User contributions for 50.179.252.14

18 May 2016

• 19:4919:49, 18 May 2016 diff hist +14 Talk:Joe Berlinger →Edits of this day
• 19:4819:48, 18 May 2016 diff hist +85 Talk:Joe Berlinger →Edits of this day
• 19:4819:48, 18 May 2016 diff hist −1 Talk:Joe Berlinger →Edits of this day
• 19:4719:47, 18 May 2016 diff hist +70 Talk:Joe Berlinger →Edits of this day
• 19:4619:46, 18 May 2016 diff hist +1 Talk:Joe Berlinger →Edits of this day
• 19:4619:46, 18 May 2016 diff hist +3 Talk:Joe Berlinger →Edits of this day
• 19:4619:46, 18 May 2016 diff hist +2,293 Talk:Joe Berlinger →Edits of this day: new section
• 19:3119:31, 18 May 2016 diff hist 0 Joe Berlinger →Paradise Lost: correcting section tag
• 19:3019:30, 18 May 2016 diff hist +1,128 Joe Berlinger →Paradise Lost: Adding as a closing paragraph the sourced content appearing in the lede of the WM Three article (so this section does not close with editorializing)
• 19:1319:13, 18 May 2016 diff hist +41 Joe Berlinger consolidating article tags and noting need for better lead
• 19:1019:10, 18 May 2016 diff hist +175 Joe Berlinger →Paradise Lost: Correcting "17" to "20" as article actually states. Revising opening sentence to match citation content. Parts of each sentence not in the source are marked by {{cn}}.
• 19:0119:01, 18 May 2016 diff hist −76 Joe Berlinger →film: Removing verification tags, because content verified in the citation. Corrected "18" to "20" as article presents, and Itzkoff article title to that actually appearing on article.
• 18:5618:56, 18 May 2016 diff hist −33 Joe Berlinger →Paradise Lost: Itzkoff citn removed from 3rd paragraph this section—sentence content not found in citn as presented (words "DNA experts," "genetic", "physical evidence", "stepfather," "shoelace," "hogtie" absent Itzkoff citn.).
• 18:5318:53, 18 May 2016 diff hist +53 Joe Berlinger →Paradise Lost: Itzkoff citn removed from 2nd paragraph this section—sentence content not found in citn as presented (words "incompetence," "strange man", "blood", "bath/restroom" absent Itzkoff). NPOV placed to make clear where issue lies.
• 18:4518:45, 18 May 2016 diff hist +8 Joe Berlinger →film: adding numbers to second and third movies of trilogy, for clarity and consistency
• 18:4318:43, 18 May 2016 diff hist +6 Joe Berlinger →Legal battles over Crude: Paragraphing short section, because of change in direction of content.
• 18:4318:43, 18 May 2016 diff hist +71 Joe Berlinger →Legal battles over Crude: Correctnmg text to sources.
• 18:4118:41, 18 May 2016 diff hist +4 Joe Berlinger →Other media: missing word added.
• 18:4118:41, 18 May 2016 diff hist +195 Joe Berlinger →Other media: Adding information on The System, and downgrading section tag because there now is a citation here. Most material in section, however, remains unsourced.
• 18:3818:38, 18 May 2016 diff hist +98 Joe Berlinger Made citation appearance uniform.
• 18:2518:25, 18 May 2016 diff hist −176 Joe Berlinger Removing redundant "Judge Rules" citation
• 18:2318:23, 18 May 2016 diff hist +127 Joe Berlinger →Early life and education: Replaced dead link citation.
• 18:0318:03, 18 May 2016 diff hist +133 Joe Berlinger Filled in 1 bare reference(s) with reFill ReFilling one remaining URL-only citation.
• 18:0218:02, 18 May 2016 diff hist +1,650 Joe Berlinger →Career: ADDING AVAILABLE MISSING CITATIONS. Adding, in standard fashion, dates of films, so can remove some {{when?}} tags. Removed some puffery. Improving citation appearance to a standard [ {{cite template… }} ]
• 17:5117:51, 18 May 2016 diff hist +17 Metallica: This Monster Lives Noting that this new article was let through the new article process without a single citation.
