User contributions for 69.112.128.218

8 May 2022

• 19:0319:03, 8 May 2022 diff hist −10 Henry IV of England →Ancestry: Removed anachronistic tag from 2018, September, when there were no references; as of 2022, May, there are three references. Added 'when' tag to bottom of one paragraph with anachronistic time reference to the War of the Roses which lasted over three decades (to refer to an event which only took a matter of days); and another which refers to an event on 29th of September (which happens once every year).
• 18:0918:09, 8 May 2022 diff hist +186 Charing Cross Road Some very minor editing for succinctness. Removed anachronistic tag from 2013, February, when only two references cited; Seven cited references as of 2022, May. Tagged with context links through article, well written, but no dates in several areas.
• 17:0817:08, 8 May 2022 diff hist +933 Slave clock Added two references, added several wikilinks, edited text, hopefully more concisely. Removed reference tag from 2009, June.
• 15:4515:45, 8 May 2022 diff hist −34 Felix Klein Removed anachronistic tag from 2013, July, when one reference was cited; as of 2022 May, there are twenty-three references cited.
• 14:5514:55, 8 May 2022 diff hist −38 Green Mountain Boys Removed tag issued 2010, November. When tag was issued, there were three references; as of 2022, May there are twenty-one references.
• 14:3714:37, 8 May 2022 diff hist +674 Green Mountain Boys →Vermont National Guard: Removed two tags after adding two references. Changed one sentence and moved to the end, adding a clearer meaning and context.
• 13:4813:48, 8 May 2022 diff hist −12 Semi-automatic rifle →History: Tagged section already had 14 citations in 2021 September, as it does now. Removed tag and issued new tag for the one subsection that had no citations/references as of 2022, May. Please tag articles with a more specific focus in the future, editors.
• 13:2113:21, 8 May 2022 diff hist +9 Wiretapper Removed three wikilinks pointing to three people with identical names; an actress named Georgia Lee; a writer named John O'dea. Wikipedia's John O'Dea died in 1908, Georgia Lee was born in 1976. This film was made (1955) after Mr. O'Dea died and before Mrs. Lee was born. Same name but different people in both cases. Also Dick Ross is not Dick Ross (director). Check before you link, editors. www.imdb.com/name/nm0497313/ & www.imdb.com/name/nm0640619 & www.imdb.com/name/nm0743362
• 04:4904:49, 8 May 2022 diff hist +464 162 Added two references, removed tag from 2021 October.
• 04:2504:25, 8 May 2022 diff hist −80 Seymour Cray Removed two anachronistic tags from 2010, May, when there were no references to the two sections. Each section now (May 2022) has two references each, making four references.
• 04:2204:22, 8 May 2022 diff hist +510 CDC 6600 Timeline of the article is vague and nearly ambiguous. More dates and contextualization should be added, not only where tagged, also ongoing throughout this entire article. Otherwise well written it is difficult to contextualize without a timeline or without dated context. Added several "when" tags, but the rest of the article also lacks dates and context. Not trying to be pendantic. Simply sprinkling a few years (196?) here and there should be enough.

4 May 2022

• 19:4519:45, 4 May 2022 diff hist −42 Scottish Deerhound Removed anachronistic tag from 2019, April, when only four citations were coded; currently there are 17 unique citations.
• 19:3919:39, 4 May 2022 diff hist +335 Strategic Defense Initiative →Homing Overlay Experiment (HOE): Removed tag from March 2017 when there were already 4 references; added two more references.
• 18:1518:15, 4 May 2022 diff hist −83 Kim Philby Removed tags, one from June 2020 and one from January 2022. There are over 100 citations in this page, the individual section (MI6/WWII) had 18 citations itself in 2020 and now has 20 citations. When tagging - users should have tagged the individual sentences with question marks instead of tagging the entire page or entire sections (which already had a good number of citations).
• 17:5117:51, 4 May 2022 diff hist −259 B. F. Skinner →Influence on teaching: Removed anachronistic tag & internal remarks; when tag was installed in 2007, there were no references to this topic. There have since been three references added, as well as two wikilinks to two other referenced publications.
• 17:2717:27, 4 May 2022 diff hist +1,203 Bipedalism →Postural feeding hypothesis: Added several references, removed tag, some editing of text.
• 15:5015:50, 4 May 2022 diff hist +1,120 Arthur Hill (Canadian actor) Removed two anachronistic tags, one from 2013, the other from 2017 - cited lack of references. History shows that one reference (2013) and two references (2017) have since been added to. Cleaned up text, shortened some of the content regarding career portrayals without eliminating the specific items. Added punctuation, and made a few sentences more verbose. Removed excessive links. Added two more references from LA Times and The Independent. There is room to expand this article.

