User contributions for 109.79.76.103

26 October 2020

• 02:2002:20, 26 October 2020 diff hist +1 Make It Happen (film) Fix typo. Accidentally deleted angle bracket which made the system think I had deleted the reference.
• 01:3001:30, 26 October 2020 diff hist +143 Make It Happen (film) ViewLondon site dead (2010-2019). Archive copy not available. Tag: references removed
• 01:1701:17, 26 October 2020 diff hist +10 Mary Elizabeth Winstead Fix reference, archive-url requires archive-date (which I seem to have missed by mistake earlier).
• 01:1501:15, 26 October 2020 diff hist −12 Mary Elizabeth Winstead Template:hlist format|list|using|pipes| (Using <br /> tags inside hlist template is somewhat missing the point. use a different list like Template:Plainlist if you don't want the dots.)
• 01:0701:07, 26 October 2020 diff hist −3 Mary Elizabeth Winstead minor ref improvement. put work/website in separate field instead of in the citation title.

25 October 2020

• 22:4922:49, 25 October 2020 diff hist +609 User talk:Sigerson Holmes →Hidden Figures: new section
• 22:4222:42, 25 October 2020 diff hist −4 Hidden Figures MOS:CURLY
• 22:3622:36, 25 October 2020 diff hist 0 Enola Holmes (film) Rotten Tomatoes 91% 174 reviews
• 22:3322:33, 25 October 2020 diff hist +37 Fantastic Beasts: The Crimes of Grindelwald →Critical response: Expand section.
• 22:2822:28, 25 October 2020 diff hist −122 Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them (film) Manually revert recent cast section change by Special:Contributions/81.100.180.98. Text misleading inserted before existing reference. Unnecessary plot in Cast section.
• 22:2522:25, 25 October 2020 diff hist +1,420 Talk:Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them (film) →"Production" and "Critical response" sections: More reviews.
• 22:0622:06, 25 October 2020 diff hist +764 Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them (film) →Critical response: Add review from Robbie Collin of The Telegraph. (I always feel like the Guardian and it's counterpoint the Telegraph should both be included.) He praised the film effusively too. See archive url for full review, requires registration otherwise.
• 21:5821:58, 25 October 2020 diff hist +246 Talk:Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them (film) →Draft for Fantastic Beasts (film series)
• 21:5321:53, 25 October 2020 diff hist +873 Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them (film) →Critical response: Add review from Rolling Stone. (Since the section was tagged in 2017 as needing to be expanded it seems only 2 reviews have been added: New York Magazine aka Vulture.com and The A.V. Club.)
• 21:3321:33, 25 October 2020 diff hist +1,247 Fantastic Beasts: The Crimes of Grindelwald WP:FILMLEAD the intro is very verbose for an article with a very sparse Critical response section. (Only 2 reviews!) Expand Critical response, to include more of the reviews that serve as the basis for all that summary in the intro. Rolling Stone + LA Times
• 20:5320:53, 25 October 2020 diff hist +166 Milk Money (film) Reference for DVD release. VHS release still unsourced.
• 20:4320:43, 25 October 2020 diff hist −5 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring →Edit warring on multiple articles by an anonym
• 20:4220:42, 25 October 2020 diff hist +456 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring →Edit warring on multiple articles by an anonym
• 20:3120:31, 25 October 2020 diff hist 0 Love and Monsters (film) Rotten Tomatoes 93% reviews 56
• 20:2520:25, 25 October 2020 diff hist −59 Make It Happen (film) Copyedit. Remove the filler/marketing blurb. Also Rotten Tomatoes announced nothing, they repeated the news reported by Variety magazine the day before.
• 20:1720:17, 25 October 2020 diff hist +34 Make It Happen (film) Fix minor reference errors. Used archive-url twice instead of archive-date
• 20:1320:13, 25 October 2020 diff hist +473 Make It Happen (film) Found a source that says basically the same thing (an interview with Moviehole) but direct quotes require sources.