• 17:4517:45, 18 May 2016 diff hist +46 Whitey: United States of America v. James J. Bulger Making author and date of publication formats uniform in the citations. Changing "accessdate" (markup run-on) to accepted "access-date" to prevent future autocorrect errors.
• 17:3517:35, 18 May 2016 diff hist +1,393 Whitey: United States of America v. James J. Bulger Filled in 8 bare reference(s) with reFill REFILL FILLING OF ALL BARE URL CITATIONS TO THIS UNIFORM STANDARD.
• 17:3317:33, 18 May 2016 diff hist −951 Whitey: United States of America v. James J. Bulger PLEASE HOLD. PREPARING TO RUN reFill TO CHECK CITATIONS, AND TO FILL BARE URL CITATIONS UNIFORMLY.
• 17:1717:17, 18 May 2016 diff hist +308 Book of Shadows: Blair Witch 2 →Release and reception: Making Gleiberman into a proper citation. Please, folks. Made rest of citations more standard in appearance until they can be made more fully uniform, via {{cite templates.
• 17:0717:07, 18 May 2016 diff hist +54 Joe Berlinger Corrected rest of repeat Itzkoff citation markups
• 17:0417:04, 18 May 2016 diff hist −255 Joe Berlinger →Legal battles over Crude: Removing redundant Itzkoff citation
• 17:0417:04, 18 May 2016 diff hist +18 Joe Berlinger →Career: Adjusted Itzkoff citation name (since he's authored more than one article here)
• 16:5316:53, 18 May 2016 diff hist +337 Joe Berlinger →Career: Completed/corrected Ebert citation content, and corrected content to source. Le Prof
• 16:3916:39, 18 May 2016 diff hist −1 Metallica: Some Kind of Monster →Reception: typo, singular instead of plural
• 16:3816:38, 18 May 2016 diff hist +108 Metallica: Some Kind of Monster →Reception: Adding some information to Glieberman citation, adjusting formats
• 16:2916:29, 18 May 2016 diff hist +303 Joe Berlinger →Career: See last edit summary. Removing one {{cn}} inline tag.
• 16:2916:29, 18 May 2016 diff hist −288 Joe Berlinger →Paradise Lost: Moving Itzkoff citation to earlier position, where first usable.
• 14:4014:40, 18 May 2016 diff hist +789 Joe Berlinger →Career: Attempting to make Career section somewhat chronological; separating legal battles into a separate section.
• 14:2614:26, 18 May 2016 diff hist +112 Joe Berlinger →Paradise Lost: Creating personal life section, for stray sentence formerly inserted in Career.
• 14:2514:25, 18 May 2016 diff hist −27 Joe Berlinger →Career: Moving personal information to personal life; noting dead link
• 14:2314:23, 18 May 2016 diff hist +24 Joe Berlinger Refimprove tag added for obvious reason (many historical/factual statements unsourced). NPOV added for Paradise lost section (e.g., e.g., the word "incompetence" does not appear in the Itzkoff article, making whole of presentation suspect)
• 14:1514:15, 18 May 2016 diff hist −2 Berlinger Updating anchor
• 14:1414:14, 18 May 2016 diff hist +232 Berlinger adding Berlinger & Co. AG, the Swiss company in the news these days
• 14:0814:08, 18 May 2016 diff hist +4 Ganterschwil →Economy: Making company name a wikilink, so to suggest an article on this be created.
• 14:0714:07, 18 May 2016 diff hist +1 Ganterschwil →Economy: Corrected typo in wikilink
• 14:0714:07, 18 May 2016 diff hist +260 Ganterschwil Filled in 2 bare reference(s) with reFill Filled two bare URL citations with reFIll, and manually edited NYT article to complete
• 14:0114:01, 18 May 2016 diff hist +147 Ganterschwil →Economy: Adding best available wikilinks, correcting reference URL
• 13:5913:59, 18 May 2016 diff hist +907 Doping in sport →Statistical validity: Clarifying what the article and editorial actually say. (Statistical validity os too vague.) Le Prof
• 13:4613:46, 18 May 2016 diff hist +8 Doping in sport →Test methods: connected quote to introductory sentence.
• 13:4513:45, 18 May 2016 diff hist +9 Doping in sport →Test methods: Noving that language in this sentence is vague—participant in what? does this apply universally, or to Olympic events, or more broadly?