3 May 2022

• 18:1918:19, 3 May 2022 diff hist +272 Wikipedia:Teahouse →New editor w/ photo to add: Here goes. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Media_copyright_questions#Mug_Shots_-_Which_States_Copyright_Them_%28if_any%29
• 18:1518:15, 3 May 2022 diff hist +2,129 Wikipedia:Media copyright questions →Mug Shots - Which States Copyright Them (if any): new section
• 17:2917:29, 3 May 2022 diff hist +1,864 Wikipedia:Teahouse →New editor w/ photo to add: Does it not specifically refer to the State of California? Also the page that was linked to refers to an audio record of a voicemail left by a telephone call. That is quite useful, although, I would like to remain focused on mug shots,
• 17:1117:11, 3 May 2022 diff hist −28 Ancient Greek law →Historical sources: Shortened a few sentences without changing basic meanings.
• 17:0217:02, 3 May 2022 diff hist +373 Wikipedia:Teahouse →New editor w/ photo to add: This refers to sites that charge people a fee to take mug shot photos off their webpages.
• 16:5616:56, 3 May 2022 diff hist +1,373 Wikipedia:Teahouse →New editor w/ photo to add: I would like to know, then, if the above link to the 'rfcp' (reporter's committee for freedom of the press) website - is of value - in terms of Wikipedia's pervue. What would you say?
• 15:4215:42, 3 May 2022 diff hist +894 Wikipedia:Teahouse →New editor w/ photo to add: I did find information online with a list of states and their respective policies on 'mugshots'. Not even one refer to any copyrights. Here is the link: https://www.rcfp.org/open-government-sections/11-mugshots/
• 15:2715:27, 3 May 2022 diff hist +366 Wikipedia:Teahouse →New editor w/ photo to add: Which states are those, specifically, that issue copyrights on public records?
• 14:5514:55, 3 May 2022 diff hist +339 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Level of information on a given wikipedia page: Plagiarised content would be wrong to include on any page.
• 14:4814:48, 3 May 2022 diff hist +252 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Questions for personal page: Thanks. I did look up wp:notthere. Probably the Wikipedia sandbox function was omitted there, due to oversight.
• 14:3714:37, 3 May 2022 diff hist +1,560 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Level of information on a given wikipedia page: Since this is an encyclopedia, I believe that too much summarization is less valuable than more verbosity. Most people, yes, do not need so many facts, but most people do not look up things in an encyclopedia on a regular basis.
• 12:4112:41, 3 May 2022 diff hist +220 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Questions for personal page: That is interesting and a bit disconcerting. Is this policy (''notthere'') within the scope of working on a "sandbox" page?
• 11:4711:47, 3 May 2022 diff hist +429 Wikipedia:Teahouse →New editor w/ photo to add: Mugshots are posted in public places to alert the public of the likenesses of convicts and suspects.
• 11:3411:34, 3 May 2022 diff hist +932 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Questions for personal page: I suggest that if you see something on another user's personal page, you could click on the "edit" button on the top of the screen, go to the editing field, highlight and copy the section that you desire to mimic, and paste it into your page.
• 11:2311:23, 3 May 2022 diff hist +1,011 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Thandie Newton Booted off Set of New Movie - Notable or Not?: new section Tag: New topic

18 April 2022

• 21:4221:42, 18 April 2022 diff hist +63 Richard Lane (announcer) →Work with KTLA: Minor edits without altering main meaning of the text. Dick Lane was remembered for the expression "whoa Nellie" but the reference makes no mention of his "coining" the expression. Bozo the Clown also said "whoa Nellie," both in the cartoons and in the Bozo variety show.
• 13:4813:48, 18 April 2022 diff hist +205 Wikipedia:Teahouse →What defines 'constructive'?: I believe "disgraced" is a "peacock word" and should be avoided altogether.

