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:{{Ping|Dd1495}} Your English is mostly quite good, but there are some rough patches like these, which must have caught {{u|Thnidu}}'s eye, and would explain why he placed that tag. Perhaps these are just oversights which you intended to correct:
:*{{Green|Both paternal and maternal ancestors of Ignacio represented noble Basque parentage; also, both families have been on descendant trajectory for few generations already.}}
:*{{Green|At the turn of the decades it looked that Hugocarlista domination was not complete and that discussions about future course were going on. In 1970 Larramendi was nominated by the Madrid party branch to take part in Arbonne gathering, styled as a would-be platform for compromise.}}
:*{{Green|With a number of strings in London learning the British insurance market,...}}
:* {{Green|At the time the company was at the verge of bankruptcy and contracting Larramendi as director general was intended as part of sanitation program.}}
and so on. Based on these examples, and others, I am inclined to restore the tag that you removed, unless you have a valid explanation. Also, do I detect a Russian "accent" in your writing, or is it my imagination? Cordially, [[User:Mathglot|Mathglot]] ([[User talk:Mathglot|talk]]) 05:58, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
::thanks for the hints. Of course, not being a native speaker I am not in position to tell how correct they are. I assume good will and linguistic competence, so have corrected the original text - or at least I hope I have corrected :-) --[[User:Dd1495|Dd1495]] ([[User talk:Dd1495|talk]]) 09:22, 4 May 2017 (UTC)