User contributions for DocKino

22 January 2018

• 12:1212:12, 22 January 2018 diff hist +5 m Talk:The Beatles →Addition of genre
• 12:1112:11, 22 January 2018 diff hist +375 Talk:The Beatles →Addition of genre: Good now.
• 11:5711:57, 22 January 2018 diff hist +418 Talk:List of best-selling music artists →Claimed sales for Elvis Presley: Big talk, little proof Harout72.
• 11:3111:31, 22 January 2018 diff hist +432 Talk:List of best-selling music artists →Claimed sales for Elvis Presley: Bottom line, brother.
• 11:2211:22, 22 January 2018 diff hist +7 Planet of the Apes →Cold War and nuclear apocalypse: Sense and sensibility?
• 11:1511:15, 22 January 2018 diff hist +133 User talk:Harout72 →Are you serious?
• 10:3510:35, 22 January 2018 diff hist +303 Talk:List of best-selling music artists →Claimed sales for Elvis Presley: The field is CLAIMED SALES.
• 08:5908:59, 22 January 2018 diff hist +537 User talk:Harout72 →Are you serious?: new section
• 08:4508:45, 22 January 2018 diff hist +866 List of best-selling music artists Undid revision 821733311 by Harout72 (talk). Three reverts in just 4 hours. You're getting reported. Terrible example set by an experienced editor. Tag: Undo
• 08:3908:39, 22 January 2018 diff hist +294 Talk:List of best-selling music artists →Claimed sales for Elvis Presley: There's no good reason for an argument about this at all. The sources are as top-notch as it gets.
• 08:3408:34, 22 January 2018 diff hist +866 List of best-selling music artists Cited sources are impeccable. There's no reason on earth to revert the addition. Tag: Undo
• 08:3208:32, 22 January 2018 diff hist +56 User:DocKino FA copyedit and substantive review.

18 January 2018

• 02:4602:46, 18 January 2018 diff hist +224 Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Planet of the Apes/archive1 →Comments from Harry: Take a look, FunkMonk.
• 02:3402:34, 18 January 2018 diff hist +338 Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Planet of the Apes/archive1 →Comments from DocKino: Final query resolved. Support.
• 02:2902:29, 18 January 2018 diff hist −2 Planet of the Apes →Dawn of the Planet of the Apes (2014): Variation: Just to do something other than "critical acclaim" for two straight movies.