12 April 2022

• 13:0513:05, 12 April 2022 diff hist +318 User talk:Marchjuly →Teahouse Discussion - Kind of Veering Away from the Issue: Thanks for shedding light on this.

11 April 2022

• 16:4616:46, 11 April 2022 diff hist +336 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Correcting Subject Names: Reply Tag: Reply
• 16:4116:41, 11 April 2022 diff hist +288 Wikipedia:Teahouse →I want at my biography at my wikipedia account, i am new here please help out: Reply Tag: Reply
• 16:3116:31, 11 April 2022 diff hist +819 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Correcting Subject Names: My point wasn't to do with the context of the webpage, it was me just trying to explain a pedantic point about the grammar of one word versus another word.
• 16:1916:19, 11 April 2022 diff hist +3,149 User talk:Marchjuly →Teahouse Discussion - Kind of Veering Away from the Issue: new section
• 15:4315:43, 11 April 2022 diff hist +836 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Correcting Subject Names: The term "uncountable" refers not to whether we are focused on a singular or a multitude of items, but whether or not there are simply more than one item, and that these items on the onset, have not been counted.

8 April 2022

• 23:1823:18, 8 April 2022 diff hist +273 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Correcting Subject Names: I believe that "Feeling" is what is known as an "uncountable noun," meaning the singular form of the word serves as a plural.
• 23:0523:05, 8 April 2022 diff hist +2,002 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Banning ("Blocking") a New User Within 40 Minutes of the ANI (Aministrator's Noticeboard Incident): To me, freedom of speech is a human right that is not "man made" or ordained by men, but is something every human being is born with, and it is "inalienable" which means it cannot be taken away -- ''even by Wikipedia''.

7 April 2022

• 23:1123:11, 7 April 2022 diff hist +1,109 User talk:69.112.128.218 →Controversial topic area alert: I'm actually not so interested in it.
• 22:3722:37, 7 April 2022 diff hist +1,174 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Banning ("Blocking") a New User Within 40 Minutes of the ANI (Aministrator's Noticeboard Incident): It appears that (to me at least) not only am I quite a novice at this stuff, and that contributes to my confusion, that there are more complexities involved here than can be explained in a few paragraphs.
• 22:2422:24, 7 April 2022 diff hist +423 User talk:Dennis Brown →Your 'Blocking' of a New User - Indefinitely - Within 24 Hours of Noticeboard Discussion?: Very well. There won't be any remedy other than a permanent ban.
• 21:2421:24, 7 April 2022 diff hist +838 User talk:Dennis Brown →Your 'Blocking' of a New User - Indefinitely - Within 24 Hours of Noticeboard Discussion?: Have you ever made a mistake, that knowingly, you became aware of later?
• 21:1321:13, 7 April 2022 diff hist +324 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Banning ("Blocking") a New User Within 40 Minutes of the ANI (Aministrator's Noticeboard Incident): So. We have a position that is it's quite rare, and your position is that it can be very routine?
• 21:0821:08, 7 April 2022 diff hist +1,258 User talk:Acroterion →Your Response on the ANI - What is 'Sealining'?: Thank you. That link was very helpful. Now I can see more of what that meant.
• 18:0818:08, 7 April 2022 diff hist +799 User talk:Acroterion →Your Response on the ANI - What is 'Sealining'?: new section
• 17:5717:57, 7 April 2022 diff hist +380 Wikipedia:Teahouse →Banning ("Blocking") a New User Within 40 Minutes of the ANI (Aministrator's Noticeboard Incident): I guess this is kind of getting to the point of beating a dead horse.