User contributions for 200.104.245.226

14 November 2013

• 14:2314:23, 14 November 2013 diff hist +2,371 User talk:200.104.245.226 →Notice of Edit warring noticeboard discussion
• 02:3402:34, 14 November 2013 diff hist +617 User talk:200.104.245.226 →Notice of Edit warring noticeboard discussion

13 November 2013

• 18:2518:25, 13 November 2013 diff hist +391 Talk:Murder of Fadime Şahindal →Requested move
• 17:1517:15, 13 November 2013 diff hist +556 Talk:Murder of Fadime Şahindal →Requested move
• 16:5316:53, 13 November 2013 diff hist −19 Ian Gow Undid revision 581494831 by Isabela84 (talk) see earlier comment
• 11:3611:36, 13 November 2013 diff hist −34 List of former sovereign states It doesn't attempt to, it does. And rm tautology.
• 11:3311:33, 13 November 2013 diff hist −5 Granadine Confederation "even" doesn't make sense in this context
• 11:1711:17, 13 November 2013 diff hist −19 Ian Gow Undid revision 581449145 by Wee Curry Monster (talk) don't revert for no good reason
• 04:4104:41, 13 November 2013 diff hist −559 Jeans instability →Jeans mass: rm promotion of particular views, excessive detail and unnecessary formatting
• 04:3604:36, 13 November 2013 diff hist −12 Jeans instability →Jeans mass: rm pov
• 04:1704:17, 13 November 2013 diff hist +590 Talk:Anna Kournikova →Career ended when it ended.
• 03:3103:31, 13 November 2013 diff hist +1,089 Talk:Murder of Fadime Şahindal →Requested move
• 03:2103:21, 13 November 2013 diff hist −19 Ian Gow Vital? Don't be ridiculous. If you want to say something about his lifestyle, say something about his lifestyle. Relying on the reader's knowledge of the social value accorded to car makes in 1980s Britain is plainly ludicrous.

12 November 2013

• 15:2415:24, 12 November 2013 diff hist −19 Ian Gow →Death: make of car is not relevant
• 15:2315:23, 12 November 2013 diff hist +1,050 User talk:200.104.245.226 No edit summary
• 06:0606:06, 12 November 2013 diff hist +338 Talk:Murder of Fadime Şahindal article title includes euphemism - direct language is better.
• 05:5705:57, 12 November 2013 diff hist −17 Sveavägen waffle
• 05:5505:55, 12 November 2013 diff hist −347 Fomalhaut rm far too geographically specific viewing information, and promotion of author of paper.
• 05:4305:43, 12 November 2013 diff hist +14 Phlebitis →Cause: fucking morons who copy and paste in text instead of writing their own really piss me off.
• 05:3705:37, 12 November 2013 diff hist −7 Diplomatic Reception Room rm peacock words
• 02:1902:19, 12 November 2013 diff hist −25 Assassination of Zoran Đinđić →Details: a dictionary link for "fatal" is preposterously unnecessary
• 02:1102:11, 12 November 2013 diff hist −592 Akio Kashiwagi rm disgustingly bad writing, the epitome of which was the most inane section heading I've ever seen, and corrected many style errors
• 01:5901:59, 12 November 2013 diff hist −10 Huma Abedin rm pov
• 01:4201:42, 12 November 2013 diff hist −18 James Taylor (disambiguation) rm bias
• 01:3201:32, 12 November 2013 diff hist −117 List of The West Wing characters →Office of the White House Counsel: rm cruft
• 00:1000:10, 12 November 2013 diff hist −676 Maria João Pires →Move to Brazil: WP:C-P

11 November 2013

• 23:2623:26, 11 November 2013 diff hist +2 Poisoning of Alexander Litvinenko Don't revert for no good reason.
• 22:5722:57, 11 November 2013 diff hist −783 Esteban Alvarado →AZ: rm cheesy fanzine bullshit, and lame copy-paste embarrassment. if you want to write an encyclopaedia, you write, you don't copy.
• 22:4322:43, 11 November 2013 diff hist −2 Attempted assassination of Ronald Reagan →Hinckley's motivation: less choppy writing.
• 22:4022:40, 11 November 2013 diff hist −2 Danica McKellar using gender-specific terms for professions is extremely old-fashioned.
• 20:1920:19, 11 November 2013 diff hist −953 Tripoint horrific writing, so pointlessly verbose as to be unreadable.
• 20:1020:10, 11 November 2013 diff hist −34 Tripoint nothing inexact about it.
• 20:0920:09, 11 November 2013 diff hist −17 Olga Seryabkina pointless verbosity removed
• 20:0920:09, 11 November 2013 diff hist −39 Matthew Parris →Personal life: use your own words. copying and pasting verbatim from sources is not acceptable. and rm peacock words
• 20:0120:01, 11 November 2013 diff hist −80 Adam Werritty citatons go after facts and not in the middle of them or before them. also rm excessive detail in lead.
• 19:5919:59, 11 November 2013 diff hist −24 Adam Werritty Nothing is being referenced there.
• 19:5819:58, 11 November 2013 diff hist −6 Fred. Olsen & Co. meaningless without context
• 19:5419:54, 11 November 2013 diff hist −1,388 The Phantom Blooper style edits, and rm copy-pasted praise from reviews, not encyclopaedic
• 19:4719:47, 11 November 2013 diff hist −681 Sheriff Arena grammar, and rm laughable pov and image gallery
• 19:4519:45, 11 November 2013 diff hist −64 FC Sheriff Tiraspol grammar, tone, style
• 19:4219:42, 11 November 2013 diff hist −784 El Tatio the idiotic stupidity of copying and pasting large chunks of text directly from sources never fails to infuriate me. what would give anyone the idea that that's the way to write an encyclopaedia? Other edits made for accuracy and clarity, and rm advert
• 19:3119:31, 11 November 2013 diff hist 0 Unity (user interface) Putting references half way through the facts, instead of after them, is a really bizarre habit which is inexplicably common.
• 19:3019:30, 11 November 2013 diff hist −1 Cape Adare →Adélie Penguins: Putting a citation after "some researchers" and before what they actually researched is bizarre.
• 19:2819:28, 11 November 2013 diff hist 0 Unix What a truly ridiculous place to put a citation.
• 19:2619:26, 11 November 2013 diff hist −48 Timothy Busfield rm pov
• 19:2619:26, 11 November 2013 diff hist −152 Alpha Delta Pi The bit about macon magnolias makes no sense. Nor does "hosts the phrase". "first and oldest" is tautologous. And the claim was vastly overstated in any case.
• 19:2219:22, 11 November 2013 diff hist +10 Alpha Delta Pi →Timeline
• 19:2019:20, 11 November 2013 diff hist −38 Emily Procter rm waffly vague subjectivity
• 19:1819:18, 11 November 2013 diff hist −57 Emilio Echevarría rm waffly vague subjectivity
• 19:1719:17, 11 November 2013 diff hist −34 Goya Toledo Surely, even as you are writing "probably best known", you're thinking "doesn't that sound incredibly vague? why try to guess what people think about the facts instead of just stating the facts?". Aren't you? Actually I guess not.