00:1400:14, 24 February 2016 diff hist +50 Kesha →2014–15: Personal struggles and lawsuit: Made minor grammar and wording changes to sound more encyclopedic...there was some clunky language in there. Shouldn't have made any substantive change in the meaning, just trying to add encyclopedic tone.~~
• 00:0400:04, 24 February 2016 diff hist +453 Talk:Kesha →minor question: new section
• 00:0200:02, 24 February 2016 diff hist −3 m Kesha minor change to wording to avoid repetition (artists/artistry)~~~~

2 November 2015

• 14:5514:55, 2 November 2015 diff hist +152 Talk:Day of the Dead →Tangentially related content
• 14:5214:52, 2 November 2015 diff hist −1,597 Day of the Dead →The Philippines: See previous edits, removing content not directly related to the Mexican holiday (as opposed to ancestor celebrations in general). See disambiguation tag.
• 14:5014:50, 2 November 2015 diff hist −282 Day of the Dead →Latin America
• 14:5014:50, 2 November 2015 diff hist −1,902 Day of the Dead →Europe: See talk page and previous edits...cleaning out content unrelated to the Mexican holiday or its international observances ~~~~
• 14:4814:48, 2 November 2015 diff hist −1,214 Day of the Dead See Talk page, removed reference to other celebrations not related to Mexican Day of the Dead per disambiguation note.~~~~
• 14:4514:45, 2 November 2015 diff hist +1,024 Talk:Day of the Dead →Tangentially related content: new section

20 July 2015

• 22:2522:25, 20 July 2015 diff hist +137 Talk:Greek government-debt crisis →the banks lack of paper currency, is the crisis
• 22:2422:24, 20 July 2015 diff hist +298 Talk:State University of New York at Geneseo →Please review notables: new section

16 July 2015

• 19:5419:54, 16 July 2015 diff hist +515 Talk:Trinity (nuclear test) →Code name
• 19:5019:50, 16 July 2015 diff hist +388 Talk:Joaquín "El Chapo" Guzmán →Manhunt?
• 14:1314:13, 16 July 2015 diff hist −63 Dansville, Livingston County, New York →Notable people: deleted reference to Sean Michael Smith. Not notable. Wiki page looks to be a vanity page composed of links primarily to his own label, etc.~~~~

18 June 2015

• 14:1514:15, 18 June 2015 diff hist +707 Talk:Creationism →Terms...
• 14:1014:10, 18 June 2015 diff hist +362 Talk:Creationism →Wording of the use 'myth'
• 14:0814:08, 18 June 2015 diff hist −1,082 Talk:Discovery Institute →Add to Category: Cults?: missed that I was replying to a years old comment. Erased my reply.
• 14:0714:07, 18 June 2015 diff hist +1,082 Talk:Discovery Institute →Add to Category: Cults?

17 June 2015

• 20:4820:48, 17 June 2015 diff hist −899 Dansville, Livingston County, New York →Culture: removed non-notable content regarding a private christian retreat. only source was the resort's website, and the wording used was like a advertisement ("gorgeous" so and so)~~~~
• 18:1718:17, 17 June 2015 diff hist −23 Hawaii →Flora and fauna: removed "the scientific name of" from the crow picture. Not only is in unnecessary, it was confusing grammar, as the antecedent of "is extinct", indicating the name, not the bird, was extinct.~~~~

15 June 2015

• 14:3814:38, 15 June 2015 diff hist +5 British Empire →Origins (1497–1583): added "area" after St. Lawrence River. The River did not "...become New France", the area around it did. As written it implies the River became New France. Edited.~~~~

9 June 2015

• 15:3415:34, 9 June 2015 diff hist +427 Talk:Legal status of Texas →context added, order changed: new section
• 15:3115:31, 9 June 2015 diff hist +1 Legal status of Texas →Historical legal actions
• 15:3115:31, 9 June 2015 diff hist +211 Legal status of Texas moved historical actions to precede current actions
• 15:2815:28, 9 June 2015 diff hist +394 Legal status of Texas →Contemporary legal actions
• 15:2715:27, 9 June 2015 diff hist −388 Legal status of Texas →History
• 15:2615:26, 9 June 2015 diff hist +388 Legal status of Texas →Contemporary legal actions: Added a sentence of context to relate material to article lede.
• 15:2415:24, 9 June 2015 diff hist −152 Legal status of Texas →History: moving sentence on article focus out of history and into subsequent section.
• 15:2215:22, 9 June 2015 diff hist +968 Legal status of Texas broadened the context of the lede and history section to provide context for questions on the legal status. Previous version is only speaking to a subset of issues.~~~~
• 15:0215:02, 9 June 2015 diff hist +1 m Texas secession movements →Idea of secession in the United States: missing space
• 15:0215:02, 9 June 2015 diff hist 0 Texas secession movements →Idea of secession in the United States: changed sentence order to reflect time order.
• 15:0115:01, 9 June 2015 diff hist +251 Texas secession movements →Idea of secession in the United States: added reference to Texas v. White, the ultimate word on the secession question. Reference to Texas handbook (authoritative state reference on history.)~~~~
• 14:5214:52, 9 June 2015 diff hist +699 Talk:Texas secession movements →TNM section sounds like a mouthpiece: new section
• 14:4814:48, 9 June 2015 diff hist −45 Texas secession movements →Texas Nationalist Movement: removed socialism category as link from quote on Marx. This is not proper use of the link, as it makes an inference on what the quote refers to rather than link to the same term ("Marx")~~~~
• 14:4414:44, 9 June 2015 diff hist +778 Talk:Texas secession movements →Questionable sources: new section
• 14:3914:39, 9 June 2015 diff hist −118 Texas secession movements →Republic of Texas (19th century): removed text based on phd dissertation that did not seem to support the claim made, or did not support the unnuanced version thereof. Please bring to discuss if reinstated. Not an RS, I'd argue.~~~~

14 November 2014

• 15:3915:39, 14 November 2014 diff hist −336 Legal status of Texas →History: Removed reference to "some scholars" as this runs afoul of WP Fringe. This is not a stance held by any appreciable portion of scholars, and later in teh article we state the opposite re: Delima V Bidwell. This is a fringe theory.
• 15:2315:23, 14 November 2014 diff hist 0 Texas secession movements →Post Civil War to the 1990s: This whole article needs a good proofreading. From the questionably notable sources and style of a lot of the text it sounds like a college paper rather than an encyclopedia article.
• 15:2015:20, 14 November 2014 diff hist +24 Texas secession movements →Secession from the US in the 19th century: added clarifier to indicate that this was a perception referenced in the source, not Wiki stating this as fact. This should not be written in Wiki's voice.
• 15:1615:16, 14 November 2014 diff hist −222 Texas secession movements →Idea of secession in the United States: As per previous edit, uncited material. Additionally, poorly written and questionably notable to topic.
• 15:1415:14, 14 November 2014 diff hist −508 Texas secession movements →Idea of secession in the United States: removed uncited material that has been tagged for over a year.