17 January 2018

• 19:3119:31, 17 January 2018 diff hist +194 Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Planet of the Apes/archive1 →Comments from DocKino: Two queries resolved; one remaining.
• 13:4313:43, 17 January 2018 diff hist +1 m Planet of the Apes →Escape from the Planet of the Apes (1971)
• 11:5611:56, 17 January 2018 diff hist +192 User:DocKino No edit summary
• 10:5610:56, 17 January 2018 diff hist +544 Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Planet of the Apes/archive1 →Comments from DocKino: Clashing budget figures for four of the films.
• 10:3710:37, 17 January 2018 diff hist +1,220 Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Planet of the Apes/archive1 →Comments from DocKino: More on War.
• 06:4006:40, 17 January 2018 diff hist +92 User:DocKino No edit summary
• 06:3706:37, 17 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Jaws (film) →Plot
• 06:3606:36, 17 January 2018 diff hist +15 Jaws (film) →Plot: Clarify description otherwise easy to misconstrue—he didn't drop it either because he was simply clumsy or because he needed to do something else with his hands.
• 06:3106:31, 17 January 2018 diff hist −1,067 Jaws (film) →Legacy: Revert good-faith but ludicrously long Ridley Scott quote on already well-established point. Revert items misplaced on a list. Revert minor claim citing amateur source (WP:VERIFIABILITY).
• 06:2206:22, 17 January 2018 diff hist −252 Jaws (film) →Legacy: Cutting foreign-language source when (a) we already have two good and English-language ones and (b) it has virtually nothing to say about the topic of the sentence!
• 06:1606:16, 17 January 2018 diff hist +3 Jaws (film) →Box office performance: Update all-time b.o. ranking and citation.
• 06:1206:12, 17 January 2018 diff hist −4 m Jaws (film) →Music
• 06:1106:11, 17 January 2018 diff hist −358 Jaws (film) →Filming: Rvt. Sorry for earlier edit summary—there is a source, but it is very weak. The claim appears in an ungrammatical sentence in a "review" that reads like a poorly written press release. 2017 is very late for this claim to suddenly emerge
• 05:5405:54, 17 January 2018 diff hist −193 Jaws (film) →Writing: Revert very poorly sourced claim.
• 05:5305:53, 17 January 2018 diff hist +7 Jaws (film) →Plot: Restore a couple longstanding descriptions (replaced without proper edit summary) for accuracy, precision, and idiom. A few additional edits for grammar, variation, and flow.
• 05:1805:18, 17 January 2018 diff hist −126 Jaws (film) Infobox: Revert unsourced "Zanuck/Brown Productions." No evidence that any such company ever existed. Zanuck and Brown were producers in Universal's employ. Lead: Revert ridiculous, obviously unsourced claim.
• 03:2503:25, 17 January 2018 diff hist +17 Planet of the Apes →Planet of the Apes (1968): Later grosses glosses are global, so it needs to be clear that this is N.A. b.o.
• 03:0703:07, 17 January 2018 diff hist +1 m Planet of the Apes →Planet of the Apes (1968)
• 02:0302:03, 17 January 2018 diff hist −4 m Planet of the Apes →Cultural impact and legacy
• 02:0102:01, 17 January 2018 diff hist −4 m Planet of the Apes →Planned relaunch and development hell
• 01:5501:55, 17 January 2018 diff hist −9 m Planet of the Apes →Cultural impact and legacy: Polish.
• 01:3801:38, 17 January 2018 diff hist −1 Sex Pistols Substituting for a few more fixed px sizes.
• 01:3301:33, 17 January 2018 diff hist 0 Sex Pistols →Sid Vicious joins the band: Scale it like an expert.
• 01:2701:27, 17 January 2018 diff hist +12 Planet of the Apes →Cold War and nuclear apocalypse: Clarify—no previous reference to "mutant city" per se in discussion of films.
• 01:2401:24, 17 January 2018 diff hist +41 Planet of the Apes →Race: Polish.
• 01:1301:13, 17 January 2018 diff hist 0 Planet of the Apes →Video games: Edits for logic, flow, and idiom ("mixed reviews" rather than "average").
• 00:4900:49, 17 January 2018 diff hist +513 Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Planet of the Apes/archive1 →Comments from Harry: Between you and me, it's the more universal style.
• 00:3800:38, 17 January 2018 diff hist +777 Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Planet of the Apes/archive1 →Comments from DocKino: Three queries resolved.
• 00:3600:36, 17 January 2018 diff hist +19 Planet of the Apes →Comics: Edit for specificity related to FAC query.

15 January 2018

• 12:4612:46, 15 January 2018 diff hist 0 m Sex Pistols →"God Save the Queen": Avoid two straight sentences ending in parentheticals.
• 11:4011:40, 15 January 2018 diff hist −1 m Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Planet of the Apes/archive1 →Comments from DocKino
• 11:3911:39, 15 January 2018 diff hist +697 Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Planet of the Apes/archive1 →Comments from DocKino: Sins sins.
• 11:1311:13, 15 January 2018 diff hist −51 Planet of the Apes →Comics: Tighten and focus. If Boom! has created other crossovers, list them, because the new phrasing is hypothetically comprehensive.
• 10:4210:42, 15 January 2018 diff hist +18 Planet of the Apes →Comics: Classic copyedits.
• 10:2910:29, 15 January 2018 diff hist +5 Planet of the Apes →War for the Planet of the Apes (2017): Motivation for edit—list of producers must be consistent with table at bottom of article.