• 19:5519:55, 25 October 2020 diff hist +95 Make It Happen (film) Fix dead link using archive copy. Also merge duplicate links.
• 19:4719:47, 25 October 2020 diff hist +620 Make It Happen (film) Review from The Guardian by Peter Bradshaw. His comments support the (previously unsourced) statement about the dance moves being underwhelming.
• 19:3519:35, 25 October 2020 diff hist +237 Make It Happen (film) Fix dead link with archive URL
• 19:2919:29, 25 October 2020 diff hist +33 Ashley Roberts Template:Cite AV Media make sure video links are clearly marked as video.
• 19:2819:28, 25 October 2020 diff hist +140 Ashley Roberts Nope. Not even. The review were certainly not positive, they weren't even mixed, they were quite clearly negative. Rotten Tomatoes 22%
• 19:2419:24, 25 October 2020 diff hist +6 Make It Happen (film) Fix attempted, but failed. The web archive copy from 2011 is also a dead link.
• 19:2119:21, 25 October 2020 diff hist +500 User talk:109.79.76.103 Improving the articles is what is all about. current
• 19:1719:17, 25 October 2020 diff hist +51 Make It Happen (film) Citation needed. Claim "dreamed of being a dancer" is plausible butnot properly sourced. Quote from director Grant not sourced either.
• 19:1619:16, 25 October 2020 diff hist +19 Mary Elizabeth Winstead Citation needed. Claim "dreamed of being a dancer" is plausible but it is not properly sourced, not here and not in the article Make It Happen either.
• 19:1319:13, 25 October 2020 diff hist +497 Mary Elizabeth Winstead Restore edits, but (as discussed) also restore the pointless Rotten Tomatoes reference that SundayClose thinks is worth keeping.
• 19:0819:08, 25 October 2020 diff hist +516 User talk:Sundayclose →Mary Elizabeth Winstead
• 17:2017:20, 25 October 2020 diff hist +699 User talk:109.79.76.103 There is more to it than that
• 17:1517:15, 25 October 2020 diff hist +3,083 User talk:Sundayclose →Mary Elizabeth Winstead: new section
• 16:5716:57, 25 October 2020 diff hist +234 User talk:109.79.76.103 I did provide an edit summary
• 16:5416:54, 25 October 2020 diff hist −319 Heathcliff: The Movie WP:NAMEDREFS Merge duplicate reference: The New York Times. Merge duplicate reference: AFI.
• 16:4816:48, 25 October 2020 diff hist +26 Heathcliff: The Movie Cast.
• 16:4716:47, 25 October 2020 diff hist +4 Savannah Smiles Fix comment error.
• 16:4316:43, 25 October 2020 diff hist −83 Mary Elizabeth Winstead ViewLondon was able to fix Death Proof review using the Web Archive. Cleanup, remove unnecessary English tags. Tag: Reverted
• 16:3816:38, 25 October 2020 diff hist +96 Mary Elizabeth Winstead View London references are both dead. Checking Web Archive, fix attempt failed. Tag: Reverted
• 16:3516:35, 25 October 2020 diff hist −36 Make It Happen (film) Found live version of same link thanks to editor on Mary Elizabeth Winstead https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mary_Elizabeth_Winstead&diff=985375873&oldid=985374300
• 16:3316:33, 25 October 2020 diff hist −275 Mary Elizabeth Winstead Remove unnecessary reference. I could fix it but it is not necessary and Make It Happen has the details already. Tags: Reverted references removed
• 16:3016:30, 25 October 2020 diff hist +851 Talk:Make It Happen (film) Budget range.
• 16:1816:18, 25 October 2020 diff hist +1,044 Talk:Make It Happen (film) →Budget: There don't seem to be any good sources for the budget
• 16:1316:13, 25 October 2020 diff hist +13 Mary Elizabeth Winstead Rotten Tomatoes Make it Happen dead link.
• 15:5315:53, 25 October 2020 diff hist −156 Make It Happen (film) →Plot: Copyedit.
• 15:4415:44, 25 October 2020 diff hist 0 Milk Money (film) Fix typo, '{' instead of '['
• 15:3615:36, 25 October 2020 diff hist +116 War of the Worlds 2: The Next Wave Improve reference. Format bare URL using citation template.
• 15:3515:35, 25 October 2020 diff hist −45 War of the Worlds 2: The Next Wave Revert vandalism. I don't believe for one second that the New York Times ever reviewed this film (otherwise I would add a citation needed request). Undid revision 971446928 by 2600:8800:1E00:E3B:2543:C752:76E9:846 (talk)